The Teacher’s example.

Order My example
DADWAVERS
In a quiet house, in a quiet street, in a quiet
D Description 1 town, lived a quiet family: A family who was
waiting for a letter.
A noise came from the front door.
A Action 2
“I’ll get it” panted the boy almost jumping
D Dialogue 3 down the flight of stairs: missing out most of
the steps on the way.
At the end of the flight of stairs, the bright
W Where 4 blue door was beckoning Jake over to see it.
Quickly, Jack got to the door: was his letter
A Adverb 5 here?
Riffling through the post, Jack dismissed
V Verb 6 every letter that wasn’t addressed to Mr Jack
North.
What felt like hours to Jack, he went through
Estimation what looked like 100s of letters addressed to
E 7 someone else but him
of time
Would this letter arrive? Why didn’t it come
Rhetorical today?
R 8
question
He got to almost the last letter when his legs
Simile [or turned to jelly – it’s here.
S 9
metaphor]
Then write it in a paragraph in your English Books, like this:
In a quiet house, in a quiet street, in a quiet town, lived a quiet family: A family
who was waiting for a letter. A noise came from the front door. “I’ll get it”
panted the boy almost jumping down the flight of stairs: missing out most of
the steps on the way. At the end of the flight of stairs, the bright blue door
was beckoning Jake over to see it. Quickly, Jack got to the door: was his letter
here? Riffling through the post, Jack dismissed every letter that wasn’t
addressed to Mr Jack North. What felt like hours to Jack, he went through
what looked like 100s of letters addressed to someone else but him Would this
letter arrive? Why didn’t it come today? He got to almost the last letter when
his legs turned to jelly – it’s here.

Then repeat…..
 My plan ….
Order My example
DADWAVERS

D Description

A Action

D Dialogue

W Where

A Adverb

V Verb

Estimation
E
of time
Rhetorical
R
question
Simile [or
S
metaphor]