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Relationship of Research and Academic Skills on the Development of Academic Writing in English for Academic
and Professional Purposes among Senior High Students of Buenavista Integrated National High School
A Thesis Proposal
Presented to the Faculty of
Main Campus
In Partial Fulfillment
Major in English
Communication
Attention to details Students’ Academic Writing
Technical skills
Precision
Students’ Academic Skills Complexity
Formality
Information & digital literacy Objectivity
Problem-solving,
Critical thinking
Presented in this chapter are local and foreign literatures and studies that would be of
great help in the pursuit of this undertaking. This helped the researcher to have a better
understanding and a wider perspective on this research.
Related Literature
Swales (2014) found out that from the point of view of classroom use, teachers should abound with useful
exercises for students to gain awareness of stylistic and generic conventions, and to practice various aspects of
academic writing.
However, one problem that arises is that many students with a good intermediate level of English require
more grammatical and lexical back-up of a general nature, and may become frustrated whereas students who
already have a good enough command of the written language often lack the time and patience to work
systematically through different materials. In this sense, it is probably useful for teachers find needed
materials a resource.
The difficulty here, faced students at the rock face of L2 writing, is that students–particularly those from
the “hard” sciences–are often unhappy with uncertainty, and lack the necessary skill and interest to become
ethnographers of their own field. Although it would be ideal for every would-be research scientist to compile
substantial corpora of material from their own discipline, study them thoroughly with the aid of books
like Academic Writing for Graduate Students, and draw on the results when composing their own papers, this
vision is somewhat utopian. Real research students, pressed for time and pushed to the limit linguistically, are
likely to fall back on cutting and pasting from the bibliography, or working in a relationship of informal
apprenticeship with more experienced members of their team.
It remains for writing teachers to make pragmatic decisions as to how much to teach, how prescriptive to
be, and how much to trust to the shaping forces of the real discourse communities which their students aspire
to enter.
Meanwhile, Baleghizadeh (2013) investigates the effect of providing corrective feedback on L2 writing and
found out to have often produced contradictory results.
The study, following a line of research concerned with the role of corrective feedback in
writing, contributes to this line of research by analyzing different feedback types in an EFL
academic writing context. 45 graduate university students enrolled in an academic writing
course were provided with different types of feedback (direct feedback; student-teacher
conference; no corrective feedback) over a course of 12 weeks (24 sessions).
The study found significant immediate and delayed effects for the student-teacher
conference type of feedback on students’ overall accuracy improvement. It is suggested that
improvements in writing accuracy could at least in one respect be attributed to the type of
feedback provided.
In addition, Schmidt (2000) proposes the noticing hypothesis to emphasize that only items
in linguistic input that are attended to by language learners are likely to be acquired.
She also investigated specific discourse and sentence-level writing skills of highly advanced
non-native speaker students. She indicated that even in the case of advanced and highly
literate non-native speakers, exposure to substantial amounts of reading and experience with
writing in academic contexts does not ensure their becoming aware of discourse and sentence-
level linguistic features of academic writing and the attainment of the necessary writing skills.
Thus, it was concluded that explicit instruction in advanced academic writing and text is
needed to attain writing accuracy.
She believed that formal classroom teaching with its emphasis on writing accuracy will
engage the learner in planned discourse and develop the corresponding type of competence.
Street (2016) addressed the issue of student writing in higher education. It draws on the findings of
an Economic and Social Research Council funded project which examined the contrasting expectations
and interpretations of academic staff and students regarding undergraduate students' written
assignments. It is suggested that the implicit models that have generally been used to understand
student writing do not adequately take account of the importance of issues of identity and the
institutional relationships of power and authority that surround, and are embedded within, diverse
student writing practices across the university.
A contrasting and therefore complementary perspective is used to present debates about ‘good˚s
and ‘poor˚s student writing. The study outlines an ‘academic literacies˚s framework which can take
account of the conflicting and contested nature of writing practices, and may therefore be more
valuable for understanding student writing in today's higher education than traditional models and
approaches.
In addition, Turner J. (2015), in her paper, focused on the 'problem' of student writing in higher
education. She set out to explore this problem from two perspectives: first, from the perspective of
'non-traditional' student-writers as they attempt to engage in academic writing and, second, from the
perspective of a cultural-historical tradition of scientific rationality. A common frame of reference for
these perspectives we see as a 'discourse of transparency', whereby language is treated as ideally
transparent and autonomous.
She also illustrated how this discourse of transparency is currently enacted and historically situated.
She then argued that current academic practices need to be located within a broader historical and
epistemological framework both in order to reach a deeper understanding about what's involved in
student writing and in order to inform meaningful pedagogies.
Wingate U. (2014) review of two dominant approaches to academic writing instruction in higher education, English
for Academic Purposes (EAP), which is used internationally, and Academic Literacies, which has become an influential
model in the UK.
The study was driven by a concern that Academic Literacies has been mainly focused on the situations of ‘non-
traditional’ students, and has not sufficiently acknowledged the theoretical and pedagogical potential of EAP for
developing a mainstream instructional model. Another concern was that EAP is too focused on the needs of non-native
speakers of English and has, therefore, failed to make an impact on mainstream writing instruction. The aim of this article
is to critically examine both approaches and to identify shared principles that can be used for developing relevant writing
support programmes for students from all backgrounds at UK universities and elsewhere.
Fernsten L. (2013) shares strategies that educators can use to assist students in meeting the challenges of academic
writing more effectively. In order to foreground an understanding of struggling writers, the text begins with a brief review
of composition theory and history related to basic writers and identity. It goes on to examine classroom practices that help
challenge negative writer identity, especially in relation to formal academic discourses.
The author contend that writer self-awareness provides students with a better understanding of the writing process,
additional tools with which to attempt writing assignments, and greater confidence to move through the multiple literacy
tasks of the academy and beyond. By inviting students to examine their beliefs about writing and writer identity, these
activities are useful in any classroom, across disciplines, in which high-stakes writing is used.
Pearson C. (2014) found out that the writing requirements and problems of doctoral students have not been
targeted in writing survey research, in spite of the importance of writing in the lives of these students. The present survey
asked graduate faculty at one university to provide specific information about the writing they require of first-year
doctoral students, the criteria they use to evaluate students' writing, and the writing problems of native- and non-native-
English-speaking (NS and NNS, respectively) students. The 85 questionnaires returned represented 28 departments and
were almost equally divided between humanities/social science and science/technology fields. The survey results raise
pedagogical issues concerning global versus local writing problems, the role of vocabulary instruction, the need for
discipline-specific writing instruction, and the timing of ESL support service writing classes for graduate students.
Furthermore, Elander (2017) found out that assessment criteria are increasingly incorporated into teaching, making it
important to clarify the pedagogic status of the qualities to which they refer. We reviewed theory and evidence about the
extent to which four core criteria for student writing—critical thinking, use of language, structuring, and argument—refer
to the outcomes of three types of learning: generic skills learning, a deep approach to learning, and complex learning.
The analysis showed that all four of the core criteria describe to some extent properties of text resulting from using
skills, but none qualify fully as descriptions of the outcomes of applying generic skills. Most also describe certain aspects
of the outcomes of taking a deep approach to learning. Critical thinking and argument correspond most closely to the
outcomes of complex learning. At lower levels of performance, use of language and structuring describe the outcomes of
applying transferable skills. At higher levels of performance, they describe the outcomes of taking a deep approach to
learning. We propose that the type of learning required to meet the core criteria is most usefully and accurately
conceptualized as the learning of complex skills, and that this provides a conceptual framework for maximizing the
benefits of using assessment criteria as part of teaching.
Topping (2015) made a study on reciprocal paired qualitative formative peer assessment of academic writing was
undertaken by 12 postgraduate students of educational psychology.
Overall, staff and peer assessments showed a very similar balance between positive and negative statements, but this
varied according to assessment criterion.
However, only half of all detailed formative assessment statements made showed some degree of correspondence
between staff and peers
Nevertheless, there was very little evidence of conflict between the views of staff and peers-rather, they focused on
different details. Subjective feedback from students indicated that most found the process time consuming, intellectually
challenging and socially uncomfortable, but effective in improving the quality of their own subsequent written work and
developing other transferable skills. The reliability and validity of this type of peer assessment thus appeared adequate,
and the partiality of overlap in detail between staff and peer assessments suggested that the triangulation peer
assessment offers is likely to add value. However, caution is indicated regarding the generalization of this finding.
Implications for action are outlined.
Bacha N. (2014) found out that L2 writers are known to face problems in developing their writing skills at the university
level. These problems are even more accentuated with L1 Arabic non-native speakers of English in required English composition
courses.
Some research has shown that with low motivation levels the process can further be a very difficult and unrewarding one
for both the learner and the teacher. However, students need to develop their writing skills in order to cope with their university
coursework in the medium of English.
This necessitates the search for learning tasks that meet student needs in a wider educational context. This paper outlines
some of the writing theories proposed by researchers that have contributed to current L2 teaching/learning classroom
methodologies.
Drawing upon the insights gained from these theories, one EFL freshman composition classroom learning experience in doing
practical research with L1 Arabic non-native speakers of English is described. Results indicated that the experience was not only
a very highly motivating basis for developing students' writing skills but also a valuable one for students in acquiring necessary
academic research know-how. Implications are made for the teaching/learning of writing and programme development in light of
the post-war educational reform in Lebanon
A study conducted by Al Hasaan L. (2015) revealed that to date, experts in the field of second language acquisition (SLA)
have paid extensive attention to the vital role formulaic sequences can play in augmenting second language (L2) learners'
academic writing skills. However, empirical testing of such a role is rarely attempted in research. This quantitative research
study is an attempt to investigate the effects of focused instruction of formulaic sequences on twelve L2 learners' academic
writing skills. The study results suggest that an explicit instructional approach to formulaic sequences can enhance their
subsequent acquisition and promote L2 learners' tendency to integrate this language phenomenon in their writing. Moreover,
formulaic sequences may increase L2 learners' writing proficiency because they function as frames to which L2 learners might
resort when approaching a writing task to compose an academic piece of writing.
Meanwhile, Stokking K. (2015) conducted a study onTeachers' assessment of students' research skills. The study found out
that teachers nowadays are expected to develop complex skills, such as research skills, in their students while implementing new
views on learning and teaching and using authentic assessment strategies.
About these new assessment strategies there is much debate and teachers are vulnerable in using
them. She studied upper secondary education natural and social science teachers' practices using two
surveys and two rounds of expert panel judgement on teacher‐submitted assessment‐related material
and information.
The study showed that there are grounds for concern regarding the clarity of teachers' assessment
criteria, the consistency between teachers' goals, assignments, and criteria, and the validity and
acceptability of teachers' assessment practices. The extent to which it is justifiable to judge teachers'
assessment practice by professional quality criteria is discussed, and suggestions are given as to the
main quality criteria for formative and summative assessment and as to ways in which teachers could
improve their assessment practices.
Cox M. and Andriot A. (2013) studied on the student Self-Evaluations Compared to Faculty
Mentors and found out at the end of the research program, students were most confident in their
abilities to relate well to people of different races, cultures, or backgrounds, and they were least
confident in their abilities to write an article for scholarly publication.
Interestingly, even though this was the area in which the students were least confident, their
faculty advisors were even less confident in their students‘ abilities. Overall, the faculty mentors‘
ratings of students‘ abilities differed significantly from the student ratings on seven tasks: (1)
observing and collecting data, (2) listening effectively, (3) interpreting data, (4) framing a research
question, (5) relating results to the “bigger picture,” (6) designing an experiment or theoretical test
of a hypothesis, and (7) writing a scholarly article for publication. In each of the instances, the faculty
rated the students lower than the students rated themselves.
The current study notes seven measures with significant differences in student and faculty ratings of student’s
abilities.
Within both studies, faculty reported students‘ inabilities to connect to the “bigger picture” of research.
In addition, in terms of student self-Evaluations compared to graduate student mentors, when comparing the
student evaluations of themselves at the end of the program to those of the graduate student mentors, a slightly
different outcome appears. This time, only one item, “I am confident in my/the student‘s ability to relate results to
the ’bigger picture‘ in my research area” is significantly different. As with the comparison to faculty mentors, students
rate their own abilities higher than do their graduate student mentors. However, it would be misleading to compare the
two tables based on number of significant effects. Since there were fewer graduate student mentors in the study, the
power needed to arrive at a statistically significant difference is higher.
However, students rated themselves equally or lower on relating well to people of different races, cultures, or
backgrounds; observing and collecting data; working effectively with others on a team; and understanding the ethical
implications of their research. C. Mentor-Student Interactions and Quality of Mentoring Relationships To further explore
some of the reasons the student self-ratings would differ from faculty ratings, we examined how these ratings differed
under four circumstances: (1) the quality of the mentoring relationship, (2) the amount of faculty mentor and student
time spent together, (3) the frequency with which the student asked his/her faculty mentor for help, and (4) the
amount of control the faculty mentor had over student projects. Since each of these questions was asked of the
students, they are measures of student perception of each relationship characteristic.
First, student’s ‘self-reported evaluations and faculty‘s ratings of their students research skills were compared to
the students’‘ ratings about the overall quality of their relationships with their faculty mentors. Mentoring quality was
rated on a four-point Likert scale where 1=poor, 2=decent, 3=good, and 4=very good.
Trends show that there is a larger difference in student and faculty mentor ratings when the
relationship quality is high. In such relationships, students rate their own abilities as lower than
those students who report low quality relationships with their faculty mentors. However, the
opposite effect occurs for the mentors: they are more likely to rate their student as high in the
high quality relationships.
Second, students were asked how much time they spent with their faculty mentor. Again,
evaluation of the student was broken down according to those who spent more and less time with
their mentors. There was a greater discrepancy between the student self-ratings and faculty
ratings in those instances in which the student and mentor had little contact. The biggest reason
for this difference is that faculty rated their students much lower when they had not seen the
students often. Interestingly, students who did not meet often with their mentors also rated their
research abilities lower, although the difference was not as great. This finding indicates that
faculty mentors are no seeking out their students when they think that the student is not doing
well; that impetus they put on the student.
Third, the researchers noted differences between students who asked their faculty mentors
for help versus those who did not. Although there is almost no difference in faculty versus student
ratings for those who ask their mentors for help often, there is a difference for those who rarely
go to their mentors for help.
In the latter case, students rate themselves much higher than do their faculty mentors. This
indicates that those students who do not go to their faculty for help are operating under false
assumptions that they are making satisfactory progress as researchers. Based on the previous
finding regarding time spent together, we can also gather that those faculty mentors are not
doing anything to challenge these students’ false levels of confidence. Finally, we examined
whether there were any differences in ratings based on how much control over the students the
faculty mentor had.
For this paper, faculty control refers to the extent to which students were able to develop
their other research projects and decide what research they would conduct during the summer.
Interestingly, the faculty rated lowest those students they controlled the least. Although
students in low-control mentoring relationships also rated themselves lower, the difference was
not as large. This provides further evidence that faculty are spending the most time mentoring
those students they rate as higher on measures of research skill and competence.
Those students who need the most mentoring are not getting faculty attention, partially
because those same students do not feel they need the help from their faculty mentors.
In addition to research skills, positive student outcomes of undergraduate research
experiences (UREs) have been well documented, however, many studies have neglected the
logical relationship among outcomes, the processes through which they are achieved, and the
contextual and participant factors at play in UREs. This study uses structural equation modeling
to explore these issues in a URE program. The study tested a hypothesized model of the
mediating effect of participant research self‐efficacy on the relationship between their
research skills and desire to persist in science. Results indicate that research skills and research
self‐efficacy predict student aspirations for research careers, and that the effects of research
skills are partially mediated through self‐efficacy beliefs.
Chapter 3
RESEARCH METHODOLOGY
This chapter presents the research design, subjects of the study, research instrument, research
procedure and statistical treatment to gather data and information relevant to find out the relationship of
research and academic skills in academic writing in EAPP among selected senior high students of
Buenavista Integrated National High School.
Research Design
The researcher will make use of the descriptive survey research method. This method refers to the
collection of data from members of the population in which direct contact is made by means of survey
questionnaires and checklist.
The descriptive method is preferred since it yields valid and reliable results for a manageable number
of respondents and can be accomplished with limited resources.
A survey instrument will be used to obtain data from the randomly selected respondents.
The process of descriptive survey research went beyond mere gathering and tabulation of data.
It involves an element of interpretation of the meaning or significance of what is being described.
Since the investigation will be concerned on the relationship pf research and academic skills in
the development of academic writing in EAPP among senior high students of Buenavista Integrated
National High School, the descriptive method of research was the most appropriate method to use.
Respondents of the Study
The study will involve one hundred (100) randomly selected senior high students from
Buenavista Integrated National High School in the school year 2018-2019.
Sampling Technique
According to Ariola et.al. (2006) when it is not possible to study the entire population, a smaller
sample was taken using a random sampling technique. Randomly selected senior high school
students will be used as respondents of the study.
Research Instrument
The instrument that will be used in the study will be a survey questionnaire-checklist.
The questionnaire is a research-made instrument devised to determine the relationship of
research and academic skills in the development of academic writing in EAPP among senior high
students of Buenavista Integrated National High School, the descriptive method of research was
the most appropriate method to use.
In the questionnaire, a five point rating scale indicated below will be used to determine
relationship of independent and dependent variables included in the conduct of this research.
Scale Numerical Value Descriptive Value
5 4.20 – 5.0 To a very great extent
4 3.40 – 4.19 To a great extent
3 2.60 – 3.39 Moderate extent
2 1.80 – 2.59 Low extent
1 1 – 1.79 To very low extent
In the construction of questionnaire described above, an extensive review of various books,
publications and internet sites will be used. An initial draft of the research tool will be prepared and
presented to professors and panel members for comments and suggestions. Validation will be used to
assess the representation of the items with those of others dealing with same area of investigation. The
assistance of the adviser relevant to the contents of the questionnaire will be solicited.
The final form of the questionnaire will be reproduced and administered to respective respondents.
Research Procedure
The researcher will seek permission from the Schools Division Superintendent, District Supervisor
and Principal of Buenavista Integrated National High School.
Upon approval, a meeting will be set to meet the respondents before the actual administration of
the questionnaire in order to orient them relative to the purpose of the study. The respondents will be
oriented on how to accomplish the entire set of questionnaire.
The distribution and retrieval of questionnaire will be administered personally by the researcher in
order to follow-up vague responses made by the respondent for consistency check. The researcher will
explain fully the direction as well as the purpose of the study before allowing the respondents to answer
the questionnaire.
Later, the data will be gathered, given appropriate statistical treatment, which will be analyzed
and interpreted.
Statistical Treatment
The responses will be tabulated as basis for statistical treatment of the data. This will be
done in order to determine the significant relationship of research and academic skills in the
development of academic writing in EAPP among selected senior high students of Buenavista
Integrated National High School, the descriptive method of research was the most appropriate
method to use.
In order to analyze and interpret the data gathered, the following statistical tools will be
utilized in the study.
Percentage, weighted mean, standard deviation and t-test will be used to determine the
significant relationship pf research and academic skills in the development of academic writing
in EAPP among senior high students of Buenavista Integrated National High School, the
descriptive method of research was the most appropriate method to use.
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