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3. The manager repeated again his warning that we must use strong passwords.
The manager repeated his warning that we must use strong passwords.
4. Although the two files seem exactly identical, we should proofread each and
every page.
Although the two files seem identical, we should proofread each page.
1. We cannot complete the construction at this point in time due to the fact that
building costs have jumped at a considerable rate.
We cannot complete the construction due to the fact that building costs have
jumped at a considerable rate.
We would seek additional funding; however, in view of the fact that rates
have increased, we cannot.
3. In very few cases has it been advisable for us to borrow money for a period of
90 or fewer days.
In few cases has it been advisable for us to borrow money for a period of 90
or fewer days
5. Despite the fact that we have had no response to our bid, we are still available
in the event that you wish to proceed with your building project.
Despite that, we have had no response to our bid, we are still available if you
wish to proceed with your building project.
Writing Improvement Exercises: Jargon, Slang, Clichés, Wordiness
Your Task. Revise the following sentences to avoid confusing jargon, slang,
clichés, and wordiness.
1. Our manager insists that we must think outside the box in promoting our new
kitchen tool.
2. Although we got burned in the last contract, you can be sure we will stand our
ground this time.
Although we lost in the last contract, you can be sure we will be firm this
time.
3. Beyond the shadow of a doubt, our lousy competitor will make another snarky
claim that is below the belt.
We have no doubt that, our lousy competitor will make another unfair claim.
4. If you refer back to our five-year plan, you will see that there are provisions for
preventing blowing the budget.
If you refer to our five-year plan, you will see that there are provisions for
protecting the budget.
Auto accidents account for a high number of accidental deaths. The most
common causes of these accidents are due to the following causes. In all
probability, the most common cause is distracted drivers. Makeup, cell phones,
texting, food, and the morning newspaper are all common ways that drivers are
being distracted. Another cause is most assuredly impaired driving. Alcohol and
drugs impair judgment and reaction times. This obviously results in accidents.
Another cause has got to be aggressive drivers. Being an aggressive driver
instead of a defensive driver puts you at risk for getting involved in an accident.
Finally, road rage is a significant cause. Drivers who get angry easily and then
take it out on other drivers are one of the leading causes of accidents.
Finally, road rage is a major cause. Drivers who get angry easily and
then take it out on other drivers are one of the leading causes of accidents.