GOOD MORNING

What does it look

like?
a) Long pink blonde hair
b) round face
c) not interesting
a) Curly hair
b) slanted eyes
c) white jacket
a) white lips
b) white eyebrows
c) black dress
a) cheap
b) modern
c) small
a) Crowded
b) Hot
c) interesting
a) Clean
b) Expensive
c) crowded
a) Dirty
b) Beautiful
c) cool
a) Small
b) Beautiful
c) red
a) Old
b) New
c) ancient
a) Pink ball
b) interesting game
c) large battle field
Learning objective
You will be able to describe person, place, and thing in written way structurally,
using correct grammar, and punctuation.

-> So someone who read your writing can imagine the person, place, and thing you
are refering to.
Let’s make a
group of 4!
Analyse the text structure and
language feature of the text below!
Identification

I have a favorite motorcycle. My father bought it for

me when I was in senior high school. This is the only
motorcycle that i have right now, but even if one day I
buy another one, this one will always be my favorite,
because there are so many things happened with me and
this motorcycle. For me, it is irreplaceable.
 Description

The type of my favorite motorcycle is underbones. If you are

familiar with various types of motorcycles, then I believe you can
imagine what my motorcycle looks like. The dominant color of my
motorcycle is red. It has spoke wheels type of rim and standard
tire. The original rearview mirror was broken and I replace it with
a smaller one. Last year I replaced the original shock
absorber with the new one. The color of the new shock
absorber is black. A very distinctive part of my motorcycle is the
seat. It is because I modified it a little bit from the original shape.
The seat of my motorcycle is so long so it can accommodate two
person. I decided to add some foam rubber on it, start from the
middle part of the seat up to the back part. It makes the back
part of the seat to be higher than the front part and cause a
border which separated the driver's seat and the passenger's seat.
Put your analysis in here!
Tenses Noun Pronoun Relational Adjective
proses (to
be/ have/
has)
Noun Phrase
Deter- Adjective Noun
miner
Opi-nion Size / Age Color Origin Mate-rial Pur-pose
shape

a,an Friendly young Korean Lady

the/this Confi- Man
dent

One/ Expensiv Big small New Black Italian Leather Travelling bag
two/ e
three Cheap

My/ your Inte- Large old Chinese Building

resting
Mapping

color
Historical
point

Favorite
motorcycle
The type of
The seat motorcycle

Modifications

The shock
absorber
 Choose one of the pictures to be
described and put your idea on the map!
Borobudur
Temple

Favorite
football player

Gedung Sate

Favorite bag
Put here !
Write your text
here, try to use
connectors!
Let’s try to
correct it!
Writing Assessment!

Instruction:
- Everybody will get a question sheet.
- Use 2b pencil to write!
- Put your name and class on the right corner.
- You will finish the test in 30 minutes.
- Points to be assessed are: content, structure, grammar, and technical things
(punctuation, capital letter)
 Part1
Jakarta City
 Jakarta is the capital city of Indonesia. It is
centrally 1)_______ within the country on the
northwest coast of Java 2)________ at the mouth
of the Ciliwung river. Jakarta dominates
Indonesian’s administrative, economy, cultural
activities, and is a major commercial and
transportation hub within Asia-with a population of
about 9 million, Jakarta has more 3)_______ than
any other cities in Indonesia.
 The climate is 4)________and humid year-round.
Rainfall occurs throughout the year, although it is
the heaviest from November to May. To average
annual precipitation in Jakarta is 1, 790 mm. The
city 5)_____ on a flat, low plain and is prone to
flooding during periods of heavy rainfall. Kota tua
is city’s 6)_________commercial area. It is located
south of the old Sunda Kelapa 7)_________.
Glodok, the south of Kota is a banking, retail and
residential neighborhood with a 8)______ Chinese
population. Merdeka Square with Monas (The
National Monument) dominates the city’s central
district. Surrounding the square 9)_____ Istana
Merdeka, the presidential palace, the National
Museum, 10) ____ the Istiqlal Mosque.
Jakarta City
 Jakarta is the capital city of Indonesia. It is
located within the country on the
centrally 1)_______
island at the
northwest coast of Java 2)________
mouth of the Ciliwung river. Jakarta dominates
Indonesian’s administrative, economy, cultural
activities, and is a major commercial and
transportation hub within Asia-with a
population of about 9 million, Jakarta has more
people than any other cities in Indonesia.
3) _______
 hot
The climate is 4)______and humid year-round.
Rainfall occurs throughout the year, although it is
the heaviest from November to May. To average
annual precipitation in Jakarta is 1, 790 mm. The
lies on a flat, low plain and is prone to
city 5)_____
flooding during periods of heavy rainfall. Kota tua is
oldest commercial area. It is located
city’s 6) ________
harbour Glodok,
south of the old Sunda Kelapa 7)_________.
the south of Kota is a banking, retail and residential
large Chinese population.
neighborhood with a 8)______
Merdeka Square with Monas (The National
Monument) dominates the city’s central district.
are Istana Merdeka, the
Surrounding the square 9)_____
and
presidential palace, the National Museum, 10) ____
the Istiqlal Mosque.
Develop a sentence
below into a paragraph
of descriptive!

I have a new laptop. ...