The Introduction Paragraph

Mrs. Snipes Troy High School English Department

The introduction paragraph in an essay of literary analysis functions as follows:

It focuses the readers attention on the topic

and arouses curiosity for the reader about what you, as the writer, have to say. It specifies your subject and implies your attitude and tone. It provides background necessary to understand the thesis statement. It is concise and sincere. It comes to a point with the thesis statement.

Structure of the Introduction Paragraph:

1st sentence: hook or opening sentence

2nd 3rd sentence: transitions from hook

while including T.A.G. (complete title, authors complete name, and genre of the work(s) being analyzed) 3rd 5th sentence: further logical transitions Thesis Statement: final sentence(s) of the introductions

Strategies for Composing Hooks or Opening Statements:

Use a vivid or powerful quotation that has

relevance to your topic. Create an analogy for your subject. Offer an interesting fact or statistic. State an opinion related to your thesis. Define a concept central to your argument.

What to Avoid When Composing Hooks or Opening Statements:

Clich statements: Websters dictionary defines

friendship as First person point of view: In this essay I will show Asking rhetorical questions: Have you ever wondered what would happen (Also avoid addressing the reader) Vague or abstract language Broad generalizations: Symbolism is a powerful tool used in literature Any attempt at humor, cleverness, or sarcasm

Consider the following checklist when composing an introduction paragraph:

The hook/opening sentence engages the readers curiosity while remaining academic and sophisticated. The introduction avoids 1st person point of view, slang, and poor diction. Specific terms or language are defined. Necessary background information is provided. The paragraph transitions clearly and logically from the hook to the thesis statement.

 Avoid vague and abstract language and slang. The thesis statement appears at the end of the introduction. The introduction should be clear, logical, and reasonable. Avoid attempts to be clever, funny, or sarcastic. Use present tense verbs consistently.

 The introduction need not be longer than 4 6 sentences. Lengthy introductions tend to ramble and can distract from the topic and lose focus.

Sample Introductions:
As you read the following samples, consider their

strengths and weaknesses in light of the previous checklist. Identify the hook or opening statement in each sample. Identify T.A.G. (title, author, genre). Identify transition sentences. Identify the thesis statement. Identify awkward, vague, wordy, or abstract diction. Identify analytical and critical approach.

Sample 1:
A womans role in marriage is a controversial subject that has puzzled and fascinated people as long as the institution of marriage has been in existence. Because women have traditionally held a subservient and passive role in marriage in contrast to their male counterparts, it is of great interest to reflect on world civilizations and cultures of the past in order to observe how contemporary societal expectations of a wife have evolved over time. One powerful way of glimpsing into past societies views on wifehood is by carefully examining classical world literature. The Ramayana of Valmiki and The Tale of Genji, examples of classical Indian and Japanese literature and culture, reflect their cultures values regarding a womans role as a wife.

Sample 2:
The persona in Ana Castillos short story Subtitles narrates, i have lived my life in a foreign film. The idea that she is typecast into roles within her life reflects the dominant societys tendency to categorize her as foreign. This categorization naturally leads to the translation, and therefore transformation, of her character into Anglo-American society. This unique narrative explored the theme and character of the contemporary Chicana. Castillos Subtitles explores the problematic and contradictory nature of the Chicana identity in dominant Anglo-American society through the literary conventions of metaphor, point of view, figurative language, and symbolism.

Sample 3:
Human memory is one of the greatest mysteries known to man. Some scientists claim that the human brains capacity to store and remember information in infinite. Despite modern technology and advances in brain research, our gift of memory is still one that baffles scientists, physicians, and psychiatrists alike. The mystery of memory intrigues writers, as well. In her award-winning novel Beloved, Toni Morrison explores the intensity of memory in the story of an antebellum family haunted by the past. The controlling theme of memory develops meaning throughout the novel as a narrative technique that weaves insight and emotion into the characters, plot, and symbols.

Sample 4:
Among the long list of prerequisites an effective leader must possess, confidence and the ability to speak eloquently and powerfully are necessary to portray a presence of competence. Certainly, any effective leader of historical significance may be shown to have possessed these qualities. In addition to historic figures, characters in the great canon of classical literature also reveal societal expectations of sound leadership. In particular, the playwrights hand is responsible for depicting, in dramatic form, the role of the heroic leader in all its grandeur. Christopher Marlowe, one of the great playwrights of the (cont.)

sixteenth century, portrays the character of Tamburlaine as he succeeds to and defends the throne in Tamburlaine the Great, Parts I and II. In Tamburlaines character we see a model of leadership in which confidence and eloquence play a pivotal role. Tamburlaines pride, confidence, and eloquence qualify him as a competent and effective leader.