UPSR 英文写作技巧

描写时间的优美句子

1. 早上 In the morning
a. It was a bright and cheery morning 这是一个明亮又令人愉快的早晨。
b. The sun was bright on a breezy morning.这是一个凉风习习，阳光明亮的早上。
c. The morning was cool. 今天天气凉爽。
d. The sun was shining brightly on a Sunday morning.太阳明媚的照耀着星期天的早上。

2. 中午 in the afternoon
a. It was a warm afternoon. 这是一个炎热的中午。
b. It was a blazing hot afternoon.这是一个惹到燃烧的下午。
c. In the afternoon, the sun was scorching hot. 中午时分， 太阳仿佛热的烧焦起来。

3. 傍晚 in the evening
a. It was a windy Friday evening.这是一个多风的星期五傍晚。
b. As the sun set in the evening, …….. 当太阳下山的傍晚时分，…..
c. It was a cool and breezy evening. 这是一个凉爽和凉风习习的傍晚。（ 早或傍晚时可用）

4. 晚上 in night
a. It was a chilly night. 这是一个寒冷的晚上。
b. On a cloudless night, …. 在一个无云的晚上，…..
c. As the moon glowed brightly in the cloudless sky,…. 在一个月光皎洁无云的晚上，……
d. On a dark night,…. 在一个漆黑的夜晚，……

Closure for Essay 英语作为的结尾（优美句子）

1. 旅行/野餐（ Trip / Picnic）

a. It was sweet and memorable experience for them that they could never forget.
b. It was an interesting and memorable experience for them.
c. It was a wonderful trip and they had a lot of fun.

2. 意外/不好的经历（ Accident/ fire/ lost）

a. It was a dreadful experience that they hoped it would not happen again.

3. 好玩导致意外/ 做坏事/ 偷东西（ stealing / cheating…）

a. They had learnt their lesson and promised not to repeat the mistake.
b. They felt sorry for what had happened. It was a lesson well learnt for them and they would never forget
about.

4. 做义工/慈善/大扫除 （ charity/ gotong-royong）

a. Although they were (exhausted /tired ), they had a very meaningful day helping the needy.

5. 运动会/比赛得奖（ competition / sport day ）

b. His effort had finally paid off and he was so proud of himself.

6. 做好事/帮助人（ helping people）

 c. Suddenly – out of a sudden, out of the blue 忽然间
i. Out of the blue, he saw a thief snatched a woman’s handbag.

d. Without hesitation/ without thinking twice 二话不说/毫不犹豫

i. Without hesitation, Alex immediately chased after the thief.

e. Shouted loudly 高声大叫- shouted at the top of her voice

i. The woman shouted at the top of her voice for help.

f. thanked 感谢- thanked profusely, thanked gratefully

i. She thanked Alex profusely.

g. 其他例句
i. Witnessed the incident 目击事件发生
ii. With the help of a passer-by 在路人的帮忙之下

h. 结尾
i. Alex was (as happy as a lark/ on cloud nine) because he had done a good deed.
ii. The policeman praised him for his kindness/ honesty/ bravery.
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SECTION C QUESTIONS 2 写作技巧

S.P.A.C.
CCC SICCA
E
SETTING 背景 ( 开
头）
CUT WHO 谁
WHEN 什么时间
SIMILIES
WHERE 在哪里

PURPOSE 目的
（ 内容）
CHECK WHAT TO DO
想做什么
IDIOMS

ACTION 行动
WHAT ACTIONS
COUNT 做了什么 CONNECTIONS

CONCLUSION 结尾
（结束）
HOW THE ENDING CONJUNCTIONS
结尾

EMOTIONS 心情
HOW THE EMOTION
心情怎样 ADVERBS

SECTION C QUESTIONS 2 写作技巧

 CCC AND TSVC TABLE(写作保命招)
TIME/LINKERE SUBJECT VERB/VERB TO BE 动词 COMPLIMENT
时间 主语 补充词语
Yesterday, I went to school.
Last weekend, Andrew played Football with his friends
at the park.
Five minutes later, The firemen reached The fire scene.
At last, Thomas thanked The policeman for
helping him.
Example:
TIME/LINKERE SUBJECT VERB/VERB TO BE COMPLIMENT

Last Monday Alex was walking home from school

afternoon,
The was hot
sun
Alex felt hot and thirsty.
Luckily， He saw a hawker nearby a roadside.
He decided to buy a cold drink to quench
his thirst.

Last Monday afternoon, Alex was walking home from school. The sun was blazing
hot in the afternoon. He felt hot and thirsty. Luckily, he saw a hawker nearby a
roadside. He decided to buy a cold drink to quench his thirst.

UPSR 作文常见错误
1. 没有 past tense
a. Last Monday, I go to the park. ( go – went )
2. 错误使用 past tense
a. He was wrote an essay just now. ( 不要 was) ( 或 was wrote 改成 was writing)
3. To 后面没有用原本字
a. Ali wanted to joined the contest. ( to join )
4. 复数后面没有加-s.
a. After a few minute, his father came. ( minutes )
5. 没有放 articles ( a/ an/ the )
a. At last, we reach hotel ( a/the hotel )
6. Went 和 when 分不清
a. Went he reached the school, he saw his friends. ( when )
7. Arrive 后门没有放 at
a. We arrived the destination after an hour journey.( arrived at)(如用 reached 就不要 at)
8. 心情形容词没有放-ed
a. We are so exciting about our trip. ( excited)
9. 我 *I*的次序
a. I and my father went to Sabah last month. ( My father and I)