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Diversity and Democracy

Dialogue
A Publication of the San Diego Area Writing Project Fall 2010


Inside... How Far is Four Miles?
When Personal Essays Laura Pribyl—SDAWP 2009
Get Very Personal. . . . 4
Ann Zivotsky

The Language There are many things that make it difficult to be a teacher. Without doubt, any teacher
of Color. . . . . . . . . . . 5 could sit down and generate a lengthy list of challenges in minutes, both unique to them
Rob Meza-Ehlert and universal to the profession.

Moving Beyond ”If a doctor, lawyer, or dentist had 40 people in his office at one time, all of whom had differ-
Tolerance. . . . . . . . . . 8 ent needs, and some of whom didn't want to be there and were causing trouble, and the doc-
Christine Kané tor, lawyer, or dentist, without assistance, had to treat them all with professional excellence
for nine months, then he might have some conception of the classroom teacher's job.”
Young —Donald D. Quinn
Writers'
Camp . . . . . . . . . 10-12 Possibly one of the most insidious aspects of all is that with few exceptions, most teachers
Fiama Albarran work in a fairly constant state of isolation.
Frank Barone
Mason Brown “What does it mean to go through a work day with no sustained personal contact with an-
Ariel Foy other adult? Being and talking with children is not psychologically the same thing as being
Christiana Jimenez and talking with peers—and I am not suggesting that one is necessarily more satisfying than
Marissa Love the other, only that they are different. I am suggesting that when one is almost exclusively
Ally Deremer with children—responsible for them, being vigilant in regard to them, “giving” to them—it
Mayla Stern-Ellis must have important consequences. One of these psychological consequences is that teachers
Rachel Ulrich are psychologically alone, even though they are in densely populated settings.”
—Seymour Sarason, The Culture of the School and the Problem of Change
Finding Our Voices . . 13
Janet Ilko “Not only does isolation limit professional growth, but prolonged isolation reinforces a soli-
tary orientation to one’s work and often breeds defensiveness and finger pointing.”
Teaching the Writer: —Thomas L. Good, 21st Century Education A Reference Handbook
Voices from the Spring
Conference. . . . . . . . 12 One of the effects of this isolation is that many teachers within a district, even those who
Victoria Mossa-Mariani have been in it for years, have absolutely no idea what teaching is like at sites other than
Robert Gallo their own. We simply don’t know how the other half lives. Most teachers never mingle with
those from other schools, perhaps only once a year at a Summer Academy workshop. This
ignorance of life on the other side of the fence spawns the most egregious assumptions
Also included: and stereotypes, and certainly the above-mentioned defensiveness and finger pointing. I
experienced these personally when I moved from the least affluent school in our district to
SDAWP Fellows 2010. . 15 the most affluent. The former, located in the inner city, is known in the “lingua franca” of
Muse Box . . . . . . . . . . 17 our district as a “valley school.” I will refer to it as The Hood. My current site in suburbia,
SDAWP Notes . . . . . . . 17 known as a “rim school” in the local district parlance, I will term The Burbs.
Dialogue
Call For Manuscripts. . . 19 I, too was a victim of the ignorance isolationism creates. When I was in The Hood I as-
sumed that my colleagues in The Burbs didn’t care about disadvantaged kids, that they sat
Calendar of Events . . . . 20
in their privileged corner with perfect students who came to school clean and well fed,
who were effortless to teach because they had hundreds of books, computers, cell phones
and automatic toothbrushes; because they had had thousands of hours in museums, art
galleries, zoos, and exotic vacation wrote a grade on a paper, homework, quired diplomacy.
locales; because they spoke English; or a report card, that you would be
because their parents disciplined called to defend it with nothing less They thought they knew. But they
them, taught them manners, helped than your life. That GATE testing didn’t know.
them with homework, and person- was taken as seriously as a cancer
ally built their Mission Projects, biopsy. That if a child wasn’t doing They didn’t know about The Hood.
Leprechaun Traps, and Science Fair well, the only possible explanation The parents who never saw the
entries; and because they didn’t miss was simply your incompetence. I school because they were work-
God-knows-how-many-days a year didn’t know the hours you needed to ing three jobs to pay the rent in the
because of lice in their hair. I imag- put in planning over-the-top sorts of filthy, neglected apartment or be-
ined the legions of parent volunteers projects because the parents in your cause they’d never had the chance
who did everything for these teach- room who were helping were also to go to school in the country they’d
ers, short of brushing their teeth, watching everything you did and re- emigrated from or their education
and who treated them to lavish gifts porting it to everyone who wanted to had been interrupted by war or op-
at Christmas, including the much- listen. I didn’t know that sometimes pression or growing up in poverty as
rumored-about three-figure gift your principal would call you into well. They didn’t know that the ma-
card to Staples. They had it made. I the office and recite the complaints
thought. against you, and that would literally
be the first you’d heard of anything
I didn’t know
I thought I knew. But I didn’t know. because many parents would never
“waste their time” going to you di-
about the shrill,
I didn’t know about the shrill, de-
manding sorts of parents who insist-
rectly. I found out that having a law-
yer on call couldn’t hurt. demanding sorts of
parents who insisted
ed on seeing your resume before the
first day of school was over to ensure On the other side of the fence lies
that you were qualified to teach their The Hood.
future Ivy-League scholar. The par- on seeing your
ents who insisted the birthday cup- Most of my peers in The Burbs as-
cakes had to be served NOW at 10:15
in the morning, because you couldn’t
sumed this meant a class full of
poor, dirty, unruly students virtually
resume before the
POSSIBLY be doing anything more
important than celebrating Junior’s
impossible to teach because they
couldn’t speak English; because
first day of school
birthday. I didn’t know that when you their parents didn’t value educa-
tion and never returned homework
was over to ensure
or permission slips or set foot on
that you were
Dialogue school grounds, not even for parent-
teacher conferences; because they
were plagued by poverty, substance qualified to teach
Fall 2010 abuse, gangs, incarcerated or ab-
Issue No. 24 sent parents, homelessness, and in- their future
adequate parenting skills; because
Diversity and they were drug babies; because they
were unmotivated; because they had
Ivy-League scholar.
Democracy
the kind of behavior problems that jority of students were completely
Editors: Stacey Goldblatt required a degree in psychiatry to capable of learning if you just took
Jennifer Moore remedy; because they were in and the time to plug the gaps; that some
Co-Editor: Janis Jones out of school for a myriad of reasons, of them were GATE qualified too,
frequently because they had lice in if you knew how to look; that they
Layout: Janis Jones
their hair. had survival skills an Army Ranger
Photography: Janis Jones
would value; that with most of them
Marla Williams a lot of love, patience, humor, and
When I transferred to my school in
Writing Angel: Susan Minnicks The Burbs, the stereotypes were above all structure could circum-
waiting. Many of my colleagues as- vent the behavior problems; that
Published by the they brought amazingly interesting
sumed I would not be able to teach
San Diego Area Writing Project “high” children, that my expecta- tidbits of their culture to share; that
Director: tions would be in the cellar, that in the course of a school year, you
Kim Douillard GATE children at my old site were as would come to mean more to them
rare as unicorns and that I wouldn’t than you could ever know; that years
UC San Diego later you would wonder why you still
recognize one if it poked me with a
SDAWP horn, that I should be assigned only can’t throw out the cracked candle
9500 Gilman Drive the ELD students, struggling read- holder with the half-melted candle
La Jolla, CA 92093-0036 ers, and behavior problems because inside that you got for Christmas.
(858) 534-2576 that’s what “I was used to,” that I
http://sdawp.ucsd.edu/ would not be able to communicate I liken this mutual ignorance to
with educated parents with the re- the “Mommy Wars” phenomenon,

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where stay-at-home mothers on one (and three dictation sentences)— a haunted house using set décor that
side and working mothers on the an additional four-hundred-and-fifty would rival anything in Hollywood; in
other fling the barbs back and forth words by year end. In The Hood, The Hood, the teachers put on a Fall
in a battle that isn’t real in a war only half the students exit barely Festival that featured face-painting
that can’t be won. The same dynam- reading at grade level; in The Burbs, and a few homemade games. In The
ics are in play in The Hood vs. The the lowest children read at the high- Burbs, the P.T.A. can raise an aver-
Burbs. What the hell are we doing est level reached by students in The age of $23,000 in one night at a fund-
to each other? In a profession that’s Hood; most are reading at least one raising event. In The Hood, the P.T.A.
as difficult as they come, why aren’t or more years above grade level. In fund consisted of what the teachers
we simply helping each other, and The Hood, several students came in contributed. In The Hood, I never
by extension, our students? If you every year not even knowing their had a room mother or chaperones
are truly dedicated to teaching, and letters or sounds; in The Burbs, this on field trips; in The Burbs, I had an
are passionate about children, does is unheard of. army. In The Hood, at least ten or
it matter WHERE you are working? twelve students would leave at some
Can’t you make a difference any- In The Hood, I had to race to com- point in the year, replaced by other
where, just in different ways? plete the entire math curriculum by students in a constant, revolving
year-end; in The Burbs, I not only door; in The Burbs, only one student
Why is this critical? completed it, but had time for enrich- moved in the three years I’ve been
ment and early third-grade activi- there. For seven out of my ten years
In 1954 Brown vs. Education was ties. In The Burbs, my students did in The Hood, the playground was a
passed to desegregate the schools. an animal project that consisted of a dirt field full of red ants and the only
“Blacks and Hispanics are more sep- written report, a speech, and a diora- grass was a small patch in front of
arate from white students than at any ma of the animal’s habitat. For many the office; in The Burbs, there are
time since the civil rights movement reasons, that project could only have three playgrounds, and one is the
and many of the schools they attend been done in class in The Hood, and size of a football field.
are struggling, said the report by the certainly never to the same extent.
Civil Rights Project at the University In The Hood, homework was a four- The terrible disparity between the
of California” (Matthew Biggs, Reu- page packet that the students could second grade I knew at one site and
ters, 2007). complete independently; in The the second grade I found four miles
Burbs, it was an eight-page packet away is gut wrenching. Once you see
The 2007/2008 data from the STAR with lengthy reading passages and it, you can’t ignore it. But how do you
(School Accountability Report Card) comprehension questions that re- see it if you never have any mean-
tell the “Tale of Two Schools” in my quired written responses that were ingful contact with colleagues from
particular case. frequently completed with parent other sites? If you remain in that
isolation that breeds the ignorance
Category My “Hood” My “Burbs” and the stereotypes and the assump-
School School tions? If it’s still Us vs. Them? Should
African teachers be rotated among schools
12% 1.5%
as principals usually are?
Hispanic 60% 9%
This country needs to address the
White 20% 69%
stunning inequities in education
Multiple 6% 17% that fifty-five years after Brown are
or No Response as egregious as ever. “Almost two-
Socio/Economically- 83% 8% thirds of African-American children
Disadvantaged attend schools that are 'minority
majority.' About 40 percent of them
ELD 66% 10%
learn in classrooms that are 90 to
Proficient in English/ 26% 82% 100 percent black. In our major cit-
Language Arts ies, the numbers are even starker.
In Washington, D.C., for example,
These two schools are exactly four support. In The Hood, we often did 93 percent of public school students
miles apart. not do science or social studies as are black and Latino; only about five
time was devoted to language arts; percent are white. In the nearby sub-
What else happens in four miles? in The Burbs, we completed all units urb of Bethesda, Maryland, several
of each subject. minutes by car or public transporta-
When I changed sites, I remained at tion from downtown D.C., 62 percent
second grade, which allowed me to In The Hood, I kept peanut butter of public high school students are
see even more spectacularly the pro- and crackers on my desk all year white” (Dana Goldstein, “Segregated
found difference four miles made. for students without a snack; in The Schools Leave Children Behind,”
To begin with, I had to throw out Burbs, my students brought fresh 2007, The American Prospect).
everything I’d brought with me and fruit and vegetables for recess. For
start over with new materials. In The three years in The Hood, we had no While the fight is waged, though,
Hood, the spelling test had ten words P.T.A. In The Burbs, the P.T.A. puts on what one teacher can do in the
on it, in The Burbs, twenty-five a Halloween carnival complete with meantime needs to become what all
(Pribyl, continued on p. 17)
Dialogue, Fall 2010 3
When Immigration
Personal Law

Essays Get Very By Vanessa*—5th Grade

Personal I’m not a U.S. citizen, and I


Ann Zivotsky—SDAWP 2010 disagree with the Arizona immi-
gration law. People have the
My class wasn’t buying it. it may throw at them. I want them to right to live here and to be free.
succeed, so I’m truthful with them The police shouldn’t be able to
My students—more than half with about how I’ve worked to change stop people and ask them for
families and histories in Mexico— my own negative beliefs when I their papers because they look
weren’t agreeing to a sentence we realize I have them. Mexican or any other race.
just read in Pam Munoz Ryan’s
Esperanza Rising: Lighter skin My students and I talked that morn-
In my opinion, this law should
makes fuller stomachs. ing about the subtle prejudices
that happen within racial groups. not be allowed. I say this because
It wasn’t easy for the students— I know how people feel when
Darker faces looked Latino, Asian, Pacific Islander and they are separated from their
back at my white African-American—to verbalize the families. My mom and baby sis-
pride they have in their culture and ter were taken from our family. I
face, shifting then to acknowledge that the actors feel sad when I think about them,
and singers they watch often have
uncomfortably in their lighter-colored skin.
but I hope that one day we will
be together again. Every time I
seats, and swore I
talk to my mom on the phone,
A few days later, Vanessa* and I talk-
was wrong. ed about the final writing assign- I remember the day that I woke
ment for the year—a persuasive up and she was gone. I asked my
The story crosses racial and eco- essay. Vanessa and I were comfort- dad where she was, and he told
nomic lines as Esperanza, a rich, able discussing serious subjects. We me she was forced to go back
spoiled girl in 1930’s Mexico, moves had a long talk about the pointless- to Mexico. It was over a year
with her mother to California to find ness of getting so angry at a class- ago that she was taken away,
jobs as pickers because the family mate from the neighborhood that but I will always remember that
fortune is stolen. For the first time, she lashed out with a fist upon arriv-
morning.
Esperanza faces racism from white
Americans and prejudices from
other Mexicans because of her light-
I want them to A way to improve the situation is
er skin and wealthy background. succeed, so I’m to find better ways to help more
people to get their papers. The
“Isn’t that still true?” I asked. “Aren’t truthful with them immigration patrol and Arizona
the actors and actresses in telenove- immigration laws are tearing
las often lighter, sometimes with
about how I’ve
families apart and hurting peo-
blonde hair?” worked to change my ple. People are being treated like

own negative beliefs dogs. If dogs don’t have a collar,
Darker faces looked back at my
they take them to the pound, and
white face, shifting uncomfortably
in their seats, and swore I was
when I realize if people don’t have papers, they
wrong. Talking about race isn’t easy I have them. take them to jail and then send
for the adults in this country, and it’s them back to Mexico away from
not any easier for 10-year-olds. The ing at school, and we also discussed their families. That’s the most
truth may set us free, but it can be a the inappropriateness of telling a harmful way they can take any-
messy path to freedom. student with Asperger’s, who tested one out of the state. The reason
everyone’s patience, that he was I don’t like this law is because
We talk a lot about racism and preju- stupid. Vanessa and I had these talks
people will get hurt. It’s not
dice in class, prompted by the books each time before she had to leave
working for us. People are pro-
we read: Number the Stars, The Cay, school on a suspension.
The Sign of the Beaver, Out of the testing because there is too much
Dust. I believe talking about our I know that on the days Vanessa is violence in this law. I don’t want
understandings and misunderstand- in a bad mood, or acts out, she is other families to be torn apart
ings of each other is essential if my missing her mother. It must be diffi- like mine was.
multicultural students are going to cult to be approaching puberty, and
be prepared for the world and what girl cliques, and first dates without *A pseudonym
4 Dialogue, Fall 2010
a mom to talk to. I had a vague idea
of why Vanessa’s mom was gone, so

The Language
when she asked me what she should
write about in her persuasive essay,
I mentioned Arizona’s new immigra-

of Color
tion laws, and she cautiously bright-
ened at the idea of writing about
something she cared a lot about. But
researching the facts to support an
argument wasn’t thrilling her. So we
talked it out. Rob Meza-Ehlert—SDAWP 2009

“Should everyone who wants to
come to the United States be allowed
My ninth-grade students were work- important parts of most people’s
in?” I asked.
ing in pairs, trying to make sense of sense of identity that we need to
some fairly complex data on the find constructive ways to talk about
Vanessa thought so. I asked her
shifts in immigrant demographics these aspects of our lives. Child
about our own homes, and if we
throughout history. I knelt down psychiatrist Neha Bahadur points
would help someone else. We both
to listen in on one conversation. out that, “The awareness of race
agreed we would feed anyone who
Karla, a quiet Latina who fastidi- doesn’t come from the inside. You
needed a meal, and even let them
ously hides her GATE status from don’t think of it until somebody
sleep on our couch for a few nights
her peer group, was having a dis- else comes along and tells you that
if they were homeless. What if more
cussion with DeJone, a bright and you’re different” (3). The fact that
and more hungry, homeless people
gregarious young man of African- our identities are formed largely
came to our houses, would we let
American descent. through what is taught to us cre-
them in? No, Vanessa said, we would
ates the exciting possibility that we
run out of food and room and would
“Well,” said Karla, “I guess the big might be able to raise children in
have to shut the door.
difference now is that so many a society without racial and eth-

more colored people are coming to nic divisions. However, since this
“So,” I continued, “your mom was
the United States.” seems at best a distant possibility
sent back to Mexico?”
at this point in human history, my
“Whoah! You can’t say that!”
Vanessa nodded her head. Her fam-
responded DeJone. “Mr. M-E, can
ily entered the country illegally
and lived here for several years.
she say colored people? Isn’t that Talking about race and
kind of like old-school racist stuff?”
One year ago, the INS deported her
mother. Her family can’t afford to
I fumbled for a response. “Um, well. ethnicity is a tricky
DeJone’s right that most people
pay a coyote to help mom re-cross
consider it racist if you use the term business, whether
the border, and her mother can’t
apply for legal entry to the United
colored people. The phrase we use
today in academic writing and dis-
inside school or in
States because entering illegally
once gives her mother a criminal
cussion is people of color.” society at large.
record and disqualifies her. Vanessa
After a brief pause, DeJone’s face
can’t visit her mother in Mexico
took on a look of exasperation as he thinking on this issue is grounded
because Vanessa is still illegally in
said, “Now that’s dumb. Those two much more in a pragmatism that has
the country and her family is afraid
mean exactly the same thing. Who grown out of more than a decade in
she’ll be stopped at the border re-
came up with that?” the high school classroom. By the
entering the States.
time students reach my class they

Talking about race and ethnicity is have internalized countless mes-
I encouraged Vanessa to tell her
a tricky business, whether inside sages about race and ethnicity, and
story through her pesuasive essay,
school or in society at large. Since they possess at least a basic sense of
and my satisfaction came in seeing
ethnicity itself is so complex, any which groups are their groups.
that some of her anger and frus-
concrete terminology we invent to
tration lessened with the realiza-
try to describe it will naturally be By no means does this imply that a
tion that writing about the situation
an oversimplification that is fraught person’s identity is simply inherited
would give her a voice. The moment
with inaccuracies. Race and ethnic- and becomes set in stone by age
in our conversations that still makes
ity are often highly charged, emo- fifteen. To the contrary, Dr. Carmen
me smile is when Vanessa handed
tional concepts that go deep to the Guanipa-Ho states that, “Ethnic
in her essay and asked, “Do I still
roots of self-identity and sense of identity formation is a very complex
have to write a persuasive essay?” I
community. Furthermore, the his- process…involv(ing) an interaction
laughed. “No, this is your persuasive
torical and present-day realities of of contextual and developmental
essay. It may be the most persuasive
racism make discussion of cultural factors” (1). Students (and often
essay I’ve ever read by a student.”
identity all the more problematic. adults) are actively engaged in an
ongoing process of reflection and
Despite the challenges involved, adaptation of cultural viewpoints
racial and ethnic heritage are such as they figure out where they stand
Dialogue, Fall 2010 5
in our society. The language we than is taught” (3). other mixed children who end up
use to talk about race, ethnicity and with darker skin or more stereotypi-
culture in our classrooms should Since we wield such power in our cally Mexican features? If they are
promote this identity exploration in classrooms, it is vital that as educa- half “people of color” do we really
positive ways. tors we support students of all back- mean to teach them that they have
grounds as they explore and discuss another side devoid of color? Are
I am committed to helping students issues of race, class, and culture. there really any colorless people?
talk about race, culture, and ethnic
heritage in ways that affirm who Moving our dialogue beyond the What is meant by color, then, is
they are without marginalizing the phrase “people of color” is a key step something closer to “ethnicity” than
backgrounds of others. This is a towards creating inclusive, support- actual skin pigmentation (though the
commitment that all teachers in our ive learning environments. It’s not latter can affect how others might
increasingly diverse society need that the phrase is patently offensive attempt to categorize specific indi-

A
or destructive. It doesn’t even make viduals). Ethnicity, like culture, is a
my list of banned terms for my tough word to narrow down into one
What color are they, classroom, which typically directly short phrase. Eriksen’s definition of
target people’s gender, race, class or ethnic identity is a helpful starting
then? Are they some- sexual orientation. “People of color” point:
how less Latino than is a loaded term in much more
subtle ways. While DeJone pointed “Ethnic identity is...marked by…com-
other mixed children out that it is grammatically nearly
identical to the pejorative “colored
mon cultural, linguistic, religious,
behavioral or biological traits, real or
who end up with people,” we need to ask what we
mean by “color” in the first place.
presumed, as indicators of contrast
to other groups” (261).
darker skin or more
Color obviously references the pig-
stereotypically mentation in peoples’ skin that can We all have “color”
be seen when we look at one anoth-
Mexican features? er, but the concept is altogether because each of us
more complicated than what can be
to make. We must pay attention to ascertained through a mere cursory comes from a unique
what is said, how it is delivered, and glance. Peter Gomes, a theologian
set of cultural

m
even what goes unspoken in our at Harvard University, is an influ-
classes, because those choices can
greatly impact our students’ sense
ential African-American author and
preacher. Having a Black identity
characteristics that help
of identity. Perhaps because we’ve
all had some bad classroom experi-
has been an important part of his life
in the United States. However, he
make us who we are.
ences, a commonly held belief is recalls that when his parents mar-
that our education system is failing. ried on the island of Cape Verde, they In this sense, every single human
Many people believe teachers are were considered to be a mixed race being has an ethnicity. We all have
often unable or unwilling to impact couple despite the fact that by our “color” because each of us comes
students’ lives, a viewpoint mirrored modern American standards they from a unique set of cultural char-
in countless jokes with “teacher” as both were Black. By the standards acteristics that help make us who
the punch line (“What do you call of that time and place, his more we are. In this way, the fair-skinned
someone who keeps talking long light-skinned father was considered person from Scandinavia brings just
after everyone has stopped listen- White. Definitions of whiteness and as much “color” to the table as the
ing?” comes to mind). In contrast blackness, it seems, are more slip- brown-skinned Peruvian. Once we
to this low status, educators actually pery than many of us think (Gates). start thinking of all the genetic mix-
hold an immense amount of power in When one of my former students ture that has taken place through
the lives of young people. There are wanted to let me know that I was centuries of human civilizations, it
the amazing achievements of super- “cool” he announced to the class, becomes a mind-boggling oversim-
teachers such as Jaime Escalante “Mr. M-E is alright, he’s actually plification to narrow peoples’ whole
or Rafe Esquith, but most of us can black. He’s just high yellow.” His identity down to “of color” or white.
point to at least one teacher who reference to the hierarchical skin Moving beyond pigmentation, then,
embraced, inspired, and challenged color designations within the black requires leaving behind the anti-
us, even if they never made head- community was both entertaining quated language that reifies racially
lines. Sadly, we can also recall those and disturbing, hingeing as it does divisive categories. In a cultural-
teachers who, through harsh words, on proximity to whiteness and the ly diverse classroom, when I ask,
racism, or simple neglect, stole our ability to “pass.” My own children “So, how do students of color in the
joy or damaged our identity. Even are half-white and half-Latino, yet room feel about this quote?” I am
well-intentioned teachers can pass they inherited my skin and eye color by default telling some students in
on culturally destructive messages (rather than my wife’s black hair the class that they have color, while
by the way they design and imple- and brown eyes) and would fit into others are deemed colorless, cut off
ment their curriculum. In the essay the class photos at some Scottish pri- from their own roots in a specific cul-
“How School Taught Me I Was Poor,” mary school without too many ques- tural identity. This sends inaccurate
Jeff Sapp laments an educational tions. What color are they, then? and damaging messages to everyone
system in which, “More is caught Are they somehow less Latino than involved. In its most benign form,
6 Dialogue, Fall 2010
this may simply reinforce for stu- is that it assumes a relatively similar limitations of this solidarity; while
dents who identify as White that shared experience of being some- the mob moves on without destroy-
they are “just American,” devoid of thing besides “White” in America. ing the fruit stand, their mocking
any unique cultural heritage. At While this may be the case, peoples’ affirmations of the store owner’s
its worst, it might fuel the type of experiences can also be so vastly dif- “blackness” make clear that he cer-
search for roots in White supremacy ferent that it is disingenuous to cat- tainly isn’t a part of their group’s
groups disturbingly described by egorize the experience of millions experience on so many other levels.
James Ridgeway in the book Blood of individuals with one all-encom- The bridge that links them is just
in the Face. passing phrase. Whiteness itself has strong enough to walk across in the
been something of an elusive target moment, but couldn’t possibly hold
Some may argue that White over the centuries in America, as the shared weight of so many people
Americans shouldn’t be surprised any student of the experience of the dwelling together for very long.
to see a term like “people of color” Irish, Italians, Eastern Europeans
since Caucasians created (and or other groups now viewed as The implications for the classroom
benefited from) the very system of “White” will show. Just as people of are profound. I want to encourage
European ancestry have had vastly students to see that there are indeed

c
racial segregation based on skin
different experiences on America’s many shared experiences of discrim-
shores, non-Europeans have cer- ination and hardship for Americans
...I am encouraged tainly not shared one monolithic
experience in the United States.
based on race; I’m pleased when
these observations lead groups of
that this generation students to an increased sense of
Spike Lee skillfully illustrates this solidarity. However, I don’t want
seems more poised point in Do the Right Thing, one of to gloss over a multitude of dif-
the most powerful and controversial ferences and make students feel
to do this type of films ever produced about race in as if they should be united sim-
America. In the climactic scene, an ply because our phrase du jour is
transformative work angry group of mostly Black resi- one that lumps so many different
than any previously dents responds to the police killing
of the revered Radio Raheem by
backgrounds together. More impor-

in our country. torching area businesses, including


the pizzeria that served as a social So, what to do with the
hub for the neighborhood. When
color. Indeed, scholars such as Gail the mob turns its attention towards phrase “people of color?”
Anderson, at New York's Schomburg a Korean-owned fruit stand, the pro-
There is no pressing

F
Center for Research in Black Culture, prietor fends off his attackers with a
trace the phrase at least as far back
as French-speaking colonies in the
broom, shouting all the while, “Me
no white. Me no white. Me Black.
need to abolish
early 1800’s where the term gens de
couleur liberes, which translates as
Me Black. Me Black.” After a few
tense moments, one of the leaders
it outright.
''free people of color,” was used to of the group, Sweet Dick Willie,
describe people of African ances- says, “Korea is OK, man. Let’s leave tantly, I believe twenty-first century
try who weren’t slaves (Safire 1). him alone.” The mob is persuaded citizenship means striving to build
The phrase was used similarly in to move on without destroying his these bonds of solidarity across all
the United States more than two store, but shouts from the crowd dividing lines, including race and
hundred years ago, as a relatively mockingly echo, “Him no white. ethnicity. Rather than strengthening
positive term to denote those Blacks Him Black.” traditional divisions, my goal is to
who were not slaves. However posi- help students take a good hard look
tive it may have been at the time, This extraordinary scene, complete at discrimination, past and pres-
the terminology we use to describe with all of its racial stereotyping, ent, and then figure out how to
ourselves in the twenty-first cen- illustrates just how complicated unite to increase justice and equal-
tury shouldn’t be encumbered by group dynamics are when it comes ity. Walking through my campus
the racially-biased idioms of colo- to shared experiences. On the one at lunchtime and often observing
nial life over two centuries ago. We hand, Lee writes his characters in students of so many different back-
have slowly taken steps towards a such a way that they recognize, grounds socializing together, I am
more fully inclusive democracy, so even in the hazy thinking associ- encouraged that this generation
the very words we use should reflect ated with mob violence, that there seems more poised to do this type of
these changes. Rinku Sen, racial is some shared experience between transformative work than any previ-
justice advocate and publisher of these individuals from such differ- ously in our country.
ColorLines magazine, sums up this ent backgrounds; both groups have
point superbly when she argues, had to deal at some level with White So, what to do with the phrase “peo-
“It seems that now we need a new racism. Despite significant differ- ple of color?” There is no press-
term, as this nation changes with the ences in language, culture, historical ing need to abolish it outright. It
globe and changes the globe” (2). roots, and even class, there is a bond is clear that to many people it has
between the Black and Korean char- become more than just the phrase
Another potential problem with acters because of the fact that none most commonly used in our society
using the phrase “people of color” of them identify as White. Lee’s bril- (Meza-Ehlert, continued on p. 19)
liant writing, however, captures the
Dialogue, Fall 2010 7
Moving Beyond Tolerance
The Linguistic Difference Between Saying We Care & Showing We Care
Christine Kané—SDAWP 2004

Standard English is not the speech reading achievement, rather than acy acquisition for African American
of exile. It is the language of con- whether or not the student speaks students. We know that these same
quest and domination; in the United African American Vernacular students are exposed to daily print in
States, it is the mask which hides the English. This finding leads us to Mainstream Academic English text-
loss of so many tongues, all those wonder whether students who books and instruction delivered by
sounds of diverse, native communi- demonstrate a strong relationship teachers whose primary discourse is
ties we will never hear, the speech with African American Vernacular also Mainstream Academic English.
of the Gullah, Yiddish, and so many English should be promoted toward In recent light of No Child Left
other unremembered tongues. monolingual Mainstream Academic Behind requirements, the majority
—bell hooks English for academic purposes, of these teachers have more than
delineating their relationship likely received some training in the
As a collective entity of educators, to African American Vernacular strategies best applied to English
administrators, specialists, and English, or if these students should Language Learners. However, I
researchers we have undertaken the receive instruction in both language would not be surprised that many
task to improve the overall instruc- systems in order to promote the of these teachers do not purpose-
tional quality and services rendered inherent linguistic benefits of bilin- fully plan or implement ELL strate-
for our African American students. gualism. gies or instructional practices with
Numerous research studies have African American students in mind.
indicated that providing quality A study conducted by Craig & African American students who
instruction from qualified teachers Washington (2004) revealed that speak African American Vernacular
will improve the educational oppor- the shift students make moving English continue to be a linguistic
tunities afforded to all students in away from a strong relationship minority in our educational institu-
the classroom, including African with African American Vernacular tions.

...research studies have indicated that The lack of instructional support in
language development for African
providing quality instruction from qualified American students was never more
explicitly stated than in the nation-
teachers will improve the educational wide debate sparked due to the
Oakland School Board’s resolution
opportunities afforded to all students... for the implementation of an edu-
cational program that would focus
Americans. A strong correlation has English toward Mainstream on the nature and history of African
been found between oral language Academic English does not in fact American Vernacular English, at
development and its impact upon occur gradually over time but is the time referred to as “Ebonics.”
reading and writing development more of a precipitous drop during The assumption was that this pro-
for students in the emergent stage two distinct periods of their educa- gram would address the teach-
(e.g. Craig, Conner & Washington, tional experience. The first major er’s knowledge gap about African
2003; Loban, 1976; Scarborough, shift occurs between entrance into American Vernacular English,
2001; Storch & Whitehurst, 2002). kindergarten and the end of first begin the process of changing their
grade, where the student’s spoken attitudes about the language, and
The works of Craig & Conner (2006) discourse reveals a sharp decline help teachers figure out how to use
reveal that an African American in the morphological and syntacti- the rich and varied linguistic abili-
preschool student who demon- cal (morphosyntactic) features of ties of African-American children
strates either a very strong or a child African American Vernacular to help them become fluent readers
very weak relationship to African English. The second major shift and writers (Perry & Delpit, 1998).
American Vernacular English in occurs between second to third Unfortunately, the overwhelming
his/her oral reading of a wordless grade, where students experience backlash to the resolution from both
storybook has a positive correlation another sharp decline in morpho- the White and African American
to overall reading achievement ver- syntactic features of child African community on this issue caused
sus a student who only moderately American Vernacular English in its immediate cessation and the
identified with African American their oral reading. discrepancy between the literacy
Vernacular English. These findings achievement between White and
suggest that overall linguistic ability We know that these dramatic shifts African American students still lin-
is a stronger indicator of potential occur during pivotal periods of liter- gers in the classroom nearly three
8 Dialogue, Fall 2010
decades later. Although the move towards monolin- placed upon them by others mean
gual Mainstream Academic English that they will constantly have to
Language Learning: (MAE) is laced with good inten- prove their worth (p. 24). And final-
An Even Wider Perspective tions, it is detrimental to the literacy ly, from the PBS special Can You
development for some of our strug- Speak American?, a clip highlighting
If you’ve ever lucky enough to inter- gling African American students the work of Noma LeMoine in Los
act with one, much less a room full who receive mixed messages dur- Angeles showed explicit instruc-
of African American five- or six- ing guided reading practice, writing tion in both AAVE and MAE with a
year-olds, you will experience first- workshop and basic communication group of third graders that caught
hand intelligent articulate oral and in the classroom. Lisa Delpit warns my attention. These three literacy
written expressions in either African educators that when students enter events were the catalyst I needed
American Vernacular English and/
or Mainstream Academic English,
depending upon the student(s)’
...over the past eleven years
familiarity with these two lan-
guage systems. African American
I have witnessed the transformation
students are representative of any of a once lively communicative child in
English Language Learners (ELL)
or Linguistic Minority (LM), with kindergarten become more and more
a range of abilities in oral, read-
ing and writing development in subdued and muted by the end
both their home/community and
academic language abilities. They of the school year.
enter just like any other student in
the educational school system with into their classroom with an African to begin the inquiry practice on the
life experiences and measures of American Vernacular English dis- impact that AAVE had upon the lit-
confidence and self-worth that can course pattern in oral and written eracy development of my own first
be positively or negatively affected speech to recognize that this lin- grade students.
by their interactions with teachers, guistic form is intimately connected
administrators and school person- with loved ones, community, and Regardless of the fact that the lin-
nel. personal identity. She adds that "To guists define AAVE as a legitimate
suggest that this form is 'wrong' language system, to this day there
As an educator and literacy coach on or, even worse, ignorant, is to sug- still remains a silent stigma on AAVE
the site of a predominantly African gest that something is wrong with and very little to no formal instruc-
American student body, over the the students and his or her family. tion in teacher education programs
past eleven years I have witnessed On the other hand, it is equally in how to linguistically engage with
the transformation of a once lively important to understand that stu- speakers of AAVE. When we refer
communicative child in kindergar- dents who do not have access to to bilingual students or English
ten who becomes more and more the politically popular dialect form Language Learners we do not con-
subdued and muted by the end in this country, that is Standard jure up images of African American
of the school year. I believe that (American) English, are less likely boys and girls whose entire life has
we, as educators, whether implic- to succeed economically than their been spent here, enrolled in the
itly or explicitly, send a message peers who do….Teachers need to American public school system.

I believe that we, as educators, whether As an academic institution we do


not make any formally recognized
implicitly or explicitly, send a message that accommodations to support the
linguistic differences that speak-
African American Vernacular English is ers of African American Vernacular
English may possess and yet, we
considered a less than language system... hold them accountable to the stan-
dards and assessments designed for
that African American Vernacular support the language that students monolingual Mainstream Academic
English is considered a less than bring to school, provide them input English speakers. And we wonder
language system than Mainstream from an additional code, and give why there continues to be a dis-
Academic English. And that stu- them the opportunity to use the new crepancy between the academic
dents must make the move towards code in a non-threatening real com- achievement of African American
adopting monolingual Mainstream municative context." students and their White or even
Academic English for their own aca- bilingual non-AAVE peers. Any con-
demic gains without the assistance Gloria Ladson-Billings cites a teach- cept or idea that we value enough
of their teachers who are often er in her book The Dreamkeepers to provide formal instruction in will
ill-prepared to understand, much who considered it her job to make make an impact upon the lives of
less identify and provide explicit sure that they (African American our students, including language
instruction in the discourse fea- students) can use both languages, development.
tures African American Vernacular that they understand that their lan- (Kané, continued on p. 18)
English (AAVE). guage is valid but that the demands
Dialogue, Fall 2010 9
Young
S The Imagination B
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U Take the
M off the imaginaticoork
n bottle
M

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Pour it a
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R riters’ Don't stay exact,
ages

Camps
go wild
2 and free
0
1 Find your
buried treasures
0 of stories
The eyes —Fiama Albarra
n
of nature,
a powerful
pressure point,
startling,
but always there,
the rustling leaves
are the hands
of nature,
the footprints
of dinosaurs
are lakes
I Imagine The Journey
—Claire Jones
The sea There is a journey
On another world in every written piece.
With as many colors There is a risk to be
taken, whether it is to
As a box of crayons
read or to write.
I envision an iced-over So be clever and
Glimmering expanse put something in
of frozen dreams the world that wasn't
there before.
I see a steel blue vastness
Invent and create
That spits out a world of description.
White foam onto Be an explorer, take the risk
Yellow sand and travel through a world of words.

—Mason Brown —Marissa Love

10 Dialogue, Fall 2010


Choking on Words
I can't breathe!
can't breathe!
Can't you hear me, I ibilities.
dr ow ni ng in a w orld of endless poss
I am x,
in this pitch black bo
If I turn on the lights
w ill be to o st ro ng for my bare eyes.
The sigh t
,
For I am surrounded
enclosed even,
and toys
By unknown trinkets
r.
That I have no use fo
Now. Inspired by the Kelly Norman Ellis poem
e, Raised by Women during Writing For Change,
I w an t to le ar n to turn the hands of tim SDAWP's newest summer
B ut young writers' program
a puzzle
Fitting the pieces of Raised by … Samoan Women!!
ted picture.
And Seeing the Awai ss,
t to m as te r th e ar t of light and darkne I was raised by Samoans
I wan Who ate beefy, slimy palosami
Right and wrong. Chicken and beef loving
so simple “go fix you a plate!”
But breathing is not kind of Samoan women.
is fo re ig n la nd I ho pe to call home.
In th Some hard working
being is easier, Problem solving, writing, producing
l, “Stay your butt in school!”
But living is essentia yelling, screaming, shouting
find.
And life takes time to if I do badly
type of sister
But once it is found
s
I can turn on the light Some proper sitting
Hands in lap, sitting up
y,
And inhale completel “say your prayer before you eat”
to write. type of aunties.
For I will be prepared
—Mikayla Stern-Ellis Some burnt tan,
Caramel, honey, and brown skinned
Sort of women
Samoan dancing
“Shake your big, wide hips
from side to side!”
“Put your back into it”
kind of aunties.
Samoan talking
“Oute Alofa teleianntesoe!”
Olf ituaiqa fafine
I was raised by
Samoan women
6-Word Memoir—Ally Deremer
—Christiana Jimenez

Dialogue, Fall 2010 11


The Balloon Man Frank Barone uses a
purple balloon to teach
Ariel Foy—YWC Teaching Assistant, Summer 2010 the concept of metaphor.

Children did not fear the balloon man


like they feared the doctor or the dentist.
He kept balloons like bursting purple grapes
tied to the brim of his hat. They were filled with
analogies that smelled like mint ice cream,
and the bakers’ dozens
of them kept his head floating,
his toes inches off the ground. Frank Barone (aka The Balloon Man) works with
3rd graders during a YWC presentation.
For fun he’d place the hat on children’s heads’
just to watch them levitate in place, wide eyes,
mouths agape. In the air they could smell blue
and taste abstracts like butterscotch.
If I Ask You to Write a Poem
Frank Barone—SDAWP 1977

The balloon man collected small galaxies Ask me to write a poem


when he went into space. He kept all that he found and I will show you how a hummingbird
like lost business cards and lovers throwing stones, can dance on the wind around a flower
buried in his pockets, waiting for the chance to use them. then race off to catch a dream
or I can help you to see how a purple balloon
Usually, they were baked.
can change into a rocket ship or a raindrop.
If children were smart
Sometimes in one of my poems
they’d take a balloon from him afterwards, you may hear autumn leaves scuttle
and if they were good they’d get a cookie loaded with down the sidewalk
chocolate chips, which were at the same time, or hear the echo of songs
the frantic beating of a hummingbird’s wings. as they bounce among the stars.
And when you learn to listen with your eyes
you may even hear the trees
Occasionally, for our amusement
gossiping with their friends
he’d bend the world to a fun house reality or hear spiders whispering secrets to each other.
warped and bloated on the edges. In a few poems you may smell lilac blossoms
He’d let rocket ships become raindrops or spaghetti sauce as it bubbles on the stove.
which we could ride as easily as a carousel Once in a while you may taste a poem
into park fountains and flower petals. about cookies filled
with chocolate chip metaphors.
He showed us absurdities that gave our teeth
You must take care when you read these poems.
a chattering giggle. Let us touch the clouds
Some words can bruise your skin
with our fingertips and whisper to them with our finger prints with their honesty
for that is the only way to speak to clouds. or pierce your heart with the truth.
He sends us around racetracks the size of pinheads Now if I ask you to write a poem
chasing metaphors like stray balloons, I know you will be able to show me
pictures that will surprise my eyes
only these things we caught
and choose words that will thrill my ears
and when he tied them with ribbon to our wrists
entertain my imagination
they did not float away. and move my heart to shout
"Yes, I see those same pictures,"
And when we were done we left and "Yes, I can hear your voice in those lines"
with a balloon on our wrist and a cookie with chocolate chips, and again "Yes, your poem speaks the truth
knowing they both might have been something else entirely. because you write with clear and honest words.
Welcome to my wonderful world of poetry."
And we knew, this was the balloon man’s gift.

12 Dialogue, Fall 2010


Finding
while we work on academics”(15),
states Christiansen. That statement

OurVoices
has defined my work this year with
each of my classes. Our site faces
the same challenges that most urban
schools face. Our campus is truly di-
verse, with many languages and cul-
Janet Ilko—SDAWP 2009 tures. We are primarily low income,
and our surrounding neighborhood
represents the financial and social
struggles faced in our society today.
Beginnings urban middle school looked like. There are times our students have
I have always worked in an urban difficulties relating to adults and to
Journeys are interesting things; the environment, but the schedule and each other. We strive to bring under-
roads that wind and twist take us climate of a middle school was new standing and respect to our classes
to places that we didn’t intend, yet to me. One nice thing about going to each day. My students recognize that
somehow we end up right where we a site midyear is that you have a lot we have a long way to go in learning
belong. For me, that place is back in of freedom to learn. No one expected to respect and eventually even cel-
the classroom, taking my experienc- perfection from me; they were just ebrate diversity on our campus.
es as a coach and teacher leader into thrilled I truly wanted to be there. I
the world of middle school, and then tried many things in my writing pro- Through many class discussions I
to a new role of teacher researcher. gram and some worked and some learned my students were also feel-
Over the past two years I have redis- flopped. My students challenged ing they didn’t have a voice, or the
covered what is important, what in- me every step of the way, and yes, power to make any changes on their
spired me to teach in the first place, there were days where I threw up own. That is when I realized that
helping students find their voice. I my hands and cried. Students wrote our writing, our study of text, could
arrived at the doorsteps of the Sum- poetry, and stories, and narratives support the idea that young students
mer Invitational 2008 searching for about their lives. It was long, gruel- have the power to make change. I
my professional soul, looking to find ing work and we struggled together. learned early on that I had to dem-
what brought me to education over But by the end of the year, the writ- onstrate relevance to my students,
20 years ago. I spent the summer ing that my students created in their to make them feel that reading and
reading, writing, studying, and ques- writing weren’t just tools for school,
tioning all I had learned about edu-
cation and my students over the past
Journeys are but truly tools to use to make their
everyday lives better. “If we intend
20 years. At the time, I was out of interesting things; the to create citizens of the world, as
the classroom, working as a literacy
coach. I had spent the past five years roads that wind and twist most school districts claim in their
mission statements, then we need
in and out of the classroom and was
at a point of transition. I didn’t know take us to places that we to teach students how to use their
knowledge to create change…. We
it at the time, but that summer expe-
rience was preparing me for my next didn’t intend yet, must construct academic ways for
students to use the curriculum, to
chapter, to teach in an urban middle
school with all its joys and challeng-
somehow we authentically tie student learning
to the world” (8). It is important to
es. In an era of budget cuts, I awoke end up right where note that I do not have the freedom
one rainy December morning to dis- to choose my curriculum. Like most
cover that the rumors were true: the we belong. teachers, I work under the con-
funding for my coaching position straints of district-adopted text, pac-
was really gone, and that I would be memoir projects demonstrated their ing guides, and assessments. I also
returning to the classroom. It was willingness to take risks and their know that within that framework,
late on a rainy Friday afternoon, desire to put their lives on paper. creativity still can and must thrive.
right before winter break. I stood in I knew that project was a turning It was in January of this past year
a sixth grade classroom with a set of point, and I also knew that was the that social justice and the standard
keys and two teachers’ editions and type of fire and enthusiasm I wanted curriculum collided, bringing about
met briefly with the principal, vice to generate in the fall. This past Sep- some of the best work of my students
principal, and a few teachers as they tember, I was introduced to a text in to date.
all came to quickly welcome me to our SDAWP study group written by
the site before we went on vacation. Linda Christiansen, Teaching for Civil Rights is Not about Dead People
It was surreal, scary, and exhilarat- Joy and Justice. I knew after our first
ing all at the same time. I went home meeting that this text would help It was January of this year when a
and immediately emailed my Writ- define the lens from which my stu- major change occurred in our study
ing Project cohort, and within min- dents would view reading and writ- of literature, history, and writing.
utes received words of encourage- ing. My students felt a disconnect Our unit became not just a review of
ment as well as internet sources and between school and their world out the stories in the chapter, but also a
ideas on how to make the transition. in the community. “We don’t build study of civil rights and social justice.
I spent the following sixth months communities instead of working on In our core text we read non-fiction
just learning what that world of an academics. We build communities
Dialogue, Fall 2010 13
articles on Brown vs. The Board of lens through which to approach our that text. Students first watched the
Education, and biographies on Rosa reading. As we viewed videos and speech itself from a video on Discov-
Parks and Maya Angelo. We includ- read texts, we defined the charac- eryEducation.com. They then read
ed the novella The Gold Cadillac by ters into these categories taken from an excerpt from the speech and had
Mildred Taylor to better understand Christiansen’s work “Writing For to highlight five words they thought
the struggles the characters faced Justice” (85-95). were critical to the speech. From
when traveling from north to south those words they selected three to
to visit family in 1950. We spent Acting for Justice present to their table team and then
time in the computer lab studying each table selected one word that
Dr. Martin Luther King Jr., the Chil- Students read an article or story represented the essence of Dr. King’s
dren’s March, sit-ins, and various and identified who was the target, speech and the ideas of that time pe-
challenges faced during The Civil ally, bystander, or perpetrator in the riod. They wrote justifications for
Rights Movement. We tied the past to piece. The most important learning their choices. Students were allowed
the present with every poem, article, came when students realized that to choose their own words if they
and story. My students were passion- by categorizing characters or real disagreed with their table’s decision
ate about this time period and the people in this way, they had to take and write a rebuttal. It was a very ef-
struggles faced by those we studied. into account the perspective of the fective lesson in word study and de-
I knew this was an opportunity to person(s) doing the categorizing. bate. At the end of the lesson I cre-
show them the power of words over Point of view took on a whole new ated a list of about twenty-five words
violence, peaceful protest versus ri- meaning and relevance as students that students could consider using
ots, and most importantly, to try and had to justify why they believed a
empower them to speak and write character to be the target or the per- I wanted so much for
about the injustice they still feel to- petrator. In the case of Dr. King, it
day. And so it began. all depended on perspective. In the them to see the
eyes of many, he was a target of op-
Writing For Justice pression, but to others he was an ally struggles of the
Again referring back to the work of
in their fight for civil rights.
past mirror the
Christiansen, I was able to have my It was an eye-opening experience struggles they face in
students begin this unit of study in a for students to understand that a
whole new light. I wanted so much person could be a target, ally, and their own lives.
for them to see the struggles of the perpetrator all in the same situation
past mirror the struggles they face in just by looking at it from a variety of for their final projects. The second
their own lives. I hoped that as we perspectives. This translated well prewriting activity again focused
reviewed the text through the lens into their own lives as we discussed on words, this time quotes from his
of social justice, it would highlight classroom or school situations in speech. We read Martin’s Big Words
how words and actions have an im- which students felt they were vic- by Doreen Rappaport. From there,
pact on a situation. Everything we tims of injustice. Many times, when students selected a quote that meant
do or don’t do contributes to an out- looking at situations from others’ something to them. They created an
come. In other words, I was seeking views, they were able to realize they idea web and then wrote a response
to highlight those in the story who may indeed have felt they were a answering the following questions:
were powerless and those who were target, but others could easily have What do you think Dr. King meant
empowered. I wanted students to seen them as a bystander or even when he said these words? What does
reflect and question what differenti- a perpetrator. Our experience al- it mean to you today? Give an exam-
ates those who are powerless from lowed for greater understandings of ple of how it applies to your own life?
those who become empowered. We the struggles middle school students Why did you select this quote? Why
used the chart below to create a new experience every day and gave us a did it stand out to you? The third
common language in which to dis- prewriting activity addressed vocab-
Target: Ally: cuss or write about it. ulary and word study. Going back to
The person The person the key words students listed, each
who is the tar- who stand up Modern Expressions of Social Justice: student selected one word. Using
get of injustice for others The Power of Images and Words thesauruses, dictionaries, and online
(could be an sources, they created a word map to
individual or As a culminating project for this unit, include the definition for the word
I wanted students to understand the that applied to this speech itself, its
group)
power of words and to have an op- part of speech, and synonyms and
portunity to relate those powerful antonyms of the word. Students then
Bystander: Perpetrator: words of the past to their own lives had to write their own definition and
A person who Commits the today. We returned to Dr. King’s “I use it in a sentence that demonstrat-
observes the act of Have a Dream” speech as a common ed the meaning.
act of injus- injustice text. Now that students realized that
tice, but who this speech represented the voices Options for Publication
does nothing of many civil rights leaders and
to stop it the struggle itself, it became more Students responded to the speech
meaningful and powerful to analyze and unit in a variety of ways. Some
14 Dialogue, Fall 2010
students wrote diamante poems using their select-
ed words and published them in the computer lab
using both their words and one carefully selected
image that highlighted their message. The poetry
was so powerful that two were published in our
school newspaper and others were displayed in
Congratulations
our campus bulletin board for student discussion.
SDAWP Fellows
One period of students created a quote quilt. Stu-
dents wrote an interpretation of their selected Summer 2010
quote from the speech on one square. On another
square they created an illustration or collage that
used only images to represent their ideas. They
were then glued all together in a quilt and hung on
the wall in the classroom.
Heather Bice Mark Manasse
Coronado High Miramar Community College
My third option for students was to create a Glog- Coronado Unified San Diego Community Colleges
ster page about their quote. The website http://edu.
glogster.com allows students and teachers to cre-
ate online media posters filled with video, music,
sounds, text, and images. One period of students Janet Chaloux-Baum Jennifer Jo Mokiao
created a poster about their word they selected, in- Mission Estancia Elementary Sycamore Ridge Elementary
cluding all the word study criteria, and also includ- Encinitas Union Del Mar Union
ed images and the quote where their word is dis-
played. These posters were printed and displayed
in a case out in the hallway, and then again they
were presented at our parent night where students Jennifer Chance Jason Parker
proudly displayed their work to family and friends. Anza Elementary San Diego State University
For some of my students, this was the first piece Cajon Valley Union CSU San Diego
they had completed to “final edit” the entire year.
Each of these culminating activities had to include
how this study of civil rights and social justice ap-
plied to the world they live in today. By displaying Mark Dubé Casey Payte
our work publicly, students recognized the power Integrity Charter Middle Cardiff Elementary
of their words. Our poets were asked to write an National Cardiff
editorial on race relations on our campus and were
featured in our school newspaper the next month.
Students saw that their voices and their writing
made a difference. Linda Christiansen writes, “Stu- Jamie Esposita Miriam Sikking
dents need tools to confront injustice, they need San Diego Global Vision Academy Paul Ecke Central Elementary
to hear our approval that intervention is not only
San Diego Unified Encinitas Union
appropriate and acceptable, but heroic. Acting in
solidarity with others is a learned skill—one I hope
more of us will teach” (90). I agree with Chris-
tiansen, and know that teachers themselves need Judy Geraci Laura Smart
to stand up and confront the curricular issues we Albert Einstein Academy San Diego Global Vision Academy
face each day. We need to find ways to work within
the constraints of standardized testing and curric- San Diego Unified San Diego Unified
ulum, and always push to include relevance and
voice within the real world in which we teach.
Elizabeth Lonnecker Veronica Welch
Works Cited
San Diego High- Nubia Leadership Academy
Christensen, Linda. Teaching for Joy and Justice: Science & Technology San Diego Unified
Re-imagining the Language Arts Classroom. Mil- San Diego Unified
waukee: Rethinking Schools, 2009. Print.

Homepage - ReadWriteThink. Web. 03 Mar. 2010. Ann Zivotsky


<http://www.readwritethink.org>.
Del Rio Elementary
Rappaport, Doreen, and Bryan Collier. Martin's Oceanside Unified
Big Words: The Life of Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr.
New York: Hyperion for Children, 2001. Print.

Dialogue, Fall 2010 15


SDAWP Spring Conference 2010
Teaching the Writer:
Voices from the Summer Institute
ppppppppppppp
Victoria Mossa-Mariani—SDAWP 2009
“Go by your passions,” SDAWP's Co-Director, Christine Kané, advises when
addressing attendees about the session choices available at the 3rd Annual
Spring Conference hosted at UCSD’s Cross Cultural Center. As participants
review their choices, I join the migration down the corridor to the confer-
Attendees of the SDAWP Spring 2010 Conference
ence rooms. write to the morning prompt presented by Susan
Minnicks, "Your First Kiss with Writing."
For the first session, I attend Valentyna (Tyna) Banner’s presentation,
Creating an Authentic Audience through Service Learning. She begins with
the “block party” protocol to focus participants in a progression from self 2009 Summer Institute Fellows and SI
to community and then onto the global community. Tyna recommends Leadership Team members kicked off the
the organization Volunteer San Diego and addresses the benefits of service Spring Conference 2010 with Susan Minnicks
learning such as motivation, a feeling of being needed, and a nurturing of who invited everyone to participate in the
student voice. She then shows a video clip from Playing for Change. Some institute’s hallmark activity, The Daily Writing
bob their heads along to the song Stand By Me, others smile. Tyna explains Prompt.
that the charity’s mission is to build music schools in war-torn countries.
Next, she debriefs three types of service learning: direct (face to face), indi- “Think about the time you had your first kiss
rect (raising money) and advocacy (raising awareness.) Tyna recommends with writing,” encouraged Minnicks, giving
The Complete Guide to Service Learning, a book by Katherine Kay, and then her audience “a whopping six minutes” to
smoothly transitions to student work. Tyna's students at Nubia Leadership complete their assignment. Silence filled the
Academy studied persuasive letters as mentor text by charting words and room as participants took pen in hand and
information. Next, they chose politicians and musicians and wrote letters began quietly writing about their first encoun-
asking them to make a contribution to Playing for Change. Tyna explains ter with their love of writing. For SDAWP
how teachers can weave service learning into their curriculum wherever Fellows, this was old hat, but it was a new
they desire. Tyna ends her address with the PARC model: Plan, Action, experience for visitors, friends, and uniniti-
Reflection and Celebration. Then, participants are asked, “Where might you ated colleagues.
infuse service learning in your curriculum?” I linger at the edges while the
group breaks into little clusters, and I strain to catch snippets as the room “Take one or two minutes to finish your
buzzes. thoughts,” Minnicks encouraged quietly,
before inviting participants to share their
For the second session, I enjoy Aja Booker and Mindy Shacklett’s demon- writing. Inspired by the prompt, Victoria
stration, Constructing Thought through Writing. Aja tackles the first half Mossa-Mariana helped conclude the session
of the session and shares that her students analyze informational text at by sharing her poem with the audience. (See
their grade level for structure, vocabulary, and content. Although Aja her- Writing's Kiss below.)
self readily admits that it is a challenge to find informational texts for the
primary grades, her student samples suggest the powerful results that can Robert Gallo—SDAWP 2009
be had.

Mindy takes over and we each receive a card with a mathematical repre-
sentation. We are tasked with finding our matches. As we begin to look for Writing’s Kiss
our equivalents, Mindy tells us to “think outside the box,” and I stumble Victoria Mossa-Mariani
into a group of percents. Next, we write definitions for the symbols on our
cards and share with our group mates. “We never talk about sets; that’s Shy at first and turned away
why I grouped you that way,” explains Mindy. This leads most groups into
interesting debates and side conversations. Then Mindy discusses how this Crayons wrote what words can’t say
kind of activity helps students. She contends that “lecturing and copying Scribbles from a child’s mind
demand little of students cognitively. Students need more action whether
it’s through think-pair-share activities or by asking them to explain or write Graduate to Valentines
about something in their own words.” But Ns in penmanship suppress
Mindy’s passion is evident but SDAWP time is fleeting. Before I know it, the The joy that beats in writer’s chest
session ends and I’m saying goodbye to colleagues and exchanging e-mail Over time words overcome
addresses with a new friend. It’s nice to know that there are more SDAWP
fellows in North County. And as I cruise home on Interstate 5, sunshine Authors’ themes are not undone
smattering my path, I meditate on the power of words, the promise that our And from the halls of letters come
students hold, and all of the inspiring possibilities alive in the San Diego
Area Writing Project.
What inspiration has begun

16 Dialogue, Fall 2010


(Pribyl, continued from p. 3)
teachers can do. Once teachers have
that meaningful dialogue with their
counterparts so they can see what
my move forced me to see…

“Never doubt that a small group of


c MUSE BOX

Jenny Moore,
SDAWP 1999
thoughtful committed citizens can
change the world; indeed, it's the Sometimes chance encounters are among the most meaningful in
only thing that ever does.” our lives. In the poem “If You Knew,” by Ellen Bass, she asks her
—Margaret Mead audience, “What if you knew you’d be the last/to touch some-
“Do not wait for leaders; do it alone, one?”
person to person.”—Mother Teresa
She writes, “When a man pulls his wheeled suitcase/too slowly
What could my through the airport, when/the car in front of me doesn't signal,/
when the clerk at the pharmacy/won't say Thank you, I don't
affluent students remember/they're going to die.”
learn from a pen pal Reflect on the people in your life who are “regulars,” but about
in The Hood? What whom you know very little: the familiar grocery store clerk, post-
man, couple who walk their dog past your house. Write about
could the students their lives as you imagine them, and the possible significance of
in The Hood the crossing of your paths. “What would people look like/if we
could see them as they are,/soaked in honey, stung and swollen,/
learn from mine? reckless, pinned against time?”

I am one teacher. I plan to see what


can happen if I team up with a teach-
er at my old site. Other teachers have
started pen pals between schools.
SDAWP NOTES
What could my affluent students
learn from a pen pal in The Hood? Kudos to Becky Gemmell (SDAWP 2001). In March she was named Teacher
What could the students in The of the Year for the Escondido Union High School District. Becky, who teaches
Hood learn from mine? What if we dance, English and journalism at Escondido High, credited her success to her
wrote to each other all year, and got school district, the school, and to the San Diego Area Writing Project. Of her as-
together a few times? What if my stu- sociation with SDAWP, she stated "...it's because of that organization, that profes-
dents could donate the hundreds of sional support, that I am the teacher I am."
extra books/clothing/toys they have?
What if students from both schools
could join together in service proj- Goodbye to Shannon Falkner (SDAWP 2009). Shannon moved to New York
ects, like picking up trash or visiting with her husband who has begun a graduate program at Columbia University.
a nursing home? What if I could get We will miss you, Shannon.
that army of college-educated parent
volunteers I have to consider spend-
Happy retirement to Judy Leff (SDAWP 1990). Judy may have retired from
ing one or two days a week working
the Encinitas Union School District in June, but she continues to work with the
in a classroom in The Hood? Would
they too, lose their stereotypes and SDAWP on a variety of projects. Since retiring, Judy has provided professional
assumptions that isolation has im- development on the topic of writers' notebooks for our Young Writers' Camp
bued in them, and begin to see and teachers, and she co-coordinated SDAWP's first Fall Conference.
understand what’s really going on in
our educational system? Would that Well done, Divona Roy (SDAWP 1996) and PJ Jeffrey (SDAWP 2008). One of
inspire them to join the larger fight Divona's students had an essay published in California English, and one of PJ's
on the national level to realize the
students won a writing contest sponsored by Christine Kehoe (CA State Senator
promise of Brown?
39th District).
What if there was more than one
teacher? Thank you to those who participated in the 2010 The National Day on Writ-
ing, which was held on October 20. To browse or to contribute to SDAWP's gal-
Is four miles really so far? lery in the National Gallery of Writing, "Fall in Love with Writing," please visit:
http://galleryofwriting.org/writing/957930

Dialogue, Fall 2010 17


(Kané, continued from p. 9)
Preparing For tic diversity as well as monitoring as those found in AAVE.
African American their progress in both language sys-
Vernacular English tems. The greatest limitation to this We looked at print in published
Language Learners inquiry process resided within my children’s books and our man-
own lack of experience or expertise dated curriculum textbooks more
To be purposeful in my litera- with AAVE and lack of mentorship purposefully than ever before. We
cy instruction in the classroom, I on the subject to confer with about used books as mentor texts to guide
first had to become more familiar my own instructional practice along our own writing and talked about
with the oral and written discourse the way. the way authors use language to
patterns associated with African express different ideas dependent
American Vernacular English. As a I held discussions with my students’ upon their intended audience. We
teacher of Hawaiian-Irish heritage, I parents/guardians, grandparents used multi-cultural literature that
must credit the work of those schol- and loved ones on the use of AAVE included African Americans beyond
ars and researchers who have made in the home and in the commu- a mere reference point as characters
a critical impact upon my instruc- nity. From this critical dialogue I but as identified speakers of AAVE as
tion in the classroom in regards debunked three common myths dur- well. We held many discussions on
the wide variety of AAVE speakers in
To be purposeful in my literacy instruction regional and national contexts, the
distinct possibility that many of our
in the classroom, I first had to become African American friends and family
members may use features of AAVE
more familiar with the oral and written differently in different contexts and
that being bilingual in both AAVE
discourse patterns associated with and MAE is more advantageous to us
African American Vernacular English. in communication than being mono-
lingual in either one. The greatest
change to my instructional practice
to African American Vernacular ing the inquiry process: a) African has been the purposeful inclusion
English such as Lisa Green, Gloria Americans do not all inherently of lessons based upon the linguistic
Ladson-Billings, bell hooks and speak AAVE but as with any language needs of my students that were not
Samy Alim. Although I did not grow it is associated with your regional being met by the adopted language
up engaged in African American context of upbringing and the role arts curriculum or state standards.
Vernacular English as my primary models in your life, b) the use of
form of discourse, it did not prevent AAVE, like any language system, is The Gift
my attempts to understand the fea- used as a means to identify rela- of Paying
tured patterns that influenced the tionships within the lives of African Attention
reading and writing development of Americans and use of AAVE often
my students. implies trust and respect between Whether we look out and see one
two people rather than disrespect or thirty African American students
The inquiry on African American or lack of intellect, and finally c) looking back we must ask ourselves
Vernacular English patterns was socioeconomic status had no bear- how much of their inherent linguis-
a challenge in the classroom. It ing upon the use of AAVE as nearly tic abilities are being nurtured to
required us to analyze discourses all conversations held throughout positively or negatively affect their
that were so ingrained in everyday the year had some element of AAVE literacy development. How much
speech and writing and make explic- but rather it affected the frequency of their linguistic aptitude are we
it the subtle nuances of vocabulary in which the AAVE features would engaging in during our instruction
and syntax choices in their emerg- occur in any given context. time in the classroom? Who, if not
ing literacy development. It meant the teacher, is ultimately respon-
monitoring myself during guided We began the year discussing with sible for bridging the gap between
reading practice to limit the inter- students the purpose of language in what the student brings into the
ruptions for a student’s fluency prac- terms of sociolinguistics and how classroom and what they need to
tice when they used common AAVE people alter language in different take away with them in order to be
featured syntax that did not interfere contexts for different purposes. I successful in life? And how are we
with their ability to comprehend took observation notes and recorded to communicate these concepts and
the story. It meant acknowledging their speech patterns in the class- ideas if we continue to only speak
their ideas in print could be written room and on the playground and from what we know and not what
in two language systems and find- looked for patterns to emerge that they understand. Consciously devel-
ing meaningful ways to highlight were characteristic of AAVE. I offered oping instruction with the African
spelling patterns in both and asking explicit models of instruction on the American Vernacular English
them to consider who their intend- patterns of AAVE found most com- Language Learner in mind may be
ed audience would be and respect- monly in their own speaking, read- the link between saying we care and
ing their wishes in the final editing ing, and writing and discussed their showing we care that they are truly
stages. It also meant finding a bal- use in context. We charted MAE successful in life.
ance between offering mentor texts sentence structures that utilized dif-
in both language systems during ferent word choices or word place-
read-alouds to encourage linguis- ment but implied the same meaning

18 Dialogue, Fall 2010


(Meza-Ehlert, continued from p. 7) the responsibility of thoughtfully
to describe people of non-European and inclusively helping students
ancestry. For example, E. Allison wrestle through the complex issues DIALOGUE
Dittus of East Hartford, Connecticut, surrounding ethnicity in our coun-
describes the phrase as, “Both grace-
ful and euphonious…a beautiful and
try. Our students, from every con-
ceivable background and culture,
Call for
descriptive folk idiom” (Safire 2). deserve nothing less. Manuscripts
Rinku Sen expresses how she “found
a home in the term” and that it is Works Cited
Spring 2011 Issue
“extremely useful for moving multi- Submission Deadline:
ethnic alliances” (Sen 2). In many Bahadur, Neha. "Ethnic Identity February 1, 2011
ways this phrase is an improvement Development: Challenges for
on similar terms that have been
Resourcefulness
Adolescents of "Minority" and
used in recent decades. The term Mixed Racial Backgrounds." Grand
“minority” is highly inaccurate in Rounds. UCSD School of Medicine,
that the demographics in a grow- San Diego. 8 June 2007. Lecture. At its foundation, the National
ing number of regions in the United Writing Project poses “core prin-
States are such that there are fewer Do The Right Thing. By Spike Lee. ciples” which serve as a model
Whites than other groups; this reali- Universal, 1989. DVD. for writing project fellows. One
ty is all the more clear when we look of NWP’s core principles states:
at the entire globe, which has such Eriksen, Thomas H. Small Places, “Knowledge about the teaching of
a relatively small White population. Large Issues: An Introduction to writing comes from many sources:
The term non-white is equally prob- Social and Cultural Anthropology. theory and research, the analysis
lematic because of its negative con- 2nd ed. London: Pluto, 2001. Print. of practice, and the experience
notations. As William Safire writes, of writing. Effective professional
“Why should anybody want to define Gates, Jr., Henry Louis. "Episode development programs provide fre-
himself by what he is not?” (2) 3." African American Lives 2. quent and ongoing opportunities
WNET. New York, New York, 2008. for teachers to write and to exam-
With this in mind, I am not calling Television. ine theory, research, and practice
for the eradication of the term “peo- together systematically.”
ple of color” from our discussions Guanipa-Ho, Carmen, and Guanipa
and writing, both popular and aca- A. Jose. "Ethnic Identity and What are the main sources that cat-
demic. I’ve thought hard in recent Adolescents." Ethnic Identity and alyze your own writing practice and
weeks and haven’t been able to Adolescents. SDSU EdWeb, Sept. teaching of writing in your class-
come up with the perfect, unprob- 1998. Web. 13 July 2009. <http:// room? How has your own knowl-
lematic phrase for when we want to edweb.sdsu.edu/people/Cguanipa/ edge about the teaching of writing
discuss as a group those Americans ethnic.htm>. been influenced or challenged by
who aren’t identified as White. research, analysis of practice and/
Instead, I am asking that we put Ridgeway, James. Blood in the Face: or your hands-on experience with
our heads together in schools and The Ku Klux Klan, Aryan Nations, writing? Which sources have been
communities throughout the coun- Nazi Skinheads, and the Rise of most effective in creating a writ-
try to be more creative in how we a New White Culture. New York: ing community in your classroom?
talk about the complex issues sur- Thunder's Mouth, 1996. Print. What resources have you culled
rounding race, ethnicity, culture and through professional development?
language. Perhaps we can resist the Safire, William. "On Language; What source, in particular, has
urge to oversimplify, eschewing neat People of Color." The New York challenged an existing approach
categories and allowing the blended Times Magazine 20 Nov. 1988: 18. to writing in the classroom? Which
messiness of our lived reality to New York Times. Web. 6 July 2009. sources do you see as most vital for
show up more often in the phrases <http://www.nytimes.com>. students as they navigate through
we use in discussion and writing. the writing process?
Sapp, Jeff. "How School Taught Me I
When I ask for students’ thoughts, Was Poor." Teaching Tolerance 35.1 Dialogue would like to receive your
rather than getting THE Latino view (2009): n. pag. Teaching Tolerance. work or the work of your students.
or THE Asian-American perspec- Southern Poverty Law Center. Web. Submit a story of student success,
tive, I’m going to ask for Jazmina’s 13 July 2009. <http://www.toler- a strategy for implementation, or
thoughts and Matt’s ideas and then ance.org/teach/magazine/>. a personal essay on your teaching
help them dig deeper to see how experience.
their own unique ethnic heritage Sen, Rinku. "Are Immigrants
might shape that answer. It may and Refugees People of Color?" Email all manuscript submissions,
even be possible that a teacher or ColorLines. N.p., n.d. suggestions, letters to the editor
student who reads this will coin a Web. 6 July 2009. <http://www.col- and/or Project Notes to
better, more descriptive, less hin- orlines.com/article.php?ID=227>. Jenny Moore at
dering phrase than “people of color” jenny4moore@hotmail.com
or any of the others that have been or to Janis Jones at
used over the years (I’ll be watch- aboriginals@cox.com
ing my email fastidiously). In the
meantime, as educators we bear
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