Finding Your Voice: How to Put Personality in Your Writing
By Les Edgerton
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You know a great literary "voice" when you hear it: David Sedaris' humorous cynicism. Elmore Leonard's weary, smart-mouthed dialogue. Nick Hornby's simple yet imaginative descriptions. It's the kind of writing you should aspire to, right?
Well...not quite. Each of these authors found success in part by developing their own unique voice: a writing style that helped define - and throw the spotlight on - their work.
Now Les Edgerton shows you how to develop a voice of your own, one that rises above the literary din because of its individuality, not in spite of it!
Inside, he provides guidelines, advice and dozens of exercises for recognizing and developing a natural style that will make your characters, stories and dialogue better and more memorable. You'll learn:
- How to make any piece you write unmistakably yours and yours alone
- What agents and editors really think about using your own voice
- How to write better by ignoring the rules
- The keys to getting your voice and personality on the page
- How to get back the unique voice you may have lost by trying to write like someone else
Whether you write fiction, non-fiction or poetry, Finding Your Voice is a must for your personal library. Let's face it - editors, agents and readers all want to read something fresh and new. By finding your voice, you'll be giving them exactly what they want!
Les Edgerton
Les Edgerton is the author of more than 20 books as well as numerous short stories and screenplays. His work has been nominated for or awarded the Pushcart Prize, O. Henry Award, PEN/ Faulkner Award, Derringer Award, Spinetingler Magazine Thriller of the Year, Jesse Jones Book Award, Edgar Allan Poe Award, Violet Crown Book Award, the Nicholl Foundation Script-Writing Awards and the Best of Austin and Writer's Guild screenwriting awards. An acclaimed and award-winning former hairstylist and television fashion program host, he now teaches creative writing courses at many universities and professional writing programs. He also served two years at the Pendleton Correctional Facility on a burglary conviction in the 1960s. He is completely reformed now and you can have him over for dinner at your house and won't have to count the silverware when he leaves.
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- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5To a writer, something that they call “voice” simply provides a line of life. It’s the most essential part of getting a reader interested in reading more – and getting an editor interested in publishing the author. Edgerton’s method of developing voice is simply learning to be yourself while writing. This professional writing teacher teaches us his writing process – by studying how others write and then by listening to how he thinks.He seems to spend a lot of his time teaching students inclined towards literature how to write. In this book, he often refers to the transgression of trying to imitate other authors instead of writing your own thoughts. He also talks of the transgression of the “Critic-Nag Dude” who criticizes one’s natural writing style. This internal critic tends to over-polish writing and is the stuff of piling rewrite upon rewrite.As for himself, Edgerton’s writing voice is fairly loose and folksy. He does not have an overly academic or even succinct style. As is common today, he is pretty conversational. I’m not sure he has a ton to say to those, like myself, who have a more academic and analytical voice. Nonetheless, the central message of disregarding one’s own harsh thoughts ought to be accepted by everyone. Too many people spend their time in life trying to imitate others.Edgerton also addresses writers of both fiction and non-fiction. Fiction writers must be authentic to themselves while imitating the voices of their characters. Their characters, however, are ultimately a creation of their soul. Non-fiction writers must learn to engender curiosity, wonder, and interest in the reader. The best way to do that is to be so with the subject matter at hand.This book provides a relaxed read for those interested in the craft of writing. Instead of a technical work on how to enhance voice, reading it more reflects a therapy session – not on how to live but on how to cultivate authenticity, transparency, and honesty in writing. Those looking to unlock the mysteries of success and the universe will probably be disappointed. Those looking to improve a few things in their writing, however, will find many gems hidden in the grass.
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Finding Your Voice - Les Edgerton
Finding Your Voice
how to put personality in your writing
by Les Edgerton
Blue Skies Books, 2012
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Dedication
This book is dedicated to all those who were in my psychic gang
back in public school. You know, the kids teachers called the Under-achievers.
All us poor souls who didn't live up to our promise
(whatever that was) or our potential.
Which, translated, meant all of those poor slobs who didn't fit their mold. The daydreamers. The ones who didn't know from kindergarten that selling insurance or being President was their shining goal. That's the gang I was forced into . . . and I'm glad I was.
It left my imagination in working order and I trust it did yours, too. After all, it's our reward for being the daydreamers.
Acknowledgments
A very special note of gratitude to a hulking mouthbreather I only remember as Waldo
in the fourth grade in Freeport, Texas, who used to viciously bully my skinny scared butt in front of the other kids. I began writing little humorous vignettes about Waldo {he may not have found them humorous . . . ) and passing them around to my schoolmates, and that had two major effects on my life. Waldo quit bullying me because of the resultant public derision and I found out the truly awesome power of the written word and became a writer. Wherever Waldo is today (prison, I hope) I say, Thanks, creep.
I think he learned that old nursery rhyme about sticks and stones just isn't true. Words can hurt you.
They can also help.
A lot.
Just ask Waldo.
About the Author
Les Edgerton lives with his wife Mary in Fort Wayne, Indiana, where he writes full-time and teaches creative writing online for Phoenix College and for a private class. He co-teaches a class on Story Beginnings with author Jenny Milchman for the New York Writer’s Workshop. He formerly taught online for the UCLA Writer's Program. For three years, he was the Writer-in-Residence for the University of Toledo and for one year for Trine University.
He has two daughters from a former marriage; Britney, who works in the computer industry in Louisville, and Sienna, an artist who lives in Indianapolis and who just gave Les his first grandson, the cute-as-all-get-out Logan. Les and Mary’s son Mike lives in Ft. Wayne and attends college for filmmaking and is a barrista at Starbucks and has one of those prized black aprons. Les writes short stories, articles, essays, novels, nonfiction books, and screenplays. His fiction has been nominated for the Pushcart Prize, O. Henry Award, Edgar Allan Poe Award (short story category), Jesse Jones Award, PEN/Faulkner Award, and the Violet Crown Book Award, among others. One of his screenplays was a semifìnalist in the Academy Awards Foundation's Nicholl Fellowships and a finalist in the Writer's Guild's Best American Screenplays
competition as well as the Best of Austin competition. His existential novel, THE BITCH, was named the Best Thriller of 2011 by Preditors & Editors, and it was also a nominee for Spinetingler Magazine’s prestitious Best Novel Award of 2012 (Legends category).
Table of Contents
INTRODUCTION
The importance of writing in your voice and why—to give ourselves a much better chance of getting published!
CHAPTER ONE
Why Writers Lose Their Original Voices
How da rules
take us away from our personal voices. Who Critic Nag Dude
is and why he needs to be smacked up alongside his ugly head and locked out of our writing spaces. Ways to tell which rules to follow and which to thumb our noses at. Archaic writing—how to recognize it and those voice-crippling so five minutes ago
writing techniques. Why synonyms can be dangerous to your (writing) health. The very best way to learn to write. How to begin to regain your own wonderful voice!
CHAPTER TWO
Why Unpublished Writers Have an Inferiority Complex
What a writer's inferiority complex
is and how it hurts you and how to get rid of it without having to pay a shrink big bucks. What editors and readers want from you. Writing a poison pen
letter that will change your life forever and set you free!
CHAPTER THREE
You Want Me to Change My Entire Writing Style?
Be not afraid, Little One. The Force is with you . . . Actually, it's within you, right next to your spleen or gizzard, or one'a them parts. Changing your writing style is going to be a day at the beach. You're not going to change except to go back to being you. This is going to be fun! And profitable.
CHAPTER FOUR
It's Okay to be Yourself. I mean-It's REALLY OKAY!
Finding the real
you and seeing what a truly wonderful and interesting person lurks within. A writer the world eagerly awaits . . .
CHAPTER FIVE
Here's Lookin' at You, Kid ... A New and Different Way of Looking at Your Audience
Who your audience really is and how to connect with large numbers of ‘em. Why you may have a superiority complex
and how to make it vanish overnight (or quicker). The most common reason folks go unpublished and an easy method to change that. Why you should respect the reader—leads to sales! Solid techniques on how to remain yourself on the page and write more memorable and different characters than you ever have. . . by stealing techinques from actors.
CHAPTER SIX
The Elements of Personality or Voice
Identifying the elements that make up that thing we call voice
— tone, vocabulary, imagery and rhythm. Simple, practical exercises provided that will help you see which elements you need to strengthen to get your voice on the page very quickly.
CHAPTER SEVEN
Strategies for Getting and Keeping Your Voice on the Page
How to stay in your voice from now on and keep it from sneaking away
ever again. How prewriting helps get you firmly into your voice and some easy prewriting techniques. The importance of molten, fiery, hot passion is to your writing. Why censorship from without and within is bad for your writing. How to select the proper form for your material. How to edit wisely in your first drafts without interrupting your creative juices. Why being a schizophrenic is beneficial to your writing career.
CHAPTER EIGHT
The Link Between Material and Voice ... And Why You Should Break It
Why it's important to write for yourself and not for the market.
Why it's how you write it readers want more than what you write about. Great ways to get saleable ideas for your stories and articles— ideas that make it fun and exciting for you to write as well as earn money and recognition.
CHAPTER NINE
Undue Influences-Tuning Out the Masters
Seeking out and improving your writing weaknesses. A way to obtain a quality college writing education at no cost and in the privacy of your own home. Why your favorite author may be doing you wrong,
and how to keep that from happening.
CHAPTER TEN
How to Seize Control of your Novel, Short Story, Nonfiction Article or Book and Make It Your Own
The secret
to getting published. Litmus tests to check to see if you're employing that secret successfully. Lagniappe—something extra
that will show you the real and awesome power of your own voice. How not to let others rent space in your head.
CHAPTER ELEVEN
What Top Writers, Editors and Agents Say About Voice
Here's what the pros say about the importance of each writer using his or her own voice and no one else's. Powerful advice and lots of good tips here.
CHAPTER TWELVE
A Disclaimer
Why your own writing instincts are valuable and why you should take anybody's advice with a grain of that proverbial salt. . . including mine! How to wade through the mountains of books, advice and other such material and come away only with what works for your writing— the only writing that counts.
Introduction
I've written all my life (in my case, that began just about the same time as dinosaurs were put on the endangered list
) and have also been privileged to teach several hundred writers of all levels and abilities as an online teacher of creative fiction writing in the famed UCLA Extension Writer's Program and these days for other venues. Even though I'd enjoyed success myself as a writer and teacher, I was much like most of my students—searching for a secret
that would guarantee for my work the light of publication. I hunted along all the canyons and woodlands wherein such a secret might lie ... workshops, writing magazines, how-to
books, queries to published authors I met . . . and so on. Even though I'd been published, I was still convinced that others met success without as much blood and sweat as I had. There just had to be some kind of secret
Tim O'Brien and Kurt Vonnegut and Barbara Kingsolver weren't sharing—were holding close to the vest, so to speak.
Well, there was.
I discovered that secret in the most unlikely of places. In the Indiana state prison at Pendleton.
In my wild and tempestuous youth, I had gone afoul of the law and ended up serving time in that institution. I'd come home from four years in the Navy, the last two spent in Bermuda, and just kind of went crazy back home in Indiana.
I fell in with some other guys who were very pleased to let me go insane right along with them and ended up committing a bunch of burglaries and robberies and getting my very own personalized number on my blue denim state-issued shirt. They say you remember your social security number all your life, as well as your military number. Along with those numbers, I find it hard to forget an additional series of digits . . . #49028. That was my personality
for the next couple of years.
Decades later, having straightened up my own mess of an existence, I felt I owed something of a debt to the guys I'd left behind and so, a few years ago, I began to pay visits to the inmates downstate. I'd offer up my own life as proof that anyone can overcome the label of ex-con and go on to contribute to society rather than simply take from it.
What began to happen was that after many of those visits, an inmate would write me a lengthy letter, telling me that he, too, had ambitions to become a writer and could I advise him on how to go about learning the craft. These letters would also go into great detail about how the unlucky incarcerate had personally been bum-rapped on the litigous
(a term I coined in one of my short stories titled Dream Flyer
, available in my collection titled Monday's Meal). The letters would tell marvelously-inventive stories of how society had dumped on the inmate and how it wasn't his fault that he found himself in a six-by-eight-foot cell, painted an unfashionable gray. A con job, but what good writing isn't?
The thing was, these stories had all the elements of great fiction. They were rollicking, exhilarating tales of car chases, lawyerly ineptitude, shootouts, and judges they were convinced had been fixed
or just politically motivated to be perceived by the voting public as crime-fighters.
I might also add that many of the letters were rife with misspellings, along with grammatical and punctuation errors, but through all the slag and dross that might cause an English teacher to cringe, shone the unmistakable luster of literary gold. These guys were writers! I wrote each of them back, asking them to create for me a short story and we'd go from there.
I felt like a budding Maxwell Perkins. I was discovering
writers and would have a major hand in shaping their craft. At least one of these guys was going to emerge a major American author, when I was done. Eat your heart out, Normie Mailer—my cons were more better than yours ever were, dude . . .
Not so. The stories I invariably got back could never possibly be matched to the authors of those original letters. In every single case, the author had opted to become writerly.
I could imagine the earnest tyro sitting on his bunk, hunched over a yellow legal pad, scribbling with a blue-capped Bic . . . with a Webster's Collegiate Dictionary and Random House Thesaurus open beside him. Plus a copy of a coverless Zane Grey glommed from the prison library's priceless collection. Instead of the stories so passionately expressed in their letters, I was given tales of rustlers in the Wild West and Sam Spade retreads in Los Angeles and Noo
York City . . . written in a hand unmistakable as an imitation of the original . . .
The same thing happened when I began teaching for UCLA in the nineties. I'd get these great letters at the beginning of the class in response to the bios I asked for from my students . . . and then the stories that began to emerge utilized an entirely different voice.
It dawned on me what had happened. Faced with writing something an authority
(that would be moi. . .) would actually be reading (and judging), they had fled from their own natural, wondrous voices and succumbed to what I started to recognize as the writer's inferiority complex.
An inferiority complex I began to see everywhere in beginning writers and even in some fairly-seasoned pros.
As time went on and I began to teach more, I saw the malaise among beginning writers everywhere. Universally, it manifests itself in definite patterns.
The writers afflicted with this most wretched of all writer's maladies almost always hold themselves back
from their best writing (read: natural voice) because they approach their craft with overmuch respect for the published word and/or to satisfy the critical voices they hear in their heads from all the writing teachers or mentors they've had, and end up trying to create prose they feel is in what they see to be a writerly
style.
Instead of the very likable voice that is unique to each of them, they try to be a William Faulkner or a Sandra Cisneros clone, or, in the case of many of my inmate friends, a Zane Grey-ite, as well as for all those writing authorities
sprinkled in their pasts, and in the process do much good for their mail carriers' end-of-year bonuses, keep the paper mill industry profitable and amass a significant collection of editor's rejection slips, but do little for their own careers.
Some of these folks do get published, but many times only because they've learned how to be technically perfect. The piece of writing accepted didn't hit any of the editor's hot
buttons, those buttons that allow them to get through that humongous pile of manuscripts staring at them from across the desk. The buttons I'm referring to are the don't's
of writing, i.e., improper format, misspellings, grammatical mistakes, etc.
Editors are busy folks and to get through the mass of manuscripts most use an internal checklist of mistakes
to automatically reject a manuscript. If a story or an article makes it through that minefield, it sometimes gets published simply because it didn't hit any of those buttons or mines.
As an editor of The Crescent Review, I see stories like that being accepted every now and then. Sometimes, I wish we'd published the writers' cover letters instead, since those were in their natural voices and much more interesting reading.
About that natural voice . . .
The theory I've arrived at through these observations is that readers select certain authors to read in much the same way as they select their personal friends: on the basis of the voice
(personality) of that person. All human beings in the world have a circle of people who like them and want to be around them . . . and they also have folks who don't like them all that much. The same is true of an author's readership. They are the friends
he or she will accumulate. Contrary to what many think, I don't believe readers are attracted nearly so much to plots and characters as much as they are to the personality of the person regaling them on the page. The same holds true for nonfìction—a reader may initially be attracted because of the subject or to the basic facts
revealed, but unless the author provides a personality to the material, many won't stick around till the end or will only read it because they’re forced to by a boss or a teacher.
Think about it. Remember when you were a kid and your mom wanted you to eat all your peas and you balked? Maybe even threw a wee fit, one of those minor seismic domestic disturbances that registered, say, a 4.5 on the Richter Scale? What'd she tell you? That you ought to eat 'em because there were eight million starving people in China,
right? Well, that's an example of a basic fact
(even if it wasn't true . . .) that writers sometimes rely on. What was the result? Went in one ear and out the other, unless I miss my guess.
Now . . . what if she'd said, Eat your goshdarned peas, Harvey/ Maybellina! You know, the Millers next door would kill for those peas! Especially since both the mister and missus have been laid off for six months and they've been buying day-old bread to go with their gruel and last night I heard the Miller boy rooting around in our garbage can.
Now, that's something I bet would have had an influence on your pea-eating career! Why? Because, eight million starving people in China
is basically meaningless and faceless and just too impersonal. If you hadn't heard that fact before, it might have been an interesting fact. . . for about a nanosecond. After that . . . zzzzzzzz. But, if Mom would have personalized the example as I did, it most likely would have struck home and you would have experienced a real emotion and it may have even prompted you to finish your peas.
Same way in writing. Which doesn't mean that every single person who picks up your article or story will be fascinated and mesmerized to the very last word, but lots more will than if you don't make the story or piece unmistakably yours and yours alone.
Although some won't . . .
That's not bad, folks. Just as in real life
you don't honestly expect everyone to like you or want to join your gang,
neither should you expect everyone who picks up your story or article or novel to feel a rapport with you. That's just not reasonable to expect. Don't worry about it whatsoever. You'll pick up lots more friends (readers) by being yourself than you will be by writing in a beige voice. Lots and lots more!
What is reasonable for you to expect is that no matter how idiosyncratic or different
your own, particular voice may be, there will be a number of readers who will like it. Who will be drawn to the personality on the page.
It's usually a mistake in