PAPER 2

SECTION C:
15%
Mark as a whole.
Marks fall into 4

bands:

SCORES FOR PAPER 2.

Band A- 13%-15%
Band B-9%-12%
Band C-5%-8%
Band D- 1%-4%
0% for a blank page.

WHERE ARE YOU?

Paper 1
(40)
Paper 2
Sec. A
Paper 2,
Sec. B
Paper 2,
Sec. C

Excellent Border
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DOS AND DONTS

FOR NOTE
EXPANSION
Copy the notes correctly
with punctuation(1% - 2%)
Penalise some marks if
the information of the
rubric is omitted.

 Direct transfer without

any correct punctuation.
Get 0% or 1%.
Copy words with some
chunks (1, 2,3 %).
A nearly complete
sentence. ( 4%)

 1 complete sentence is
awarded-5%.
Use all the words in order.
Avoid changing tenses.
Avoid memorizing.
Avoid squeezing the
words.

 SECTION C
Note Expansion:
1. Read and follow
instruction(s) given.
2. Study the pictures and
words given.
3. Introduce your subject as
the beginning.- Lily, Mr
Tan

4.Give an introduction. Use

adjectives
-Lily is a kind and caring
boy.
5.Use the correct form of
tenses
given.

-6. Add ideas by using your own words

-verbs, nouns, adjective, adverbs,
similes..
-They were as busy as bees
7Use simple and compound sentences.
He blew out the candles and cut the cake into
pieces.
8.Those who are excellent should use complex
sentences.
Lily, who is a helpful and loving girl, loves her
grandfather very much.

9. Use interesting expressions such as

simile , proverbs and idioms.
eg: It was a red-letter day for her
grandparents.
10.Have an ending to your writing
eg: They really had a memorable
time together.

8.Those who are excellent should use

complex sentences.
Lily, who is a helpful and caring girl, loves
her grandfather very much.
-9. Use interesting expressions such as
similes ,proverb and idioms.
It was a red-letter day for her grandfather.
10.Have an ending to your writing.
Everyone had a memorable time together.

How to write creatively?

To get band A, pupils must be able to

write a variety of sentences

1. Simple sentences
2. Compound sentences
3. Complex sentences ( How)

Samples of Note Expansion

helped mother prepareLinking

Subject
Verb
Complement
celebrate
words
Lily
Last Sunday

is

a helpful and loving girl.

was

her grandfathers
seventy-fifth birthday.

Early in the
morning,

Lily and her

brother

helped

their mother to
prepare some food in
the kitchen

because

they

wanted

to celebrate their

arranged food table garden

Linking word

Subject

Verb

Complement

They

were

as busy as bees.

They

baked

a big fruit cake

and

cooked

their
grandfathers
favourite dishes.

arranged

the tasty food

neatly on a table
under a shady

they

sang blew candles cut

Linking word
Subject
Verb
Complement
enjoyed
After
that,
her parents
took
their grandfather
to the garden.

Then

They

sang

he

blew out

and
Everyone

a birthday song to
him . He was on
cloud nine.
the candles .

cut

the cake into

pieces.

enjoyed

the delicious food.

Ending
Linki Subjec Verb
ng
t
word
was
It
Everyon had
e

Complement

a red- letter day

for Lilys
grandfather.
a memorable
time together.

Sample
Answers A

1. A. He helped mother
prepare celebrate cake.
B. He arranged the food
in table the garden.
C. They sang blew
candles cut enjoyed very
much.

Score : 2/15

2) A. Last Sunday, my
sister and I
helped my
mother prepare
the celebrate.
B. My sister and I
arranged some
food on the table.

C. My family and I
song and blew. We
candles cut the
cake is very enjoyed.
Score : 5/15

3) A. Last Sunday,
brother and I
helped our
mother prepare
some food. She
say she prepare the
foods for celebrate.
birthday with

B. In the evening, we
have prepare all the
food. Then, we
arrange the food on
a table and put it at
garden.
C. When grandfather
came back home,

Birthday to him. After that,

he blew the candles and
cut the cake. The we
enjoyed it.

Score : 7/15

4) A. John is my friend.
Last Sunday, was his
grandfather birthday.
John and his sister
helped their
mother to prepare
foods. Their
mother was

They wanted to give a

surprise to their
grandfather.

B. After that, John and

his sister arranged the
food on a table.They
celebrated their

Johns mother fried

his son and father
favourite chickens. His
sister also bake some
tasty cookies.
C.At 7p.m., his
grandfather come
back from his friends

he was very happy.

John and his family
sang a birthday song
to his grandfather.
Their grandfather blow
the candle on the
cake. His
grandfather cut the

In the end, they

enjoyed the foods
happily.
Score : 9/15

5) A. Last Sunday, was

Kelvins
grandfathers
birthday. He and
his sister helped
their mother to
prepare cake and
some foods. They

grandfathers
birthday at the
garden.
B. Kelvins father
and his sister
arranged the food
on the table in their
garden very neatly.

drinks for her

family members.
C. His grandfather
also stood in front
of the cake. They
song birthday song.
His grandfather also
blew the candles.

into some pieces.

They ate the cake,
happily. Kelvin and
his family enjoyed on
that day.
Score : 12/15

6) A. Lily and her family

are my neighbours.
They are very kind.
Last week, it was her
th
grandfathers 80
birthday. Lily and
her family decided to
celebrate it grandly.

On that day, Lily and

her helpful brother
helped their mother
to prepare for the
celebration. They
baked a big cake
and made special
cookies. They were

6) B. After two hours,

Lily and her father
arranged the tasty
food and drinks on
a table. They put
the table under a
shady tree in the
garden. Lily also

and hand-made
cards on the table.
Soon, everything
was in order. The
party was very
special.

6) C. Without
hesitation, Lilys
parents took their
father to the
garden. He was on
cloud nine. After
they sang the
Happy Birthday

immediately cut the

birthday cake equally.
Lily and her family
had a wonderful time
taking pictures and
laughing together.
Everyone was as
happy as a lark. It

red-letter day for

Lilys grandfather.
Everyone had a
memorable time
together.
Score : 15/15

Thank You
Good Luck