SLudenL ApprenLlceshlps Dse of LdlLlng Wl noLlced LhaL Lhe edlLlng for Lhls magazlne show was very fasL paced whlch kepL Lhe flow conslsLenL 1hls was done Lhrough a varleLy of shoLs all comblned and lncluded whlch moved really fasL Lo geL all Lhe lnformaLlon ln l feel Lhls wlll be Lhe rlghL Lype of edlLlng Lo use ln my documenLary as l have a loL of lnformaLlon whlch l need Lo lnclude Also Lhe fasL pace wlll keep my LargeL audlence of 1624 years old sLlmulaLed as Lhey wlll noL geL bored buL wlll be focused on Lhe consLanL changlng shoLs W ln Lerms of graphlcs l noLlced Lhey were used effecLlvely when namlng Lhe lnLervlewees l Lhlnk lf l could use a slmllar sLyle of graphlc ln my documenLary lL wlll enhance Lhe cllp maklng lL seem a loL more professlonal l have a loL of conLacLs ln mlnd Lo use Lherefore Lhls ls deflnlLely a area LhaL l should be looklng Lo produce Lhe besL of my ablllLy Dse of Camera ln Lerms of Lhe use of camera ln Lhls news feaLure Lhe range was enormous lrom a close up shoL of a plpe belng screwed Lo a long shoL of a roof belng LhaLched 1here was also camera movemenL such as zoom ouLs of cerLaln cllps whlch l felL worked exLremely well l hope Lo have Lhe same vasL varleLy of shoLs such as over Lhe shoulder shoLs ln lnLervlews and several esLabllshlng shoLs accordlng Lo Lhe locaLlon change l feel durlng Lhese a zoom ouL wlll look professlonal and wlll enhance Lhe cllp Dse of Sound 1here are dlfferenL Lypes of sound used ln Lhls feaLure such as background muslc and Lhe volceover 1he background muslc was a lnsLrumenLal whlch was effecLlve wlLh a volceover along Lhe Lop l feel l wlll deflnlLely Lry and lnclude someLhlng of a slmllar concepL as l feel lL makes Lhe cllp more appeallng Lo llsLen Lo 1he only dlfference wlll be LhaL l wlll use a range of muslc by modern arLlsLs such as 1lnle 1empah and Adele as Lhey are more relevanL Lo Lhe LargeL audlence l also noLlced LhaL wlLh Lhe locaLlon change Lhe use of ulegeLlc sound was effecLlve addlng emphasls Lo ln Lhls case Lhe occupaLlon of belng a Lechnlclan by presenLlng Lhe sounds of Lhe Lools belng used l Lhlnk Lhls wlll be good Lo use for cuLaways of maybe Lhe busy London sLreeLs and playgrounds Lo lnclude ln my documenLary as Lhey are also relevanL Lo Lhe sub[ecL ConLenL and ConvenLlons W SLaLlsLlcs W Archlve looLage W resenLer 1hls news feaLure had a few of Lhe general convenLlons LhaL a magazlne show should have buL l wlll be sure Lo lnclude more ln my own documenLary vox pops opular culLure references and monLages were lefL ouL l feel lL ls posslble Lo lnclude mosL of Lhe general convenLlons and l wlll alm Lo do LhaL 1he more LralLs LhaL l do follow Lhe more l belleve my documenLary wlll look professlonal and enhanced 1exL Analysls uescrlpLlon of 1exL Audlence of 1exL key lnfluences on my ldea 1op|c Llfe afLer school has flnlshed Ang|e ApprenLlceshlps Cp|n|ons MosLly aL Lhe beneflLs of ApprenLlceshlps resenters Cne female presenLer Locat|ons varlous such as offlce and facLory Interv|ewees A range lncludlng experLs and apprenLlces Iacts SLaLlsLlcs of Lhe growlng lnLeresL ln ApprenLlceshlps Age 13 43 Gender 8oLh genders Interests LducaLlon Maklng Money 1elevlslon CurrenL Affalrs Locat|on Mldlands Lthn|c|ty MosLly whlLe Soc|oLconom|c Group Almed more aL Lhe 'C2 L' groups who are looklng Lo geL ln Lo Lhe worklng class l felL Lhls news feaLure ls a LemplaLe for whaL l wanL my documenLary Lo be llke lL has helped me envlslon how l wanL Lo layouL my vldeo l Lhlnk Lhe only Lhlnk l would add ls probably some vox pops some relevanL muslc and maybe a monLage Lo really make lL meeL Lhe sLandard 1he way Lhe numerous angles and conLacLs have been organlsed wlll lnfluence my ldea as l also wlsh Lo seL my lnformaLlon ln small segmenLs slmllar Lo Lhls vldeo Magazlne Show 2 WhaLs wrong wlLh our schools ? lree Lo Choose (1980) Dse of LdlLlng Wl noLlced LhaL Lhe edlLlng for Lhls magazlne show was a loL more slow paced Lhan Lhe flrsL vldeo 1hls was done Lhrough a loL of Lalklng shoLs and long cllps 1hls maybe because Lhe vldeo ls almosL 20 mlnuLes long Lherefore Lhey can afford a more relaxed approach Lo Lhe lnformaLlon As my documenLary wlll only be 3 mlnuLes long lL wlll be edlLed really fasL Lo geL all Lhe lnformaLlon ln 1hls wlll be done Lhrough fasL cuLaways and brlef lnLervlews l feel Lhls wlll be Lhe rlghL Lype of edlLlng Lo use ln my documenLary as l have a loL of lnformaLlon whlch l need Lo lnclude Also Lhe fasL pace wlll keep my LargeL audlence of 1624 years old sLlmulaLed as Lhey wlll noL geL bored buL wlll be focused on Lhe consLanL changlng shoLs W ln Lerms of graphlcs l noLlced Lhey were used effecLlvely when namlng Lhe lnLervlewees l Lhlnk lf l could use a more modern sLyle of graphlc ln my documenLary lL wlll enhance Lhe cllp maklng lL seem a loL more professlonal l have a loL of conLacLs ln mlnd Lo use Lherefore Lhls ls deflnlLely a area LhaL l should be looklng Lo produce Lhe besL of my ablllLy Archlve fooLage was also used and l feel uslng LhaL also wlll glbe my documenLary a loL more depLh Dse of Camera ln Lerms of Lhe use of camera ln Lhls documenLary Lhe range was llmlLed 1here was only some varlaLlon on Lhe use of camera such as a zoom ln or a hlgh angle shoL 8esldes Lhls Lhere could have been a loL more done Lo enhance Lhls cllp l hope Lo have Lhe a much more wlder varleLy of shoLs such as over Lhe shoulder shoLs ln lnLervlews and several esLabllshlng shoLs accordlng Lo Lhe locaLlon change l feel durlng Lhese a zoom ouL wlll look professlonal and wlll enhance Lhe cllp as well as maklng Lhe whole vldeo sLlmulaLlng for Lhe audlence Lo waLch Dse of Sound 1here are some lnsLances where sound ls used such as aL Lhe sLarL of Lhe vldeo Lo show Lhe LlLle and a volceover Lhrough Lhe vldeo 1he cllp would lmmedlaLely be a loL more enLerLalnlng lf more background muslc was used and maybe some sound effecLs l feel lf l use Lhe rlghL muslc whlch wlll be relevanL Lo Lhe young people of Loday such as 1lnle 1empah and Adele and also sound effecLs lncludlng ulegeLlc sounds of Lhe envlronmenL ln some cuLaways my documenLary wlll sound professlonal and wlll be enLerLalnlng Lo waLch for my LargeL audlence ConLenL and ConvenLlons Camera MovemenL Zoom CuL resenLer CommenLary 1hls vldeo seemed Lo mlss ouL a loL of Lhe general convenLlons lf a magazlne shows such as vox pops LxperL advlce or comedy Lo demonsLraLe a polnL of some sorL When Lalklng ln Lerms of enLerLalnlng Lhls vldeo [usL does noL seem Lo be sLlmulaLlng enough for my LargeL audlence l personally was very bored a few mlnuLes ln l Lhlnk l wlll have Lo lnclude a loL of LralLs of a general magazlne show for my documenLary Lo be enLerLalnlng Lo my LargeL audlence 1exL Analysls uescrlpLlon of 1exL Audlence of 1exL key lnfluences on my ldea 1op|c 1he Amerlcan school sysLem Ang|e WhaLs wrong wlLh Lhe sysLem ? Cp|n|ons MosLly aL Lhe dlfferences beLween Lhe school performance when Laklng lnLo accounL cerLaln facLors such as locaLlon resenters Cne old male presenLer Locat|ons varlous such as school and offlce Interv|ewees LlmlLed only one parenL Iacts Pardly any [usL brlef sLaLemenLs Age 13 43 Gender 8oLh genders Interests LducaLlon Maklng Money 1elevlslon ollLlcs Locat|on Amerlcan suburbs Lthn|c|ty MosLly whlLe and black Soc|oLconom|c Group Almed more aL Lhe 'C2 L' groups who are more lnvolved wlLh educaLlon l felL Lhe archlve fooLage used was very effecLlve and l feel maybe lncludlng some supporLed by modern muslc wlll look very appeallng for my LargeL audlence 8esldes Lhls l felL Lhe vldeo was ouLdaLed and Lherefore maklng a documenLary L a slmllar sLyle would noL be relevanL Lo Lhe LargeL audlence