ELASH FORWARD
Pilot
“No More Good Days"
Written by
David S. Goyer
&
Brannon BragaELASH_ FORWARD
“No More Good Days”
A MAN IS RUNNING
From his pace and intensity, we might think he’s fleeing
for his life. WIDEN ——
BXT. CANYON ROAD - DAWN
On the outskirts of a recently developed suburban
community in Calabasas, California.
The MAN runs alone, drenched in sweat from his exertion.
This is MARK BENFORD (30s). His eyes remain fixed on the
road ahead, which is shrouded in early morning fog,
bordered by thick scrub and steep terrain.
We can’t see where the road leads.
Mark picks up the pace. Runs faster. Eyes never
wavering from the path ahead. Running is the only thing
that keeps his demons at bay. Suddenly ——
-- SOMETHING BOLTS out of the brush ahead --
A LARGE DEER
forces Mark to veer sharply left. He loses his footing
and stumbles as the deer vanishes into the mist.
OFF MARK
On his hands and knees, breathing hard.
INT, BENFORD HOUSE - SHOWER - MORNING
Mark under the spray, wincing as he washes blood and
gravel from his knee.
INT. BENFORD HOUSE - KITCHEN - MORNING
Wark is at the stove, cooking a fried egg im the hole of
a slice of bread (a “Moon Over Miami”).
(CONTTNIED)2
‘CONTINUED:
He turns to serve breakfast to a five-year old girl
sitting nearby. His daughter CHARLIE, watching TV.
INT. BENFORD HOUSE - CLOSET - MORNING
Maxk now dressed in shirt and jeans, punching a code into
a keypad. He opens a SAFE, reaches inside to pull out a
GLOCK PISTOL, a pair of HANDCUFFS, and SHOULDER HOLSTER.
There's a hand-written NOTE attached to his weapon:
You're a shitty husband. I hate you.
Mark smiles.
INT. BENFORD HOUSE - BEDROOM - MORNING
OLIVIA BENFORD (30s) buried under the covers, stirring as
Mark crouches beside her.
MARK
(whispers)
I hate you, too.
She smiles sleepily. He gives her a kiss.
CUT TO:
EXT. BENFORD HOUSE ~ MORNING
A spacious, newly-built, two-storey home in a planned
community. Mark exits the front door, moving towards his
Volvo in the driveway. He sees:
The gardener, HECTOR (50s), trimming hedges by the curb.
MARK
Hey, Hector, would you mind having
your guys check the sycamore in
the back? Doesn’t look s0 good.
Might need more water.
HECTOR
Absolutely.
MARK
‘Thanks.
We notice a Jetta pulling up in front of the house.
NICOLE (19), good-looking, climbs out, smiles at Mark.
(CONTTNURD