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ENGLISH GCSE

WEEK 8
LESSON 15 & 16
COPY THESE SPELLINGS EXACTLY AS I
HAVE WRITTEN THEM…
1. Disagree
2. Disappear
3. Disconnect in g s
l l
pe the
4. Dishonest s
s
e ith ’
the lt w dis. re
5. Dislike of pe – ‘ a i s
ll t
A re s efx ese tly i d,
a pr th ec oun
6. Disloyal n r
he cor ‘s’ s le ’
W in e op s.
7. What
Disobey e lt th pe ‘ s
are the connotations of sp e to en t for
u oft i
‘dis?’ d e
8. Disown t a k
is
m
SOL FOR THIS HALF TERM
LESSON 15 AIMS:
• Record spellings with the ‘dis’ prefx.
• Identify layout features of a persuasive leaflet.
• Read through a guide and assess the PAFT.
• Complete a 10 mark question on ‘how’ the writer
affects their audience.
Read through and
Annotate the leaflet with post it notes fnd 5 persuasive
techniques.

Which layout
features can you
spot? How do
these help us to
identify the text
as a leaflet?

Discuss as group
WHY DO WE WRITE LEAFLETS/GUIDES?
• The purpose of a Title
________________________________________
leaflet is to catch the ________________________________________
attention of your audience ____________________________
Subtitle
and share your message in ________________________________________
________________________________________
a persuasive manner. ____________________________
Subtitle
• With leaflets, you are able ________________________________________
to present your argument ________________________________________
____________________________
and persuade your Subtitle
• __________________________________
audience to choose your • __________________________________
• __________________________________
company, charity or
organisation. ________________________________________
________________________________
READ THE IF you are unsure,
look back at your
LEAFLET responses for the
Born Free letter and
PROVIDED.
1. What is the purpose of this
the Kaepernick
article.

leaflet?
2. Who is the target audience?
3. What is the tone?
4. How does the writer
persuade the audience that
they should live a healthier
lifestyle?

Complete 6 x P/E/E
paragraphs (1 mark
The writer persuades their [10audience
marks] to live a healthier lifestyle when each)
he says “__________________” This shows (both = 2
________________________________________________. marks)
REFLECTION TASK
• Write 1 or 2 sentences reflecting on how you feel about your
reading response.
• You may write something like:
- I did not manage to complete 6 paragraphs. I want to improve my speed so I
can answer the question fully.
- Next time I want to try the single word analysis extension.
- I am not sure about this, can you help me?
- I think I did OK.
SESSION 2:
• Identify errors in ‘Private Peaceful’ extract –
proofreading activity.
• Discuss and plan writing task.
• Complete writing task
• Complete proofreading before handing work in.
EXTRACT FROM 'PRIVATE PEACEFUL'
By Michael Morpurgo
We we’re lulled by the blue skie’s perhaps, or by sheer boredom. Fritz seemed to
have gone to sleep on us and as far as we were concerned that suited us fne. We
thought we could go to sleep to. The awakening came sudenly. "Gas! Gas!

The cry goes up and is echoed all along the trench. for a moment we are frozen
with panic. We have trained for this time and again but nonetheless we fumble
clumsily feverishly with our gas masks.

"Fix bayonets! Hanleys yelling while were still trying frantically to pull on our gas
masks. We grab our rifles and fx bayonets. We're on the frestep looking out into
no-man's-land, and we see it rolling towards us, this dreaded killer cloud we have
heard so much about but have never seen for ourselves until now. It’s deadly
tendrils are searching ahead, feeling there way forward in long yellow wisps,
scenting me, searching for me. Then fnding me out, the gas turns and drifts
straight for me. I'm shouting inside my gas mask. "Christ! christ!" Still the gas
comes on, through our wire, swallowing everything in its path
EXTRACT FROM 'PRIVATE PEACEFUL'
By Michael Morpurgo
We were lulled by the blue skies perhaps, or by sheer boredom. Fritz seemed to
have gone to sleep on us and as far as we were concerned that suited us fne. We
thought we could go to sleep too. The awakening came suddenly. "Gas! Gas!"

The cry goes up and is echoed all along the trench. For a moment we are frozen
with panic. We have trained for this time and again, but nonetheless we fumble
clumsily, feverishly with our gas masks.

"Fix bayonets!" Hanley's yelling while we're still trying frantically to pull on our gas
masks. We grab our rifles and fx bayonets. We're on the frestep looking out into
no-man's-land, and we see it rolling towards us, this dreaded killer cloud we have
heard so much about but have never seen for ourselves until now. Its deadly
tendrils are searching ahead, feeling their way forward in long yellow wisps,
scenting me, searching for me. Then fnding me out, the gas turns and drifts
straight for me. I'm shouting inside my gas mask. "Christ! Christ!" Still the gas
comes on, through our wire, swallowing everything in its path.
LEAFLET WRITING TASK
Do you want to succeed in your
• Write a leaflet/ guide for GCSEs this year?
Then this is the guide for you!
new GCSE English ____________________________________________
______________________________________
Language learners: Exam details and dates:
____________________________________________
• 400 words ____________________________________________
________________________________
• P – to inform Key terminology:
____________________________________________
____________________________________________
• A – students ________________________________
Do this to succeed!
• F – guide • __________________________________
• __________________________________
• T – enthusiastic, • __________________________________

encouraging, positive. Here are my top tips!


____________________________________________
____________________________________
Exam dates:
as s es: Who knows what
o rd cl t t h ey they are?
W
in wha e
la giv
Exp an d
are
m p les.
exa

ASTEROID
What do Explain and give
you need examples.

Paper 1/Paper 2 to know?


What is the
difference?

Top
ti p
rea s for
Top tips for din
g.
writing.
COMPLETE WRITTEN TASK:
You must reach the 400 word limit.
You must proofread your work before handing it in:
• Capital letters – Bob, SDC
• Apostrophes for contraction (it’s) and possession (Vikki’s
pen.)
• Question marks for all questions.
• Correct homophones (there/their/they’re)

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