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The great barrier reef is the worlds lagest coral
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reef It is close too the coast of queensland
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australia. it is made up of nerly 3000 coral reefs
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and over 600 islands, streching over 2600 km
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long. It is so big, it can be scene from space!
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The Great Barrier Reef is the largest structure SP
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maid by living things. because of it’s
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enviromental significance, its has been listed as a

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 Great Barrier Reef - Editing
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The great barrier reef is the worlds lagest coral
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reef It is close too the coast of queensland
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australia. it is made up of nerly 3000 coral reefs
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and over 600 islands, streching over 2600 km
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long. It is so big, it can be scene from space!
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The Great Barrier Reef is the largest structure
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maid by living things. because of it’s
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enviromental significance, its has been listed as a

important World Heritage Site by UNESCO.

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Great Barrier Reef - Answers

The Great Barrier Reef is the world’s largest coral reef. It is close to
the coast of Queensland, Australia. It is made up of nearly 3000
coral reefs and over 600 islands, stretching over 2600 km long. It is
so big, it can be seen from space!

The Great Barrier Reef is the largest structure made by living things.
Because of its environmental significance, it has been listed as an
important World Heritage Site by UNESCO.
Great Wall of China - Editing
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The great wall of China is indoubtedly one of the most Editing Marks:
significant man-made structures in the world built over 2000
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years ago, it is an arcitectural feat that this structure is stil
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standing. The Great Wall of china spans an impresive 8851.8
km stretching east to west, winding up and down across Insert a word
grasslands mountains, desserts and plateaus. Unfortunately
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some of the original sections ar now in ruins or no longr exist.

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work on construct the Great Wall of China started as early as
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Wall was to protect china’s boders from the nomadic warring
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tribes, that came down from preent day manchuria and
Mongolia.

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The great wall of China is indoubtedly one of the most Editing Marks:

significant man-made structures in the world built over 2000 Capital letter
years ago, it is an arcitectural feat that this structure is stil
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standing. The Great Wall of china spans an impresive 8851.8
km stretching east to west, winding up and down across Insert a word
grasslands mountains, desserts and plateaus. Unfortunately
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some of the original sections ar now in ruins or no longr exist.
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work on construct the Great Wall of China started as early as
the 5th century B.C. The main reason behind built the Great Check spelling

Wall was to protect china’s boders from the nomadic warring New paragraph
tribes, that came down from preent day manchuria and
Mongolia.

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Great Wall of China - Answers

The Great Wall of China is undoubtedly one of the most significant

man-made structures in the world. Built over 2000 years ago, it is
an architectural feat that this structure is still standing. The Great
Wall of China spans an impressive 8851.8 km stretching east to
west, winding up and down across grasslands, mountains, deserts
and plateaus. Unfortunately some of the original sections are now
in ruins or no longer exist.

Work on constructing the Great Wall of China started as early as the

5th century B.C. The main reason behind building the Great Wall
was to protect China’s borders from the nomadic warring tribes,
that came down from present day Manchuria and Mongolia.
Music Players and Your Hearing - Editing

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Do you now how much time you spend listening 2 music Editing Marks:

on your music device? Do you turn it up so loud that you Capital letter
cant here any outside noise. Well you may be doing
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more harm than good! Music players are a great source
of entertainment, but they are also the cause of serius Insert a word
Hearing problems for young people today research has
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fund that young ppl are more likly to play their music
too loud, which can result in hearing loss later in life. Take something out
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The ear piece are designed to fit firmly in the listeners
ear canal, alowing outside noise to be eliminated? This New paragraph
means that the music is Pumped directly into the the ear,
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Music Players and Your Hearing - Editing

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Do you now how much time you spend listening 2 music Editing Marks:

on your music device? Do you turn it up so loud that you Capital letter
cant here any outside noise. Well you may be doing
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more harm than good! Music players are a great source
of entertainment, but they are also the cause of serius Insert a word
Hearing problems for young people today research has
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fund that young ppl are more likly to play their music
too loud, which can result in hearing loss later in life. Take something out

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The ear piece are designed to fit firmly in the listeners
ear canal, alowing outside noise to be eliminated? This New paragraph
means that the music is Pumped directly into the the ear,
potentially causing permanent dammage.

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Music Players and Your Hearing - Answers

Do you know how much time you spend listening to music on your
music device? Do you turn it up so loud you that can’t hear any
outside noise? Well, you may be doing more harm than good!

[Music players are a great source of entertainment, but they are

also the cause of serious hearing problems for young people today.
Research has found that young people are more likely to play their
music too loud, which can result in hearing loss later in life.

The ear pieces are designed to fit firmly in the listener’s ear canal,
allowing outside noise to be eliminated. This means that the music
is pumped directly into the ear, potentially causing permanent
damage.
 The Solar System - Editing

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The soler system is made up of eight planet’s which Editing Marks:

orbit around the Sun Capital letter

The four smaller planets closest to the Sun are End punctuation . ! ?

mercury, Venus earth and Mars. They made up of rock Insert a word
and metel. the four outer planets are much larger. The
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too largest are Jupiter and Saturn, composd mainly of l.c.

hydrogen and helium. The outermost Planets are Take something out
Uranus and “Neptune”. They are composed largely of SP
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ices, including frozen water ammonia and methane
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our solar system is located within one of outer arms
of the milky way galaxy, witch contains about 200
billion stars.

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 The Solar System - Editing

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The soler system is made up of eight planet’s which Editing Marks:

orbit around the Sun Capital letter

The four smaller planets closest to the Sun are End punctuation
mercury, Venus earth and Mars. They made up of rock
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and metel. the four outer planets are much larger. The
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too largest are Jupiter and Saturn, composd mainly of
hydrogen and helium. The outermost Planets are Take something out
Uranus and “Neptune”. They are composed largely of
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ices, including frozen water ammonia and methane
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our solar system is located within one of outer arms
of the milky way galaxy, witch contains about 200
billion stars.

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 The Solar System - Answers

The solar system is made up of eight planets which orbit around

the Sun.

The four smaller planets closest to the Sun are Mercury, Venus,
Earth and Mars. They are made up of rock and metal. The four outer
planets are much larger. The two largest are Jupiter and Saturn,
composed mainly of hydrogen and helium. The outermost planets
are Uranus and Neptune. They are composed largely of ices,
including frozen water, ammonia and methane.

Our solar system is located within one of the outer arms of the
Milky Way galaxy, which contains about 200 billion stars.
 Soccer - Editing

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Soccor (or football) is considered the worlds most Editing Marks:

popular sport. in soccer, there are to teams of eleven Capital letter

players It is played on a large grass feild with a goal
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each end.
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The obgect of the game is to get the Soccer Ball into
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the opposing teams gaol. players cannot touch the l.c.

ball with there hands (with the exception of the Take something out
goalie. They can only kick knee or head ball SP
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 Soccer - Editing

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Soccor (or football) is considered the worlds most Editing Marks:

popular sport. in soccer, there are to teams of eleven Capital letter

players It is played on a large grass feild with a goal
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each end.
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The obgect of the game is to get the Soccer Ball into
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the opposing teams gaol. players cannot touch the
ball with there hands (with the exception of the Take something out
goalie. They can only kick knee or head ball
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One of the reesons soccer is so popular is that it only New paragraph

takes a ball and a flat open area to play?

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 Soccer - Answers

Soccer (or football) is considered the world's most popular sport. In

soccer, there are two teams of eleven players. It is played on a large
grass field with a goal at each end.

The object of the game is to get the soccer ball into the opposing
team's goal. Players cannot touch the ball with their hands (with
the exception of the goalie). They can only kick, knee or head the
ball.

One of the reasons soccer is so popular is that it only takes a ball

and a flat open area to play.
 Dreaming - Editing

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dreams are storys and pictures our brain’s create when Editing Marks:

we are asleep Most dreams happen when we deeply Capital letter

asleep and our eyes begin to moove around quickly
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under our eyelids. This is called rapid Eye Movement!
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Some dreams are just you’re mind playing with thorts
and images from life. other dreams are an oppertunity Change to lower case l.c.

for you to make sense of your life dream experts also Take something out
agree that recurring dreams (dreams that you keep SP
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having over and over propably have some sort of special
meaning, New paragraph

Although everbody dreams (including Animals), we will

forget 90% them.

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 Dreaming - Editing

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dreams are storys and pictures our brain’s create when Editing Marks:

we are asleep Most dreams happen when we deeply Capital letter

asleep and our eyes begin to moove around quickly
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under our eyelids. This is called rapid Eye Movement!
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Some dreams are just you’re mind playing with thorts
and images from life. other dreams are an oppertunity Change to lower case

for you to make sense of your life dream experts also Take something out
agree that recurring dreams (dreams that you keep
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having over and over propably have some sort of special
meaning, New paragraph

Although everbody dreams (including Animals), we will

forget 90% them.

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 Dreaming - Answers

Dreams are stories and pictures our brains create when we are
asleep. Most dreams happen when we are deeply asleep and our
eyes begin to move around quickly under our eyelids. This is called
Rapid Eye Movement.

Some dreams are just your mind playing with thoughts and images
from life. Other dreams are an opportunity for you to make sense of
your life. Dream experts also agree that recurring dreams (dreams
that you keep having over and over) probably have some sort of
special meaning.

Although everybody dreams (including animals), we will forget

90% of them.
 Why Our Bodies Need Water - Editing

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H2O, commonly known as water, is esential for the Editing Marks:

human body too function and vital to hour Survival Capital letter
Although we can last week’s without food, we can
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only survive a matter days without water. it is
important for us to re-plenish our supply of Fresh Insert a word
Water every day, as we regularly loose liquid from our
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lungs skin urine and faeces!
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All though our bodies are made up of 50 to 75 SP
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percent water, One of our most important organs, our
Brain, is made up of 73% water. We need to stay New paragraph
hidrated to make sure our “brain cells” can function at
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 Why Our Bodies Need Water - Editing

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H2O, commonly known as water, is esential for the Editing Marks:

human body too function and vital to hour Survival Capital letter
Although we can last week’s without food, we can
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only survive a matter days without water. it is
important for us to re-plenish our supply of Fresh Insert a word
Water every day, as we regularly loose liquid from our
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lungs skin urine and faeces!
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All though our bodies are made up of 50 to 75
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percent water, One of our most important organs, our
Brain, is made up of 73% water. We need to stay New paragraph
hidrated to make sure our “brain cells” can function at
the optimal level.

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Why Our Bodies Need Water - Answers

H2O, commonly known as water, is essential for the human body to

function and vital to our survival. Although we can last weeks
without food, we can only survive a matter of days without water. It
is important for us to replenish our supply of fresh water every day,
as we regularly lose liquid from our lungs, skin, urine and faeces.

Although our bodies are made up of 50 to 75 per cent water, one of

our most important organs, our brain, is made up of 73% water. We
need to stay hydrated to make sure our brain cells can function at
the optimal level.
 Bees - Editing

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there are about 20 000 species of Bees in the world Editing Marks:

Bees live together in groups called colonys. There Capital letter

three types of bees in each colony! There is The
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queen bee the worker bee and the “drone”.
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The queen is, the largest bee in the colony she is
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the only won that lays eggs. Drones are mail bees, l.c.

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they do all the work. They clean and protect the
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colony and take care of the offspring.

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 Bees - Editing

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there are about 20 000 species of Bees in the world Editing Marks:

Bees live together in groups called colonys. There Capital letter

three types of bees in each colony! There is The
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queen bee the worker bee and the “drone”.
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The queen is, the largest bee in the colony she is
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the only won that lays eggs. Drones are mail bees,
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that she can lay egs. Worker bees are Female and
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they do all the work. They clean and protect the
hive. collect the pollen and necta to feed the New paragraph

colony and take care of the offspring.

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 Bees - Answers

There are about 20 000 species of bees in the world. Bees live
together in groups called colonies. There are three types of bees in
each colony. There is the queen bee, the worker bee and the drone.

The queen is the largest bee in the colony. She is the only one that
lays eggs. Drones are male bees. Their only job is to mate with the
queen bee so that she can lay eggs. Worker bees are female and
they do all the work. They clean and protect the hive, collect the
pollen and nectar to feed the colony and take care of the offspring.
 Thunderstorms - Editing

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A thunderstom is a storm with Thunder and Lightning Editing Marks:

There is ofen heavy rain during a thunderstorm? Capital letter

Thunderstorm’s happen when warm, moist air quickly End punctuation . ! ?

mooves upwards. This causes Clouds to form and

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creates gusty winds heavy rain and some-times hail.
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the loud sound that “thunder” makes caused by the

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heat of the lightning that happens befour you hear the
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thunder. sometimes the sound of thunder can last for Check spelling

severel seconds. This is because the thunder echos New paragraph

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 Thunderstorms - Editing

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A thunderstom is a storm with Thunder and Lightning Editing Marks:

There is ofen heavy rain during a thunderstorm? Capital letter

Thunderstorm’s happen when warm, moist air quickly End punctuation

mooves upwards. This causes Clouds to form and
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creates gusty winds heavy rain and some-times hail.
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the loud sound that “thunder” makes caused by the
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heat of the lightning that happens befour you hear
the thunder. sometimes the sound of thunder can last Check spelling

for severel seconds. This is because the thunder echos New paragraph
around the ground mountains, hills and building’s.

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 Thunderstorms - Answers

A thunderstorm is a storm with thunder and lightning. There is

often heavy rain during a thunderstorm.

Thunderstorms happen when warm, moist air quickly moves

upwards. This causes clouds to form and creates gusty winds,
heavy rain and sometimes hail.

The loud sound that thunder makes is caused by the heat of the
lightning that happens before you hear the thunder. Sometimes
the sound of thunder can last for several seconds. This is because
the thunder echoes around the ground, mountains, hills and
buildings.
 Cathy Freeman - Editing

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cathy freeman is won of the most well-known Editing Marks:

Indigenous australians. she was the first “Indigenous Capital letter

Australian” to win a gold medel at the
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Commonwealth Games (in Canada in 1994. Freeman
competed in many championchip events Insert a word
through-out the 90s! She was selected to light the
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torch at the sydney olympics in 2000, wear she won
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freeman retired in 2003 and became involved with
many charities In 2007, she founded Cathy Freeman New paragraph
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 Cathy Freeman - Editing

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cathy freeman is won of the most well-known Editing Marks:

Indigenous australians. she was the first “Indigenous Capital letter

Australian” to win a gold medel at the
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Commonwealth Games (in Canada in 1994. Freeman
competed in many championchip events Insert a word
through-out the 90s! She was selected to light the
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torch at the sydney olympics in 2000, wear she won
gold in the 400m event. Take something out

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freeman retired in 2003 and became involved with
many charities In 2007, she founded Cathy Freeman New paragraph
Foundation, witch works to close the gap in ejucation
between Indigenous and non-Indigenous student’s.

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Cathy Freeman is one of the most well-known Indigenous

Australians. She was the first Indigenous Australian to win a gold
medal at the Commonwealth Games (in Canada in 1994). Freeman
competed in many championship events throughout the 90s. She
was selected to light the torch at the Sydney Olympics in 2000,
where she won gold in the 400m event.

Freeman retired in 2003 and became involved with many charities.

In 2007, she founded the Cathy Freeman Foundation, which works
to close the gap in education between Indigenous and
non-Indigenous students.
 Deep-sea Diving - Editing

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the deep-see diver looked nervously at the ocean Editing Marks:

around him One by one, waves crashed into the side Capital letter
of his rocking boat. in a few seconds, he was going to
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have to enter these dangerus waters. He anxiously
put on his goggles flippers and oxyjen mask he dived Insert a word
into the frezing waters below and hoped for the best.
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he felt the icy water cover him like a blanket. Rainbow Take something out
fish darted in and out of the coral For a few minutes SP
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he feeled calm and happy. Sudenly, a giant shark
apeared out of nowhere the diver swam furiously New paragraph

back towards his boat. He decided never to dive in

this part of the oshean ever again

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 Deep-sea Diving - Editing

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the deep-see diver looked nervously at the ocean Editing Marks:

around him One by one, waves crashed into the side Capital letter
of his rocking boat. in a few seconds, he was going to
End punctuation
have to enter these dangerus waters. He anxiously
put on his goggles flippers and oxyjen mask he dived Insert a word
into the frezing waters below and hoped for the best.
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he felt the icy water cover him like a blanket. Rainbow Take something out
fish darted in and out of the coral For a few minutes
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he feeled calm and happy. Sudenly, a giant shark
apeared out of nowhere the diver swam furiously New paragraph
back towards his boat. He decided never to dive in
this part of the oshean ever again

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 Deep-sea Diving - Answers

The deep-sea diver looked nervously at the ocean around him. One
by one, waves crashed into the side of his rocking boat. In a few
seconds, he was going to have to enter these dangerous waters. He
anxiously put on his goggles, flippers and oxygen mask. He dived
into the freezing waters below and hoped for the best.

He felt the icy water cover him like a blanket. Rainbow fish darted
in and out of the coral. For a few minutes, he felt calm and happy.
Suddenly, a giant shark appeared out of nowhere. The diver swam
furiously back towards his boat. He decided never to dive in this
part of the ocean ever again!
 Professor Fizz’s Potion - Editing

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professor fizz clutched the miracle potion in his gloved Editing Marks:
hand. for many days and nights, he had been trying to
Capital letter
purfect this recipe. Now that the brew was exactly write,
it was time for a test removing his gloves, he pulled the End punctuation . ! ?

cork from the top of the bubling beaker. In one gulp, he

Insert a word
drunk the entire potion and waited
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Almost immediately Professor Fizz began to feel verry

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strange. In a matter of seconds, his eyes started to feel
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very hot The hairs on his arms and legs started to twich. Check spelling

While that were happening, he heard a strange whistling New paragraph

sound comming from inside his ears. professor Fizz
hoped that he wouldnt have any more strange
re-actions to his potion

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professor fizz clutched the miracle potion in his gloved Editing Marks:
hand. for many days and nights, he had been trying to
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purfect this recipe. Now that the brew was exactly write,
it was time for a test removing his gloves, he pulled the End punctuation
cork from the top of the bubling beaker. In one gulp, he Insert a word
drunk the entire potion and waited
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Almost immediately Professor Fizz began to feel verry
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strange. In a matter of seconds, his eyes started to feel
very hot The hairs on his arms and legs started to twich. Check spelling

While that were happening, he heard a strange whistling New paragraph

sound comming from inside his ears. professor Fizz
hoped that he wouldnt have any more strange
re-actions to his potion

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 Professor Fizz’s Potion - Answers

Professor Fizz clutched the miracle potion in his gloved hand. For
many days and nights, he had been trying to perfect this recipe.
Now that the brew was exactly right, it was time for a test.
Removing his gloves, he pulled the cork from the top of the
bubbling beaker. In one gulp, he drank the entire potion and
waited.

Almost immediately, Professor Fizz began to feel very strange. In a

matter of seconds, his eyes started to feel very hot. The hairs on his
arms and legs started to twitch. While that was happening, he
heard a strange whistling sound coming from inside his ears.
Professor Fizz hoped that he wouldn’t have any more strange
reactions to his potion!
 Beth’s Birthday - Editing

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When the lights went out the candel on the chocolate Editing Marks:

birthday cake shon brightly all of the guests at Beths Capital letter
party started to sing. While they was singing the
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birthday song, Beth smiled at each of her friends. when
the song was over, everyone eight cake and talked Insert a word
together
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That night, beth wrote special letters to everyone to Take something out
thank them for coming to her partie. She felt so lucky to SP
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have such wunderful friends when she was finished her
letters, she decided to have a nice warm shower New paragraph
Afterwards, she jumpt into her comfortable bed. what a
wonderful birthday it had been

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 Beth’s Birthday - Editing

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When the lights went out the candel on the chocolate Editing Marks:

birthday cake shon brightly all of the guests at Beths Capital letter
party started to sing. While they was singing the
End punctuation
birthday song, Beth smiled at each of her friends. when
the song was over, everyone eight cake and talked Insert a word
together
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That night, beth wrote special letters to everyone to Take something out
thank them for coming to her partie. She felt so lucky to
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have such wunderful friends when she was finished her
letters, she decided to have a nice warm shower New paragraph
Afterwards, she jumpt into her comfortable bed. what a
wonderful birthday it had been

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 Beth’s Birthday - Answers

When the lights went out, the candle on the chocolate birthday
cake shone brightly. All of the guests at Beth’s party started to sing.
While they were singing the birthday song, Beth smiled at each of
her friends. When the song was over, everyone ate cake and talked
together.

That night, Beth wrote special letters to everyone to thank them for
coming to her party. She felt so lucky to have such wonderful
friends. When she was finished her letters, she decided to have a
nice, warm shower. Afterwards, she jumped into her comfortable
bed. What a wonderful birthday it had been!
 Brad’s Bath - Editing

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brad popped his head up from beneth the bubbles in
the bathtub. in a few minutes, his little sister would Capital letter
come raceing into the bathroom In her loudest voice End punctuation . ! ?
she would scream for Brad to get out so that she
Insert a word
could get in. In the meentime, Brad lay back
peacefully in the warm, relaxing Water. For a few Change to lower case l.c.

more minutes, he would enjoy be alone quiet and still

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Brad could here his sister coming up the stairs. Get Check spelling
out of the bath, Brad” she screamed at the top of her
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lunges. “Its my turn now!

brad sighed to himself his quite time was over.

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brad popped his head up from beneth the bubbles in
the bathtub. in a few minutes, his little sister would Capital letter

come raceing into the bathroom In her loudest voice End punctuation
she would scream for Brad to get out so that she
Insert a word
could get in. In the meentime, Brad lay back
peacefully in the warm, relaxing Water. For a few Change to lower case
more minutes, he would enjoy be alone quiet and still
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Brad could here his sister coming up the stairs. Get Check spelling
out of the bath, Brad” she screamed at the top of her
New paragraph
lunges. “Its my turn now!

brad sighed to himself his quite time was over.

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 Brad’s Bath - Answers

Brad popped his head up from beneath the bubbles in the bathtub.
In a few minutes, his little sister would come racing into the
bathroom. In her loudest voice, she would scream for Brad to get
out so that she could get in. In the meantime, Brad lay back
peacefully in the warm, relaxing water. For a few more minutes, he
would enjoy being alone, quiet and still.

Brad could hear his sister coming up the stairs. “Get out of the
bath, Brad!” she screamed at the top of her lungs. “It’s my turn
now!”

Brad sighed to himself. His quiet time was over.

 The Treehouse - Editing

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the sun shone brightly on the knew treehouse. Last Editing Marks:

weekend, the children had worked for ours building Capital letter
the walls roof and stairs with there father. In the next
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few days, they were planing on decorating the inside
they were going to buy some paint from the local Insert a word
hardware store. It were going to be a big job but they
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were excited to get started
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walls were going to be painted yellow. Their would be
red and blue cushons to sit on. Finally there would be New paragraph
a brite orange table with green chairs it was going to
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 The Treehouse - Editing

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the sun shone brightly on the knew treehouse. Last Editing Marks:

weekend, the children had worked for ours building Capital letter
the walls roof and stairs with there father. In the next
End punctuation
few days, they were planing on decorating the inside
they were going to buy some paint from the local Insert a word
hardware store. It were going to be a big job but they
Change to lower case
were excited to get started
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The children had drawn pichures of their ideas the
Check spelling
walls were going to be painted yellow. Their would be
red and blue cushons to sit on. Finally there would be New paragraph
a brite orange table with green chairs it was going to
look wonderful

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 The Treehouse - Answers

The sun shone brightly on the new treehouse. Last weekend, the
children had worked for hours building the walls, roof and stairs
with their father. In the next few days, they were planning on
decorating the inside. They were going to buy some paint from the
local hardware store. It was going to be a big job, but they were
excited to get started!

The children had drawn pictures of their ideas. The walls were
going to be painted yellow. There would be red and blue cushions
to sit on. Finally, there would be a bright orange table with green
chairs. It was going to look wonderful!
 Mia’s Magic Moment - Editing

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mia skated gracefully across the ice, lost in the Editing Marks:

magick of her routine. For the first time ever she Capital letter
felt calm and controled. as she skated around
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the rink, every spin twist and turn was perfect
the audience clapped and cheered Insert a word
enthusiastically. Finally, she had a real chance of Change to lower case l.c.
winning a medel
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the music stopped the crowd rose to there feet. SP
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mia bowed gracefully and skated to the side of
the rink. Her coach hugged her close. I think New paragraph

youve done it, Mia” he whispered. “I think your

going to win!

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mia skated gracefully across the ice, lost in the Editing Marks:

magick of her routine. For the first time ever she Capital letter
felt calm and controled. as she skated around
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the rink, every spin twist and turn was perfect
the audience clapped and cheered Insert a word
enthusiastically. Finally, she had a real chance of Change to lower case
winning a medel
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the music stopped the crowd rose to there feet.
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mia bowed gracefully and skated to the side of
the rink. Her coach hugged her close. I think New paragraph

youve done it, Mia” he whispered. “I think your

going to win!

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 Mia’s Magic Moment - Answers

Mia skated gracefully across the ice, lost in the magic of her routine.
For the first time ever, she felt calm and controlled. As she skated
around the rink, every spin, twist and turn was perfect. The
audience clapped and cheered enthusiastically. Finally, she had a
real chance of winning a medal!

The music stopped. The crowd rose to their feet. Mia bowed
gracefully and skated to the side of the rink. Her coach hugged her
close. “I think you’ ve done it, Mia!” he whispered. “I think you’re
going to win!”
 Bruno’s Big Adventure - Editing

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It was an ordinary thursday. bruno the dog was on the Editing Marks:
back porch, watching the clouds pass by. Suddenly a big
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gust of wind blue over bruno went into the yard to
investigate. To his amazement, the side gate had flung End punctuation . ! ?

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Bruno decided to go to the park when he got there, Change to lower case l.c.

another dog was rolling around in the leeves. “That look

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like fun! Bruno thought to him-self, so he joined in with SP

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bruno was haveing so much fun with his knew friend
that he had forgotten to go home. It wasnt until he saw
his owner in the park that he knew he was in trouble

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It was an ordinary thursday. bruno the dog was on the Editing Marks:
back porch, watching the clouds pass by. Suddenly a big
Capital letter
gust of wind blue over bruno went into the yard to
investigate. To his amazement, the side gate had flung End punctuation

open Insert a word

Bruno decided to go to the park when he got there, Change to lower case
another dog was rolling around in the leeves. “That look
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like fun! Bruno thought to him-self, so he joined in with
the uther dog Check spelling

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bruno was haveing so much fun with his knew friend
that he had forgotten to go home. It wasnt until he saw
his owner in the park that he knew he was in trouble

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 Bruno’s Big Adventure - Answers

It was an ordinary Thursday. Bruno the dog was on the back porch,
watching the clouds pass by. Suddenly, a big gust of wind blew
over. Bruno went into the yard to investigate. To his amazement,
the side gate had flung open!

Bruno decided to go to the park. When he got there, another dog

was rolling around in the leaves. “That looks like fun!” Bruno
thought to himself, so he joined in with the other dog.

Bruno was having so much fun with his new friend that he had
forgotten to go home. It wasn’t until he saw his owner in the park
that he knew he was in trouble!
 One Little Seed - Editing

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One hot day grace was eating a big piece of juicy Editing Marks:
water-melon. as she slurped and munched on her final
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peace, she wondered if she could grow her own
watermelon End punctuation . ! ?

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grace went back to the kichen. She took some of the
littel seeds from her last piece of watermelon she put the Change to lower case l.c.

seeds into a pot full of soil and added some water. Grace
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place the pot on the porch and waited for her SP

watermelon to grow Check spelling

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grace continued to water her little watermelon each day
finally it was ready to eat. it was the most delishious
watermelon that Grace had ever tasted

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One hot day grace was eating a big piece of juicy Editing Marks:
water-melon. as she slurped and munched on her final
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peace, she wondered if she could grow her own
watermelon End punctuation

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grace went back to the kichen. She took some of the
littel seeds from her last piece of watermelon she put the Change to lower case
seeds into a pot full of soil and added some water. Grace
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place the pot on the porch and waited for her
watermelon to grow Check spelling

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grace continued to water her little watermelon each day
finally it was ready to eat. it was the most delishious
watermelon that Grace had ever tasted

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 One Little Seed - Answers

One hot day, Grace was eating a big piece of juicy watermelon. As
she slurped and munched on her final piece, she wondered if she
could grow her own watermelon.

Grace went back to the kitchen. She took some of the little seeds
from her last piece of watermelon. She put the seeds into a pot full
of soil and added some water. Grace placed the pot on the porch
and waited for her watermelon to grow.

Grace continued to water her little watermelon each day. Finally, it

was ready to eat. It was the most delicious watermelon that Grace
had ever tasted!