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MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 4
Tips for Making Outlines
Tips:
Define main topic in title.
Divide the topic into three to five main points.
Break the components into subpoints.
Make each component exclusive
(no overlapping).
Don't put a single item under a major
component.
Use details and evidence to support subpoints.
MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 8
MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 9
Saves reader’s time
DIRECT
DIRECT Sets a proper frame of mind
STRATEGY
STRATEGY Prevents frustration
Appears businesslike
Advantages
Advantages
MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 10
Receiver is receptive
DIRECT
DIRECT Receiver requires no education
STRATEGY
STRATEGY about topic
Message is routine
Useful
Usefulwhen
when
Receiver may be upset or
INDIRECT
INDIRECT hostile
STRATEGY
STRATEGY Receiver must be persuaded or
educated
Message is sensitive
MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 11
Effective Sentences
Complete
Clauses Phrases
Sentences
Complete
Clauses Phrases
Sentences
phrase phrase
In the afternoon, I work at the mall.
Mary Ellen Guffey, Essentials of Business Communication, 8e Chapter 3, Slide 14
Avoid
sentence
fragments.
Fragment
Even though the pay was low. Many candidates
applied.
Revision:
Even though the pay was low, many candidates
applied.
MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 15
MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 16
MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 17
Avoid Avoid run-
sentence on (fused)
fragments. sentences.
Fused Sentences
Two candidates applied only one was hired.
Revisions:
Two candidates applied. Only one was hired.
Two candidates applied; only one was hired.
Two candidates applied, but only one was hired.
MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 18
Avoid
Avoid Avoid run-
comma-
sentence on (fused)
splice
fragments. sentences.
sentences.
Comma Splice
Many were qualified, Jeff was hired.
Revisions:
Many were qualified. Jeff was hired.
Many were qualified; Jeff was hired.
Many were qualified; however, Jeff was hired.
Many were qualified, but Jeff was hired.
MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 19
Revise the following to avoid fragments,
run-on sentences, and comma-splices.
MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 20
Revise the following to avoid fragments,
run-on sentences, and comma-splices.
Although technical skills Although technical skills
are important. are important,
Communication skills communication skills are
are also in great also in great demand.
demand.
College used to be for College used to be for
young people, however young people; however,
many older students many older students now
now seek degrees. seek degrees.
MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 21
Revise the following to avoid fragments,
run-on sentences, and comma-splices.
MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 22
Revise the following to avoid fragments,
run-on sentences, and comma-splices.
MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 23
Emphasis Through
Mechanics
Underlining:
Which of these methods do you prefer?
All Caps:
Notice how EXPENSE-FREE VACATION stands
out.
Mary Ellen Guffey, Essentials of Business Communication, 8e Chapter 3, Slide 24
Emphasis Through
Mechanics
Dashes:
Other methods–including dashes–may be used.
MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 29
Convert the following sentences to active
voice. You may have to add a subject.
All team messages are Team members send all
sent by e-mail. messages by e-mail.
MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 30
Convert the following sentences to active
voice. You may have to add a subject.
We were given our The manager gave us
orders by the manager. our orders.
MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 31
Convert the following sentences to
passive voice.
We must delay Your merchandise
shipment of your shipment must be
merchandise because delayed because of
of heavy demand. heavy demand.
MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 32
Convert the following sentences to
passive voice.
The technician could not The computer program
install the computer could not be installed.
program.
MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 33
Developing Parallelism
Parallel expression uses balanced construction.
Match nouns with nouns, verbs with verbs,
phrases with phrases, and clauses with clauses.
Poor Parallel
Training
Trainingsessions
sessions Training
Trainingsessions
sessions
have
havebeen
beenstimulat-
stimulat- have
havebeen
beenstimulat-
stimulat-
ing
ingand
andaachallenge.
challenge. ing
ingand
andchallenging.
challenging.
(Matches
(Matches-ing
-ingverbals)
verbals)
Poor Parallel
We
Weare
arevery
very We
Weare arevery
very
concerned
concernedwith withthe
the concerned
concernedwithwiththe
the
quality
qualityofofraw
raw quality,
quality,location,
location,and
and
materials,
materials,where
where transportation
transportationcosts
costs
they
theyare
arelocated,
located,and
and ofofraw
rawmaterials.
materials.
how
howmuch
muchititcosts
coststoto
transport
transportthem.
them. (Matches
(Matchesnouns)
nouns)
Poor Parallel
Serena
Serenatakes
takesthe
the Serena
Serenatakes
takesthe
the
telephone
telephoneorders,
orders, telephone
telephoneorders,
orders,
Matt
Mattlocates
locatesthethe Matt
Mattlocates
locatesthethe
items
itemsininthe
theware-
ware- items
itemsininthe
theware-
ware-
house,
house,andandthe
the house,
house,andandYolanda
Yolanda
items
itemsare
aresent
sentby
by sends
sendsthetheitems.
items.
Yolanda.
Yolanda. (Matches
(Matchesactive-voice
active-voiceverbs)
verbs)
MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 37
How could parallelism be improved in
the following sentence?
MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 38
How could parallelism be improved in
the following sentence?
MaryMary
Ellen
Ellen
Guffey,
Guffey,
Essentials
Essentials
ofof
Business
Business Communication, 8e Chapter 1,
Chapter 3, Slide
Slide 39
Composing the First Draft