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The rest of the story should support and elaborate on the lede and also provide the information that didnt make the cut up top.
Some history
How we got here
Some history
Until the early 1900s, newspaper writing was more akin to literary prose. They wrote dispatches -- not stories. In 1869, a reporter for the New York Herald, Henry Morton Stanley, was sent to Africa in search of a missionary named Dr. David Livingstone. Stanleys story began thusly: Only two months gone and what a change in my feelings! But two months ago, what a peevish, fretful soul was mine! What a hopeless prospect presented itself before your correspondent! Stanleys story continues on and on and ends like this: Dr. Livingstone, I presume? And he says, Yes. How many readers today would have kept reading long enough to find those two famous lines?
Some history
In this style of writing, the significance of a story the nut graph could be anywhere. Of course, in those days, that kind of writing style was greatly assisted by the multiple headlines accompanying the story. With 5 to 10 headlines telling the reader what happened, the writer could feel free to take liberties with their style. The Chicago Tribune used 15 decks on its report about Mrs. OLeary and her famous cow in the Great Fire of 1871. Many stories started in one column and just continued to the next column there were no jump pages.
Some history
The first newspaper photograph was printed in 1880, but photos didnt become commonly used until the early 1900s. The advent of photos, changes in newspaper space requirements and the changing lifestyles of the early 20th century brought forth the need for a new type of writing style one that got to the point more quickly. Thus, was born the inverted pyramid style. And like so many trends in this business, it was copied and recopied until it became a tradition and the norm.
It is still widely used in newspapers and wire services. It is the style of choice on many, if not most, online news
sites, including the Chronicle, because many Web surfers have itchy mouse fingers -- its even easier to click a mouse than turn a page.
Heres a visual on what an inverted pyramid story might look like (from handout)
PBS film
Going to war with the inverted pyramid
How to do it
Just as there is a mental checklist for writing a lede, there is also a checklist for writing the rest of an inverted pyramid story:
The IP Checklist
The lede or lede device that directs the reader to the nut
graph.
The IP Checklist
The IP Checklist
You may have mini-inverted pyramids or blocs of related material within your story. (GOP view, followed by several explanations and quotes; then the Democratic view, followed by several explanations and quotes.)
The IP Checklist
Try to use the one idea - one paragraph method. In newspapers and magazines that feature narrower
column widths, the paragraphs are only one or two sentences.
The use of frequent paragraph breaks makes the typography less gray and is less formidable to the reader.
Type on the Internet is often narrow as well so they can put all those ads on the side of the story.
A short exercise
Assemble these paragraphs into an inverted pyramid story. The dateline is Austin. Simply arrange by the appropriate letter:
A. David Bailey, homeland security division chief for the Austin Fire Department, said nine workers from the mailroom where the letter was processed were quarantined until tests could determine whether the powder was toxic.
B. The mailroom is in the State Insurance Building. C. Gov. Rick Perry's office said the letter came from a prison inmate but provided no other details. The substance was sent to the Texas Department of State Health Services for testing.
Organizational options
Use subheads as a way to introduce key transition points Be aware of what material is being used in graphics or
other display elements; there may be no need to repeat the information
Indicate optional or MUST material Are some elements best told in bullet form? (In other
broken out into a sidebar? (Analysis, a lot of reaction, quotes, chronology, background, etc.)
Transition
Transition gives signposts to the reader, lets them know
where you are going and when you are switching gears.
Since most news-story paragraphs are only a sentence or
Transition Hints
Transition Hints
as a result,
How to end
Some writers feel a compulsion to make their last graph some sort of happy ending (They may have lost today, but the Cougars will try again next week). Resist the urge. In general, when the storys over, stop. Many news writers find useful or creative ways to divert from the strict inverted pyramid style they put a good quote at the end to serve as a closer or maybe they save a juicy fact or observation thats low on the importance scale.
How to end
By the way, do you know why print journalists used to end their stories with a 30? Some say it was because an XXX symbol was used at the end of early stories or was used at the end of telegraphed articles and it evolved into 30. Some say it was a signal to the hot-lead Linotype operators to mark the end of a line or to insert 30 points of leading, or space, before the beginning of the next headline on a page. The most popular theory is that 30 originated during the Civil War, when many stories were transmitted by telegraph -- a 30 was a telegraphers shorthand for end.
Next class
Review the ledes you wrote
Practice stories (Luna, Cremeen) Exercise for Grade