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Delaney Lewellyn

CIBACS

November 19, 2019

Package #1 QC – Annika Norquist

Identify the Project

Annika does an amazing job explaining her project in a way anyone would understand. I

would recommend defining sole proprietor, in case someone does not understand that term.

Otherwise the word choice is chosen carefully and is used in a way to shape/explain her project.

The uniqueness of the project is stated by having the perspective of a high school student. The

importance of the project is not clearly stated on the other hand, she spends a lot of time

explaining the uniqueness though.

Analyze the Project

The project is broken up into writing a business plan, creating a website, pricing,

advertisement, managing dates, and to create the Senior CIBACs class New York trip photo

book. Each component is examined and thoroughly thought out. The steps are logically stepped

out and make sense for this specific project. I just have not seen that much information on the

journalism part, is there any specific sections involving it that needs to be explained. The goal of

the project is to make an impact in the world with one article or photo at a time. I feel like this

goal needs to be more extravagant or detailed. It is kind of bland. Some questions I have for it

are, what kind of impact do you want to make, what do you want to impact specifically, etc. In

my eyes this goal can be found challenging for anyone one especially is you go in depth on what

kind of impact you want to make to the world. Research in certain types of photography and

about receiving a business license will still need to be conducted. The learning will be
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documented through her activity log, seeing the differences in her photography skills overtime,

and calendars of photography schedules. I would recommend you also mention something about

a research consultant page to document the research you took.

Identify the Alternatives

Annika does a good job explaining some the of the different alternatives to both the

photography and journalism parts of the project. All choices a well explained in a nonbiased

way, it sounds like she is still looking over the choices she can choose. In the last paragraph she

states that are many other ways to go through with this project, if she finds out more, she should

add it to this section instead of making it sounds like these are the only choices she is picking

through.