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Road to HKDSE 2020
Writing Notes 2 (One-sided Argumentative Essays)
Article
Title (標題)
段落 1
Introduction + Express your view (背景介紹 + 表達立場)
Body (內文)
段落 2
 標題句 + 論點一 + 總結句
段落 3
 標題句 + 論點二 + 總結句
段落 4
 標題句 + 論點三 + 總結句
段落 5
 駁論
段落 6
Conclusion (總結 + 對未來的期望)
Letter to the Editor

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Dear Sir/Madam, // Dear Editor,
段落 1
Aim of Writing + Introduction + Express your view
(寫信目的 + 背景介紹 + 表達立場)
Body (內文)
段落 2
 標題句 + 論點一 + 總結句
段落 3
 標題句 + 論點二 + 總結句
段落 4
 標題句 + 論點三 + 總結句
段落 5
 駁論
段落 6
Conclusion (總結 + 對未來的期望)
Yours faithfully,
Chris Wong
Chris Wong
A. 歷屆試題
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題目考核重點
1 HKDSE English Practice Paper Q6 (Letter to the government) a. Write a letter to the
Secretary of Education
Learning English through Sports Communication
b. Expressing your views
There is talk of certain schools removing PE lessons from the curriculum so
students can concentrate more on academic subjects. Write a letter to the
Secretary of Education expressing your views on the proposal.
2 HKDSE English 2012 Q2 a. Virtual sports vs real

sports
Learning English through Sports Communication (forum post)
b. Write your view on the
You have been following an online debate in Health and Fitness eMag about online forum.
the value of doing virtual sports (such as those played on a Wii) versus real
sports. Write your view on the topic and post it on the online forum.
3 HKDSE English 2012 Q3 a. Learning cannot take

place through drama
Learning English through Drama (forum reply)
b. Writing your response
You have been surfing a website on the use of drama techniques in on an online forum
education. You have seen the following topic on an online forum and are now
c. What is your opinion?
writing your response.
d. Share your experience
Many teachers incorporate drama into their lessons as they feel it has
various educational benefits. However some parents are against this as
they feel that learning cannot take place through drama. What is your
opinion? Please share your experience of learning through drama with
us!
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4 HKDSE English 2014 Q4 a. Filming movies in the
city centre
Learning English through Social Issues (Letter to the Editor)
b. Write a letter to the
Some people believe that filming movies in the city centre should not be editor
allowed. Others support it. Write a letter to the editor of the Hong Kong Daily
giving your opinions. Provide three reasons to support your point of view. c. Giving your opinions
5 HKDSE English 2014 Q5 a. A small number of

students in your school
Learning English through Debating (Letter to the principal) have access to school
lockers
Learning English through debating Currently, only a small number of students
b. Write a letter to your
in your school have access to school lockers. As the chairperson of the
school Principal
Student Union of your school, you have collected the views of students from
different classes on this issue. Write a letter to Ms Lee, your school Principal, c. Persuade her to
change the policy on
to persuade her to change the policy on lockers.
lockers
6 HKDSE English 2015 Q5 1. Write to the editor of
Learning English through Debating (Letter to the editor) the Hong Kong Daily
Many parts of Hong Kong’s harbour front are still undeveloped. Some suggest 2. Stating your opinion on
using these areas for housing and commercial use, while others argue that whether undeveloped
such areas should be left as open space for public use. Write to the editor of areas in the harbour
the Hong Kong Daily stating your opinion either for or against leaving these front should be used for
areas open for public use. Justify your point of view with three reasons. housing and commercial
purposes or left open for
public use
3. Provide three reasons

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7 HKDSE 2016 Q2 (Letter to the Editor) a. Schools should allow
the public to use their
sports facilities after
Because of the lack of sports facilities, some people in your community have
school hours
suggested that schools should allow the public to use their sports facilities
after school hours. b. Stating your opinion
with three reasons
Write a letter to the editor of the Hong Kong Daily stating your opinion.
Support your opinion with three reasons.
8 HKDSE 2016 Q3 (Article) a. Graduates who fail to

find a job in Hong Kong
Learning English through Workplace Communication
could look for
Many Hong Kong graduates complain about the lack of employment
opportunities in other
opportunities in the city. It has been suggested that graduates who fail to find
cities in Asia
a job in Hong Kong could look for opportunities in other cities in Asia. Do you
support this suggestion? b. Expressing your views
with three reasons
Write an article for your school magazine expressing your views. Give three
reasons to support your views. Provide an appropriate title for your article.
9 HKDSE 2016 Q4 (Letter to the Editor) a. Some parents in Asian

countries are installing
Learning English through Debating
apps on their
It has recently been reported that some parents in Asian countries are
children’s mobile
installing apps on their children’s mobile phones that monitor their activities
phones
to ensure that they use these devices responsibly.
b. use these devices
Write a letter to the Young Post stating whether you agree with these responsibly
parents’ actions or not. Justify your position with three reasons.
c. Justify your position
with three reasons
10 HKDSE 2017 Q4 (Essay) a. You have been looking

at plays about romantic
“Did my heart love till now? For I never saw true beauty till this night.”
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Romeo and Juliet – Shakespeare love
In your drama lessons you have been looking at plays about romantic love. b. Is Romantic Love
Necessary for a Happy
Your essay assignment from your drama teacher is to answer the question: Is
Marriage
Romantic Love Necessary for a Happy Marriage?
c. Write your essay
Write your essay.
11 HKDSE 2017 Q6 (Debate Speech) a. Argue that “Watching
TV Makes Us Smarter
As captain of the debate team you have been asked to write a debate speech. b. Support the statement
The task is to argue that “Watching TV Makes Us Smarter”. c. Include three reasons
d. Write a debate speech

In your speech you should include three reasons to support the statement.
Write your speech.
12 HKDSE 2017 Q8 (Article) a. Use the title and

headings below to
support the idea of
Unlike swimmers or basketball players, dancers are not traditionally thought of dancers as athletes
as athletes. As a member of your school’s dance team you have been asked to
b. Write an article
write an article for your school magazine. Use the title and headings below to
support the idea of dancers as athletes.
Dancers Are Athletes
 Physical Strength and Skills
 Self-discipline & Training

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13 HKDSE 2017 Q9 (Letter to the Editor) a. Many Hong Kong fresh
university graduates
are less hard-working
It has recently been claimed that in the workplace many Hong Kong fresh and less willing to face
university graduates are less hard-working and less willing to face challenges challenges compared
to those in the past.
compared to those in the past.
b. You strongly disagree
You strongly disagree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the
with this opinion
Hong Kong Daily disagreeing with this opinion. Support your view with three
c. Write a letter to the
reasons and/or examples.
editor
d. Support your view with

three reasons and/or
examples
14 HKDSE 2018 Q2 (Blog – Informal) a. You recently ran the

Hong Kong Marathon
You recently ran the Hong Kong Marathon for the first time. b. Write a blog to be
posted on the Hong
Write a blog to be posted on the Hong Kong Marathon’s website to
Kong Marathon’s
encourage other young people to take part in the next marathon.
website
c. Encourage other young

people to take part in
the next marathon
15 HKDSE 2018 Q5 (Debate Speech) a. Write a debate speech
Learning English through Debating b. arguing for OR against

You are representing your school at an inter-school debating competition. The the abolition of the
motion is: “The policy of reporting students’ class position should be class position system
abolished”.
Write a debate speech arguing for OR against the motion.
16 HKDSE 2018 Q7 (Article – Semi-formal) a. show video-recordings

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Learning English through Drama of live drama
The Hong Kong Academy for Performing Arts (HKAPA) wants to encourage performances from
more people to watch stage plays. To do this, they want to show video- theatres all over the
recordings of live drama performances from theatres all over the world. world
b. Write an article for

You have just watched one of these recordings. Write an article for Showbiz
Showbiz magazine
magazine discussing whether these recordings are a good way to attract
c. discussing whether
more people to watch stage plays. these recordings are a
good way to attract
more people to watch
stage plays
17 HKDSE 2019 Q3 (Essay -- formal) a. Write an

argumentative essay
The Hong Kong Daily Press invites readers to express their views on the b. Choose one side of the
following topic: argument
Do social media platforms such as Facebook and Twitter encourage or stifle c. Include a title for your
essay
public debate? When first created, the social media was thought to be a place
where rational debate and logic would thrive. However, as time has shown,
this is not always the case.
 Write an argumentative essay.

 Choose one side of the argument and state your position, giving
reasons and evidence to support your view.
 Include a title for your essay.
B. 框架
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Article
標題
Paragraph 1 1. 帶出題目
(介紹) 2. 介紹正反觀點
3. 清楚表明你的立場
Paragraph 2 1. 標題句
(論點一) 2. 詳細解釋 (普遍情況、個別例子、比較)
3. 總結句
(論點二) 2. 詳細解釋 (普遍情況、數據、個別例子、比較)
3. 總結句
Paragraph 4 1. 反方觀點
(駁論) 2. 讓步，承認對方的觀點有一定的合理性
3. 反駁句
4. 詳細解釋 (普遍情況、數據、個別例子、比較)
5. 總結句
Paragraph 5 1. 重申立場，歸納所有論據
(總結) 2. 對未來的展望
Letter to the Editor
Dear Sir/Madam,
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(介紹) 2. 介紹正反觀點
(論點一) 2. 詳細解釋 (普遍情況、個別例子、比較)
3. 總結句
(論點二) 2. 詳細解釋 (普遍情況、數據、個別例子、比較)
3. 總結句
(駁論) 2. 讓步，承認對方的觀點有一定的合理性
3. 反駁句
5. 總結句
(總結) 2. 對未來的展望
Yours faithfully,
Chris Wong
Chris Wong
標題 Total smoking ban is essential

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(介紹) Example: In recent years, the issue of total smoking ban has caused controversy in our
society.
2. 介紹正反觀點
Example: As for the business sector and investors, they believe that a territory-wide smoking
ban in all entertainment venues is detrimental to their business. However, others think that
if entertainment venues such as mahjong parlours are exempted, public health will be
jeopardized.
Example: In my opinion, it is urgent for the government to implement total smoking ban in
Hong Kong. In the following, I will explain my arguments.
(論點一) Example: To start with, we should note that the importance of health outweighs the
economic impact of imposing a total ban on smoking.
2. 詳細解釋 (普遍情況、個別例子、比較)
Example: It is apparent that smoking is harmful to our health. As we all know, smoking could
result in a few nasty side-effects, such as bad skin as well as poor breath and fitness. If we are
smokers, we will frequently pant after doing intense exercise. More importantly, smoking can
cause lung cancer and heart disease, which lead to death. According to scientific research in
recent years, second-hand smoke is even more toxic and fatal than first-hand smoke.
3. 總結句
Example: Therefore, preventing smokers from killing themselves and others, including both
customers and staff, is an urgent public health issue.
Many people suggest imposing a total smoking ban in our city. Write an article to express your view.
(論點二) Example: In addition, total smoking ban can improve the safety in entertainment venues.
Example: In Hong Kong, it is common to find these venues in the old buildings in old districts like
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Sham Shui Po and Yau Ma Tei. As everyone knows, abandoned cigarettes often lead to fire. In
case of a fire, smoke can spread to different areas rapidly. To make the matters worse, the
evacuation routes of old buildings are sometimes blocked by rubbish. If a serious fire breaks out,
customers of entertainment venues will not be able to escape from the scene and heavy casualties
will result.
3. 總結句
Example: Hence, it is essential for the government to adopt total smoking ban.
(駁論) Example: Despite the arguments above, many people still emphasize that territory-wide smoking
ban will significantly reduce the number of customers in entertainment venues and exacerbate the
unemployment problem.
2. 讓步，承認對方的觀點有一定的合理性
Example: Undeniably, the ban will adversely affect the business of these venues.
3. 反駁句
Example: Nevertheless, we should remember that the health cost of smoking is tremendous.
Example: According to a research done by Hong Kong University, the annual cost of treating the
diseases related to smoking is over 5 billion dollars. As mentioned above, smoking is a culprit of
chronic diseases like lung cancer and heart disease. Since most people in Hong Kong consume
public medical services, the cost of treating smokers will pose a huge financial burden to our
government.
5. 總結句
Example: Considering the cost and benefits, territory-wide smoking ban should definitely be
implemented for the sake of the welfare of our whole society.
(總結) Example: In conclusion, the government should implement total smoking ban as it can safeguard
the health of the general public and prevent fire disasters. While it will engender short-term
economic pain, the colossal long-term cost of smoking will be minimized.
2. 對未來的展望
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Example: Therefore, the government should not hesitate anymore. It should adopt the measure as
soon as possible.
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HKDSE English 2014 Q4 (One-sided argumentative essay)
Learning English through Social Issues
Some people believe that filming movies in the city centre should not be allowed. Others support it. Write a
letter to the editor of the Hong Kong Daily giving your opinions. Provide three reasons to support your point of
view.
上款 Dear Editor
Paragraph 1 1. 寫信目的
開場白 I am writing to express my views on movie filming in the city centre.
2. 概述相反觀點
In view of the recent hot debates on this controversial issue, I understand that there are still
many concerns and worries about it.
1. 明確表明觀點
However, after considering the interests of citizens, our city’s development and the need of
promoting our local culture, I believe it is advisable for the government to give the green
light to the idea.

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To commence with, many Hong Kongers are movie fanatics and they would like movies to
論點 1
be filmed in the city centre, which is symbolic and meaningful to them.
2. 詳細解釋
In the old days, local movies gained popularity all over the world. Sad to say, the local
cinemas are now dominated by foreign movies like Hollywood films and Korean films. The
reason why local movies are lagging behind is that the sites where their filming is carried
out are not realistic and attractive enough to draw attention of the local audience.
To enable local movies to capture the hearts and minds of Hong Kong people, allowing
movies to be filmed in the city centre is necessary without a shadow of doubt. When films
are shot at distinctive local landmarks, like the IFC Tower in Central and the Clock Tower in
Tsim Sha Tsui, local residents will be more eager to watch them.
3. 總結句
Having a strong sense of belonging to the city, many Hong Kongers will proudly tell the
foreigners that our city has our own films too!

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It is also worth noting that allowing filming in the city centre can boost the movie industry
論點 2
and consolidate the sustainable development of the Hong Kong economy.
2. 詳細解釋
As everyone knows, Hong Kong is a cosmopolitan city recognized as a significant
international financial centre. Other than the financial industry, however, Hong Kong’s
development in other industries leaves a lot to be desired. Arguably, the overemphasis on
finance is detrimental to the sustainable development of Hong Kong.
For the sake of diversifying the local economy, it is essential for the cultural industry to be
promoted. While the government may find it difficult to conserve the cultural heritage
owing to limited land supply, it should do its utmost to facilitate the growth of the film
industry. Through promoting Hollywood movies can the USA earn billions of dollars every
year. In the same vein, the Hong Kong government should accelerate the development of
the local movie industry by allowing filming to take place in the city centre.
4. 總結句
In the long run, the Hong Kong economy will benefit immensely from the blossoming movie
industry.
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Furthermore, local movies filmed in the city centre can attract the attention of foreigners
論點 3
and promote the development of tourism.
2. 詳細解釋
Through watching our movies, foreign people will be able to capture the breathtaking
scenery of our city centre, ranging from the magnificent night view of the Victoria Harbour
to the dazzling street culture of Mong Kok. Besides, they can have a glimpse of the lifestyle
of Hong Kong people. When local movies featuring the beautiful places of Hong Kong are
circulated overseas, more and more foreigners will be galvanized to visit Hong Kong so that
they can understand more about our city, stimulating our tourist industry and bringing
enormous economic benefits to us.
3. 總結句
Through allowing movies to be filmed in the city centre , not only will Hong Kong enjoy
sustainable economic growth, our local culture and custom will also be promoted.
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Paragraph 5 1. 承接上文
As mentioned above, filming movies in the city centre can stimulate the development of
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tourism and sustain local economic growth.
2. 相反觀點
Some people may put forward the idea that filming movies in the city centre would create
disturbance for citizens, affecting the normal operation of our city.
3. 讓步
Undeniably, this may be true in some cases.
4. 反駁句
Nonetheless, we should recognize that the effects are temporary.
5. 詳細解釋
It is worth remembering that the shooting of local movies are often carried out for short
duration, for example, for one to two weeks. More importantly, as a responsible government
and citizens who truly love Hong Kong and safeguard the interests of Hong Kong, they should
place the city’s long-term prosperity at the top of the priority list. If filming is allowed in the
city centre, the movie industry and hence the tourist industry will become the pillars of the
Hong Kong economy, sustaining our economic development in the long run.
6. 總結句
Surely, the tremendous economic benefits brought by filming in the city centre will
significantly outweigh the short-term pain suffered from by local citizens.

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Paragraph 6 1. 總結論點
Judging from the above aspects, it is crystal clear that allowing filming in the city centre
結論
does more good than harm to Hong Kong.
2. 諒解市民疑;慮
While I understand that the government has to strike a balance between development and
citizens’ interests, everyone can rest assured that promoting our filming industry will benefit
citizens in the long run. It is definitely going to be a blessing for all.
3. 對未來的期盼
So why still hesitate? Let’s take swift action now to allow filming movies in the city centre. I
am looking forward to seeing the blossoming of the local movie industry and watching local
movies that can showcase the beauty of Hong Kong to the world.
下款 Yours faithfully,
Chris Wong
Content 7/7 6/7
Language 7/7 6/7
Organization 6/7 6/7
Total 20/21 18/21
38/42 (5**)
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HKDSE English 2014 Q4 (One-sided argumentative essay)
Learning English through Social Issues
Some people believe that filming movies in the city centre should not be allowed. Others support it. Write a
letter to the editor of the Hong Kong Daily giving your opinions. Provide three reasons to support your point of
view.
上款 Dear Editor
Paragraph 1 1. 寫信目的
開場白 I am writing in support of filming movies in Hong Kong.
2. 概述相反觀點
Recently, there has been news about the local citizens having conflicts with people filming
movies in Central. They claim filming movies causes disturbance to their lives, and thus they
believe that filming movies in the city centre should be prohibited.
3. 明確表明觀點
Yet, after considering both the merits and demerits of filming movies in Hong Kong in the
long run, it is my conviction that it should be allowed.

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To commence with, filming movies in the city centre can attract more tourists to come to
論點 1
Hong Kong.
2. 詳細解釋
This is simply because during the filming process, the environment of the city centre will be
utilized as the background of the films, which will then be circulated in different countries
worldwide, including Britain, Australia, the USA and Japan thanks to globalization. Not only
do people in these countries gain a better understanding of Hong Kong, they may also flock
to Hong Kong owing to the dazzling local culture. A forceful illustration is that if the movies
filmed spot the local food culture such as stinky tofu, egg puffs and fake shark fin soup in
Mong Kok, they may find the food appealing and would like to visit Hong Kong. Apparently,
filming movies in the city centre is conducive to promoting Hong Kong’s local culture to
people from all over the globe. As a consequence, more tourists would swarm to Hong
Kong, boosting its tourism by leaps and bounds.
3. 總結句
With the ripple effect on all walks of life, local economic development can be stimulated
and the quality of life of Hong Kong people can be improved.

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Another point to be noted is that allowing movies to be filmed in the city centre is beneficial
論點 2
to enhancing Hong Kong’s reputation and image internationally.
2. 詳細解釋
Echoes of the Rainbow, which is a movie filmed in Wing Lee Street, was awarded an
honourable prize at the 2010 Berlin Film Festival. After that different media groups such as
New York Times, BBC and Yahoo News reported the news worldwide. As a result, Hong
Kong has gained popularity internationally. With this in mind, it doesn’t take much to realize
that if the movies filmed in the city centre are awarded prizes, Hong Kong can grab the
world’s attention as it once did.
3. 總結句
This, without doubt, can promote Hong Kong as a cosmopolitan city, enhancing its image
and reputation.
Alongside boosting Hong Kong’s prestige, in no way should we overlook another benefit –
論點 3
local citizens can broaden their horizons about movies.
2. 詳細解釋
As we all know, local citizens rarely have chances to watch movie filming in Hong Kong.
Movies, be it the local ones or the international ones, are usually filmed overseas.
Nevertheless, if there is an once-in-a-lifetime opportunity that movies can be filmed in the
beautiful city centre, Hong Kong indisputably should grasp this precious chance.
Consequently, Hong Kong’s citizens can gain an insight about how movies are filmed. What
is more worth noticing is that they can witness the breathtaking scenes of the movies
through their eyes instead of the eyes of the camera and they can witness renowned movie
stars including Angelina Jolie, Emma Watson and Jay Chou!
3. 總結句
Under this line of thinking, it is an incontestable truth that allowing movies in the city centre
enables local citizens to broaden their horizons and widen their perspective.
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Paragraph 5 1. 相反觀點
Those opposing my stance may claim that filming movies in the city centre causes severe
駁論
disturbance to the local people, such as traffic jams and the closure of shops.
2. 讓步 + 反駁
However reasonable this argument seems to be, we should think about the following
questions: Is the inconvenience temporary or permanent? Do people enjoy watching famous
stars acting? Do the opportunities that movies are filmed in the city centre always exist?
What I believe is that the long-term benefits significantly outweigh the short-term pain of
filming movies for one to weeks.
3. 總結句
For the sake of Hong Kong’s long term development and citizens’ interests, filming movies in
the city centre should definitely be allowed.
Paragraph 6 1. 總結論點
All in all, taking all aspects into consideration, it is my firm conviction that filming movies in the
結論
city centre should be allowed. We should bear in mind: It is the movies filmed in the city
centre that can attract tourists to flock to Hong Kong and benefit the economy; it is the movies
filmed in the city centre that can boost Hong Kong’s reputation and image internationally; it is
the movies filmed in the city centre that can enable local citizens to broaden their horizons.
2. 對未來的期盼
After all, this is a precious opportunity that cannot be missed by Hong Kong.
Chris Wong
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Content 7/7 7/7
Language 6/7 7/7
Total 19/21 21/21
40/42 (5**)
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HKDSE English 2014 Q5 (Letter to the principal)
Learning English through debating Currently, only a small number of students in your school have access to school
lockers. As the chairperson of the Student Union of your school, you have collected the views of students from
different classes on this issue. Write a letter to Ms Lee, your school Principal, to persuade her to change the policy
on lockers.
上款 Dear Ms Lee,
Paragraph 1 1. 寫信目的 + 代表機構
介紹 I am writing to venture my opinion on the policy on lockers on behalf of the Student Union.
2. 概述問題
Recently, we have collected the views of schoolmates of different classes on the issue of
allowing only few schoolmates to have access to school lockers. After analyzing the views
collected, it can be concluded that most schoolmates are opposed to such a policy.
3. 表達期望
We hope that the school can change the policy on lockers owing to convenience and fairness.
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To commence with, changing the policy on lockers can bring convenience to all
理據 1
schoolmates.
2. 詳細解釋
Every day, all schoolmates need to carry a large pile of textbooks, the weight of which is too
heavy even for an adult, let alone a teenager with underdeveloped muscles. Regarding
junior form students, they have multiple Physical Education lessons and Home Economics
lessons every week. The tools, the materials and the uniform involved result in schoolmates
carrying two to three handbags, in addition to their schoolbags. Other than the great
inconvenience caused to junior form schoolmates, their senior form counterparts also
suffer. With a view to preparing for the HKDSE, many senior form students have to attend
supplementary lessons at school and extra lessons at tutorial centres. We can imagine how
clumsy it is for a teenager to carry a heavy school bag and two environmentally-friendly
handbags packed with teaching materials and rush to the MTR station nearby after school.
Apparently, the burden that schoolmates shoulder is unbearable.
3. 總結句
Changing the policy on lockers will definitely making going to school more convenient for
schoolmates and alleviate the aforementioned problems.

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In addition to convenience, impartiality is essential, if not indispensable, concerning the

理據 2
locker policy.
2. 詳細解釋
Due to the fact that only the athletes representing the sports teams of the school can have
access to school lockers, they are considered superior in other schoolmates’ eyes. According
to the views collected, many schoolmates aired their grievances about the favouritism of
teachers towards the athletes regarding their exclusive right to use the school lockers. Not
being equally treated, many students have developed a sense of inferiority and hatred
towards the elite athletes. Not only will this phenomenon jeopardize normal schoolmates’
self-esteem, the harmonious atmosphere of the school will be destroyed given the great
discontent towards the athletes.
3. 總結句
In a bid to rectify the above problems, changing the policy on lockers to allow access by all
schoolmates is crucial as it can uphold the fairness and equality in our school.
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Paragraph 4 1. 相反觀點
Some teachers may claim that changing the locker policy will lead to chaos when all
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students gather around lockers for taking out various textbooks and materials prior to the
commencement of lessons.
2. 讓步
Undeniably, it may take our schoolmates some time to get their textbooks from the lockers.
3. 反駁句
Nevertheless, we should recognize that this will not necessarily lead to chaos as long as
students are disciplined.
4. 詳細解釋
With the courteous attitude of all of our schoolmates, we believe they are self-disciplined
enough to line up in an orderly manner when getting their personal belongings from the
lockers. On condition that the lockers are designed systematically according to schoolmates’
class numbers and the location of their seats, the whole process will be smooth. It is also
worth remembering that there is a 10-minute interval between each lesson. Evidently, the
adequate time available for our students will prevent chaos.
5. 總結句
Therefore, changing the school policy on lockers will not disrupt the normal operation of
our school.
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Paragraph 5 1. 總結理據
To conclude, equal access to lockers can provide our schoolmates with convenience and
結論
ensure that every student is treated impartially regardless of their capabilities.
2. 期望改變政策
Hence, we sincerely hope that the school can address the concerns of schoolmates by
changing the policy on lockers and create a more favourable environment for all of us.
Yours sincerely,
Chris Wong
Chris Wong
Chairperson of the Student Union
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Many parts of Hong Kong’s harbour front are still undeveloped. Some suggest using these areas for housing and
commercial use, while others argue that such areas should be left as open space for public use. Write to the editor
of the Hong Kong Daily stating your opinion either for or against leaving these areas open for public use. Justify
your point of view with three reasons.
上款 Dear Editor,
Paragraph 1 1. 陳述正反觀點
Tung Chung, Kwun Tong, Central, Sai Kung, to name but a few – these places all bear a striking
介紹
resemblance of their undeveloped harbour front. Recently, a controversy has been stirred up on
whether the harbour front should be open for public use or used as commercial buildings or
housing, and some even contend that utilizing the harbour front for commercial and residential
purposes is more beneficial to Hong Kong.
2. 明確表達立場
After considering both the benefits and drawbacks, it is my firm conviction that leaving the
harbour front as public use is a more sensible choice in the long run.
To commence with, leaving the harbour front for public use can preserve the natural environment.
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2. 詳細解釋論點
Nowadays, Hong Kong has long been stigmatized as a concrete jungle, suggesting that undue
emphasis has been laid on commercial development and housing provision in Hong Kong. On the
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other hand, the fact that Hong Kong has a myriad of natural “hidden gems” in the havour front is
not recognized by most local people. By leaving the harbour front for public use, these precious
elements of the environment can be exposed to the public, adding spice to this metropolis. With
the harbour front left open, the mudskippers can continue to thrive in the mud of Ting Chung
coast; with the harbour front left open, the mangroves in Tai O can display their tenacity when
they are facing desiccation and flooding on the same day; and with the harbour front left open, the
black-faced spoonbill can escape from the destiny of extinction. It is leaving the harbour front for
public use that can preserve the biodiversity of Hong Kong. On the contrary, flattening the harbour
front for commercial and residential development could do nothing but demolish the habitat of the
precious organisms, causing some of them to become extinct.
3. 總結句
Under this line of thinking, it is evident that leaving the harbour front for public use should prevail.
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It should also be noted that the harbour front can provide a channel for citizens to escape from
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the hustle and bustle of life.
Treating work as the be all and end all of their lives, most Hong Kongers, if not all, are often
drained in their hectic lives. With the harbour front left open for public use , they can recharge
their batteries, thus effectively relieving their tremendous pressure. With the harbour front left
open for public use, people can be engrossed in the stunning view of sunrise when walking along
the coast in Sai Kung in the early morning; people can blow off some steam by swimming along
the beach on Lantau Island. With this in mind, it is clear that leaving the coastal area for public
use can provide relaxation for Hong Kongers. On the contrary, utilizing the harbour front for
commercial and residential purposes sacrifices the magnificent view in the coastal area, as only a
minority of affluent tycoons can enjoy the privilege of such absorbing view.
3. 總結句
Isn’t it ludicrous that we have to limit our choice of relaxation to the rich, when there is desperate
demand for the harbour front ordinary people in society?

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Paragraph 4 1. 陳述反方觀點
Naysayers may criticize my stance, contending that there has long been a dearth of land in Hong
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Kong for commercial and residential buildings. Therefore, there is a pressing need for utilizing the
harbour front.
2. 承認反方觀點的合理性 + 反駁句
Though this argument is reasonable at the first glance, it is fundamentally flawed.
3. 詳細解釋
In fact, there are many alternatives to come to grips with the shortage of land, reclamation and
urban renewal included. Is it a must that we have to sacrifice the precious harbour front to rectify
the deep-rooted problem? In addition to this, the destruction of the natural environment is
beyond retrieval and will provoke backlash from the public. The storm of controversy sparked by
the construction of an artificial beach in Long Mei is a case in point. Is it really worthwhile if we
pay a much higher cost of protecting the environment in the future if we opt for momentary
benefit in the short run?
4. 總結句
Thus, it is apparently clear that the government should leave the harbour front for public use.
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All in all, in no way should we allow the harbour front to be developed with commercial
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buildings and residential buildings. It is leaving the harbour front for public use that can
preserve the environment. It is leaving the harbour front for public use that does not inflict
irreparable damage.
It is to be hoped that our invaluable harbour front can be preserved in a way that is beneficial
to the environment as well as all of us.
Chris Wong
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Many parts of Hong Kong’s harbour front are still undeveloped. Some suggest using these areas for housing and
commercial use, while others argue that such areas should be left as open space for public use. Write to the editor
of the Hong Kong Daily stating your opinion either for or against leaving these areas open for public use. Justify
your point of view with three reasons.
上款 Dear Editor,
Paragraph 1 1. 陳述正反觀點
HOS flats or an open plaza for relaxing gatherings? Lucrative skyscrapers or a great area for Tai
介紹
chi and mass dance? Another IFC or a place for enjoying Hong Kong’s harbour front? Given that
many parts Hong Kong’s harbour front are still undeveloped, some suggest using these areas for
housing and commercial use. While some heap praise on the idea, believing that the increased
housing and office supply can drive down property prices and office rent, some oppose it for such
areas should be left as open space for public use.
After careful consideration of the issue as a whole, it is my firm conviction that developing these
areas into public open space is desirable, if not essential.
To commence with, leaving the harbour front as open space can slow down Hong Kongers’ living
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pace, hence improving their health.
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In this city of hustle and bustle, people work from day till night in order to earn a living, causing
them to forget the importance of leisure and rest. Owing to the little public open space in the city,
people are buried in a community filled with flats and offices and have little chance to relax and
exercise. With public open space in the harbour front , people will find it more convenient to have a
place for leisure. Some of them, attracted by the mesmerizing harbour view, simply can pay a visit
to the open space for a chat with friends, which allows people to put down their work for a while
and breathe in some fresh air. Some of them may even participate in the various activities available
in the open space, such as mass dance and Tai Chi. Take mainland China as an example. It is easy
for us to find people dancing joyfully in some public open space along with music with catchy
beats. This is known as “Plaza Dance”, whose participants include children, off-work adults and the
elderly. Therefore, it is patent that some residents in Hong Kong will be able to enjoy themselves in
these activities, allowing them to exercise a bit and stretch their muscles. Conversely, leaving the
harbour front for housing and commercial use further highlights the city’s undue emphasis on
money and work. Continuing to bury their heads in piles of work, people will be in lack of leisure,
rest and exercise, thus exacerbating their health.
4. 總結句
As we can see, leaving the harbour front as open space allows Hong Kongers to enjoy better health
by providing them more opportunities of recharging their batteries.
It should also be noted that the idea of having open space in the harbour front can maintain Hong
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Kong’s competitiveness as an attractive tourist destination.
Hong Kong is famous for its stunning harbour view. Instead of purchasing products in high-end
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shopping arcades, which are ubiquitous around the globe, it is the magnificent scenery of Victoria
Harbour that captures the heart and mind of millions of tourists. Through leaving the harbour
front as open space can visitors have the perfect spot for watching the fascinating harbour and the
glistening skyscrapers in Central and Tsim Sha Tsui. It is also worth noting that foreigners, who
often place strong emphasis on work-life balance, will definitely appreciate the city’s provision of
open space for playing sports and enjoying a family picnic. On the contrary, the construction of a
high density of residential and commercial buildings in the harbour front will disappoint the
tourists, leaving them the impression that Hong Kong is a hectic concrete jungle in lack of leisure
and recreation. With a view to pursuing spiritual relaxation, many tourists may opt for tourist
destinations ranging from Phuket to Maldives, which are renowned for their picturesque beaches
and serenity. In the long run, Hong Kong’s tourist industry will decline, leading to the loss of
employment opportunities and economic stagnation.
4. 總結句
Evidently, for the sake of the sustainable development of our tourism, leaving the harbour front
as open space should prevail over constructing residential and commercial buildings.
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Critics may counter my stance and pinpoint that utilizing the harbour front for housing and
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commercial development can boost the supply of flats and offices and pull down property prices
and rents, alleviating local citizens’ financial burden.
2. 承認反方觀點的合理性
At first glance, this argument seems to be valid. But in fact, it is divorced from reality.
3. 反駁句
It should be noted that the soaring property prices should not be attributed to the shortage of flats
and offices.
4. 詳細解釋
According to newspaper reports, there is a large amount of vacant flats and offices in our city. The
truth is that local people and investors from the mainland are stockpiling property for speculation
proposes, driving up their prices. To lessen the financial burden of the public, the government
should penalize speculators by introducing “triple stamp duty” and reserve a significant portion
of flats for local people’s residential purposes similar to Singapore. In order to satisfy citizens’
housing demand in the long run, the government can also develop land in Southern Yuen Long
and Tuen Mun, which are known for their large areas of idle flatland. In other words, there are
many other ways to mitigate the problem of skyrocketing property and office prices instead of
developing residential areas and commercial areas in the harbour front.
5. 總結句
In light of the public demand for leisure and the sustainable development of the tourist industry, it
is of paramount importance for the government to leave the harbour front for public use.
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To sum up, the idea of building more flats and offices pales in comparison with that of
總結
leaving the harbour front as public open space. It is the open space in the harbour front that
can relax citizens’ mind and it is the open space in the harbour front that can sustain the
prosperity of our tourism.
It is to be hoped that the government can take the long-term development of Hong Kong into
consideration and transform our beautiful harbour front into a paradise of tranquility and
recreation!
Chris Wong
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Many Hong Kong graduates complain about the lack of employment opportunities in the city. It has been
suggested that graduates who fail to find a job in Hong Kong could look for opportunities in other cities in Asia.
Do you support this suggestion? Write an article for your school magazine expressing your views. Give three
標題 Don’t leave your hometown, youngsters
Paragraph 1 1. 交代背景
Hong Kong prides itself on being a prosperous and an affluent city, but to many young people, it is
介紹
actually a place where they cannot even find a job. As the number of unemployed graduates has
spiralled recently, it has been suggested that they could look for opportunities in other Asian
cities.
Although the suggestion may sound palatable, personally I do not support it.
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To commence with, it is difficult for local young graduates to find suitable jobs in Asian cities.
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True, to many fresh graduates, especially those not equipped with a university degree, it is such a
formidable task to look for a job in Hong Kong due to the cut-throat competition here. However, is
finding a decent, well-paid job in other Asian cities such a cushy task? Those who answer “yes”
should not hesitate to take a glimpse of the high youth unemployment rate in Japan and its
economic problems. Korea, another seemingly possible destination, is a country whose economy
relies heavily on the tourist industry. In Korea, teenagers may not be able to find a suitable job
they want so effortlessly.
3. 總結句
I am worried that going to Asian cities to instigate new opportunities may not bring young
graduates a rosy future, but instead create more uncertainties and hindrance to their long-term
development.
Apart from the difficulty in getting a suitable job there , youngsters may not want to work in other
論點二
Asian cities as they are unfamiliar with them.
To them, Hong Kong is their cozy home where they are raised and nurtured. It is natural and
understandable that some of them would like to develop their careers in the place which they
know well. It is undeniable that they might learn to be more independent and tough if they work
alone in other Asian cities. However, this may not be what they long for – some of them may not
be willing to leave their families and friends just for work. After all, work is an intrinsic part of our
lives but it is certainly not everything.

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Besides the reasons mentioned above, let’s look into the issue from another point of view: is it
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conducive to Hong Kong’s long-term development if the jobless leave and join the labour force of
other Asian cities?
If the talented work in other countries, they cannot make contributions to the betterment of our
society. The qualities they possess – the savvy they acquire and the practical skills they learn in
Hong Kong – will become haven-sent gifts to other Asian cities. Then, how can Hong Kong compete
with Singapore and Shanghai, which are catching up in terms of economic development? How can
Hong Kong retain its position as a renowned business metropolis? How can we develop new ideas
and make improvement without the group of vibrant, creative and diligent adults?
Some people believe that if unemployed youngsters could find opportunities in Asian cities and
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move to work there, there will be less discontent in our society.
This argument is seemingly valid, but in reality preposterous.
3. 詳細解釋
If everyone is prepared to leave the city for work after graduation, I am worried that citizens’ sense
of belonging to Hong Kong will be greatly weakened. They may no longer regard Hong Kong as
their cozy home, but merely a town where they study temporarily. This surely poses a threat to
us, with our unity and bond being ruined. Then, how can we support each other and surmount
every obstacle together?

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Paragraph 6 1. 重申立場，歸納所有論據 I
I believe that encouraging young people to look for chances in other Asian cities is not a panacea
總結
to the youth unemployment problem in Hong Kong. It is just putting the cart before the horse.
I hope local employers in Hong Kong will give youngsters more opportunities when possible, so
that they will have a chance to make contributions to the place where they belong to.
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標題 Why stay in Hong Kong when there are opportunities elsewhere?
By Chris Wong
Have you ever wondered where you will work once you graduate? It may not be a worry to you at
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all at the moment, but it is certainly nothing new that many local graduates are complaining about
the lack of employment opportunities here.
I support the suggestion that those who fail to get a job in Hong Kong could look for opportunities
in other cities in Asia, and I would like to justify my stance in terms of the current situation, the
attractiveness of other cities and feasibility.

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Their claim, to commence with, is not groundless. It is true that the city lacks opportunities for
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young people, in particular fresh graduates.
Since the 1980s, Hong Kong has been transforming into a knowledge-based economy and an
international financial centre. So far, so good. The problem is, in spite of many commentators’
suggestions that the HKSAR government should take measures to diversify the economy, Hong
Kong at present is still reliant heavily on the “Four Pillars” and such industries as Information
Technology and biotechnology are either immature or neglected. What are the implications for
local graduates? Well, you should not have any difficulty in developing your career if you engage in
those dominant and prosperous industries, but if you do not excel in or are interested in being an
i-banker or an accountant, it is pretty sure you will face a hard time seeking a job alone. That is
why despite the low overall unemployment rate, many graduates are unable to land a job, not to
mention a decent one. In addition, under globalization, Hong Kong faces fierce competition from
cities and regions all over the world. A company can simply hire a foreign graduate instead if it
finds you relatively less competitive. It may even move the whole production lines to other regions
and render workers specializing in a particular stage of production unemployed.
3. 總結句
Thus, seeking jobs in other cities is probably a must for quite a number of graduates.
In contrast, other cities in Asia offer more opportunities for our graduates.
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For instance, unlike Hong Kong, Taipei is a hub of technology and IT talents or workers who
specialize in, say, the production of semiconductors, can easily secure a job there. Not only do
many Asian cities have a more diversified economy, but entrepreneurship is also valued there,
compared to Hong Kong. Take Singapore as an example. A vibrant start-up culture can be
observed in the Lion City. You need not be an employee provided that you have some innovative
ideas that may revolutionize our way of life. You may even be able to start your own business if an
investor deems your proposal sound and workable. In other words, you are creating opportunities
for yourself, so to speak. Some might argue that it is unnecessary and perhaps even
counterproductive to seek jobs in other Asian cities. If you can’t even get a job in your city, do you
consider yourself to be so competitive as to be hired by employers in other cities, not to mention
the fact that you are put at a disadvantage compared to the locals owing to cultural differences? I
beg to differ. Admittedly, there is no guarantee that you will land a job elsewhere, yet what our
graduates is another opportunity. Why not explore more possibilities if staying home isn’t going to
do you any good? Perhaps your talent is not recognized and appreciated in Hong Kong. Who
knows? Try it, and at least you won’t regret.

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Apart from the comparison between Hong Kong and other Asian cities, feasibility is also a major
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consideration.
Doubting if our graduates are capable of adapting to the lifestyles of other cities? I can assure you
that we should never underestimate the abilities and potential of local graduates. For a start,
language skills give our students an edge over other competitors. I have witnessed the language
proficiency of many of my classmates in English and Putonghua, which is, in my opinion,
stunningly fantastic. This can no doubt be attributed to the colonial rule of the British government
and the handover in 1997. As an international city, Hong Kong has nurtured graduates with the so-
called “global vision”. Seldom have I heard of someone who knows nothing about international
affairs, for example, the Paris terrorist attack last year. Most local graduates have a certain, if not
high awareness of the things taking place all around the world. Having lived in a cosmopolitan
metropolis since birth also endows us with cultural tolerance among our graduates. Despite the
news that some locals are dissatisfied with the uncivilized behaviour of a few mainland tourists,
most Hong Kong people, generally speaking, are rational and open to other cultures, and seldom, if
at all, discriminate against others based on race or sexual orientation.
3. 總結句
That is why I believe our graduates are capable of adapting to the cultures and social norms of
other Asian cities pretty well, given their willingness to respect the local traditions and customs.
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To sum up, the suggestion is feasible and can effectively address the issue of a lack of employment
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opportunities in Hong Kong.
If you are not able to get a job here, why stay in Hong Kong when there are a lot of opportunities
elsewhere?
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標題 Working in other Asian cities grants you success
Recent studies conducted by Ming Pao have suggested that the recent economic downturn has
介紹
made local graduates struggle to find jobs in Hong Kong. The same study also demonstrated that
the economic boom in certain places has spawned more job opportunities. Cities such as
Shanghai, Singapore, Bangkok and Kuala Lumpur are home to a myriad of job opportunities in
different fields, inclusive of the hotel business, retail business, finance business, you name it.
College graduates from Hong Kong, who specialize in these fields, should seize these valuable
opportunities as they are not only beneficial to their career, but also to their life.
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The capability of university graduates is why they are advised to find jobs in other Asian cities.
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Developing countries in the region, including Malaysia and Indonesia, are longing for overseas
professionals to help them develop the countries in different aspects, be it logistics or finance. In
Hong Kong, the provision of degree or applied learning courses based on the fields mentioned
above is prominent, and hence Hong Kong graduates are highly competitive in this regard and are
able to thrive should they find jobs in those fields. Additionally, the proficiency of English and
Mandarin possessed by the majority of graduates also gives rise to their competitiveness. English
language, which is incorporated into the New Senior Secondary curriculum, makes
communication in foreign cities like Singapore convenient, demolishing the communication
barriers between the two places. We have a lot to expect from the city whose English proficiency is
high. The ability to speak Mandarin also eases communication in mainland cities which are swiftly
growing, like Beijing and Guangzhou. Even these places are far superior to Hong Kong in terms of
job opportunities, and if graduates have the ability, they should consider these options.
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Security of employment is another important factor that makes working in other Asian cities
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attractive.
The growing economy, the expanding market and the improving working environment enable
other cities in Southeast Asia to provide an insane number of job opportunities. In contrast, the
market in Hong Kong is so saturated that hardly could one find a job. The vast number of jobs in
Asian cities allows Hong Kong graduates to find a job easily. The growing wages in the region also
appeal to local graduates. With cities in Southeast Asia shifting their focus to high value-added
industries instead of the mass production industries, the pay in these countries is extremely
rewarding and is bound to increase. Who would not want to work stably while earning a lot?
3. 總結句
Working in other Asian cities is therefore recommended for Hong Kong graduates especially when
they have the abilities.

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Other than monetary incentives, working in other Asian cities can also expose local graduates to
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foreign cultures.
Studying in Hong Kong, graduates rarely have time to experience other cultures besides those
existing in Hong Kong. Devoid of adequate opportunities, the development of Hong Kong
graduates’ global vision is likely to be hampered, Working in other Asian cities, they are almost
limited to staying and living in that specific city, and through this experience can they broaden
their horizons. During holidays, they can participate in various local festivals by which they can
deepen their understanding of the city’s culture. Living in a city where everyone speaks a different
language from yours, say Malay, Thai, Japanese and Korean, they are granted chances to learn
and master foreign languages, which makes them even more competitive and their stay more
enjoyable. Enjoying local cuisines, they could as well experience in person the huge differences
between the lifestyles in Hong Kong and other cities. Even places as close as Taiwan and Macau
have cultures which are distinct from that in Hong Kong.
3. 總結句
It could be seen that without a doubt, working in other Asian cities could be beneficial to the long-
term development of graduates.

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Unemployment is certainly the last thing we want to see after graduating from school or college.
總結
Having a multitude of advantages, working in other Asian cities seems to be the best bet if
graduates have difficulty finding jobs locally.
I am sure that they will have their lives greatly enriched if they make the right choice!
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It has recently been reported that some parents in Asian countries are installing apps on their children’s mobile
phones that monitor their activities to ensure that they use these devices responsibly.
Write a letter to the Young Post stating whether you agree with these parents’ actions or not. Justify your
position with three reasons.
上款 Dear Editor,
The phenomenon that Asian parents are installing apps on their children’s smartphones to monitor
介紹
their activities in order to ensure these youngsters use these devices responsibly has aroused
much concern. Advocates proclaim that parents can in turn protect their children from using
these gadgets uncontrollably. Yet, skeptics insist this is detrimental to teenagers’ sense of
empowerment and harms their privacy.
While people’s view is divergent, I support the idea these parents’ actions are reasonable and
advisable. In this letter, I am writing to explain my viewpoint.

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Of all the reasons why I agree to the Asian parents’ action, none are as significant as the fact that it
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prevents children from using their smart gadgets for an unreasonably long period.
It is universally known that teenagers these days lack self-restraint. Given that the cyber world is
full of attractive information, adolescents are attached to their smart devices. Have you ever seen
kids around you sticking to their smartphones for the whole MTR trip without having a look of
the beautiful scenery outside the train? I am sure everyone has experienced it before. With this
in mind, it is the parents’ responsibility to help teenagers develop a proper usage of phones. By
installing these monitoring apps, parents can get information about the time their beloved sons
and daughters spend on the hand-sized gadgets. With the information, adults can have a
meaningful chat with the young generation and voice their concern. Perhaps the duos can set up
rules together after that. It prevents teenagers from being mastered by the mobile phones – they
should master them instead. As a result, parents can adjust their children’s exposure to the
phones and the young kids can develop an ideal habit of using them. They can therefore spare
more time for other essential elements, be it doing sports, developing their artistic potential or
volunteering.
3. 總結句
Judging from this, it is reasonable for Asian parents to install these apps in their children’s phones.
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Apart from preventing children being engulfed by the evil smart devices, never should we
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overlook the fact that install apps can deter children from acting improperly on the Internet.
In this technological era, the new generation loves using smartphones to visit social networking
sites. Unfortunately, they may do something improperly, such as cyberbullying. If parents don’t
have the power to monitor children’s usage of their phone, it is unlikely for them to figure out
what their children have done online. With the help of the apps on adolescents’ phones, parents
will notice it immediately once the adolescents begin their act. In this sense, youngsters may think
twice before acting inappropriately. This prevents them from going astray due to irrational
thoughts, helping them to develop their morality. Preventing the young generation acting
improperly is also remunerative in terms of their future career – an increasing number of
international companies like Google check the job seekers’ online comments. In other words,
preventing youngsters from behaving poorly on the Internet can safeguard their future career
development.
4. 總結句
So, why don’t we take these benefits into consideration and support the caring parents’ action?
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On top of keeping children away from acting inappropriately on the Internet, installing apps on
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their mobile phones is also crucial to protecting them from unhealthy information, which is readily
available on the Internet.
In this day and age, people can upload any information to the Internet freely. By browsing the
web, teenagers are likely to be exposed to stuffs that may distort their value judgment. Take the
game apps as an example. Recently, some app-designing companies have introduced a game
requiring players to decide the way to help a girl to carry out plastic surgery. In the game, the
main character has tried to have a plastic surgery to improve her appearance. Teenagers may be
led to believe that physical appearance is the only way to define the beauty of a person and
ignore the inner beauty. Judging a book from its cover is not advisable. If we allow them to
immerse in a virtual environment which is filled with these distorted values, what will they
become? How will our future be? It is also omnipresent to see phone apps containing sex scenes.
Parents should definitely install apps to monitor their children’s usage of phones.
5. 總結句
In an attempt to protect them from the dangerous cyber world, it is both conducive to the
teenagers themselves and the future of our society.

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For the reasons above, encouraging parents to install apps on their children’s phones for
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monitoring their activities is vital for preventing them from being addicted to it and hurting others
on the Internet. This can also separate the vulnerable youngsters from the dangerous virtual
world.
It is hoped that the young generation can be wise mobile phone users and make full use of the
benefits they can derive from these smart devices so that they can carry these advantages over to
their careers in their life.

Chris Wong
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It has recently been reported that some parents in Asian countries are installing apps on their children’s mobile
phones that monitor their activities to ensure that they use these devices responsibly.
Write a letter to the Young Post stating whether you agree with these parents’ actions or not. Justify your
position with three reasons.
上款 Dear Editor,
Paragraph 1 1. 寫作目的
I am writing to express my opinion about some parents’ installation of monitoring apps on their
介紹
children’s mobile phones.
2. 交代背景
“Tiger moms”, “wolf dads”, “helicopter parents” – to name but just a few – these are all terms
describing Asian parents who make every endeavour to monitor or control the behaviour of their
children. Recently, it has been reported that some parents in Asian countries are installing apps on
their children’s mobile phones that monitor their activities to ensure their responsible use of these
devices. While some deem it reasonable and sensible, some see it unreasonable and absurd.
After meticulous consideration, it is my conviction that such an act is by no means beneficial to
the children and the family.
To commence with, the installation of monitoring apps will hamper children’s development of self-
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discipline.
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Living in this technological era, it is public knowledge that self-discipline is of crucial significance
for there are much more temptations in society than before. Knowing how to distinguish between
right and wrong is thereby indispensable, especially for easily swayed young minds. Admittedly,
through installing the apps and paying heed to every act of teens on their electronic gadgets can
parents produce a deterrent effect in the short term, protecting them from falling victim to online
frauds or having minds perverted by inappropriate content. Yet, such effects are by no means
sustainable. Youngsters behave themselves only to avoid punishment from parents, rather than
understanding the importance of using devices responsibly. Consequently, many of them will fail
to avoid temptations in real life, where parents can no longer monitor them.
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Apart from impeding children’s development of self-discipline, under no circumstances should we

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overlook the negative impact of installing monitoring apps poses to the relationship between
parents and children.
Due to long working hours, many parents lack time to communicate with their children, thus
having distant relationship with the latter. Further to this, under the influence of traditional
Chinese parenting as well as the grade-fixated education system in Asian countries, many parents
tend to lay emphasis on children’s academic achievement rather than expressing their love and
care when they are with their children after work. As a result, misunderstanding and conflicts crop
up more easily. In light of this, the act of installing apps to monitor children’s use of electronic
devices will exacerbate the current problems. Teenagers, who already hardly feel the love of their
parents, will deem such an act a lack of trust. They may then be more unwilling to open up to their
parents, or even intentionally act against their parents’ will to express their discontent, doing
irreparable harm to their relationship with parents.
3. 總結句
Under this line of thinking, isn’t it farcical to install monitoring apps given it may wreak havoc on
the most precious parent-child relationship?

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Supporters of the act may counter my stance, holding the view that it can ensure children use
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their phones properly, lowering their chance of being submerged in the virtual world and thus
have better time management.
While this argument is reasonable at first glance, it is in fact fundamentally flawed when closely
examined. Undeniably, such an act can prevent children from getting addicted to the use of
mobile phones in the beginning. However, does it necessarily mean that children will allocate their
time to studies or other meaningful use? With children’s immature mind, they may be obsessed
with playing online games and browsing the Internet on computers; With children’s immature
mind, they may still be hooked on watching television programmes; With children’s immature
mind, they may be vulnerable to the distractions and temptations in the real world.
3. 詳細解釋
In other words, it is simply difficult, if not impossible, to control teenagers’ responsible use of time.
Paragraph 5 1. 歸納全文論點
After the aforementioned analysis, it is manifest that the parents’ installation of monitoring apps
結論
on their children’s phones is in no way reasonable. We have to understand that this will deter
children from developing self-discipline and shatter the mutual trust between parents and children
while having minimal impact on controlling children’s use of time.
2. 期望作結
Thus, it is earnestly hoped that Asian parents can stop this futile act in no time. After all, parental
education is about love and care, rather than rules and supervision.
Chris Wong
Content 7/7 7/7
Language 6/7 7/7
Organization 7/7 77
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Total 20/21 21/21
41/42 (5**)
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HKDSE 2017 Q6 (Debate Speech)
As captain of the debate team you have been asked to write a debate speech. The task is to argue that
“Watching TV Makes Us Smarter”.
In your speech you should include three reasons to support the statement.
Write your speech.
打招呼 Adjudicators, the opponent team, ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning. Today’s motion is “Watching TV Makes Us Smarter”. Speaking of watching TV, I
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believe some of you may have this picture in your mind – a lazy and obese guy lying on a sofa,
gobbling potato chips and gluing his eyes to the flashy screen of a television set in a dark room.
Although over-indulgence in the world of television can deal a great blow to our lives, our team
strongly believe that there are numerous benefits of watching television that can make us
smarter.
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First and foremost, watching television can widen our horizons and act as a platform for us to take
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a glance at the world beyond our reach.
2. 背景
Especially for teenagers nowadays, who confine themselves inside the curriculum to excel in the
exams under this grade-fixated education system, television programmes can be a window for
them to know more about the real world and acquire knowledge that is beyond the scope of their
studies.
For example, documentaries like “A Man in the Wild”, “A Walk in Modern China” and “The
European Heights” feature landscapes of various continents and unveil the authentic lives of
natives and locals in different territories beyond our footsteps. Can you learn these from study
and work? Probably not. Therefore, apart from enjoying leisure and entertainment from TV shows,
we can also obtain insight of other aspects of life and widen our horizons. These help us get a
glimpse of the outside world and enrich our knowledge and understanding of the world, making
us smarter instead of being bookworms that only memorize the study materials for our exams.
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In addition to broadening our horizons, watching TV can enhance our understanding of social
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issues, developing critical thinking skills in the course of scrutinizing controversies through TV
programmes.
2. 背景
Nowadays, thanks to the advancement of information technology , we can keep abreast of the
latest news through websites like Apple Daily, Mingpao, Time Magazine and Facebook. However,
as we glance through the brief descriptions of news headlines and we scroll down the page on our
dearest iPhones, do we truly understand the topic in detail? Obviously not.
In contrast, news reports on TV, or documentaries like “The Sunday Profile” offer an in-depth
analysis of social issues, be it the widening wealth gap in Hong Kong, the “One Belt One Road
Initiative” of China or the refugee crisis in Europe. In the shows, TV reporters interview political
experts and stakeholders of the issue to discuss the controversial social problems. Through
watching these TV programmes, we can develop our sense to think from multiple perspectives and
criticize the maladministration of the government. Convenient as it is, the critical skills can hardly
be cultivated by a cursory look on the electronic gadget on our palms.
4. 總結句
In this sense, watching TV is advantageous to honing our critical thinking, enabling us to develop a
deeper understanding of our society, and of course, making us smarter.
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論點三 Last but not least, watching TV can enhance our English proficiency, which is vitally important in
interpersonal communication.
2. 背景
In Hong Kong, which is dubbed as a “cultural melting pot”, English is indispensable in our daily
life, like workplace communication and socialization with foreigners.
Television, which offers English channels, helps us beef up our English listening and speaking skills.
Watching financial news every day, for example, can enhance our English vocabulary of various
issues, ranging from the governance of enterprises to the economic development in different
countries. Watching American soap dramas on Pearl and HMC can also enrich our English
vocabulary as we can learn the slangs and words used by foreigners in their scripts. As a
consequence, we can communicate effectively with foreigners.
4. 總結句
In this sense, watching TV shows can develop our language ability, which is beneficial to us and
makes us smarter.
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The opponent may counter my stance, contending that indulging in soap dramas that teach us
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nothing but romance and family conflicts is not beneficial and makes us ignorant, since we may
become obsessed with the virtual world in the TV series and forget about our real lives.
2. 反駁句
However, the argument is in fact flawed.
3. 詳細解釋
Obviously, over-indulgence in TV can pose serious drawbacks to our well-being and mindset.
However, if we utilize the television channels properly, choosing the educational programmes and
channels to watch, TV in reality can make us smarter. In addition, with the prevalence of
discussion of television programmes on various online forums, like Hkdiscuss and Lihkg, we can
understand more about the benefits and drawbacks of a programme and make an appropriate
choice. It is also worth noting that some detective story series such as Sherlock Holmes and
Kindaichi Case Files are beneficial , stimulating our creative and logical thinking .
4. 總結句
Under this link of thinking, watching TV can make us smarter as long as we exercise self-restraint
and choose the appropriate programmes.

Paragraph 5 1. 歸納所有論據
In conclusion, TV programmes can broaden our horizons by allowing us to get a glimpse of the
總結
outside world, hone our critical thinking skills by analyzing social issues and enhance our English
proficiency.
2. 重申立場
It is our firm belief that watching TV makes us smarter, and today’s motion must stand. Thank
you.
Content 6/7 7/7
Language 6/7 7/7

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Total 18/21 21/21
39/42 (5**)
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HKDSE 2017 Q8 (Article)
Unlike swimmers or basketball players, dancers are not traditionally thought of as athletes. As a member of your
school’s dance team you have been asked to write an article for your school magazine. Use the title and headings
below to support the idea of dancers as athletes.
Dancers Are Athletes
 Physical Strength and Skills
 Self-discipline & Training
標題 Dancers Are Athletes
What comes up in your mind when you are asked to give examples of athletes? Swimmers,
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basketball players, 100 m sprint runners … You name it. Sadly, the general public seldom regard
dancers as a kind of athletes due to the existence of some stereotypes.
In fact, dancers are real athletes, and like others, they need to be skillful and disciplined enough in
order to excel in the world of dancing.

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Paragraph 2 Physical Strengths and Skills
1. 標題句
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We need to bear in mind that physical strengths and skills are the prerequisites for phenomenal
success in both ordinary athletic sports and dancing.
2. 背景
Athletic sports are often seen as some kinds of sports requiring high physical strengths and are
skill-oriented, like gymnastics, in which body balance and the skills to achieve elegant movements
are of paramount of significance; and 1500m run, which requires strong muscles and an excellent
cardiovascular system.
Similarly, a dancer has to fulfill similar requirements. For instance, hip-hop dancers are
encouraged to have sharp and rapid movements that require the use of strong muscle movements
and the frequent steps in hip hop dance also demand the dancers to have a trained respiratory
system which can support strenuous movements and endure for a long period of time. This proves
dancing actually needs dancers to have a certain level of physical strength, like other athletic
sports. In terms of the skills involved, I believe dancing has far more techniques that need to be
developed by the dancers themselves than those who are traditionally regarded as athletes.
Dancing techniques, ranging from movements and steps to teamwork and choreography, should
be figured out by the dancers step by step before they become professional dancers. It is evident
that dancers are just like the athletes on the stage of the Olympics in which they have to spare no
effort in developing their own sets of skills.

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Paragraph 3 Self-discipline & Training
1. 相反觀點
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Some argue that dancers are not receiving as much training as the athletes on tracks, in the
basketball courts or even on the ice-skating rings.
2. 反駁句
It is high time for dancers to defend themselves against the skeptical naysayers who doubt
whether dancers are athletes.
We can often see that dancers shine on the stage of the town hall, presenting their brilliant
dances to the audience, and all these can be attributed to their ceaseless training behind the
scene. Like the other athletes, it is almost compulsory for every dancer to receive a series of
incessant training before they head onto the stage. You also have to remember they are
reprimanded by their instructors almost on a daily basis like the athletes on track, just to hone
everything to perfection. We often hear the stories of athletes suffering great emotional
meltdown during their training, so do the dancers! It is apparent that the endurance of dancers
will be no weaker than those who have been recognized as athletes. Besides, we can all realize
that self-discipline is indispensable for all athletes. As a dancer in the school’s dance team, I truly
understand that self-discipline is also crucial in the road of mastering dancing, and this is the
perfect evidence that dancers are also athletes. No matter it is a professional dancer like Liu Man
Ting, who aces in ballet, Yanki Din who aces in Jazz, and hip hop, or an amateur dancer like me ,
they have to arrange packed schedules for themselves for the sake of grabbing more chances for
practising and performing in flawless shows.
4. 總結句
Being as self-disciplined and motivated as other athletes, they should be recognized true athletes.
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Paragraph 5 1. 歸納所有論據 + 重申立場
To sum up, dancers are not thought of as athletes merely due to the public misunderstanding and
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stereotypes. Nevertheless, I do believe dancers are true athletes, as they have worked their butts
off to transform themselves into skillful and persistent warriors like the other athletes do.
Content 7/7 7/7
Language 7/7 7/7
Total 21/21 21/21
42/42 (5**)
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HKDSE 2017 Q9
It has recently been claimed that in the workplace many Hong Kong fresh university graduates are less hard-
working and less willing to face challenges compared to those in the past.
You strongly disagree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the Hong Kong Daily disagreeing with this
opinion. Support your view with three reasons and/or examples.
上款 Dear Editor,
I am writing in response to the letter entitled “Fresh university graduates lack the willingness to
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work hard and overcome challenges” dated 7 April 2017.
As a young entrepreneur, I am strongly against such a claim due to the following seasons.
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In fact, fresh university graduates in Hong Kong are willing to explore new business opportunities
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in society, which reveals that they are not afraid of challenges.
The 21st century is a century of technological advancement and the Internet has provided the
young generation with a flood of new business opportunities. Not afraid of possible failures, a lot
of new university graduates in our city actually set up their own business online, ranging from
online shops to online mass media. One glaring example of this new type of business is 9GAG,
which is a Facebook page posting memes and jokes, and has become viral not only in Hong Kong
but also in foreign countries. Their willingness to develop this brand-new type of business
illustrates the fact that they are willing to face challenges, not to mention the hard work they
have devoted to maintaining the operation of their own business and achieving phenomenal
success.
3. 總結句
How would it be reasonable to call the fresh university graduates in Hong Kong “lazy” and “easily
defeated by challenges” given the phenomenon mentioned above, which is becoming more
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Yet, some employers may complain that their new employees are spending their precious time on
論點二
social networking sites instead of their work during their working hours.
It must be acknowledged that some the fresh university graduates are not paying full attention to
their work, but the work culture in Hong Kong, instead of the young generation, is to be blamed. In
myriads of foreign companies, employers are trying to incorporate entertainment into work,
with Google being one of the most notable companies. My own company has already adopted
similar approaches, such as installing television sets in the office, and I have never complained
that my employees are not industrious enough. Unfortunately, in most of the companies in Hong
Kong, employees are still required to sit front of the computer and work ceaselessly, which is
boring especially for the young generation who ranks creativity and novel ideas on the top of their
priority lists. Yet, such a problem can actually be tackled by the above-mentioned approach. With
more entertainment in the work culture, I strongly believe that young employees will find more
incentives to work and become more hardworking.
3. 總結句
Therefore, it can be seen that the monotonous and dreary work culture in Hong Kong is the culprit
of the problems and dissatisfaction experienced by the senior staff, and the fresh university
graduates should not be blamed for it.

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Some people in the workplace may also claim that fresh university graduates in Hong Kong quit
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their jobs easily.
At first glance, this may indicate that they are easily defeated by challenges, but this actually
reveals that a more participative leadership is the ideal choice for leading the new employees.
3. 詳細解釋
Recently, there has been a piece of news about an employee of the 90s quitting his job within a
few days as his employer scolded him, which has stirred a lot of controversy in our society. Some
of the senior staff claim that the fresh university graduates are not willing to admit their own
mistakes and lack the ability to overcome obstacles in the workplace. These people, however,
overlook the fact that the young generation is seeking acceptance as equals from the other
generations. In my own company, the employees and I have a weekly gathering during lunch, in
which they can express views on their work and exchange ideas with one another. Through this
type of leadership will the employees have an impression that they are treated equally and given
valuable advice, instead of orders for their work. This can provide them with a sense of
achievement when they overcome an obstacle as they have more decision-making power and a
sense of empowerment.
4. 總結句
From my personal experience, I believe that with an appropriate leadership style, the fresh
university graduates actually have a strong willingness to face challenges.
As a young entrepreneur, I deeply understand what strengths the young generation is equipped
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with and what they are seeking.
2. 期望作結
It is hoped that other employees in the city can try to communicate more with their fresh
employees, trusting the future pillars of our society.
Chris Wong
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Content 6/7 6/7
Language 6/7 6/7
Total 18/21 18/21
36/42 (5*)
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HKDSE 2017 Q9
It has recently been claimed that in the workplace many Hong Kong fresh university graduates are less hard-
working and less willing to face challenges compared to those in the past.
You strongly disagree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the Hong Kong Daily disagreeing with this
opinion. Support your view with three reasons and/or examples.
上款 Dear Editor,
I am writing in response to the recent claim of myriads of Hong Kong fresh university graduates
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being less hardworking and willing to face challenges compared with their counterparts in the
past.
It goes without saying that the socioeconomic situation of Hong Kong has changed drastically over
the past few decades and the university graduates nowadays suffer tremendously with the
intensifying competition in society. As far as I am concerned, the accusations against the
graduates are groundless and they actually work tirelessly and relentlessly to overcome the
thorny challenges every day.

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To commence with, there is ample evidence that the university graduates in this era are willing to
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face challenges.
2. 背景
Back in the old days, university graduates were rare and they were often offered the opportunities
to work as management personnel in some top-notch enterprises locally and internationally, for
example the human resource managers of HSBC or analysts of JP Morgan. As these jobs were so
lucrative, they clung on to their jobs and dared not challenge themselves by establishing their
own businesses.
Nowadays, the number of university graduates has been skyrocketing, giving rise to keen
competition in the job market. Some of those graduates who lose this hostile battle can only earn
their living through the establishment of their own businesses. Read local newspapers and you will
discover their novel ideas, say food trucks, production of handicrafts and operation of online
selling platforms on ebay, Carousell and Taobao. For those who are less innovative, they have
accepted employment offers from mainland China, where they have to face unfairness and
discrimination.
3. 總結句
In the face of the cutthroat competition in the labour market, many university graduates are bold
enough to step out of their comfort zone, overcoming challenges in their own businesses and
pursuing new opportunities in mainland China.

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Regarding the claim that university graduates are less hardworking, I believe the critics have
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underestimated the graduates’ determination and persistence in changing their own destiny.
Due to the intense competition from local counterparts and influx of overseas talents caused by
globalization, the difficulty of recruitment is plummeting. Hoping to maintain their
competitiveness, many fresh university graduates further their studies for master or even
doctoral degrees. As they have entered the workforce, they have no alternative but to complete
their studies on a part-time basis. Obviously, this mode of studying often generates unbearable
exhaustion and excruciating stress as they are bombarded by their superiors with immense
workload at the same time. Take my cousin as an example. Pursuing the Doctor of Philosophy
degree in Science, he has to work around the clock – arriving at his office before 9, hurrying to
the University of Hong Kong at around 7 and working on his assignments and projects until
midnight. This hectic lifestyle suggests that those university graduates who are eager to climb up
the social ladder are willing to work industriously.

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論點三 Furthermore, some fresh undergraduates are so hardworking that they have applied for several
part-time jobs in addition to their full-time employment.
Not only are these fresh graduates motivated to maintain their competitiveness, it is also their
wish to improve their families’ quality of living by earning some extra money. The millennials do
not have a smooth pathway of employment like their predecessors. Instead, most of them
experience hardship when looking for job openings and end up earning salary which is not self-
sustainable, let alone purchasing their own apartments and establishing their own families.
Finding it difficult to make ends meet, many fresh graduates apply for all sorts of part-time jobs,
such as being private tutors and cashiers as well as translating document. In exchange for a
brighter future, they sacrifice their work-life balance and spare time which could have been spent
on developing friendship and entertaining themselves.
3. 總結句
How can we say that the fresh university graduates nowadays are not hardworking?
All in all, not only does such a claim show how ignorant some critics are, it also reveals how
結論
miserable the life of some university graduates is.
2. 期望作結
To provide them with work-life balance and change their destiny, collaborative effort from the
government and employers is definitely required.
Chris Wong
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Content 7/7 7/7
Language 7/7 6/7
Total 21/21 20/21
41/42 (5**)
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HKDSE 2018 Q5
Learning English through Debating (Debate Speech)

You are representing your school at an inter-school debating competition. The motion is: “The policy of
reporting students’ class position should be abolished”.
Write a debate speech arguing for OR against the motion.
打招呼 Good morning, adjudicators, the opponent team, ladies and gentlemen,
Paragraph 1 1. 交代論題
I am Chris Wong, the captain of the affirmative team. Today, it is my honour to be standing here to
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argue for the motion – “The policy of reporting students’ class position should be abolished.”
2. 解釋背景
To all the guests and students sitting here in the hall, can you still vividly recall your feelings when
you last received your report card with a long list of numbers indicating your position? Excited?
Delighted? Deflated? Desperate? Are you satisfied with the fact that your academic results are
determined by a set of numbers?
While some contend that these numbers are good indicators that drive students’ improvements in
school results, my team holds the firm belief that these ranks are merely evils suffocating students
and the policy should be abolished in no time. My team have three points to make.
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Among all the demerits of the system, the most noteworthy one is the fact that class positions
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create distortion on the genuine purpose of education in students’ mind.
2. 背景
Under the grade-fixated education system in Hong Kong, students attach inordinate importance
to examinations as they believe that achieving academic excellence would guarantee them a spot
in an elite university and thus a promising future.
The notoriously demanding education system has already afflicted students for long, and the
system of reporting students’ class positions has aggravated the phenomenon. Just imagine: after
seeing these numbers in the report card, what would be your reaction? Probably to have a
glimpse of the results of your classmates to make a comparison with them. If ones prevails over
others, they will become complacent and the determination to keep this “elite status” will be
ignited in their mind, making them work tooth and nail just to get an outstanding class position.
Education would become a ranking game from their perspective, overshadowing the genuine
meaning of education. If one loses this game against others, they will find themselves fallen into a
dark abyss and deem themselves as failed individuals. Hence, this system of reporting class
positions would be favourable to churning out scoring machines, but not upholding the essence of
education – to cultivate the all-round development of individuals.
4. 總結句
With this in mind, this system should not be advocated.
On top of distorting the purpose of education, equally important is the fact that the system of
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論點二 reporting students’ class positions is unfair to students, especially the senior form students.
2. 背景
As you all know, the New Senior Secondary curriculum allows students to opt for diversified
electives and the combinations of electives are countless. While each subject may impose a
different mode of assessment on students, it makes no sense to compare students’ class positions
based on the average scores calculated using the marks of subjects of different realms.
I am a striking example of this. As I am keen on language analysis, I chose Chinese Literature and
English Literature as my electives. Yet, the scores obtained in exams are lower than those of
science students, even though I topped the list among the students taking my electives last year.
It turns out my class position is far from satisfactory. Does this imply that I didn’t perform well in
exams? Does this imply others who are ranked higher than me are necessarily better than me?
Obviously not.
4. 總結句
Given that students take different electives in senior forms, the class positions mean nothing and
should thus be abolished.
Here comes to our final argument – the system of reporting students’ positions will exacerbate
論點三
the phenomenon of “Tiger Moms” in Hong Kong, ultimately putting huge strains on students.
2. 背景
Our city is notorious for “Tiger Moms” and helicopter parents that exert massive pressure on their
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children, be it extra-curricular activities or academic results. As parents may not know much about
the curriculum of the subjects and the daily performance of their children, the one and only
indicator for them to evaluate their performance would be the class positions.
I am sure many of you sitting here have a similar experience. Dissatisfied and exasperated by the
plunging class positions in your report cards, your parents scold you for not working industriously.
As time goes by, they are increasingly demanding and compel you to do extra revision and an
unreasonably large number of mock exam papers. Coupled with the long hours of schooling, you
may feel so stressed that you have heated arguments with your parents. It is lamentable to see
that such trivial numbers on report cards can ironically aggravate the pressure of students and
even erode family harmony.
4. 總結句
Under this line of thinking, it is our team’s belief that the class position system should be
abolished.
Our decent opponent team would counter my stance, contending that class positions are driving
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forces for students to elevate their performance in exams. Such a belief is based on the
assumption that scores do not mean anything as they cannot reflect our performance relative to
other students and ranks are the best barometers for them to reflect on their shortcomings and
initiate studying plans to improve their performance next time.

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2. 反駁句
Yet, such a claim is in fact ill-founded.
3. 詳細解釋
While it is acknowledged that scores do not reflect anything, I bet the opposition team has
overlooked the importance of grades. Grading students into different distinct groups is already
sufficient for them to realize the domains where they haven’t achieved well, while simultaneously
will not impose tremendous burden on students and lead to vicious rivalries within classes as their
actual rank is not revealed.
4. 總結句
With this in mind, the opponent’s argument cannot stand.

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To conclude, it is the system of revealing students’ ranks that distort the true meaning of
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education; it is the system of exposing students’ class positions which creates unfairness for
students; it is the system of showing class ranks on report cards that triggers the formation of
Tiger Moms.
2. 期望
To the audience, do you want to see teenagers, who are the future pillars of society, to grow in
such a pressurized environment? To all the adjudicators, would you want your children to be
eroded by the vicious rivalries in schools? To all the students sitting here, do you want your
success to be judged by numbers on report cards any more? It is patently obvious that
abolishing the students’ class positions is the prerequisite for enhancing our problematic
education system. Therefore, today’s motion must stand. Thank you!
Content 7/7 7/7
Language 7/7 7/7
Total 21/21 21/21
42/42 (5**)
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HKDSE 2019 Q3 (Essay -- formal)

The Hong Kong Daily Press invites readers to express their views on the following topic:
Do social media platforms such as Facebook and Twitter encourage or stifle public debate? When first created,
the social media was thought to be a place where rational debate and logic would thrive. However, as time has
shown, this is not always the case.
 Write an argumentative essay.

 Choose one side of the argument and state your position, giving reasons and evidence to support
your view.
Include a title for your essay.
標題 Social Media – the cradle for public debates
Paragraph 1 1. 解釋背景
Even if we are not the keen followers of social trends, it is unlikely we will miss out the rising trend
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of online public debate. Scrolling through the pages of Youtube and Facebook, we are bound to
discover that there is no dearth of public debate on a variety of topics. The advancement in social
media has irrefutably incentivized discussion about social affairs. Some may understandably
scratch their heads: aren’t these kinds of debate too irrational? Aren’t social media platforms
stifling public debate due to excessively high degree of freedom of expression?
Indeed, these are no more than misunderstanding of social media platforms. Below are the
reasons why social media encourages online discussion.
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論點一 While the debates on social media platforms seem to be fierce and deleterious, there are actually
many benefits hidden from plain sight, which negate the so-called downsides. Firstly, it is worth
noting that the willingness of expressing opinion in the virtual world coincides with the
blossoming of social media.
2. 概述面對面溝通的限制
Chatting face-to-face, many people are reluctant to speak out for fear that they may be criticized,
offend others and ultimately damage interpersonal relationships.
3. 詳細解釋 Social Media 的好處
In contrast, with only a few tabs on the screen, netizens can already express their view on various
social issues. Undoubtedly, social media has played a significant role in fuelling the trend of public
debate. Owing to the anonymous nature of online platforms, people can voice their opinion
without constraints and fear, wholeheartedly telling others their thoughts. Without the
supervision by teachers, students can criticize the ossified education system on the Internet;
without the watchful eyes by their parents, teenagers can vent their dissatisfaction with
helicopter parenting; without being lambasted by colleagues of contrasting political view,
everyone can fearlessly express their exasperation with the incompetence of the government.
4. 總結句
Motivating people to voice their opinion, social media has become the fertile ground of public
debate.
Apart from emboldening netizens to express their view, the fact that they can utilize a wide
論點二
variety of communication tools has also encouraged people to participate in public debate.
2. 背景
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Gone are the days when we could only initiate a debate solely through words, which were
repetitive and tedious. Thanks to technological advancement, we can type words, take snapshots
and even record videos to express our view of various issues.
Apparently, the availability of photos and videos has added spice and spark to the virtual world,
motivating more young people to engage in online discussion. More importantly, through posting
photos and videos can netizens provide more compelling evidence and lay a solid foundation for
online debate. For example, when an online user vents his or her frustration with a passenger’s
reluctance to vacate a seat for a pregnant woman on an MTR train or a deluxe restaurant’s
deplorably atrocious customer services merely through words, most people would deem this a
make-up story and malicious condemnation. However, if snapshots and videos are provided, most
netizens will be convinced and opt to support that online user’s arguments.
4. 總結句
As we can see, not only can the kaleidoscope of communicative tools available on social media
appeal to netizens, but also strengthen the persuasive power of online debate.
Blinded by their bias against social media platforms, some conservatives hold the belief that
駁論
social media stifles public debate by making discussion excessively ferocious and irrational.
2. 反駁句
Nevertheless, we should recognize the fact that the capacity of the virtual world enables millions
of netizens to comment on the same issue, thereby raising the objectiveness of public debate.
3. 詳細解釋
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Differing from a face-to-face debate which only allows a limited number of participants, social
media discussion can be engaged in by netizens from all walks of life and all over the globe.
Having a discussion commenced, like Brexit, the Sino-US trade war and the fight for democracy in
Hong Kong, online users of different careers, ages and nationalities could have a say. With people
thinking from different perspectives by reading and responding to different comments, there is no
doubt the debate will be more comprehensive and its quality will be enhanced. While some
staunch opponents distance themselves from social media, demonizing it as a destroyer of logical
debate, we should bear in mind that once there are unreasonably radical comments on the social
media platforms, they will be instantly challenged by other sensible netizens, some of whom are
erudite professionals like lawyers, scholars and political analysts.
4. 總結句
With this in mind, it can be clearly seen that the participation in social media discussion from
netizens all over the globe can encourage public debate through enhancing its quality and making
it more objective.
In essence, social media platforms are the perfect cradle encouraging public debate. Their unique
總結
features – allowing users to be anonymous, having a wide variety of communicative tools and
encouraging a surging number of global participants have all been advantageous to the discussion
of social affairs.
2. 期望
It is earnestly hoped that everyone will recognize the benefits of social media in galvanizing public
discussion, which will ultimately enhance governance and the well-being of mankind.
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Road to HKDSE 2020

Writing Notes 2 (One-sided Argumentative Essays)

Introduction + Express your view (背景介紹 + 表達立場)

 標題句 + 論點一 + 總結句

 標題句 + 論點二 + 總結句

 標題句 + 論點三 + 總結句

Conclusion (總結 + 對未來的期望)

Letter to the Editor

Dear Sir/Madam, // Dear Editor,

Aim of Writing + Introduction + Express your view

(寫信目的 + 背景介紹 + 表達立場)

 標題句 + 論點一 + 總結句

 標題句 + 論點二 + 總結句

 標題句 + 論點三 + 總結句

Conclusion (總結 + 對未來的期望)

2 HKDSE English 2012 Q2 a. Virtual sports vs real

3 HKDSE English 2012 Q3 a. Learning cannot take

5 HKDSE English 2014 Q5 a. A small number of

6 HKDSE English 2015 Q5 1. Write to the editor of

purposes or left open for

3. Provide three reasons

8 HKDSE 2016 Q3 (Article) a. Graduates who fail to

9 HKDSE 2016 Q4 (Letter to the Editor) a. Some parents in Asian

10 HKDSE 2017 Q4 (Essay) a. You have been looking

d. Write a debate speech

Write your speech.

12 HKDSE 2017 Q8 (Article) a. Use the title and

support the idea of dancers as athletes.

Dancers Are Athletes

 Physical Strength and Skills

 Self-discipline & Training

d. Support your view with

14 HKDSE 2018 Q2 (Blog – Informal) a. You recently ran the

c. Encourage other young

15 HKDSE 2018 Q5 (Debate Speech) a. Write a debate speech

Learning English through Debating b. arguing for OR against

Write a debate speech arguing for OR against the motion.

16 HKDSE 2018 Q7 (Article – Semi-formal) a. show video-recordings

b. Write an article for

17 HKDSE 2019 Q3 (Essay -- formal) a. Write an

 Write an argumentative essay.

(論點一) 2. 詳細解釋 (普遍情況、個別例子、比較)

(論點二) 2. 詳細解釋 (普遍情況、數據、個別例子、比較)

Letter to the Editor

(論點一) 2. 詳細解釋 (普遍情況、個別例子、比較)

(論點二) 2. 詳細解釋 (普遍情況、數據、個別例子、比較)

標題 Total smoking ban is essential

Learning English through Social Issues

開場白 I am writing to express my views on movie filming in the city centre.

many concerns and worries about it.

light to the idea.

foreigners that our city has our own films too!

As everyone knows, Hong Kong is a cosmopolitan city recognized as a significant

development in other industries leaves a lot to be desired. Arguably, the overemphasis on

finance is detrimental to the sustainable development of Hong Kong.

enormous economic benefits to us.

disturbance for citizens, affecting the normal operation of our city.

Undeniably, this may be true in some cases.

Nonetheless, we should recognize that the effects are temporary.

significantly outweigh the short-term pain suffered from by local citizens.

citizens in the long run. It is definitely going to be a blessing for all.

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