Minutes of the Proposal Defense

SHIFTING COURSE: ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES FROM THE

VIEWPOINTS OF COLLEGE STUDENT SHIFTERS

Researchers: Maethi Dawn G. Resuelo

Arabela Damole
Emerlito Degiñon
Noby Ann Lobete
Flora Mae Ontoy

Panel Members: Sir Randy A. Tudy, Ph.D.

Sir Kirk Sunny Gil Heruela

Date: January 29, 2019

Part of the Study Comments/Suggestions Action Taken

Title
Introduction, first
paragraph
Introduction, second
paragraph
Introduction, third
paragraph
Introduction, fourth
paragraph
Theoretical Lens
Theoretical Lens, first
paragraph
Theoretical Lens, second
Change the word “Shifting” to “Switch”
Discuss first the problems attributed to
changing courses and arrange the sources
alphabetically and look for the real
source of the university of the
Philippines Manila (2015)
Your second paragraph should be your
first paragraph
Summarize your data
Change the word “incites” to “insight”
Exclude “Based on” and change “our
research we find out some related theory
that support our study” to “This study is
viewed from the lens of the following
theories”
Change” In this theory” to “In this study,
this theory” and include who discovered
the theory
Change” In this theory” to “In this study,
We already Changed the word
“Shifting” to “Switch”
We already discussed the first
problems attributed to
changing courses and arrange
the sources alphabetically and
look for the real source of the
university of the Philippines
Manila (2015)
We already changed our
second paragraph to first
paragraph
We already summarized our
data
We already changed the word
incites to insight
We already excluded “Based
on” and changed “our research
we find out some related
theory that support our study”
to “This study is viewed from
the lens of the following
theories”
We already changed” In this
theory” to “In this study, this
theory” and included who
discovered the theory
We already changed” In this
paragraph this theory” and relate more to your study theory” to “In this study, this
and include who discovered the theory theory” and relate more to your
study and included who
discovered the theory
Theoretical Lens, third Change” In this theory” to “In this study, We already changed” In this
paragraph this theory” and include who discovered theory” to “In this study, this
the theory theory” and relate more to your
study and included who
discovered the theory
Purpose of the Study, page Add “be “after “will” in the sentence and We already added “be “after
5 make the “Advantages and “will” in the sentence and
Disadvantages” to “advantages and made the “Advantages and
disadvantages” then add the “shifting Disadvantages” to “advantages
courses” after the disadvantages and disadvantages” then add
the “shifting courses” after the
disadvantages
Research Question, page 6 Exclude “from one to another” in We already excluded “from
question (1 and 2) one to another” in question (1
and 2)
Review of Related Arrange to Decision Making in Shifting We already arranged our RRL
Literature Course, Reasons and Causes of Shifting to Decision Making in Shifting
Course of a Student, Advantages of Course, Reasons and Causes of
Shifting to Other Courses, Disadvantages Shifting Course of a Student,
of Shifting to Other Courses, and Coping Advantages of Shifting to
Mechanisms. You need to be specific on Other Courses, Disadvantages
what coping mechanism. of Shifting to Other Courses,
and Coping Mechanisms.
Review of Related Change “Related Literature” to “related We already changed “Related
Literature, page 18 literature” Literature” to “related
literature”
Chapter III Method, Exclude the word “we” and the exclude We already excluded the word
Participants, page 20 participants because it is too obvious “we” and the exclude
participants
Chapter III Method, Add your opinion about the help of We already added our opinion
Sampling, page 20 sampling to your study about the help of sampling to
our study
Chapter III Method, Data Add your opinion about the help of data We already added our opinion
Sources, page 21 source to your study about the help of data source to
our study
Chapter III Method, Add your opinion about the help of We already added our opinion
Collection of Data, page collection of data to your study about the help of data source to
21 our study
Chapter III Method, Add your opinion about the help of We already added our opinion
Analysis and analysis and interpretation of data to your about the help of analysis and
Interpretation of Data, study and change the word “analyzation” interpretation of data to our
page 22 to “the analysis” then add “d” to “use” study and changed the word
 and insert by Collaizi’s (1978). Add “d” “analyzation” to “the analysis”.
to “follow” then exclude “by Collaizi’s Then we already added “d” to
1978 method. Then change the sentence” “use” and insert by Collaizi’s
method will be used for the interpretation (1978). We already also added
of the data will follow” to “technique “d” to “follow” then excluded
used by” “by Collaizi’s 1978 method.
Then changed the sentence”
method will be used for the
interpretation of the data will
follow” to “technique used by”
Chapter III Method, Add your opinion about the help of We already added our opinion
Trustworthiness,” Credibility to your study about the help of Credibility to
Credibility” page 22 our study
Chapter III Method, Add your opinion about the help of We already added our opinion
Trustworthiness,” Dependability to your study about the help of
Dependability” page 23 Dependability to our study
Chapter III Method, Add your opinion about the help of We already added our opinion
Trustworthiness,” Confirmability to your study about the help of
Confirmability” page 23 Confirmability to our study
Chapter III Method, Add your opinion about the help of We already added our opinion
Trustworthiness,” Transferability to your study about the help of
Transferability” page 23 Transferability to our study
Chapter III Method, Add your opinion about the help of We already added our opinion
Ethical Consideration, Ethical Consideration to your study about the help of Ethical
page 23 Consideration to your study
Chapter III Method, Add your opinion about the help of We already added our opinion
Ethical Consideration,” Anonymity to your study about the help of Anonymity to
Anonymity” page 24 our study
Chapter III Method, Add your opinion about the help of We already added our opinion
Ethical Consideration,” Informed Consent to your study about the help of Informed
Informed Consent” page Consent to our study
24
Chapter III Method, Add your opinion about the help of We already added our opinion
Ethical Consideration,” Privacy and confidentiality to your study about the help of Privacy and
Privacy and confidentiality to our study
confidentiality” page 24
References Follow the format of APA We already followed the
format of APA