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Prospect for Murder (Natalie Seachrist Hawaiian Cozy Mystery 1)
Prospect for Murder (Natalie Seachrist Hawaiian Cozy Mystery 1)
Prospect for Murder (Natalie Seachrist Hawaiian Cozy Mystery 1)
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Retired travel writer Natalie Seachrist has had visions since childhood. But the sight of a girl's lifeless body draped over a vintage Mustang shatters her personal world when she learns her vision has been prescient. The horrible truth is that her twin's granddaughter Ariel is dead!

While the Honolulu Police Department conducts its customary investigation, Natalie decides to move into the Makiki apartment complex where her grandniece died. Aided by her friend Keoni Hewitt, a retired police detective, and her fleet-footed feline companion Miss Una, Natalie begins her very personal on-site sleuthing.

She soon discovers the fascinating ShÀnghai origins of apartment owners Pearl Wong and her sister Jade Bishop...and more than a little discord. Will Natalie be able to solve the riddle of Ariel's death before the police close their investigation without an arrest? Or has Natalie put herself in the way of a killer who's willing to murder again to hide their secret?

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Release dateJul 18, 2016
ISBN9781932926477
Prospect for Murder (Natalie Seachrist Hawaiian Cozy Mystery 1)
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Jeanne Burrows-Johnson

Author Jeanne Burrows-Johnson embraces years in the performing arts, education, and marketing. Academically, she became a member of Phi Beta Kappa while finishing a Bachelor of Arts degree in history at the University of Hawai`i. During graduate studies and a teaching assistantship, she joined Phi Alpha Theta. She’s also a member of the National Writers Union, Sisters in Crime, Arizona Mystery Writers, and the British Association of Teachers of Dancing, Highland Division. Having lived in Hawai`i for 20 years, it’s no surprise her readers sample its lush environs while examining puzzling deaths, snippets of pan-Pacific history, and her heroine’s haunting visions. Project descriptions, Island recipes, and a link to a writing and marketing blog are at JeanneBurrows-Johnson.com.

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    Author Jeanne Burrows-Johnson sets out a daunting task for herself as she opens her new Natalie Seachrist series of mystery novels with Prospect for Murder (2016). In her notes, Burrows-Johnson says “I look forward to introducing historical characters and incidents with in the genre of a mystery novel.” I view this as daunting because most mystery readers have a pretty clear idea of what they want from a mystery novel, and they are not always happy if they don’t find what they expect in the first pages. Maybe they look for a Miss Marple-like polite and subdued British mystery heavy on clues, a police procedural with an abundance of forensic evidence, the private eye or noir mystery, or maybe they are looking for an action-packed hero like Jack Reacher who encounters constant danger on almost every page. The historical mystery is a genre of its own. However it is unusual to attempt to bring historical events into a contemporary setting, and still maintain that mystery aura. Burrows-Johnson introduces us to semi-retired writer and researcher Natalie Seachrist, resident of Hawaii, who is unhappily thrust into a close-to-home mystery as she investigates the suspicious death of her great-niece, Ariel. The story unfolds slowly as Seachrist transforms herself into an amateur sleuth. Along the way, Natalie encounters characters that take her into historical events of both pre-Maoist China, and of Hawaii’s history as a nation state. Familial relations are big part of Natalie’s story, as is an emerging romance with an ex-cop. If you are looking for a multi-faceted story that is less plot-driven but historically rich, you will enjoy this new offering best described as the cozy style. Prospect for Murder is the first in a series, so we can anticipate Natalie Seachrist challenging herself with new mysteries in the near future.
  • Rating: 2 out of 5 stars
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    Very solid on historical research and techniques, but not much of a mystery. Besides, the protagonist getting valuable clues by having visions is not very interesting.

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Prospect for Murder (Natalie Seachrist Hawaiian Cozy Mystery 1) - Jeanne Burrows-Johnson

Prospect for Murder

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PROSPECT FOR MURDER

By

Jeanne Burrows-Johnson

A Natalie Seachrist Mystery

Artemesia Publishing

Albuquerque, New Mexico

www.apbooks.net

For my husband John who has always inspired my work.

…the past is gone, the future is not come,

and the present becomes the past

even while we attempt to define it, and,

like the flash of lightning, at once exists and expires.

Charles Caleb Colton [1780-1832]

CAST OF CHARACTERS

Henry Au: Assistant Archivist, State of Hawai`i Archives

Jade Bishop: Sister of Pearl Wong; co-owner, Makiki Sunset Apartments; widow of Richard Bishop II

Richard K. Bishop III: Stepson of Jade Bishop

Al Cooper: Handyman, Makiki Sunset Apartments

John Dias (JD): Detective Lieutenant, Honolulu Police Department

Maria Espinoza: Tenant, Makiki Sunset Apartments

Ben Faktorr: Neighbor of Keoni Hewitt

Ariel Harriman: Grandniece of Natalie Seachrist; the victim

Brianna Harriman: Identical twin of Ariel Harriman

Nathan Harriman: Twin brother of Natalie Seachrist; semi-retired psychologist

Keoni Hewitt: Friend of Natalie Seachrist; retired homicide detective

Aidan Jackson: Son of Nathan Harriman’s neighbors

Theresa Jenkins (TJ): Friend and potential roommate of Ariel Harriman

Caroline Johansen: Sister of Lillian Harriman

Lani King: Non-denominational minister

Chú Huā Lee: Amah of Yùyīng Wong; guardian of the Wong sisters

Ashley and Cory Lowell: Tenants, Makiki Sunset Apartments

Miss Una: Feline companion of Natalie Seachrist

Ken’ichi Nakamura: Detective Sergeant, Honolulu Police Department

Dan and Margie O’Hara: Friends of Natalie Seachrist

Natalie Seachrist: Semi-retired journalist; the protagonist.

Evelyn and Jim Souza: Neighbors of Nathan Harriman; retired restaurateurs

Martin Soli: Assistant Coroner, State of Hawai`i

Anna Wilcox: Friend of Natalie Seachrist; manager of Natalie’s condo

Hiram Wong: Father of Jade Bishop and Pearl Wong

Pearl Wong: Co-owner and manager of the Makiki Sunset Apartments

Yùyīng Wong: Mother of Jade Bishop and Pearl Wong

Table of Contents

PROLOGUE

CHAPTER 1

CHAPTER 2

CHAPTER 3

CHAPTER 4

CHAPTER 5

CHAPTER 6

CHAPTER 7

CHAPTER 8

CHAPTER 9

CHAPTER 10

CHAPTER 11

CHAPTER 12

CHAPTER 13

CHAPTER 14

CHAPTER 15

CHAPTER 16

CHAPTER 17

CHAPTER 18

CHAPTER 19

CHAPTER 20

CHAPTER 21

EPILOGUE

NOTES AND ACKNOWLEDGMENTS

A BRIEF OVERVIEW OF THE HAWAIIAN LANGUAGE

GLOSSARY OF NON-ENGLISH & SPECIALIZED VOCABULARY

PROLOGUE

Those who have compared our life to a dream were right....

We sleeping wake, and waking sleep.

Michel de Montaigne [1533-1592]

Sepia brown images flicker in slow motion, then shift abruptly to full color in real time as I look through the fence of Honolulu’s old Makiki Cemetery. Some of the aging headstones lean in to one another, as though in conversation. What secrets they would share if they could! I look up at the luxury, high-rise condominium looming like a night watchman above. My eyes pan across the low-rent apartments and million-dollar houses stretching into Honolulu’s foothills and then toward the University of Hawai`i. A breeze rustles the long dry grass at my feet. Black as death, a mynah bird shifts in its perch in the penetrating fragrance of a eucalyptus tree. I blink and brush a veil of dust from my eyes.

The vista shifts. I am suspended above the roof of a four-storey apartment complex. Below, a young woman is sprawled face-down, awkwardly hugging the hood of a vintage car. The heat of the first day of summer shimmers across the polished copper of her long, tangled hair. I observe the scene with the dispassionate interest of a newswoman. A uniformed police officer takes notes while interviewing a small elderly Asian woman. The demanding wail of an approaching ambulance slices the midday air. Everything freezes mid-frame, again subsiding into sepia tones that harmonize with the trail of blood pooled and drying below the girl’s out-flung right hand.

I stare as a silver bracelet flashes the sun’s rays up at me. My breath catches on the sickening sweetness of a blended scent of plumeria flowers and blood. I exhale and try to resume breathing normally. My heart throbs in rhythm with a metallic ringing in my ears. Slowly my hand reaches for the telephone. My twin brother Nathan is calling to tell me what I already know—that my grandniece will not be graduating from college, will not be participating in this weekend’s pā`ina, or anything else on this plane of existence.

CHAPTER 1

Great ability develops and reveals

itself increasingly with every new assignment.

Balthasar Gracián y Morales [1601-1658]

It came again—my vision from that first day of summer—when I learned my grandniece Ariel had died. My awareness of the realm of the paranormal began when I was a small child. Since losing an hour sitting against a wall of the old Waikīkī Natatorium as a preschooler, the edge between life awake and vivid dreaming or visioning has remained blurred. As for most people, the majority of my dreams and visions are nocturnal and predictably focused on my personal journey across the world stage. However, some scenes arrive without the benefit of sleep. Like viewing Ariel’s body in grotesque deathly repose, they depict moments I have not experienced, or ever contemplated.

Today’s newsreel-like scenes swept in while I was taking a break from research at the Hawai`i State Archives. After taking early retirement, I am fortunate to supplement my income with occasional research and writing projects. My current assignment is on behalf of my friend Keoni Hewitt, a former homicide detective turned private eye. When he called with an unexpected request the night before Ariel died, I had no inkling of the complications that were about to overtake my life.

So what’re you doing these days, Natalie? he began.

Not a lot, really, I said, petting little Miss Una, my new feline companion of the tortoise shell variety. I’m enjoying my personal leisure after all those years of reporting on other people’s travels, as well as events of actual newsworthiness.

He laughed and said, Well, if your schedule can handle it, there’s some research I’m hoping you’ll consider doing for me.

I have always enjoyed listening to Keoni’s rich baritone voice. I could picture him savoring the day’s sunset from the covered lānai of his cottage in Mānoa Valley. Since he has announced he is cutting down on alcohol, he was probably stretched out on his favorite recliner sipping a tall glass of iced tea.

We are both past the half-century mark, with deepening age lines and more gray than blond in our hair. Nevertheless, Keoni still wears his signature wardrobe of crisp walking shorts, leather sandals and classic 1950s aloha shirts with great style. I could almost smell the exotic notes of his aftershave and jumped at the chance to see him again.

I said I was getting spoiled, not bored. But what’s on your agenda?

Oh, let’s say circa 1905. I’d like you to see if something significant occurred in the last century that would convince my relatives to halt their plans to demolish the old family home in Kaimukī.

I mulled over his proposal for a moment. I seldom decline an assignment, but I don’t see what I can do to halt perceptions of progress in the twenty-first century.

I’m hoping you might find some social connection or historical event to reinforce my pitch. I’m trying to get my relatives to opt for architectural preservation, rather than this year’s interpretation of suburban renewal, he pleaded eloquently. "I could justify it, if something significant has happened there. You know, like royal princesses having tea with my aunts. Or maybe studying with my grandmother, who was a recognized kumu hula. Depending on what you learn, you could write one of your colorful articles for the newspaper or Honolulu Magazine.

I’d be happy to pay for your time and any expenses you incur. You have a flair for sharing an event that makes readers feel like they’re experiencing the moment you’re describing. Applying that talent to my project could make all the difference in achieving my goal.

I certainly possessed the skills to do the research. But that did not mean that anything I learned would alter his family’s desire for a cash sale—unless something truly noteworthy had occurred on the premises to fill them with pride, or allowed them to charge admission to history-hungry visitors. My mind wandered through the possibilities for a couple of moments. I doubted Keoni’s family had hosted any gala events attended by royalty and almost laughed at the image of elegant horse-drawn carriages pulling up to what I envisioned was a modest bungalow.

The bottom line was that Keoni was offering to pay me and I was delighted to accept his job. Well, I’m already familiar with that era and the task seems straightforward. You’ve got a deal. I’ll be happy to spend a several hours nosing around the neighborhood’s history during the last ten decades or so.

That’s great, responded Keoni. I look forward to seeing what you find. Besides, we haven’t seen each other for a while and it’ll be good to catch up.

I concurred. Before hanging up, I asked a few questions about his family’s property and its sequence of owners. I then checked the lock on the front door, closed several windows, and carried Miss Una into the bedroom. After setting her on top of the velour catsack beside my pillow, I went into the bathroom to brush my teeth. Staring into the mirror, I thought about the passing decades of my life. While I may chemically enhance my hair, I have never considered plastic surgery. But I would bet my friends with eyeliner tattooing look great in the morning.

With gratitude for many things in my life, I pulled back my bedspread and snuggled down next to Miss Una. It was time for our nightly exploration of the world of classic fiction. Tonight I was finishing a re-read of one of my favorite J. A. Jance novels. As her heroine turned to kiss her new husband goodnight, I found myself entertaining a warm curiosity about where my relationship with Keoni might be going. I realized I had been a widow for over three decades. Although I date occasionally, there has not been anyone interesting on the horizon recently.

The next day was a Friday. I awoke with a renewed sense of purpose. Everything started normally, with no hint of what was to come. At the launch of every new assignment, I begin by organizing my personal life. As I tidied my home that morning, I contemplated the parameters of the work I was about to undertake. After cleaning out the refrigerator, I shared a lunch of mystery leftovers with my four-legged roommate.

I carried my cup of mint tea and a ginger cookie into the living room and sat in my reclining wingback chair. Grabbing one of the steno pads I always keep at hand, I leisurely began noting the resources I would tap for Keoni’s project. Just as I ran out of ideas, I began to feel drowsy and decided to have a nap. I laid my notes and reading glasses on the coffee table and rose to stretch my back and fingers. After clicking on the ceiling fan, I sank onto the welcoming cushions of the old koa wood framed pune`e my mother had upholstered repeatedly.

I glanced up to find Miss Una regally washing her disproportionately long white whiskers in her favorite daytime roost on the sofa’s back. Lying on my side, I slipped my right hand under a pillow and turned my face toward the open patio door. I felt refreshed by the cool breeze off the ocean and quickly slipped from consciousness into the fate-filled vision of Ariel’s ghastly and improbable death.

When I awakened to the urgent ringing of the telephone, I knew the call was from my twin Nathan. With shaking hands and a heart rate far above normal, I put the receiver to my ear. After the horrifying confirmation of his granddaughter’s death, my life devolved to one of its lowest points.

Between sketchy news reports and the lingering impact of my vision, I was too stunned to do much for a couple of days. I knew there was no need to rush over to Nathan’s home on the shoreline of Kāne`ohe, as his friends and neighbors would be supplying him with a world of provisions he would barely touch. We were both in a state of shock and it would not have helped to overwhelm him with my own tears and expressions of grief.

As Nathan had done when my husband died, I served as my sibling’s emotional lifeline. Each day I listened with compassion to his emotional outbursts that followed hours of conversations with the police, friends and neighbors. With an unattended death, we could plan elements of Ariel’s Life Celebration, but we could not schedule a time for it. More importantly, since we did not know if foul play was involved in her sister’s death, we insisted that Ariel’s identical twin Brianna remain at her college on the mainland, despite her pleas to return home.

For the benefit of Nathan as well as me, I tried to remain composed. I was glad our conversations were over the phone. At the least, Nathan could not see the empty tissue boxes piled around me, or the state of my personal disarray. Unfortunately, during my own discussions with Honolulu Police Detective John Dias, I broke down and could not conceal my tears. I was grateful the man was compassionate and gentle in asking the questions he needed me to answer.

Aside from calls to Nathan and suppliers of funeral products and services, I spent most of the weekend sitting on my balcony going through photos and other memorabilia. I savored the significance of each item. For decades I was gone for months at a time and therefore did not appear in many of the pictures. But even when I was on assignment out of the country, someone always made sure I knew about our family’s celebratory moments. Perhaps that was why Ariel’s death was so devastating to me. I had thought life would slow down eventually and I could catch up with everyone’s lives. But there would never be an opportunity to fully know the bright young girl whose life had been cut off before she could fully blossom.

Throughout the turmoil, Miss Una remained at my side—sympathetically studying the pain on my face and periodically mewing apt reminders of mealtimes. To be honest, my primary nutritional sustenance was liquid. I consumed untold pots of tea during daylight hours and several bottles from my small wine collection between sunset and midnight.

On Monday morning, I rose from a third nearly sleepless night. I looked around the condo and knew I could not bear another day within its restrictive walls. I dreaded the likelihood of a continuing stream of disturbing thoughts and uninvited images. Although I had no idea what I would do, I showered quickly, put on a short mu`umu`u and fluffed my graying strawberry blonde hair. Knowing the puffiness of my usually bright green eyes would call attention to my sorrow, I applied a bit of makeup.

I doubted my body would tolerate even mild Kona coffee, so I brewed a pot of Earl Grey tea. I was not in the mood to eat but knew I needed some nourishment. There is nothing like a quick granola bar to solve that dilemma. Sipping my heavily sugared tea, I flipped through pages of notes detailing plans for Ariel’s memorial. There were a multitude of arrangements to be considered before her body was released by the Medical Examiner’s office. Although hard news had not been my specialty, my colleagues had taught me that while an initial autopsy report may not take long, completion of the toxicology tests and reports could not be predicted.

Hurry up and wait seemed to be the directive for our schedule. To accommodate everyone who wanted to help us celebrate Ariel’s life, Nathan and I were planning two memorial events. As we considered the participants, we noted the sad fact that there were only four family members—the two of us, Brianna, and Auntie Carrie, our mother’s sister. That number dropped to three when we realized that with her advanced Alzheimer’s disease, Carrie would not even be aware of Ariel’s passing.

The first part of our celebration would be a memorial service at Kailua Beach Park. For this public occasion, we had found a non-denominational minister to officiate and Ariel’s former outrigger canoe club had volunteered to scatter her ashes at sea. Our second event would be a sunset gathering of family, friends and classmates from high school and college. Nathan’s immediate neighbors (retired restaurateurs) would handle the food and beverages. Beyond refreshments, there were musicians to book, photographs to assemble, floral decor to select, and.…It all sounded more like a wedding or birthday party, rather than recognition of the tragic conclusion of a young woman’s life.

Despite my own weekend of sorrowful reflection, I could not grasp the breadth of what Nathan was facing. Not only did he love her deeply, but he had been Ariel’s primary legal guardian since she and Brianna were orphaned at twelve. And although I was listed as co-guardian on official paperwork, every aspect of the twins’ lives had been his responsibility. If there had to be a funeral in our small family, it should have been for Nathan or me.

I finished my tea and thought of the red tape involved in any death. I resolved that once the official minutiae of this sad chapter in my life were concluded, I would make certain my own legal affairs were in order. Picking up my day planner, I leafed through the previous week. As I glanced at my notes on Keoni’s research project, I realized this was the ideal alternative to another day of long, empty hours.

Before leaving home, I set out bowls of fresh water and dry food for Miss Una. I then cracked the lānai door open to afford her a sniff of the greater world, and positioned the security rod to prevent the entry of any Breaking & Entering artists. Without the joy that normally accompanies the launch of new work, I woodenly gathered my laptop, miscellaneous supplies and a handful of my favorite, almost calorie-free snacks. Then I grabbed a banana leaf sunhat from the coat rack and headed out the door.

My journey began with a short, post rush-hour ride on Da Bus, as our local transit system is sometimes called. It took less than half an hour to travel from my Waikīkī condominium to the business hub of downtown Honolulu. Feeling better, I set aside my resolution to curb calories and stopped for a cup of mellow-fragranced Kona coffee and one of my favorite baked delights from Cookie Corner. Enjoying my snack, I meandered toward the municipal buildings and museums that line King Street.

At another time, it would have been a great day to laze in the sun, but my current assignment demanded spending a few hours indoors. After disposing of my garbage in one of the plentiful cans marked Mahalo, I entered the archives. I checked my pockets for my camera, pencils and the maximum three sheets of paper. Then I selected a locker and crammed in my purse. Queuing up to inquire about the availability of several historical materials, I smiled at sight of the sole man on the research assistance team.

"Hey, Natalie. I really liked your last article in the Honolulu Magazine, welcomed Henry Au, who stood at the check-in counter. We got a lot of calls and some new visitors after your reference to our holdings. And that always helps our pleas for funding with the legislature."

Great. I’m glad to help ensure the infusion of a few extra tax dollars for my favorite research institution!

Nodding, he inquired, So, what are you pursuing today?

I hesitated for a moment. Did I want to mention that death now permeated my personal life? That I was planning my grandniece’s funeral? No. Avoidance of these issues was my reason for being here.

Oh, losing myself in days of yesteryear. I’m hoping a few of these materials are available, I said, handing over request slips for reference books that might touch on the history of Kaimukī and some microfilm from the long-defunct Pacific Commercial Advertiser Newspaper to cruise for other potential points of interest.

Give me a few minutes, and I’ll see what I have for you, smiled Henry.

His friendliness beckoned me into old routines and I began wandering the public rooms of the squat old building. With the expectation I felt at the start of a new project, I leafed through numerous finding aids. From there, I would move on to the leather-bound friends waiting to present their varied tales dating from the age of Victorian Island splendor. Due to problems with mold, the books themselves are stored beyond the public’s reach. Checking back at the counter, I found that most of the biographical books I sought on leaders of the Territory of Hawai`i had been claimed by other researchers. Other items I had requested from the closed stacks were checked out or in the shop for repair, as well as control of mildew and dust mites.

I took the two reference volumes Henry had found for me and sat down to think about how I would approach this project. As I perused their tables of contents, text and indices, I periodically added notes to my personalized timeline of Hawaiian history. After returning the books, I sat at my work table and considered the notable men and women from politics and commerce who might have graced Keoni’s corner of Kaimukī.

With a vague restlessness, I glanced out through the old wood casement windows. Undulating shadows cast by the branches of banyan trees beckoned me to escape my drudgery for a while. Inspired, I returned to my locker and shoved in my laptop. I then grabbed my phone, a can of orange-passion juice and a few nibblies before exiting the building.

After the cool temperature of the archives, the sultry atmosphere of a bright Hawaiian summer day was a welcome change. Munching bites of fragrant, dried pineapple and sweet mochi, I sauntered across the grounds of `Iolani Palace. For a few minutes, I watched as tourist couples in matching aloha shirts and dresses disembarked with joyous laughter from a bus across the street at the Mission Houses Museum. I set my bag on a shaded bench, shook the remains of my snack from the front of my dress and sat down. Pushing back thoughts of Ariel’s perplexing and gruesome death, I slipped beyond consciousness to that state beyond normal dreaming.

With the repeated coo of a dove overhead, my eyes opened. I looked around in a daze. Now that I am retired, I do not wear a watch. Often too lazy to pull out my cell phone, I use the lack of a watch as an excuse to chat with bus drivers and strangers on the few occasions I need to keep to a schedule. Noting that the shadow of a nearby garbage can had shifted and lengthened, I realized that more than a few minutes had passed while I was lost in the less-than-pleasant scene in which Ariel had died. I sat up and stretched my neck from side to side, trying to focus my attention outward as I was still immersed in the numbing vision from which I was struggling to emerge.

* * * * *

I am trapped in the expanding scenes of my home movie of personal horror. This time I face the unfolding story from the front row. Again, I cringe at the sight of the young woman face-down across the hood and windshield of a vintage car I now see is a Ford Mustang coupe. Counter-balancing the car’s metallic aquamarine paint, her bright red hair is splayed out across the back of her classic white tennis dress.

Today, I observe a gathering of onlookers casually restrained beyond a sagging perimeter of yellow plastic tape. Ambulance personnel speak quietly, awaiting instructions beside their two trucks. As before, a uniformed police officer interviews a petite, elegantly clad Chinese woman in front of an aging, four-storey building. The tall young man’s shiny name badge reads, Yamato. He scratches his pen across a blue notepad. He then nods, striving to show respect to the elderly woman I somehow know is the manager of these apartments. I now realize there are two cement block buildings in the complex. Surrounded by parking spaces on three sides, they face each other across an unkempt courtyard.

The now familiar sequence of scene processing and incident report writing fades again to sepia and then disappears. A new scenario opens silently in full color. I watch the manager smile as she opens the door of a top floor apartment. Turning, she ushers the now-vibrant girl into an unfurnished unit, with white walls and terracotta colored vinyl floor tiles. They both remove their shoes at the door. Brushing a strand of black hair behind her jade-studded ear, the manager pulls a pen from her pocket and poses with clipboard at the ready while they glance around.

I feel as though I am watching the video of a stranger’s first adventure in real estate…not the last moments of my dear Ariel’s life. In tandem, the old woman and girl move through a two bedroom, two bath apartment. I notice that the doors, closets, and refrigerator stand open. I smell cleaning solvents and fresh paint. The angled light coming through screened, west-facing windows foretells the heat of the day’s end.

The property manager closely examines the beautiful girl in front of her. I know she is evaluating her suitability as a tenant. The girl is polite and respectful in demeanor and speech. The elderly woman nods periodically. She is pleased the girl is a local student on scholarship at the University of Hawai`i. The girl smiles with expectation and says she will be sharing the apartment with a roommate, who will arrive soon. As the image freezes, I smell dead flowers.

* * * * *

Slowly, this new scene in my vision receded. My mind’s eye struggled to withdraw from the jarring pictures now permanently etched in my mind and heart. Hearing the intruding laughter of elementary students on early-release from school, I blinked. I was not surprised to note

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