Sei sulla pagina 1di 3

Outline Main Topic Focus on Thesis Statement : Does true love exist?

:The definitions of love and how it affects peoples life. : Love is one of the most intriguing, mystical and vibrant emotions ever

experienced by the human race. Topic Sentence : I believe that love can be categorised into three categories: it is one of

the most intriguing feeling, it is mystical and also has the vibrant emotions. Point 1 : The most common answer you could come across is that,love is a

feeling which cannot be completely defined. Supporting details comprehended. Point 2 human. Supporting details : It instills confidence, makes him disciplined and more importantly : Love basically acts as a metaphor for the 'Feel-good-factor- in a :Love is an emotion which in the history of mankind has changed

destinies and shaped the life of millions, would still be in a state to be fully understood or

makes him a responsible person. Humans are attracted to a person of the opposite sex, physically first. Physical appearance does matter a lot but not to an extent where in, it would persuade an individual to get into a relationship. Point 3 Supporting detail : Love has a vibrant emotions that experienced by the human race. : Humans are social animals and our desires and wants for 'That

perfect companion or partner' is often governed by our sub-conscious mind. It has been scientifically proven that men look out for the qualities of their mother and women that of their father, when searching for their partners. Conclusion : This emotional attachment and bond felt towards the object of your

affection is not predicated on looks, body type, bank account but ifs far deeper that what you see on the surface. Love will not run off and leave you, it will not endanger you, it will not embarrass or insult you. Love will forgive you, be patient with you, protect you and provide for you because you are apart of the one loving you.

Second Draft Razawana Zaharel 22a,Jalan Kebun Nenas 2b/ks7, Bandar Putera, 41200 Klang , Selangor D.Ehsan

Editor, News Straits Times, Jalan Riong, 51000,Bangsar Kuala Lumpur 1st March 2012 Dear Editor, Ref: Feedback in the article Does true love exist? Refers at the article that I have read in Love Me Not section, the title Does true love exist? in 29th February 2012 has attracted me to share some ideas and giving some feedback on it. Generally love is one of the most intriguing, mystical and vibrant emotions ever experienced by the human race.After I went through the article, I believe that love can be categorised into three category: it is one of the most intriguing feeling, it is mystical and also has the vibrant emotions. Yes, the fact is true love does exist . When your love are true you would not even realized how and why you fell on it. It just happened to you. You would never even know or realize how you developed such feelings but you would have a strong inclination towards the person you love and such feelings would be heart felt.There are many couples in a loving relationship, which communicate with each other, know each other, anticipate to needs of each other. These loving couples are dedicated mothers and fathers. Secondly, : Love basically acts as a metaphor for the 'Feel-good-factor- in a human which it instills confidence, makes him disciplined and more importantly makes him a responsible person. Humans are attracted to a person of the opposite sex, physically first. Physical appearance does matter a lot but not to an extent where in, it would persuade an individual to get into a relationship. Finally, love have a vibrant emotions that experienced by the human race. Humans are social animals and our desires and wants for 'That perfect companion or partner' is often governed by our sub-conscious mind. It has been scientifically proven that men look out for the qualities of their mother and women that of their father, when searching for their partners. Yes, I believe that true love can exist in times like this and does exist. This emotional attachment and bond felt towards the object of our affection is not predicated on looks, body

type, bank account but it is far deeper that what you see on the surface. Love will not run off and leave you, it will not endangers you, it will not embarrass or insult you. Love will forgive you, be patient with you, protect you and provide for you because you are apart of the one loving you, Oh yes...True Love Does Exist!

Your Sincerely, ( Rozawana Zaharel)

Potrebbero piacerti anche