Describing a member of my family

My wife is called Mariela, we have been married for ten years, she is medium height and has
shoulder length, wavy, (la coma no es necesaria ya que estamos juntando varios adjetivos en
ordèn como se aprendiò en clases)brown hair and she has brown eye eyes( la palabra correcta es
“eyes” ya que hablamos de ojos no de un solo ojo), she build( ??, la palabra build quiere decir
construer, no tiene nada que ver con el texto) is thin because she (teniamos que poner el
pronombre personal para especificar a que persona nos referimos) likes to exercise exercising (la
palabra correcta es excersing no to do exercise, recordemos que con los verbos like, love y hate el
verbo va en ing)two time a week, my wife is a funny person and she likes to talk with person
people (la palabra correcta es people para referirnos al plural ,person es el singular) and help
them, she is altruistic and loves animals and (falto un conector para terminar la frase)I think she is
a beautiful person.

Describing my family

My family is formed for by (la palabra correcta es by no for) five members, they are my wife and
three children, .( aquì era un punto no una coma, para terminar la idea y seguir con la otra) My
older son is 11 years old, he has frizzy, short, black hair( las comas deben ser omitidas ya que
estamos poniendo adjetivos en orden como lo aprendimos en clase) and brown eye eyes( la
palabra correcta es eye no eyes, nos refirimos a los ojos no a uno solo) and his personality( esta
incorrecto este uso, lo correcto era: and he is a little… ) is a little reserved and calm, and ( lo
correcto era poner and y no una coma, para darle un conector a la idea final ) he likes videogames
and plays every day for an hour (aquì deberìa ir un punto para separar la idea) My middle son is 8
years old, he has short, curly, black hair ( las comas totalmente inecesarias)and brown eye(eyes no
eye), he is careful and likes to draw and feed his pets, he has two fish and two turtles, (lo correcto
es un punto para separa la idea ) My younger daughter is a baby, she is 4 years old and has long,
wavy, black hair (las comas deben ser omitidas)and brown eyes, she likes play( con las palabras
like, love y hate el verb va en ing) with her toys and soon ( la palabra correcta es then, para decir
despuès)she will go( lo correcto es decir goes ya que hablamos que es una rutina que sucede todos
los dìas) to the garden.

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