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Dialogue
A Publication of the San Diego Area Writing Project Fall 2010
Inside... How Far is Four Miles?
When Personal Essays Laura Pribyl—SDAWP 2009
Get Very Personal. . . . 4
Ann Zivotsky
The Language There are many things that make it difficult to be a teacher. Without doubt, any teacher
of Color. . . . . . . . . . . 5 could sit down and generate a lengthy list of challenges in minutes, both unique to them
Rob Meza-Ehlert and universal to the profession.
Moving Beyond ”If a doctor, lawyer, or dentist had 40 people in his office at one time, all of whom had differ-
Tolerance. . . . . . . . . . 8 ent needs, and some of whom didn't want to be there and were causing trouble, and the doc-
Christine Kané tor, lawyer, or dentist, without assistance, had to treat them all with professional excellence
for nine months, then he might have some conception of the classroom teacher's job.”
Young —Donald D. Quinn
Writers'
Camp . . . . . . . . . 10-12 Possibly one of the most insidious aspects of all is that with few exceptions, most teachers
Fiama Albarran work in a fairly constant state of isolation.
Frank Barone
Mason Brown “What does it mean to go through a work day with no sustained personal contact with an-
Ariel Foy other adult? Being and talking with children is not psychologically the same thing as being
Christiana Jimenez and talking with peers—and I am not suggesting that one is necessarily more satisfying than
Marissa Love the other, only that they are different. I am suggesting that when one is almost exclusively
Ally Deremer with children—responsible for them, being vigilant in regard to them, “giving” to them—it
Mayla Stern-Ellis must have important consequences. One of these psychological consequences is that teachers
Rachel Ulrich are psychologically alone, even though they are in densely populated settings.”
—Seymour Sarason, The Culture of the School and the Problem of Change
Finding Our Voices . . 13
Janet Ilko “Not only does isolation limit professional growth, but prolonged isolation reinforces a soli-
tary orientation to one’s work and often breeds defensiveness and finger pointing.”
Teaching the Writer: —Thomas L. Good, 21st Century Education A Reference Handbook
Voices from the Spring
Conference. . . . . . . . 12 One of the effects of this isolation is that many teachers within a district, even those who
Victoria Mossa-Mariani have been in it for years, have absolutely no idea what teaching is like at sites other than
Robert Gallo their own. We simply don’t know how the other half lives. Most teachers never mingle with
those from other schools, perhaps only once a year at a Summer Academy workshop. This
ignorance of life on the other side of the fence spawns the most egregious assumptions
Also included: and stereotypes, and certainly the above-mentioned defensiveness and finger pointing. I
experienced these personally when I moved from the least affluent school in our district to
SDAWP Fellows 2010. . 15 the most affluent. The former, located in the inner city, is known in the “lingua franca” of
Muse Box . . . . . . . . . . 17 our district as a “valley school.” I will refer to it as The Hood. My current site in suburbia,
SDAWP Notes . . . . . . . 17 known as a “rim school” in the local district parlance, I will term The Burbs.
Dialogue
Call For Manuscripts. . . 19 I, too was a victim of the ignorance isolationism creates. When I was in The Hood I as-
sumed that my colleagues in The Burbs didn’t care about disadvantaged kids, that they sat
Calendar of Events . . . . 20
in their privileged corner with perfect students who came to school clean and well fed,
who were effortless to teach because they had hundreds of books, computers, cell phones
and automatic toothbrushes; because they had had thousands of hours in museums, art
galleries, zoos, and exotic vacation wrote a grade on a paper, homework, quired diplomacy.
locales; because they spoke English; or a report card, that you would be
because their parents disciplined called to defend it with nothing less They thought they knew. But they
them, taught them manners, helped than your life. That GATE testing didn’t know.
them with homework, and person- was taken as seriously as a cancer
ally built their Mission Projects, biopsy. That if a child wasn’t doing They didn’t know about The Hood.
Leprechaun Traps, and Science Fair well, the only possible explanation The parents who never saw the
entries; and because they didn’t miss was simply your incompetence. I school because they were work-
God-knows-how-many-days a year didn’t know the hours you needed to ing three jobs to pay the rent in the
because of lice in their hair. I imag- put in planning over-the-top sorts of filthy, neglected apartment or be-
ined the legions of parent volunteers projects because the parents in your cause they’d never had the chance
who did everything for these teach- room who were helping were also to go to school in the country they’d
ers, short of brushing their teeth, watching everything you did and re- emigrated from or their education
and who treated them to lavish gifts porting it to everyone who wanted to had been interrupted by war or op-
at Christmas, including the much- listen. I didn’t know that sometimes pression or growing up in poverty as
rumored-about three-figure gift your principal would call you into well. They didn’t know that the ma-
card to Staples. They had it made. I the office and recite the complaints
thought. against you, and that would literally
be the first you’d heard of anything
I didn’t know
I thought I knew. But I didn’t know. because many parents would never
“waste their time” going to you di-
about the shrill,
I didn’t know about the shrill, de-
manding sorts of parents who insist-
rectly. I found out that having a law-
yer on call couldn’t hurt. demanding sorts of
parents who insisted
ed on seeing your resume before the
first day of school was over to ensure On the other side of the fence lies
that you were qualified to teach their The Hood.
future Ivy-League scholar. The par- on seeing your
ents who insisted the birthday cup- Most of my peers in The Burbs as-
cakes had to be served NOW at 10:15
in the morning, because you couldn’t
sumed this meant a class full of
poor, dirty, unruly students virtually
resume before the
POSSIBLY be doing anything more
important than celebrating Junior’s
impossible to teach because they
couldn’t speak English; because
first day of school
birthday. I didn’t know that when you their parents didn’t value educa-
tion and never returned homework
was over to ensure
or permission slips or set foot on
that you were
Dialogue school grounds, not even for parent-
teacher conferences; because they
were plagued by poverty, substance qualified to teach
Fall 2010 abuse, gangs, incarcerated or ab-
Issue No. 24 sent parents, homelessness, and in- their future
adequate parenting skills; because
Diversity and they were drug babies; because they
were unmotivated; because they had
Ivy-League scholar.
Democracy
the kind of behavior problems that jority of students were completely
Editors: Stacey Goldblatt required a degree in psychiatry to capable of learning if you just took
Jennifer Moore remedy; because they were in and the time to plug the gaps; that some
Co-Editor: Janis Jones out of school for a myriad of reasons, of them were GATE qualified too,
frequently because they had lice in if you knew how to look; that they
Layout: Janis Jones
their hair. had survival skills an Army Ranger
Photography: Janis Jones
would value; that with most of them
Marla Williams a lot of love, patience, humor, and
When I transferred to my school in
Writing Angel: Susan Minnicks The Burbs, the stereotypes were above all structure could circum-
waiting. Many of my colleagues as- vent the behavior problems; that
Published by the they brought amazingly interesting
sumed I would not be able to teach
San Diego Area Writing Project “high” children, that my expecta- tidbits of their culture to share; that
Director: tions would be in the cellar, that in the course of a school year, you
Kim Douillard GATE children at my old site were as would come to mean more to them
rare as unicorns and that I wouldn’t than you could ever know; that years
UC San Diego later you would wonder why you still
recognize one if it poked me with a
SDAWP horn, that I should be assigned only can’t throw out the cracked candle
9500 Gilman Drive the ELD students, struggling read- holder with the half-melted candle
La Jolla, CA 92093-0036 ers, and behavior problems because inside that you got for Christmas.
(858) 534-2576 that’s what “I was used to,” that I
http://sdawp.ucsd.edu/ would not be able to communicate I liken this mutual ignorance to
with educated parents with the re- the “Mommy Wars” phenomenon,
The Language
when she asked me what she should
write about in her persuasive essay,
I mentioned Arizona’s new immigra-
of Color
tion laws, and she cautiously bright-
ened at the idea of writing about
something she cared a lot about. But
researching the facts to support an
argument wasn’t thrilling her. So we
talked it out. Rob Meza-Ehlert—SDAWP 2009
“Should everyone who wants to
come to the United States be allowed
My ninth-grade students were work- important parts of most people’s
in?” I asked.
ing in pairs, trying to make sense of sense of identity that we need to
some fairly complex data on the find constructive ways to talk about
Vanessa thought so. I asked her
shifts in immigrant demographics these aspects of our lives. Child
about our own homes, and if we
throughout history. I knelt down psychiatrist Neha Bahadur points
would help someone else. We both
to listen in on one conversation. out that, “The awareness of race
agreed we would feed anyone who
Karla, a quiet Latina who fastidi- doesn’t come from the inside. You
needed a meal, and even let them
ously hides her GATE status from don’t think of it until somebody
sleep on our couch for a few nights
her peer group, was having a dis- else comes along and tells you that
if they were homeless. What if more
cussion with DeJone, a bright and you’re different” (3). The fact that
and more hungry, homeless people
gregarious young man of African- our identities are formed largely
came to our houses, would we let
American descent. through what is taught to us cre-
them in? No, Vanessa said, we would
ates the exciting possibility that we
run out of food and room and would
“Well,” said Karla, “I guess the big might be able to raise children in
have to shut the door.
difference now is that so many a society without racial and eth-
more colored people are coming to nic divisions. However, since this
“So,” I continued, “your mom was
the United States.” seems at best a distant possibility
sent back to Mexico?”
at this point in human history, my
“Whoah! You can’t say that!”
Vanessa nodded her head. Her fam-
responded DeJone. “Mr. M-E, can
ily entered the country illegally
and lived here for several years.
she say colored people? Isn’t that Talking about race and
kind of like old-school racist stuff?”
One year ago, the INS deported her
mother. Her family can’t afford to
I fumbled for a response. “Um, well. ethnicity is a tricky
DeJone’s right that most people
pay a coyote to help mom re-cross
consider it racist if you use the term business, whether
the border, and her mother can’t
apply for legal entry to the United
colored people. The phrase we use
today in academic writing and dis-
inside school or in
States because entering illegally
once gives her mother a criminal
cussion is people of color.” society at large.
record and disqualifies her. Vanessa
After a brief pause, DeJone’s face
can’t visit her mother in Mexico
took on a look of exasperation as he thinking on this issue is grounded
because Vanessa is still illegally in
said, “Now that’s dumb. Those two much more in a pragmatism that has
the country and her family is afraid
mean exactly the same thing. Who grown out of more than a decade in
she’ll be stopped at the border re-
came up with that?” the high school classroom. By the
entering the States.
time students reach my class they
Talking about race and ethnicity is have internalized countless mes-
I encouraged Vanessa to tell her
a tricky business, whether inside sages about race and ethnicity, and
story through her pesuasive essay,
school or in society at large. Since they possess at least a basic sense of
and my satisfaction came in seeing
ethnicity itself is so complex, any which groups are their groups.
that some of her anger and frus-
concrete terminology we invent to
tration lessened with the realiza-
try to describe it will naturally be By no means does this imply that a
tion that writing about the situation
an oversimplification that is fraught person’s identity is simply inherited
would give her a voice. The moment
with inaccuracies. Race and ethnic- and becomes set in stone by age
in our conversations that still makes
ity are often highly charged, emo- fifteen. To the contrary, Dr. Carmen
me smile is when Vanessa handed
tional concepts that go deep to the Guanipa-Ho states that, “Ethnic
in her essay and asked, “Do I still
roots of self-identity and sense of identity formation is a very complex
have to write a persuasive essay?” I
community. Furthermore, the his- process…involv(ing) an interaction
laughed. “No, this is your persuasive
torical and present-day realities of of contextual and developmental
essay. It may be the most persuasive
racism make discussion of cultural factors” (1). Students (and often
essay I’ve ever read by a student.”
identity all the more problematic. adults) are actively engaged in an
ongoing process of reflection and
Despite the challenges involved, adaptation of cultural viewpoints
racial and ethnic heritage are such as they figure out where they stand
Dialogue, Fall 2010 5
in our society. The language we than is taught” (3). other mixed children who end up
use to talk about race, ethnicity and with darker skin or more stereotypi-
culture in our classrooms should Since we wield such power in our cally Mexican features? If they are
promote this identity exploration in classrooms, it is vital that as educa- half “people of color” do we really
positive ways. tors we support students of all back- mean to teach them that they have
grounds as they explore and discuss another side devoid of color? Are
I am committed to helping students issues of race, class, and culture. there really any colorless people?
talk about race, culture, and ethnic
heritage in ways that affirm who Moving our dialogue beyond the What is meant by color, then, is
they are without marginalizing the phrase “people of color” is a key step something closer to “ethnicity” than
backgrounds of others. This is a towards creating inclusive, support- actual skin pigmentation (though the
commitment that all teachers in our ive learning environments. It’s not latter can affect how others might
increasingly diverse society need that the phrase is patently offensive attempt to categorize specific indi-
A
or destructive. It doesn’t even make viduals). Ethnicity, like culture, is a
my list of banned terms for my tough word to narrow down into one
What color are they, classroom, which typically directly short phrase. Eriksen’s definition of
target people’s gender, race, class or ethnic identity is a helpful starting
then? Are they some- sexual orientation. “People of color” point:
how less Latino than is a loaded term in much more
subtle ways. While DeJone pointed “Ethnic identity is...marked by…com-
other mixed children out that it is grammatically nearly
identical to the pejorative “colored
mon cultural, linguistic, religious,
behavioral or biological traits, real or
who end up with people,” we need to ask what we
mean by “color” in the first place.
presumed, as indicators of contrast
to other groups” (261).
darker skin or more
Color obviously references the pig-
stereotypically mentation in peoples’ skin that can We all have “color”
be seen when we look at one anoth-
Mexican features? er, but the concept is altogether because each of us
more complicated than what can be
to make. We must pay attention to ascertained through a mere cursory comes from a unique
what is said, how it is delivered, and glance. Peter Gomes, a theologian
set of cultural
m
even what goes unspoken in our at Harvard University, is an influ-
classes, because those choices can
greatly impact our students’ sense
ential African-American author and
preacher. Having a Black identity
characteristics that help
of identity. Perhaps because we’ve
all had some bad classroom experi-
has been an important part of his life
in the United States. However, he
make us who we are.
ences, a commonly held belief is recalls that when his parents mar-
that our education system is failing. ried on the island of Cape Verde, they In this sense, every single human
Many people believe teachers are were considered to be a mixed race being has an ethnicity. We all have
often unable or unwilling to impact couple despite the fact that by our “color” because each of us comes
students’ lives, a viewpoint mirrored modern American standards they from a unique set of cultural char-
in countless jokes with “teacher” as both were Black. By the standards acteristics that help make us who
the punch line (“What do you call of that time and place, his more we are. In this way, the fair-skinned
someone who keeps talking long light-skinned father was considered person from Scandinavia brings just
after everyone has stopped listen- White. Definitions of whiteness and as much “color” to the table as the
ing?” comes to mind). In contrast blackness, it seems, are more slip- brown-skinned Peruvian. Once we
to this low status, educators actually pery than many of us think (Gates). start thinking of all the genetic mix-
hold an immense amount of power in When one of my former students ture that has taken place through
the lives of young people. There are wanted to let me know that I was centuries of human civilizations, it
the amazing achievements of super- “cool” he announced to the class, becomes a mind-boggling oversim-
teachers such as Jaime Escalante “Mr. M-E is alright, he’s actually plification to narrow peoples’ whole
or Rafe Esquith, but most of us can black. He’s just high yellow.” His identity down to “of color” or white.
point to at least one teacher who reference to the hierarchical skin Moving beyond pigmentation, then,
embraced, inspired, and challenged color designations within the black requires leaving behind the anti-
us, even if they never made head- community was both entertaining quated language that reifies racially
lines. Sadly, we can also recall those and disturbing, hingeing as it does divisive categories. In a cultural-
teachers who, through harsh words, on proximity to whiteness and the ly diverse classroom, when I ask,
racism, or simple neglect, stole our ability to “pass.” My own children “So, how do students of color in the
joy or damaged our identity. Even are half-white and half-Latino, yet room feel about this quote?” I am
well-intentioned teachers can pass they inherited my skin and eye color by default telling some students in
on culturally destructive messages (rather than my wife’s black hair the class that they have color, while
by the way they design and imple- and brown eyes) and would fit into others are deemed colorless, cut off
ment their curriculum. In the essay the class photos at some Scottish pri- from their own roots in a specific cul-
“How School Taught Me I Was Poor,” mary school without too many ques- tural identity. This sends inaccurate
Jeff Sapp laments an educational tions. What color are they, then? and damaging messages to everyone
system in which, “More is caught Are they somehow less Latino than involved. In its most benign form,
6 Dialogue, Fall 2010
this may simply reinforce for stu- is that it assumes a relatively similar limitations of this solidarity; while
dents who identify as White that shared experience of being some- the mob moves on without destroy-
they are “just American,” devoid of thing besides “White” in America. ing the fruit stand, their mocking
any unique cultural heritage. At While this may be the case, peoples’ affirmations of the store owner’s
its worst, it might fuel the type of experiences can also be so vastly dif- “blackness” make clear that he cer-
search for roots in White supremacy ferent that it is disingenuous to cat- tainly isn’t a part of their group’s
groups disturbingly described by egorize the experience of millions experience on so many other levels.
James Ridgeway in the book Blood of individuals with one all-encom- The bridge that links them is just
in the Face. passing phrase. Whiteness itself has strong enough to walk across in the
been something of an elusive target moment, but couldn’t possibly hold
Some may argue that White over the centuries in America, as the shared weight of so many people
Americans shouldn’t be surprised any student of the experience of the dwelling together for very long.
to see a term like “people of color” Irish, Italians, Eastern Europeans
since Caucasians created (and or other groups now viewed as The implications for the classroom
benefited from) the very system of “White” will show. Just as people of are profound. I want to encourage
European ancestry have had vastly students to see that there are indeed
c
racial segregation based on skin
different experiences on America’s many shared experiences of discrim-
shores, non-Europeans have cer- ination and hardship for Americans
...I am encouraged tainly not shared one monolithic
experience in the United States.
based on race; I’m pleased when
these observations lead groups of
that this generation students to an increased sense of
Spike Lee skillfully illustrates this solidarity. However, I don’t want
seems more poised point in Do the Right Thing, one of to gloss over a multitude of dif-
the most powerful and controversial ferences and make students feel
to do this type of films ever produced about race in as if they should be united sim-
America. In the climactic scene, an ply because our phrase du jour is
transformative work angry group of mostly Black resi- one that lumps so many different
than any previously dents responds to the police killing
of the revered Radio Raheem by
backgrounds together. More impor-
F
Center for Research in Black Culture, prietor fends off his attackers with a
trace the phrase at least as far back
as French-speaking colonies in the
broom, shouting all the while, “Me
no white. Me no white. Me Black.
need to abolish
early 1800’s where the term gens de
couleur liberes, which translates as
Me Black. Me Black.” After a few
tense moments, one of the leaders
it outright.
''free people of color,” was used to of the group, Sweet Dick Willie,
describe people of African ances- says, “Korea is OK, man. Let’s leave tantly, I believe twenty-first century
try who weren’t slaves (Safire 1). him alone.” The mob is persuaded citizenship means striving to build
The phrase was used similarly in to move on without destroying his these bonds of solidarity across all
the United States more than two store, but shouts from the crowd dividing lines, including race and
hundred years ago, as a relatively mockingly echo, “Him no white. ethnicity. Rather than strengthening
positive term to denote those Blacks Him Black.” traditional divisions, my goal is to
who were not slaves. However posi- help students take a good hard look
tive it may have been at the time, This extraordinary scene, complete at discrimination, past and pres-
the terminology we use to describe with all of its racial stereotyping, ent, and then figure out how to
ourselves in the twenty-first cen- illustrates just how complicated unite to increase justice and equal-
tury shouldn’t be encumbered by group dynamics are when it comes ity. Walking through my campus
the racially-biased idioms of colo- to shared experiences. On the one at lunchtime and often observing
nial life over two centuries ago. We hand, Lee writes his characters in students of so many different back-
have slowly taken steps towards a such a way that they recognize, grounds socializing together, I am
more fully inclusive democracy, so even in the hazy thinking associ- encouraged that this generation
the very words we use should reflect ated with mob violence, that there seems more poised to do this type of
these changes. Rinku Sen, racial is some shared experience between transformative work than any previ-
justice advocate and publisher of these individuals from such differ- ously in our country.
ColorLines magazine, sums up this ent backgrounds; both groups have
point superbly when she argues, had to deal at some level with White So, what to do with the phrase “peo-
“It seems that now we need a new racism. Despite significant differ- ple of color?” There is no press-
term, as this nation changes with the ences in language, culture, historical ing need to abolish it outright. It
globe and changes the globe” (2). roots, and even class, there is a bond is clear that to many people it has
between the Black and Korean char- become more than just the phrase
Another potential problem with acters because of the fact that none most commonly used in our society
using the phrase “people of color” of them identify as White. Lee’s bril- (Meza-Ehlert, continued on p. 19)
liant writing, however, captures the
Dialogue, Fall 2010 7
Moving Beyond Tolerance
The Linguistic Difference Between Saying We Care & Showing We Care
Christine Kané—SDAWP 2004
Standard English is not the speech reading achievement, rather than acy acquisition for African American
of exile. It is the language of con- whether or not the student speaks students. We know that these same
quest and domination; in the United African American Vernacular students are exposed to daily print in
States, it is the mask which hides the English. This finding leads us to Mainstream Academic English text-
loss of so many tongues, all those wonder whether students who books and instruction delivered by
sounds of diverse, native communi- demonstrate a strong relationship teachers whose primary discourse is
ties we will never hear, the speech with African American Vernacular also Mainstream Academic English.
of the Gullah, Yiddish, and so many English should be promoted toward In recent light of No Child Left
other unremembered tongues. monolingual Mainstream Academic Behind requirements, the majority
—bell hooks English for academic purposes, of these teachers have more than
delineating their relationship likely received some training in the
As a collective entity of educators, to African American Vernacular strategies best applied to English
administrators, specialists, and English, or if these students should Language Learners. However, I
researchers we have undertaken the receive instruction in both language would not be surprised that many
task to improve the overall instruc- systems in order to promote the of these teachers do not purpose-
tional quality and services rendered inherent linguistic benefits of bilin- fully plan or implement ELL strate-
for our African American students. gualism. gies or instructional practices with
Numerous research studies have African American students in mind.
indicated that providing quality A study conducted by Craig & African American students who
instruction from qualified teachers Washington (2004) revealed that speak African American Vernacular
will improve the educational oppor- the shift students make moving English continue to be a linguistic
tunities afforded to all students in away from a strong relationship minority in our educational institu-
the classroom, including African with African American Vernacular tions.
...research studies have indicated that The lack of instructional support in
language development for African
providing quality instruction from qualified American students was never more
explicitly stated than in the nation-
teachers will improve the educational wide debate sparked due to the
Oakland School Board’s resolution
opportunities afforded to all students... for the implementation of an edu-
cational program that would focus
Americans. A strong correlation has English toward Mainstream on the nature and history of African
been found between oral language Academic English does not in fact American Vernacular English, at
development and its impact upon occur gradually over time but is the time referred to as “Ebonics.”
reading and writing development more of a precipitous drop during The assumption was that this pro-
for students in the emergent stage two distinct periods of their educa- gram would address the teach-
(e.g. Craig, Conner & Washington, tional experience. The first major er’s knowledge gap about African
2003; Loban, 1976; Scarborough, shift occurs between entrance into American Vernacular English,
2001; Storch & Whitehurst, 2002). kindergarten and the end of first begin the process of changing their
grade, where the student’s spoken attitudes about the language, and
The works of Craig & Conner (2006) discourse reveals a sharp decline help teachers figure out how to use
reveal that an African American in the morphological and syntacti- the rich and varied linguistic abili-
preschool student who demon- cal (morphosyntactic) features of ties of African-American children
strates either a very strong or a child African American Vernacular to help them become fluent readers
very weak relationship to African English. The second major shift and writers (Perry & Delpit, 1998).
American Vernacular English in occurs between second to third Unfortunately, the overwhelming
his/her oral reading of a wordless grade, where students experience backlash to the resolution from both
storybook has a positive correlation another sharp decline in morpho- the White and African American
to overall reading achievement ver- syntactic features of child African community on this issue caused
sus a student who only moderately American Vernacular English in its immediate cessation and the
identified with African American their oral reading. discrepancy between the literacy
Vernacular English. These findings achievement between White and
suggest that overall linguistic ability We know that these dramatic shifts African American students still lin-
is a stronger indicator of potential occur during pivotal periods of liter- gers in the classroom nearly three
8 Dialogue, Fall 2010
decades later. Although the move towards monolin- placed upon them by others mean
gual Mainstream Academic English that they will constantly have to
Language Learning: (MAE) is laced with good inten- prove their worth (p. 24). And final-
An Even Wider Perspective tions, it is detrimental to the literacy ly, from the PBS special Can You
development for some of our strug- Speak American?, a clip highlighting
If you’ve ever lucky enough to inter- gling African American students the work of Noma LeMoine in Los
act with one, much less a room full who receive mixed messages dur- Angeles showed explicit instruc-
of African American five- or six- ing guided reading practice, writing tion in both AAVE and MAE with a
year-olds, you will experience first- workshop and basic communication group of third graders that caught
hand intelligent articulate oral and in the classroom. Lisa Delpit warns my attention. These three literacy
written expressions in either African educators that when students enter events were the catalyst I needed
American Vernacular English and/
or Mainstream Academic English,
depending upon the student(s)’
...over the past eleven years
familiarity with these two lan-
guage systems. African American
I have witnessed the transformation
students are representative of any of a once lively communicative child in
English Language Learners (ELL)
or Linguistic Minority (LM), with kindergarten become more and more
a range of abilities in oral, read-
ing and writing development in subdued and muted by the end
both their home/community and
academic language abilities. They of the school year.
enter just like any other student in
the educational school system with into their classroom with an African to begin the inquiry practice on the
life experiences and measures of American Vernacular English dis- impact that AAVE had upon the lit-
confidence and self-worth that can course pattern in oral and written eracy development of my own first
be positively or negatively affected speech to recognize that this lin- grade students.
by their interactions with teachers, guistic form is intimately connected
administrators and school person- with loved ones, community, and Regardless of the fact that the lin-
nel. personal identity. She adds that "To guists define AAVE as a legitimate
suggest that this form is 'wrong' language system, to this day there
As an educator and literacy coach on or, even worse, ignorant, is to sug- still remains a silent stigma on AAVE
the site of a predominantly African gest that something is wrong with and very little to no formal instruc-
American student body, over the the students and his or her family. tion in teacher education programs
past eleven years I have witnessed On the other hand, it is equally in how to linguistically engage with
the transformation of a once lively important to understand that stu- speakers of AAVE. When we refer
communicative child in kindergar- dents who do not have access to to bilingual students or English
ten who becomes more and more the politically popular dialect form Language Learners we do not con-
subdued and muted by the end in this country, that is Standard jure up images of African American
of the school year. I believe that (American) English, are less likely boys and girls whose entire life has
we, as educators, whether implic- to succeed economically than their been spent here, enrolled in the
itly or explicitly, send a message peers who do….Teachers need to American public school system.
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I Imagine The Journey
—Claire Jones
The sea There is a journey
On another world in every written piece.
With as many colors There is a risk to be
taken, whether it is to
As a box of crayons
read or to write.
I envision an iced-over So be clever and
Glimmering expanse put something in
of frozen dreams the world that wasn't
there before.
I see a steel blue vastness
Invent and create
That spits out a world of description.
White foam onto Be an explorer, take the risk
Yellow sand and travel through a world of words.
OurVoices
has defined my work this year with
each of my classes. Our site faces
the same challenges that most urban
schools face. Our campus is truly di-
verse, with many languages and cul-
Janet Ilko—SDAWP 2009 tures. We are primarily low income,
and our surrounding neighborhood
represents the financial and social
struggles faced in our society today.
Beginnings urban middle school looked like. There are times our students have
I have always worked in an urban difficulties relating to adults and to
Journeys are interesting things; the environment, but the schedule and each other. We strive to bring under-
roads that wind and twist take us climate of a middle school was new standing and respect to our classes
to places that we didn’t intend, yet to me. One nice thing about going to each day. My students recognize that
somehow we end up right where we a site midyear is that you have a lot we have a long way to go in learning
belong. For me, that place is back in of freedom to learn. No one expected to respect and eventually even cel-
the classroom, taking my experienc- perfection from me; they were just ebrate diversity on our campus.
es as a coach and teacher leader into thrilled I truly wanted to be there. I
the world of middle school, and then tried many things in my writing pro- Through many class discussions I
to a new role of teacher researcher. gram and some worked and some learned my students were also feel-
Over the past two years I have redis- flopped. My students challenged ing they didn’t have a voice, or the
covered what is important, what in- me every step of the way, and yes, power to make any changes on their
spired me to teach in the first place, there were days where I threw up own. That is when I realized that
helping students find their voice. I my hands and cried. Students wrote our writing, our study of text, could
arrived at the doorsteps of the Sum- poetry, and stories, and narratives support the idea that young students
mer Invitational 2008 searching for about their lives. It was long, gruel- have the power to make change. I
my professional soul, looking to find ing work and we struggled together. learned early on that I had to dem-
what brought me to education over But by the end of the year, the writ- onstrate relevance to my students,
20 years ago. I spent the summer ing that my students created in their to make them feel that reading and
reading, writing, studying, and ques- writing weren’t just tools for school,
tioning all I had learned about edu-
cation and my students over the past
Journeys are but truly tools to use to make their
everyday lives better. “If we intend
20 years. At the time, I was out of interesting things; the to create citizens of the world, as
the classroom, working as a literacy
coach. I had spent the past five years roads that wind and twist most school districts claim in their
mission statements, then we need
in and out of the classroom and was
at a point of transition. I didn’t know take us to places that we to teach students how to use their
knowledge to create change…. We
it at the time, but that summer expe-
rience was preparing me for my next didn’t intend yet, must construct academic ways for
students to use the curriculum, to
chapter, to teach in an urban middle
school with all its joys and challeng-
somehow we authentically tie student learning
to the world” (8). It is important to
es. In an era of budget cuts, I awoke end up right where note that I do not have the freedom
one rainy December morning to dis- to choose my curriculum. Like most
cover that the rumors were true: the we belong. teachers, I work under the con-
funding for my coaching position straints of district-adopted text, pac-
was really gone, and that I would be memoir projects demonstrated their ing guides, and assessments. I also
returning to the classroom. It was willingness to take risks and their know that within that framework,
late on a rainy Friday afternoon, desire to put their lives on paper. creativity still can and must thrive.
right before winter break. I stood in I knew that project was a turning It was in January of this past year
a sixth grade classroom with a set of point, and I also knew that was the that social justice and the standard
keys and two teachers’ editions and type of fire and enthusiasm I wanted curriculum collided, bringing about
met briefly with the principal, vice to generate in the fall. This past Sep- some of the best work of my students
principal, and a few teachers as they tember, I was introduced to a text in to date.
all came to quickly welcome me to our SDAWP study group written by
the site before we went on vacation. Linda Christiansen, Teaching for Civil Rights is Not about Dead People
It was surreal, scary, and exhilarat- Joy and Justice. I knew after our first
ing all at the same time. I went home meeting that this text would help It was January of this year when a
and immediately emailed my Writ- define the lens from which my stu- major change occurred in our study
ing Project cohort, and within min- dents would view reading and writ- of literature, history, and writing.
utes received words of encourage- ing. My students felt a disconnect Our unit became not just a review of
ment as well as internet sources and between school and their world out the stories in the chapter, but also a
ideas on how to make the transition. in the community. “We don’t build study of civil rights and social justice.
I spent the following sixth months communities instead of working on In our core text we read non-fiction
just learning what that world of an academics. We build communities
Dialogue, Fall 2010 13
articles on Brown vs. The Board of lens through which to approach our that text. Students first watched the
Education, and biographies on Rosa reading. As we viewed videos and speech itself from a video on Discov-
Parks and Maya Angelo. We includ- read texts, we defined the charac- eryEducation.com. They then read
ed the novella The Gold Cadillac by ters into these categories taken from an excerpt from the speech and had
Mildred Taylor to better understand Christiansen’s work “Writing For to highlight five words they thought
the struggles the characters faced Justice” (85-95). were critical to the speech. From
when traveling from north to south those words they selected three to
to visit family in 1950. We spent Acting for Justice present to their table team and then
time in the computer lab studying each table selected one word that
Dr. Martin Luther King Jr., the Chil- Students read an article or story represented the essence of Dr. King’s
dren’s March, sit-ins, and various and identified who was the target, speech and the ideas of that time pe-
challenges faced during The Civil ally, bystander, or perpetrator in the riod. They wrote justifications for
Rights Movement. We tied the past to piece. The most important learning their choices. Students were allowed
the present with every poem, article, came when students realized that to choose their own words if they
and story. My students were passion- by categorizing characters or real disagreed with their table’s decision
ate about this time period and the people in this way, they had to take and write a rebuttal. It was a very ef-
struggles faced by those we studied. into account the perspective of the fective lesson in word study and de-
I knew this was an opportunity to person(s) doing the categorizing. bate. At the end of the lesson I cre-
show them the power of words over Point of view took on a whole new ated a list of about twenty-five words
violence, peaceful protest versus ri- meaning and relevance as students that students could consider using
ots, and most importantly, to try and had to justify why they believed a
empower them to speak and write character to be the target or the per- I wanted so much for
about the injustice they still feel to- petrator. In the case of Dr. King, it
day. And so it began. all depended on perspective. In the them to see the
eyes of many, he was a target of op-
Writing For Justice pression, but to others he was an ally struggles of the
Again referring back to the work of
in their fight for civil rights.
past mirror the
Christiansen, I was able to have my It was an eye-opening experience struggles they face in
students begin this unit of study in a for students to understand that a
whole new light. I wanted so much person could be a target, ally, and their own lives.
for them to see the struggles of the perpetrator all in the same situation
past mirror the struggles they face in just by looking at it from a variety of for their final projects. The second
their own lives. I hoped that as we perspectives. This translated well prewriting activity again focused
reviewed the text through the lens into their own lives as we discussed on words, this time quotes from his
of social justice, it would highlight classroom or school situations in speech. We read Martin’s Big Words
how words and actions have an im- which students felt they were vic- by Doreen Rappaport. From there,
pact on a situation. Everything we tims of injustice. Many times, when students selected a quote that meant
do or don’t do contributes to an out- looking at situations from others’ something to them. They created an
come. In other words, I was seeking views, they were able to realize they idea web and then wrote a response
to highlight those in the story who may indeed have felt they were a answering the following questions:
were powerless and those who were target, but others could easily have What do you think Dr. King meant
empowered. I wanted students to seen them as a bystander or even when he said these words? What does
reflect and question what differenti- a perpetrator. Our experience al- it mean to you today? Give an exam-
ates those who are powerless from lowed for greater understandings of ple of how it applies to your own life?
those who become empowered. We the struggles middle school students Why did you select this quote? Why
used the chart below to create a new experience every day and gave us a did it stand out to you? The third
common language in which to dis- prewriting activity addressed vocab-
Target: Ally: cuss or write about it. ulary and word study. Going back to
The person The person the key words students listed, each
who is the tar- who stand up Modern Expressions of Social Justice: student selected one word. Using
get of injustice for others The Power of Images and Words thesauruses, dictionaries, and online
(could be an sources, they created a word map to
individual or As a culminating project for this unit, include the definition for the word
I wanted students to understand the that applied to this speech itself, its
group)
power of words and to have an op- part of speech, and synonyms and
portunity to relate those powerful antonyms of the word. Students then
Bystander: Perpetrator: words of the past to their own lives had to write their own definition and
A person who Commits the today. We returned to Dr. King’s “I use it in a sentence that demonstrat-
observes the act of Have a Dream” speech as a common ed the meaning.
act of injus- injustice text. Now that students realized that
tice, but who this speech represented the voices Options for Publication
does nothing of many civil rights leaders and
to stop it the struggle itself, it became more Students responded to the speech
meaningful and powerful to analyze and unit in a variety of ways. Some
14 Dialogue, Fall 2010
students wrote diamante poems using their select-
ed words and published them in the computer lab
using both their words and one carefully selected
image that highlighted their message. The poetry
was so powerful that two were published in our
school newspaper and others were displayed in
Congratulations
our campus bulletin board for student discussion.
SDAWP Fellows
One period of students created a quote quilt. Stu-
dents wrote an interpretation of their selected Summer 2010
quote from the speech on one square. On another
square they created an illustration or collage that
used only images to represent their ideas. They
were then glued all together in a quilt and hung on
the wall in the classroom.
Heather Bice Mark Manasse
Coronado High Miramar Community College
My third option for students was to create a Glog- Coronado Unified San Diego Community Colleges
ster page about their quote. The website http://edu.
glogster.com allows students and teachers to cre-
ate online media posters filled with video, music,
sounds, text, and images. One period of students Janet Chaloux-Baum Jennifer Jo Mokiao
created a poster about their word they selected, in- Mission Estancia Elementary Sycamore Ridge Elementary
cluding all the word study criteria, and also includ- Encinitas Union Del Mar Union
ed images and the quote where their word is dis-
played. These posters were printed and displayed
in a case out in the hallway, and then again they
were presented at our parent night where students Jennifer Chance Jason Parker
proudly displayed their work to family and friends. Anza Elementary San Diego State University
For some of my students, this was the first piece Cajon Valley Union CSU San Diego
they had completed to “final edit” the entire year.
Each of these culminating activities had to include
how this study of civil rights and social justice ap-
plied to the world they live in today. By displaying Mark Dubé Casey Payte
our work publicly, students recognized the power Integrity Charter Middle Cardiff Elementary
of their words. Our poets were asked to write an National Cardiff
editorial on race relations on our campus and were
featured in our school newspaper the next month.
Students saw that their voices and their writing
made a difference. Linda Christiansen writes, “Stu- Jamie Esposita Miriam Sikking
dents need tools to confront injustice, they need San Diego Global Vision Academy Paul Ecke Central Elementary
to hear our approval that intervention is not only
San Diego Unified Encinitas Union
appropriate and acceptable, but heroic. Acting in
solidarity with others is a learned skill—one I hope
more of us will teach” (90). I agree with Chris-
tiansen, and know that teachers themselves need Judy Geraci Laura Smart
to stand up and confront the curricular issues we Albert Einstein Academy San Diego Global Vision Academy
face each day. We need to find ways to work within
the constraints of standardized testing and curric- San Diego Unified San Diego Unified
ulum, and always push to include relevance and
voice within the real world in which we teach.
Elizabeth Lonnecker Veronica Welch
Works Cited
San Diego High- Nubia Leadership Academy
Christensen, Linda. Teaching for Joy and Justice: Science & Technology San Diego Unified
Re-imagining the Language Arts Classroom. Mil- San Diego Unified
waukee: Rethinking Schools, 2009. Print.
Mindy takes over and we each receive a card with a mathematical repre-
sentation. We are tasked with finding our matches. As we begin to look for Writing’s Kiss
our equivalents, Mindy tells us to “think outside the box,” and I stumble Victoria Mossa-Mariani
into a group of percents. Next, we write definitions for the symbols on our
cards and share with our group mates. “We never talk about sets; that’s Shy at first and turned away
why I grouped you that way,” explains Mindy. This leads most groups into
interesting debates and side conversations. Then Mindy discusses how this Crayons wrote what words can’t say
kind of activity helps students. She contends that “lecturing and copying Scribbles from a child’s mind
demand little of students cognitively. Students need more action whether
it’s through think-pair-share activities or by asking them to explain or write Graduate to Valentines
about something in their own words.” But Ns in penmanship suppress
Mindy’s passion is evident but SDAWP time is fleeting. Before I know it, the The joy that beats in writer’s chest
session ends and I’m saying goodbye to colleagues and exchanging e-mail Over time words overcome
addresses with a new friend. It’s nice to know that there are more SDAWP
fellows in North County. And as I cruise home on Interstate 5, sunshine Authors’ themes are not undone
smattering my path, I meditate on the power of words, the promise that our And from the halls of letters come
students hold, and all of the inspiring possibilities alive in the San Diego
Area Writing Project.
What inspiration has begun