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AFTERSCHO☺OL
– DEVELOPING CHANGE MAKERS
CENTRE FOR SOCIAL ENTREPRENEURSHIP
PGPSE PROGRAMME –
World’ Most Comprehensive programme in social
entrepreneurship & spiritual entrepreneurship
OPEN FOR ALL FREE FOR ALL
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Dr. T.K. Jain.
AFTERSCHO☺OL
Centre for social entrepreneurship
Bikaner M: 9414430763
tkjainbkn@yahoo.co.in
www.afterschool.tk, www.afterschoool.tk
 I have not hear from my daughter
for long
• I have not heard from my daughter since
long
 I don’t care for a straw equal to
him.
• I don’t care a straw for him.
 Ajay was fortunately not hurt in
accident with the car.
• Fortunately, Ajay was not hurt in the
accident with the car.
Ajay is very wisdom man certainly.
• Certainly, Ajay is very wise man.
Story of Pawan is much amusing.
• The Story of Pawan is very amusing.
• Or
• Pawan’s Story is very amusing.
He is very fatty and he cannot walk
fastly.
• He is too fat to walk fast.
• Or
• He is so fat that he can’t walk fast.
 None except the brave becomes
entrepreneur
• None but the brave become
entrepreneurs.
I told him on his face that he cannot
became entrepreneur
• I told him on his face that he could not
become an entrepreneur
Ram married with an entrepreneur
girl
• Ram married an entrepreneurial girl
 Police is not allowed to enter into
this holy temple.
• Police are not allowed to enter this holy
temple.
This is same shirt which I purchase
yesterday
• This is the same shirt which I purchased
yesterday
 A horse cannot run with a broken
leg.
• A horse, with a broken leg, cannot run.
 He carefully does his work.
• He does his work carefully. (when the
adverb is affecting the entire sentence, it
should come in the beginning or in the
end).
 The old man lived miserly.
• The old man lived in a miserly way.
Prabhakar looks very better today.
• Prabhakar looks much better today.
 Jitendra scarecely go to films, but
whenever he go, he is caught.
• Jitendra rarely goes to films, but whenever
he goes, he is caught.
 Of course, you will succeeded in
your CS examination.
• You will certainly succeed in your CS
examination.
 He is named as Ram.
• He is named Ram.
 Manmohan Singh is respected
greatly.
• Manmohan Singh is greatly respected.
• (put such adverbs before the verbs)
 Can Ankit part from his book for 1
day?
• Can Ankit part with his book for 1 day?
 Vedas are in existance since time
immemorial
• The Vedas are in existence from time
immemorial
The patient is comparatively better
today.
• The patient is comparatively well today.
Swati is only free in the morning
• Swati is free only in the morning
 Ajay seldom or ever lies
• Ajay seldom or never lies
Gold of South Africa is exported to
many countries
• The Gold of South Africa is exported to
many countries
 The honesty is best policy
• Honesty is the best policy
 Udaipur is Paris of India.
• Udaipur is the Paris of India.
USA is richest country of the world
• The USA is the richest country of the
world
 What are the last news ?
• What is the latest news?
 Ganga is holy river
• The Ganga is a holy river
 Panjab is land of 5 rivers.
• The Panjab is land of 3 rivers (two rivers
are now part of Pakistan).
 He is a European, but his wife is a
Indian.
• He is an European, but his wife is an
Indian.
 Wheat of Punjab is sent to other
states of India
• The wheat of Punjab is sent to other
states of India
 Higher we go, cooler it is
• The higher we go, the cooler it is
 You should not hurry, there are
plenty of times.
• You need not hurry, there is plenty of time.
 Can I take your car?
• May I borrow your car?
 One must serve his country
• One ought to serve one’s country
 Should you care for a glass cold
drink.
• Would you care for a glass of cold drink.
 He ran so fast so that he could
catch the train
• He ran fast so that he might catch the train
 I am knowing him
• I know him
 He get up early in morning
• He gets up early in the morning
 He quitted this place last year.
• He quit this place last year.
 He know his faults
• He knows his faults
 The man is a mortal
• Man is mortal.
 Jaswant Singh is a better writer
than a politician
• Jaswant Singh is a better writer than
politician
Summer of this year is horrible.
• The summer of this year is horrible.
 Cow is a domestic animal
• The Cow is a domestic animal
 I attend the college everyday.
• I attend college everyday.
 I have lost watch that my father
give me.
• I have lost the watch that my father gave
to me
Should we look down on poor?
• Should we look down upon the poor?
 Hindus and Muslims live in best
perfect harmonious in Bikaner for
years.
• The Hindus and the Muslims have been
living in perfect harmony in Bikaner for
years.
 The english is the language of
english.
• English is the language of the English.
 Had you been to Kashmir, I had
also gone there.
• Had you been to Kashmir, I would have
also gone there.
 Ten were killed and one taken
prisoner.
• Ten were killed and one was taken
prisoner.
• (helping verb were cannot be used for one
prisoner).
 The news were broadcasted from
AIR at 5 AM
• The news was broadcast from AIR at 5
AM
 If I am you, I would do it.
• If I were you, I would do it.
 If I shall reach late, I shall be
punished.
• If I reach late, I shall be punished. (don’t
use will / shall with if).
 Did you wrote that letter?
• Did you write that letter?
 Cattle was grazing
• The Cattle were grazing
 You mistake in thinking that I am
against you.
• You are mistaken in thinking that I am
against you.
 The pick-pocket was arrested and
his pocket search.
• The pick-pocket was arrested and his
pockets were searched.
 Either of two singers are welcome
• Either of the two singers is welcome
Hard work and honesty are needed
for success.
• Hard work and honesty is needed for
success.
 The entire class have failed in the
examination
• The entire class has failed in the
examination
 The child with his parents have
arrived.
• The child with his parents has arrived.
 Many a demonstrators were
arrested
• Many a demonstrators was arrested
 I doest not like this kinds of jokes
• I do not like these kind of jokes
 Goti, not less than I am to blame.
• Goti, not less than I is to blame.
 The wood cutter falled three trees
• The wood cutter felled three trees
 The jury was divided on the issue
• The jury were divided on the issue
 The jury were unanimous on the
issue
• The jury was unanimous on the issue
 Praachi can sing better than me.
• Praachi can sing better than I.
That Man who they thought to be a
gentleman, is a rogue.
• The man whom they thought to be a
gentleman, is a rogue.
 Neither of 3 persons is fit for
PGPSE programme
• None of the 3 persons is fit for PGPSE
programme
This is one of the best suggestions
that has ever been made by you.
• This is one of the best suggestions that
have ever been made by you.
 I who is your teacher, should be
respected
• I who am your teacher, ought to be
respected
 India’s population is far more than
USA
• India’s population is far more than that of
the USA
The police has arrested the theif
• The police have arrested the theif
My uncle’s friend’s son is become a
doctor
• The son of my uncle’s friend is a doctor
• Or
• The son of my uncle’s friend has become
a doctor
 His hat has blow by air
• His hat has been blown off by wind.
 GOOD NIGHT! HOW DO YOU
DO?
• GOOD EVENING ! HOW DO YOU DO?
 MY BROTHER IS IN TEACHING
LINE
• MY BROTHER IS IN TEACHING
PROFESSION
 WAGES OF SIN ARE DEATH
• THE WAGES OF SIN IS DEATH
THE MAGISTRATE HAS PASSED
ORDER FOR RELEASE HIM
• THE MAGISTRATE HAS PASSED
ORDERS FOR HIS RELEASE.
 THERE IS NO SPACE FOR YOU
ON THIS BENCH
• THERE IS NO ROOM FOR YOU ON
THIS BENCH
SUCH PHENOMENA HAS NEVER
BEEN SAW
• SUCH PHENOMENA HAVE NEVER
BEEN SEEN.
WHAT IS YOUR BIRTH DATE?
• WHAT IS THE DATE OF YOUR BIRTH?
 IT IS SURPRISING THAT
GAUTAM DON’T KNOW
ALPHABETS.

• IT IS SURPRISING THAT GAUTAM

DOESN’T KNOW ALPHABET.
YOU CANNOT AVOID TO MAKES
MISTAKES
• YOU CANNOT AVOID MAKING
MISTAKES.
 I ENJOY TO MEET MY OLD
STUDENTS AT AFTERSCHOOOL
• I ENJOY MEETING MY OLD STUDENTS
AT AFTERSCHOOOL
 RISHI DISLIKES TO SING IN
FRONT OF AFTERSCHOOLIANS
• RISHI DISLIKES SINGING IN FRONT OF
AFTERSCHOOLIANS
I DISLIKE YOU TO GO THERE
• I DISLIKE YOUR GOING THERE
AJAY ENTERED INTO THE TRAIN
AT BIKANER AND GOT OF AT
MERTA
• AJAY ENTERED THE TRAIN AT
BIKANER AND GOT OFF AT MERTA
 WORK HARD LEST YOU
SHOULD NOT FAIL IN CS
EXAMINATION – SAID DHAVAL
TO AJAY

• “WORK HARD LEST YOU SHOULD FAIL

IN THE CS EXAMINATION” – SAID
DHAVAL TO AJAY
 GIVE ME ALL YOUR
INFORMATIONS ABOUT GOTI
• GIVE ME ALL YOUR INFORMATION
ABOUT GOTI
I HAVE READ PAWAN’S POETRY,
WHO IS A VERY ROMANTIC
POET

• I HAVE READ POETRY OF PAWAN,

WHO IS A VERY ROMANTIC POET
 I SHALL REACH STATION,
BEFORE THE TRAIN ARRIVES.
• I SHALL HAVE REACHED THE
STATION, BEFORE THE TRAIN
ARRIVES.
 YOU MUST SUBMIT YOUR
APPLY BEFORE TIME
• YOU MUST SUBMIT YOUR
APPLICATION IN TIME
 YOU HAVE NO PROVE OF
AJAY’S INNOCENCE
• YOU HAVE NO PROOF AJAY’S
INNOCENCE
 DON’T ENTER IN THE BRIDE
CHAMBER, THE ROOM WHERE
SHE PREPARES HER
• DON’T ENTER THE BRIDAL CHAMBER,
THE ROOM WHERE SHE PREPARES
HERSELF
 WHILE I ENTERED INTO THE
ROOM, NOISE STOP ABRUPT.
• WHEN I ENTERED THE ROOM, NOISE
STOPPED ABRUPTLY.
 AFTERSCHOOLIANS ARE
LISTENING ATTENTIVE AND
SITTING SMILING

• AFTERSCHOOLIANS ARE LISTENING

ATTENTIVELY AND SITTING WITH A
SMILE.
 LAW AND ORDER HAVE TO BE
FORCED BY POLICE
• LAW AND ORDER HAS TO BE
ENFORCED BY THE POLICE
 KATRINA KAIF TURNED AWAY
PANKAJ’S PROPOSAL
• KATRINA KAIF TURNED DOWN
PANKAJ’S PROPOSAL
 HIS DECISIONS BROUGHT
ABOUT HIS RUINOUS.
• HIS DECISIONS BROUGHT ABOUT HIS
RUIN.
 He came yesterday morning.
• He came last morning.
 He will coming tomorrow evening
• He will be coming next evening
 After hearing him patient, the
principal said him that what really
mattered was how he does his job.

• After listening to him patiently, the

principal told him what really mattered
was how he did his job.
 You are learning english for last 2
years, but you show no
improvement whatsoever.

• You have been learning english for the

last 2 years, but you show no
improvement whatsoever.
 He received order to enforce
discipline on his subordinates.
• He received orders to enforce discipline
among his subordinates.
 The police inspector careful
inspected into the matter and bring
the facts on the surface.
• The police inspector carefully inspected
the matter and brought the facts to the
surface.
 Kareena is neglectful in her duty
but not neglectful in her
appearance.

• Kareena is neglectful of her duty but not of

her appearance.
Ankit has never and will never take
his classes casual.
• Ankit has never taken and will never take
his classes casually.
You are not paid to critisize, all you
need to do is to carry out my order
• You are not paid to critisize, all you need
do is to carry out my orders
The minister visiting were told that
one of those boy’s result was
commendable.

• The visiting minister was told that one of

those boys’ result was commendable.
Make him to understand that if he
do not work hard, he will not given
promotion.

• Make him understand that if he does not

work hard, he would not be given
promotion.
 Dhairya found himself in
competition with men who were as
good if not better then him

• Dhairya found himself in competition with

men who were as good as if not better
than himself.
 I object to war, not because it
drains economy, but that it seems
inhuman.

• I object to war, not because it drains

economy, but because it seems inhuman.
I was unhappy at the thought that I
couldn’t attend Rishi’s marriage
tomorrow.

• I was unhappy at the thought that I

couldn’t attend Rishi’s marriage yesterday.
 She is as proudy that she will not
submit to correction in some
situation.

• She is so proud that she will not submit to

correction in any situation.
 He being dishonest, he is in the
bad book of the CEO.
Being dishonest, he is in the bad book of the
CEO.
The boy in red shirt was the winner
of confluence 2009, held by IIMA.
• The boy in the red shirt was the winner of
the confluence 2009, held at IIMA.
 According to my opinion, you
should work very hard on business
planning exercises, for the sake of
your development.

• In my opinion, you should work very hard

on business planning exercises, for the
sake of your development.
 He turned deaf ear to the advices
of his mentor.
• He turned a deaf ear to the advice of his
mentor.
 Let Mahipal and he solve your
problems, due to they are experts
in this subject.

• Let Mahipal and him solve your problems,

as they are experts in this subject.
The teacher as well as the students
were playing in rock grounds.
• The teacher as well as the students was
playing in rocky ground.
 The king ordered that he
should be hung till death. His
only crime was that he spoken
freely on people right
• The king ordered that he should be
hanged till death. His only crime was that
he spoke freely on people’s right
At last Vipin spoke : “money makes
mare go”
• At last Vipin spoke : “money makes the
mare go”
 Kindly do the needful.
• Kindly do what is necessary
 We are living in the Delhi for 3
years.
• We have been living in Delhi for 3 years.
 Be respect to older members in
your family
• Be respectful to the elder members of your
family.
 His services has been terminated
• His services have been terminated
 I will follows your instruction.
• I will follow your instructions.
 The Kalidas is greater than any
dramatist.
• Kalidas is greater than any OTHER
dramatist.
 The whole India mourned on the
death of YSR Reddy, CM of the
AP.
• The whole of India mourned the death of
YSR Reddy, CM of AP.
 Kota is further from Bikaner then
the Jaipur.
• Kota is farther from Bikaner than Jaipur.
 I does not like this kinds of jokes.
• I do not like these kind of jokes.
The climate of Bikaner is as hot as
Barmer.
• The climate of Bikaner is as hot as that of
Barmer.
Both Rishi & Goutam didn’t spoke.
• Neither Rishi nor Goutam spoke.
Some persons are very coward.
• Some persons are very cowardly.
 Rishi was the most highest scorer
last month in AFTERSCHOOOL’s
performance appraisal system.

• Rishi was the highest scorer last month in

AFTERSCHOOOL’s performance
appraisal system.
He gave a few coins he had to the
beggar.
• He gave the few coins he had to the
beggar.
What is the last news about Ankit?
• What is the latest news about Ankit?
 No other student in
AFTERSCHOOOL is more regular
than swati

• No other student in AFTERSCHOOOL is

as regular as Swati
 Narayana Murthy is the most
industrious and the noblest person
of our time.

• Narayan Murthy is the noblest & most

industrious person of our times.
 Bill Gates is the first entrepreneur
of 21st century.
• Bill Gates is the foremost entrepreneur of
21st century.
 Little knowledge of shoemaking
proved utility to me
• The Little knowledge of shoemaking
proved useful to me
 All afterschooolians have to
prepare not less than 100 case
studies.
• All afterschooolians have to prepare not
fewer than 100 case studies.
This is the most perfect system we
can find ever.
• This is the perfect system we can ever
find.
 Mukesh Ambani is wiser than
honest.
• Mukesh Ambani is more wise than honest.
 Aishwarya Rai Bachhan is both
beautiful as well as intelligent
• Aishwarya Rai Bachhan is both beautiful
and intelligent
• OR
• Aishwarya Rai Bachhan is beautiful as
well as intelligent
 LESS BOOKS ARE NEED FOR
LIBRARY
• FEWER BOOKS ARE NEEDED FOR THE
LIBRARY
 OF MUMBAI, DELHI AND
BIKANER, THE LATEST HAS
THE LARGEST NUMBER OF
POLLUTING AUTORIKSHAS

• OF MUMBAI, DELHI AND BIKANER, THE

LAST HAS THE LARGEST NUMBER OF
POLLUTING AUTORIKSHAS
 RISHI & GAUTAM HELPED ONE
ANOTHER.
• RISHI & GAUTAM HELPED EACH
ANOTHER.
DIVIDE THIS APPLE AMONG ME
AND HIM.
• DIVIDE THIS APPLE BETWEEN HIM
AND ME.
 VASUNDHARA AND YOU HAVE
WASTED HIS TIME.
• YOU AND VASUNDHARA HAVE
WASTED YOUR TIME.
 THIS IS THE PERSON,
WHOSE ALL DAUGHTERS
ARE ENTREPRENEURS

• THIS IS THE PERSON, ALL

DAUGHTERS OF WHOSE ARE
ENTREPRENEURS.
SUCH BOYS WHO SHIRK WORK
HARD SUCCEEDED IN LIFE
• SUCH BOYS AS SHIRK WORK HARDLY
SUCCEED IN LIFE
 ABOUT AFTERSCHO☺OL
Afterschoool conducts three year integrated PGPSE
(after class 12th along with IAS / CA / CS) and 18
month PGPSE (Post Graduate Programme in Social
Entrepreneurship) along with preparation for CS / CFP /
CFA /CMA / FRM. This course is also available online
also. It also conducts workshops on social
entrepreneurship in schools and colleges all over India –
start social entrepreneurship club in your institution
today with the help from afterschoool and help us in
developing society.
 Why such a programme?
• To promote people to take up entrepreneurship
and help develop the society
• To enable people to take up franchising and
other such options to start a business / social
development project
• To enable people to take up social development
as their mission
• To enable people to promote spirituality and
positive thinking in the world
 Who are our supporters?
• Afterschoolians, our past beneficiaries,
entrepreneurs and social entrepreneurs
are supporting us.
• You can also support us – not necessarily
by money – but by being promotor of our
concept and our ideas.
 About AFTERSCHO☺OL PGPSE – the
best programme for developing great
entrepreneurs
• Most flexible, adaptive but rigorous programme
• Available in distance learning mode
• Case study focused- latest cases
• Industry oriented practical curriculum
• Designed to make you entrepreneurs – not just
an employee
• Option to take up part time job – so earn while
you learn
• The only absolutely free course on internet
 Workshops from
AFTERSCHO☺OL
• IIF, Delhi
• CIPS, Jaipur
• ICSI Hyderabad Branch
• Gyan Vihar, Jaipur
• Apex Institute of Management, Jaipur
• Aravali Institute of Management, Jodhpur
• Xavier Institute of Management, Bhubaneshwar
• Pacific Institute, Udaipur
• Engineering College, Hyderabad
 Flexible Specialisations:
• Spiritualising business and society
• Rural development and transformation
• HRD and Education, Social Development
• NGO and voluntary work
• Investment analysis,microfinance and inclusion
• Retail sector, BPO, KPO
• Accounting & Information system (with CA / CS /CMA)
• Hospital management and Health care
• Hospitality sector and culture and heritage
• Other sectors of high growth, high technology and social
relevance
 Salient features:
• The only programme of its kind (in the whole world)
• No publicity and low profile course
• For those who want to achieve success in life – not just a
degree
• Flexible – you may stay for a month and continue the rest of
the education by distance mode. / you may attend weekend
classes
• Scholarships for those from poor economic background
• Latest and constantly changing curriculum – keeping pace
with the time
• Placement for those who are interested
• Admissions open throughout the year
• Latest and most advanced technologies, books and study
material
 Components
• Pedagogy curriculum and approach based on IIM Ahmedabad and ISB
Hyderabad (the founder is alumnus from IIMA & ISB Hyderabad)
• Meditation, spiritualisation, and self development
• EsGotitial softwares for business
• Business plan, Research projects
• Participation in conferences / seminars
• Workshops on leadership, team building etc.
• Written submissions of research projects/articles / papers
• Interview of entrepreneurs, writing biographies of entrepreneurs
• Editing of journals / newsletters
• Consultancy / research projects
• Assignments, communication skill workshops
• Participation in conferences and seminars
• Group discussions, mock interviews, self development diaryng
• Mind Power Training & writing workshop (by Dr. T.K.Jain)
 Pedagogy
• Case analysis,
• Articles from Harvard Business Review
• Quiz, seminars, workshops, games,
• Visits to entrepreneurs and industrial visits
• PreGotitations, Latest audio-visuals
• Group discussions and group projects
• Periodic self assessment
• Mentoring and counselling
• Study exchange programme (with institutions out of
India)
• Rural development / Social welfare projects
 Branches
• AFTERSCHO☺OL will shortly open its
branches in important cities in India
including Delhi, Kota, Mumbai, Gurgaon
and other important cities.
Afterschooolians will be responsible for
managing and developing these branches
– and for promoting social entrepreneurs.
 Case Studies
• We want to write case studies on social
entrepreneurs, first generation
entrepreneurs, ethical entrepreneurs.
Please help us in this process. Help us to
be in touch with entrepreneurs, so that we
may develop entrepreneurs.
Basic values at AFTERSCHO☺OL
• Share to learn more
• Interact to develop yourself
• Fear is your worst enemy
• Make mistakes to learn
• Study & discuss in a group
• Criticism is the healthy route to mutual support
and help
• Ask fundamental questions : why, when, how &
where?
• Embrace change – and compete with yourself
only
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