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■ When you tell a story to a friend by phone, you can include events that
are not essential to the story or go back and fill in any gaps in the
story.
■ When you are talking, keeping your story focused and advancing in a
straight line is not overly important.
■ HOWEVER, when you are writing a narration, You need to give more
careful thought to which events to include, selecting only those that
most clearly demonstrate your main point.
Choosing Major Events
EXAMPLE :
■ Topic: A fight I had with my sister.
■ Topic sentence/thesis: After a horrible fight with my sister, I learned
the value of staying calm.
■ Events: We disagree about who was going to have family party. She
made me so mad that I started yelling at her, and I got nasty. I hung
up on her, and now we are not talking.
Exercise 2
■ When you write a narration, include examples and details that will
make each event more realistic and specific to your reader.
■ If you want your readers to get your point of view, you need to give
them helpful information by adding details that make each event
easier to visualize and understand.
Giving details about the Events
EXAMPLE :
■ Topic: A fight I had with my sister.
■ Topic sentence/thesis: After a horrible fight with my sister, I learned the value of
staying calm.
■ Events: We disagree about who was going to have family party.
Detail: Even though we both work, she said she was too busy and that I would
have to do it.
■ Events: She made me so mad that I started yelling at her, and I got nasty.
Detail: I brought up times in the past when she had tried to pass
responsibilities off on me, and I told her I was sick of being the one who did
everything
■ Events: I hung up on her, and now we are not talking.
Detail: I feel bad, and I know I will have to call her sooner or later because she
is my sister. I do love her, even though she is a pain sometimes.
Exercise 3
■ Topic: A strange or interesting incident that you witnessed.
Topic sentence/Thesis: _______________________________________
Events: ____________________________________________________
Detail: _____________________________________________________
■ More specific: Even in the middle of the night, New York City is alive
with the noises of people at work and at play.
Exercise 5: writing statement of your main impression
■ Topic: A vandalized car
Impressions: battered
Statement: The vandalized car on the side of the highway was battered.
More specific: The shell of a car on the side of the road was dented all over,
apparently from a bat or club, and surrounded by broken glass.