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COMMON ERRORS IN ENGLISH – LITHUANIAN

TRANSLATIONS

COURSE WORK

Klaipėda, 2008
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CONTENT

Introduction………………………………………………………………………………3
1. History of translation……………………………………………………………..4
2. History of translation theory………………………………………………….......6
2.1 What is translation………………………………………………………………..7
3. Translation differences between the English and Lithuanian languages………....8
3.1 Identifying morphological gaps……………………………………………..……9
3.2 Errors in translation of lexical and morphological gaps (include gaps in texts)
……………………………………………………………………………..12
3.3 Mistakes in translating negative prefixes in English and Lithuanian…………...14
3.4 Mistakes translating by a different part of speech……………………………….14
4. Comparison of the formal document translation………………………………...16
5. Research on identifying common errors in English-Lithuanian translation……20
6. Results of the survey……………………………………………………………..27
Conclusion………………………………………………………………………………29
Resources …………………………………………………………………………… …30
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INTRODUCTION
The target of this course work is the errors made in English – Lithuanian translations.
Nowadays this topic is very important, because the English language is one of the best known
languages in the world. So it is crucial as fast as it is possible to find ways how to avoid mistakes made
in translations.
The main goals of this course work are:
 to ascertain what kind of mistakes are common;
The tool to find out the types of mistakes a survey among the students of Social science collage group
2U has been conducted and English and Lithuanian texts compared.
 To analyze and classify them;
The results of the survey have been analyzed, the errors investigated and grouped.
 To point out differences between the Lithuanian and English languages;
To achieve this goal both the languages have been compared on the aspect of parts of speech,
morphology and lexicology.
Methods used at the course work were analysis of the information recourses and their
selection, comparison of the linguistic means, conducting of a research, analysis and classification of
the research results, summarizing the material and drawing conclusions.

1. HISTORY OF TRANSLATION

Etymologically the Latin "translatio" derives from the perfect passive participle, "translatum,"
of "transferre" ("to transfer" — from "trans," "across" + "ferre," "to carry" or "to bring"). Additionally,
the Greek term for "translation," "metaphrasis" ("a speaking across"), has supplied English with
"metaphrase" (a "literal translation," or "word-for-word" translation)—as contrasted with "paraphrase"
("a saying in other words," from the Greek "paraphrasis"). "Metaphrase" equates, in one of the more
recent terminologies, to "formal equivalence," and "paraphrase"—to "dynamic equivalence." [10]
The first important translation in the West was that of the Septuagint, a collection of Jewish
Scriptures translated into Koine Greek in Alexandria between the 3rd and 1st centuries BCE. The Jews,
that were widely spread, had forgotten their mother language and needed Greek versions (translations)
of their Scriptures. [3]
The first large-scale efforts at translation were undertaken by the Arabs. Arabs were taken over
the Greek world, so that why they made Arabic versions of its scientific and philosophical works.
During the Middle Ages, some of these Arabic translations were translated in Latin. Such Latin
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translations of Greek and original Arab works of education and science would help advance the
development of European Scholasticism. Scholasticism - was a method of learning taught by the
academics (or schoolmen) of medieval universities about 1100–1500.
The first good translation in English was made by first great poet, the 14th-century Geoffrey
Chaucer. Geoffrey Chaucer (c. 1343 – October 25, 1400?) was an English author, poet, philosopher,
bureaucrat, courtier and diplomat. Sometimes he is called the father of the English literature; also he
was the first author to demonstrate the artistic legitimacy of the native English language
The first great English translation was the Wycliffe Bible (ca. 1382), which showed the weaknesses of
an underdeveloped English prose.[10]

In 18th century the translators’ catchword was that translation would be easy to read. If the
translator did not understand the text or it was thought to be boring for the readers, the translator
omitted that part. And it was popular to put in the text own style. That is why sometimes translations
were like a new composition made by translator. Good example is a case of James Macpherson's
"translations" of Ossian—from texts that were actually of the "translator's" own composition. Moreover
translators were so brave in that times that they translated form the language that they barely knew.
Luckily in 19th century there were made rules for the translators to make more accurate text and
to save the style. The new catchword was “the text, the whole text and nothing but the text” except for
“bad” word passages and for enormous explanation notes. [3]. In regard to style, it was important to
remind to reader that he is reading foreign classic.
2. History of Translation Theory
Discussions of the theory and practice of translation reach back into antiquity and show
remarkable continuities. The distinction that had been drawn by the ancient Greeks between
"metaphrase" ("literal" translation) and "paraphrase" would be adopted by the English poet and
translator John Dryden (1631-1700), who represented translation as the rationally blending of these two
modes of phrasing when selecting, in the target language, "counterparts," or equivalents, for the
expressions used in the source language.[3]
This general formulation of the central concept of translation — equivalence — is probably as
coresponding as any that has been proposed ever since Cicero and Horace, in first-century-BCE Rome,
famously and literally cautioned against translating "word for word" ("verbum pro verbo").
Despite occasional theoretical diversities, the actual practice of translators has hardly changed
since antiquity. Except for some extreme metaphrasers in the early Christian period and the Middle
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Ages, and adapters in various periods (especially pre-Classical Rome, and the 18th century), translators
have generally shown wise flexibility in seeking equivalents — "literal" where possible, paraphrastic
where necessary — for the original meaning and other crucial "values" (e.g., style, verse form,
harmony with musical accompaniment or, in films, with speech articulatory movements) as determined
from context.[10]
2.2 What is translation?
Translation is an action of interpretation of the text that gives the same massage in other
language. Translation is basically a change of form. When we speak of the form of the language, we
use words, sentences, paragraphs, etc., which are written or spoken.
The text that we are translating is called “source text” and the form into which it will be changed is
called “target language”. [5]
Translation must take into account restricts of grammatical rules of both languages, their
idioms; study the lexicon, cultural context of the source language text; determine the meaning and
finding the same meaning in the source text. The process could be shown in picture like this:

Text to be
translated
Translation

MEANING

According to this picture translator must have a text, which he is going to translate. Then he must read
the text and to discover the meaning of it. And then re-express the discovered meaning into target
language.

3. TRANSLATION DIFFERENCES BETWEEN THE ENGLISH AND


LITHUANIAN LANGUAGES
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Lexical gaps are examples of lack of lexicalization detected in a language while comparing two
languages. A concept is lexicalized when a language has a lexical item – a single word, a complex
word, an idiom or a collocation – to express it. It was claimed the existence of a lexical gap only when
a concept lacks lexicalisation and is expressed by a free word combination or any other transformation
in translation. But a multi-word expression “juvelyriniai dirbiniai” (“jewellery”) or “zoologijos sodas”
(“a zoo”) are not lexical gaps, because they are fixed word expressions and are used as single units of
meaning. Besides, for the concepts explained by the expressions mentioned above, Lithuanians have no
alternative expressions. Meanwhile, “atleidimas dėl darbo vietų mažinimo” (“redundancy”) or “derliaus
nuėmimo mašina” (“a harvester”) are lexical gaps, because they are free word combinations, in real
language convert by different techniques – lexical or syntactic changes. It is important to say that a
lexical gap appears only in one of the compared languages. In other words, during translation from
English into Lithuanian, it is identified a lexical gap only in Lithuanian.
A major group of lexical gaps can be explained by social and cultural differences of source and
target language. A lexical gap in a target language is identified when its users do not know a concept of
a source language. For example, Lithuanian food names “vėdarai” or “skilandis” cannot be translated
into English, because they show Lithuanian culture. Another group of lexical gaps could be called
paradigmatic (tipical) due to differences in various examples of two languages. A type of this group is
morphological gaps, which comes from word formation differences. For example, “biculturalism” is
translated by a free word combination “priklausymas dviem kultūroms” because of the “bi-”, which
had to be explained in Lithuanian, or “undernourishment”, which due to the peculiar combination of
the prefix “under-” and “nourishment”, has to be expressed by a free word combination “nepakankama
mityba”.[5]
The term “derivational gaps” identify those gaps within the limits of one language. Derivational
gaps are words produced from partially productive stems and suffixes, which are understandable, but
not acceptable in a language.
For example, although it is understood the meaning of “mistelephone”, “conversate” or “friable”, they
do not comply with the norms of the English language.
In order to make a difference from the cases indicated above, the term “morphological gaps”
will be used in this course work. In this study, the morphological gaps are gaps of the Lithuanian
language, i.e. in the target language. Such kind of lexical gaps results from different morphological
cases in the source and target languages. The English language has a potential to collect complex
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concepts into one word because of its rich choice of prefixes, suffixes and stems, most of which have
roots in Latin or Greek.
Meanwhile, in Lithuanian, only prefixes or suffixes appearing mostly in international words,
usually of some specialized areas, matches to their English analogues, for example, “metamotyvacija”
(“metamotivation”), “parametras” (“parameter”), “socializmas” (“socialism”) or “imunoterapija”
(“imunotherapy”). However, in non-specialised vocabulary these prefixes and suffixes are rare. In
many cases such complex concepts covered by one English word have to be changed by several
Lithuanian words, usually, a free word combination, e.g., caravanning - autoturizmas su nameliu-
priekaba – (auto-tourism by a house-trailer). “Caravanning” is an especially interesting example,
because it shows the complexity of the problem. Not only it represents a concept that is not common
enough to have a fixed lexicalisation in Lithuanian, but in this particular instance it shows the disability
of the language to express an action or its process too. The suffix -ing is changed by a lexical word
“autoturizmas”.
Moreover, it could be considered as a micro-transformation, because the lack of direct
translation of “caravan” is compensated by skipping the meaning component of “auto” to “auto-
turizmas”. It is possible that such translations appear when two problems – cultural/economic and
morphological – go together. [5]
To sum up, the translation difficulties when the target language is Lithuanian comprise of
translating lexical gaps. A major group of lexical gaps can be explained by social and cultural
differences of source and target language. A lexical gap could be identified when users do not know a
concept of a source language. Misunderstanding of concept is also a common translation mistake.

3.1 Identifying morphological gaps


First lexicographic data from the bilingual English – Lithuanian dictionary (2000) was
analysed. Data analysis has shown that there is a system in the way negative English prefixes are
translated into Lithuanian:
1. Some English words with a negative prefix have direct equivalents: disappear – dingti;
disparage – peikti, menkinti; degeneration – išsigimimas. It is interesting to note that the Lithuanian
equivalents express the same concepts without a formal negative feature in a word: they signify a
negative aspect without specific negative prefixes.
2. Some English negation prefixes are easily transformed into the Lithuanian prefix ne-, for
example, dislike – nemėgti; disorder – netvarka.
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3. Negative prefixes in international words are transformed into Lithuanian international words
with their analogues. In other words, these are the examples of borrowing: disbalance – disbalansas;
antibiotic – antibiotikas.
4. Only prefixes are translated by their international analogues: antimatter – antimedžiaga;
antimissile – antiraketa; antiwar – antikarinis.
5. Many English words with negative prefixes are explained through a number of synonyms, for
example, immoderate – per didelis, nenuosaikus, nesaikingas, besaikis, be saiko (too big, unreasonable,
unconscionable, inordinately); misbecome – netikti, nederėti (misfit, mismatch); miscarry - nepasisekti,
žlugti (fail, collapse).
Needless to say, a dictionary user will be confusing facing the multitude of equivalents for each
word. They are caught into a kind of “a vicious circle” with groups of synonyms, where words explain
or illustrate one another, as if they were equivalent. Such synonymic explanation represents two sides
of the problem. First, the proposed translations are not equal. Although they do share common meaning
components, they are not absolute synonyms to be used in identical contexts. Second, it is not at all
clear which translation equivalent presented without any usage context is closest to the original.
Therefore we can claim that such meaning converting into bilingual dictionaries is not effective.
6. Most English words with negative prefixes are simply expressed by free word combinations:
misadvise – duoti blogą/neteisingą patarimą (to give bad/wrong advice); miscast - skirti aktoriui
netinkamą vaidmenį; neteisingai paskirstyti vaidmenis (to give an actor a wrong role, to distribute roles
wrongly); antipersonnel - skirtas -žmonėms naikinti (designed/created for killing people); antipollution
- apsaugantis aplinką nuo užteršimo (protecting the environment from pollution); incognizable -
nepažinus, negalimas pažinti (unknowable, impossible to be recognized).
Meaning explanations like above are often difficult to use in real language situations or
translation. Their incorporation into a sentence by a machine translation system would produce
awkward and unnatural structure, thus transformations in cases like these are inevitable. Instances like
in 6 (see above) are obvious indications to morphological gaps in Lithuanian, because they are free
word combinations originating due to the inability of the language to pack a complex of concept into
one word, like it is done in English. In case of 5, a lexicographer is not able to give one precise
equivalent, therefore leaves the decision to the user as to the appropriateness of a multitude of
synonyms provided for her/him. It is not at all clear whether at least one of the equivalents mirrors the
concept indicate by the English word.
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7. It is also important that even in cases when a direct equivalent for an English word exists,
additional information concerning usage is provided in remarks. For example, ineligible: 1. neturintis
teisės; negalintis būti renkamas/išrinktas (not having the right, unable to be elected); 2.
nepageidaujamas (apie jaunikį, jaunąją ir pan.) – undesirable (about a groom, a bride, etc.); 3.
netinkamas (ypač karo tarnybai) – unfit (especially for military service).
The provided context helps to disambiguate the equivalent that as an individual word would not
be clear. However, such layout of lexicographic data implies that translation units should be expanded,
providing most common phrases the word appears in as well as its possible contexts. In other words,
dictionary entries should be based on corpus material. [5]
To sum up abilities of identifying morphological gaps the mistakes occur when the translator
does not find free word combinations to express the English words with negative prefixes. Some
English words with a negative prefix have direct equivalents in the target language or negative prefixes
in international words are transformed into Lithuanian international words with their analogues an on
case the translator does not know them error are made.

3.2 Errors in translations of lexical and morphological gaps

A parallel corpus, i.e. a collection of listed source and target language texts, can be a solution to
many translation questions arising from mismatches of different nature between two languages. A
parallel corpus not only provides translation equivalents that are in actual language use, but also offers
data on language variation (when a source language unit can be translated by several target language
units) due to conceptual, contextual or stylistic differences, thus more options for a linguist or a
translator using the data. Moreover, a parallel corpus can show a strategy employed by a translator in
case of non-equivalence; whereas a bilingual dictionary offers a mere gloss of a meaning captured by a
source language unit. The Parallel English – Lithuanian Corpus has become publicly available in the
autumn of 2005 and is still in its initial stage in regard to its size.
The Corpus is still not big enough to arrive at substantial generalizations – today it
contains 35505 listed English – Lithuanian sentences. Although one can already study translations of
frequent words, it is hard to perform a reliable research on rare words.
Lexical gaps, unfortunately, usually represent rare words. This is related to the nature of the
phenomenon – rare concepts are not important enough to be lexicalised by a large number of language
users. Nevertheless, all translations of English words starting with negative prefixes were analyzed.
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Some instances of translation were amazing because they showed different translation equivalents from
those provided in the bilingual dictionary. They also strongly supported the idea that dictionary
translations have to be based on main data, especially in case of problematic instances – and lexical
gaps are indeed problematic. Translations from the Corpus were compared with bilingual dictionary
data. It is provided parallel source and target language sentences coupled with equivalents from the
bilingual dictionary. A few examples will be discussed and illustrated in the tables.
It should be admitted that many English words with negative prefixes are translated by single
word counterparts. Thus examples of translation by a multiword expression and by a different part
speech (with subsequent syntactic changes in the translated sentence) are presented. The opposite
phenomenon, when longer units of translation are treated as single units and translated by a single
word, is also discussed. Finally, a few examples of source language multiword expression transference
into the target language multiword expression are given.
As was mentioned before, one way in which lexical gaps are often filled is through the use of
free word combinations. Table 1 gives examples with single words translated by multiword Lithuanian
expressions.
It is seen that the noun “untouchables” and the adjective “undirected” are expressed by phrases
both in the dictionary and the text translation. In case of “untouchables”, the lexicographer is used in
the descriptive translation because the concept is not relevant to the Lithuanian society.[5]
The translator had to expand the noun phrase into an adjective + noun phrase. The adjective
“discredited” is not even translated in the dictionary. If it is looked at the equivalents of the verb “to
discredit”, it is seen that two equivalents out of three are international words (“diskredituoti” and
“kompromituoti”), while “griauti pasitikėjimą” (to ruin trust) is a phrase.
Source language text Target language text Equivalent in a bilingual
dictionary
But also they were Bet jie buvo įstatymo Asmuo iš neliečiamųjų
outlaws, atstumtieji, kastos
enemies, untouchables, priešai, neliečiamųjų
doomed kasta, be jokios
with absolute certainty to abejonės, pasmerkta
extinction išnaikinimui per
within a year or two. metus ar dvejus
And yet the rage that one Bet tas įniršis būdavo nenukreiptas, be
felt abstraktus, į vadovavimo; nekryptingas
was an abstract, nieką konkrečiai
undirected nenukreiptas, jį
emotion which could be galėdavai perkelti nuo
switched vieno objekto
from one object to another prie kito kaip litavimo
like the lempos
flame of a blowlamp liepsną
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The old, discredited Joje, prieš galutinai No equivalent for the adjective in
leaders of sutriuškinami, the dictionary. To discredit -
the Party had been used to mėgo rinktis seni diskredituoti, griauti
gather reputacijos netekę pasitikėjimą;kompromitituoti.
there before they were partijos vadai
finally purged.

3.3 Mistakes in translating negative prefixes in English and Lithuanian


English is full of prefixes of negatives or opposition, such as in-, ir-, il-, in-, de-, contra-, dis- and
others. Although Lithuanian is an inflectional language, which can also be explained by complex
concepts with help of the prefixes, suffixes and inflections, the number of prefixes for a negative aspect
of meaning is poor. Lithuanian grammarians mention four prefixes: ne- (un-, non-, not) as in
nedarbas (unemployment), nemyli (does/do not love); be- (-less, without, non-) as in bedarbis
(unemployed), becukris (sugarfree); nebe- (not any more) as in nebedirba (does not work any more),
nebedainuoja (does not sing any more); prieš – (anti-) – as in priešnuodis (antipoison), antitarybinis
(antisoviet).Moreover, only prefix ne- is frequently used. It means that Lithuanian might lack direct
equivalents for this variety of negation in English, signaling possible morphological gaps with
comparing to the English language.[5]

The translators who do not understand this difference also can make mistakes.

3.4 Mistakes translating by a different part of speech

Translating by a different part of speech can also indicate some lexicalization differences
between two languages. Table 2 contains several examples of:
1) nouns translated into verbs, 2) nouns translated into adjectives,
3) adjectives translated into verbs 4) adjectives translated into adverbs.
It is seen from the table that words explained in the dictionary by phrases (“dissent”,
“deprecating”) and in this way candidates represent lexical gaps in Lithuanian, have to be expressed by
the other part of speech in texts. Besides, the meaning of “dissent” is lost in translation.
We can see a conclusion that not only translating by multi-word expressions, but, also by a different
part of speech could be an indicator of a lexical gap. The noun “disreputability”, which has no
dictionary equivalent, is translated by an adjective. Therefore, the third and quite obvious indicator of a
lexical gap could be the absence of translation in dictionaries.
It should be emphasized that not all examples in this table represent lexical gaps. Some words,
such as “delusion”, “malignant”, etc., have direct equivalents, nevertheless are transformed into the
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other part of speech. It is difficult to say why this translation technique is employed. One of the
explanations can be that translators working on a literary translation had to match to Lithuanian
language norms avoiding unnatural structures if dictionary analogues were used. This also implies that
although concepts expressed by the English words in the examples can be expressed in the language
system, for example in dictionaries, it might be shown that such expressions or equivalents are ignored
in language use and are changed by transforming the whole sentence. [5] exploring rare words that is
why they are lexical gaps, which are hard to translate.
Table 2
SOURSE LANGUAGE TARGET LANGUAGE EQUIVALENT IN
BILINGUAL DICTIONARY
A noun - ->a verb
Some years ago you Prieš keletą metų jūs klydimas; apgaulė,
had a very labai iliuzija
serious delusion rimtai klydot
indeed
A noun a adjective

Yet a faint air of Bet vis dėlto jis atrodo No translation in the
disreputability kažkoks nepatikimas dictionary
always clung to him Disreputable - turintis
prastą
vardą/reputaciją
An adjective a verb
It just occurred to me Padeklamavęs kokį žadinantis gailestį,
you might naują keliantis
be interested," he posmelį, tyliai lyg pasigailėjimą
would say with a atsiprašydamas
deprecating little nusijuokdavo ir
laugh whenever he sakydavo
produced a new
fragment
An adjective a adverb
He started to his feet Jis atsistojo, piktai piktas, pagiežingas
with a žvelgdamas į Vinstoną,
malignant glance at matyt,
Winston, whom įtarė jį pakišus koją
he evidently
suspected of having
tripped him up

To sum up the …. We can state that….


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Mistakes translating by a different part of speech mostly occur because of not changing part of
speech in the target language, for example

Nouns are not translated into verbs, 2) nouns translated into adjectives,
3) adjectives translated into verbs 4) adjectives translated into adverbs.

3. COMPARISON OF THE FORMAL DOCUMENT TRANSLATIONS

The first text is the certificate of the conviction and its translation from Lithuanian into English
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INFORMATION TECHNOLOGY AND COMMUNICATION DEPARTMENT

UNDER THE MINISTRY OF INTERIOR

Register for Legal Entities Code 188774822 Šventragio str. 2, LT- 01501 Vilnius
Tel. +370 5 271 7177 Fax. +370 5 271 8921 e-mail: ird@vrm.lt

For Vitalijus Kiseliovas

CERTIFICATE
CONCERNING THE DATA OF A PHYSICAL PERSON
FROM THE DEPARTAMENTAL R

Head of Previous Convictions /Seal/ /Signature/ Brunonas Aranauskas


Departament

At first sight in these two documents there are no significant differences between them. The
structure of the sentences is quite simple and there are no special features that separate them. But when
we study it closely it is seen that the headline of the document in the English version that is in the target
language: “Certificate concerning the data of a physical person from the Departamental register for
suspicious, accused and convicted persons” is different from the Lithuanian one: “Pažyma dėl įtariamų,
kaltinamų, ir teistu asmenų žinybinio registro duomenų apie fizinį asmenį“.

The word order in the sentence is different. In the English sentence “physical person” goes as a
compliment and in English language it goes as a predicate. The prepositional phrase, “dėl įtarimų“in
the target language, is changed into participle „ concerning“.

The main sentence of the document is the following: “Įtariamų, kaltinamų ir teistų ir teistų
asmenų žinybinio registro 2008 – 01- 14 duomenimis Vitalijus Kisieliovas, gim. 1982 m. rugsėjo 27,
neteistas.” The translation into the target language:” According to the information of Departmental
Register for Suspicious, Accused and Convicted Persons on 14-01-2008 Vitalijus Kiseliovas, born on
27 September, 1982, is not convicted”. The word order is similar in both the sentences though the
target language needs the adverb “according to” at the beginning of the sentence. The subject in both
the languages occurs in the same position.
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One more difference is noticed in translating the position of the leader of the institution. In the
Lithuanian language it sounds: “Teistumo informacijos skyriaus vedėjas” and for translation of the
position into the target language was chosen the word “head”: “Head of previous convictions
department”. There is no such word in the English language meaning “vedėjas”. This word can be
translated as “manager”, but in that case the meaning of it is quite different. Its meaning is –
1. person who is in charge of running a business, a shop / store or a similar organization or part of one:
a bank / hotel manager the sales / marketing / personnel manager a meeting of area managers;
2. person who deals with the business affairs of an actor, a musician, etc.;
3. person who trains and organizes a sports team: the new manager of Italy.[7]
Consequently, none of the meanings mentioned above suits this sentence. Therefore Lithuanian
translators have to cope with a problem by finding a correct equivalent to this meaning. In case the
translator chooses a wrong meaning a wrong message is passed by the translation.

To sum up we may say that in translating formal documents from English into Lithuanian
choosing a wrong equivalent, not minding the word order of the target language and not changing the
part of speech in appropriate situations are the common mistakes made by a not experienced translator.

5. RESEARCH ON IDENTIFYING COMMON ERRORS IN ENGLISH-


LITHUANIAN TRANSLATION

To enlist all the errors made in English – Lithuanian translation is very difficult.
In order to find our the type of mistakes made by future translators it has been decided to make a
simple research work
The survey in the second year students`group 2U of the Social Sciences College was made.
Ten students were asked to translate ten sentences from the English language into the Lithuanian
language. The sentences were quoted from the book “Advanced Grammar in Use” (second edition),
2005 by Martin Hewings. This book was chosen, because it was adequate for the advanced level
students. The sentences were selected to contain the variety of grammatical, lexical and stylistic
aspects.
The target of this survey was to find out how certain linguistic means are translated, and what
kinds of mistakes are made. This type of survey has been chosen for the reason this was the simplest
way to find out what kinds of errors are made in English- Lithuanian translations and the results were
really surprising.
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The text was hand out and the students translated it own their own, unknown words were

translated.

This is the text that was given to the students:

1. Under these conditions the question cannot be answered. 2. At the university students are offered
a curriculum of study which is followed by test and the award degree.3. I’ll bring some sandwiches
in case we don’t find anywhere anything decent to eat. 4. I first met Steve and Jane when they had
been going out together for five years, and they did not get married for another three years after. 5. I
have not liked ice cream since I ate too much and was sick. 6. My decision to resign from the
company was made after deal of thought. 7. We decided not to go to Paris. 8. If I am going to catch
the train, I’ll have to leave now. 9. He couldn’t remember if he had turned the computer off. 10.
The president is to return to Brazil later today.
The sentence “Under these conditions the question cannot be answered.”
This sentence seems to be really very simple, but students that have translated it find it quite difficult,
because almost all of them, it would be 8 of 10, translated it with speech culture mistakes. For example
“Klausimas negali būti atsakytas po tokia kondicija“or “Prie tokių sąlygų klausimas negali būti
atsakytas“. The construction “po tokia kondicija” is absolutely incorrect in the Lithuanian language. It
is a rude mistake that contravenes the usage of the Lithuanian language. Furthermore, this is because
the sentence is translated word by word.
Preposition “prie” is used with accusative; the sentence construction with “prie” shows the
place near or next to something, for example “Prie upės”, “Jie gyvena prie ežero”. The word
construction like this is very dangerous, because it is translated from the Russian language. And
nowadays this is a common slang expression used by the youth in our country which linguists consider
as harmful for the language. Usage of preposition in the following situations “Prie tokios technikos,
prie optimalaus rėžimo” is wrong, because constructions with the preposition “prie” are not used to
express the modifier of manner, reason , condition and concessive.[9 p.215]
The correct version of this sentence would be: “Tokiomis aplinkybėmis klausimas negali būti
atsakytas”. It is very said, but there were no correct translations of this sentence.
2. “At the university students are offered a curriculum of study which is followed by test
and the award degree.”
This sentence was easy to translate, but as it was expected it was confusing. There is one word in this
sentence that was unknown for all the students. It is the word curriculum, which means – mokymo
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planas, programa arba koliokviumas. Sometimes it happens that translation is spoiled because of
choosing the wrong meaning of the word. This was the case in this survey. For example in this sentence
to choose the meaning “koliokviumas” was a wrong decision, because the context offered the meaning
“the study program”.
The second part of the sentence was also problematic: “which is fallowed by test and the
award degree”. The students did not know how to connect those two words though they knew the
meaning of each of them. Here occurred the same problem, as in the first part of the sentence -
choosing the correct meaning. Two students translated this text correctly, but anyway there was some
uncertainty. The worst translation was this one: “Universitetų studentų žinios yra tikrinamos
koliokviumu“. In this sentence is used a totally wrong meaning, which may affect the whole text and
the information that was represented in this sentence looses its value.
The best translation was: “Universitete studentams siūloma mokymo sistema, kurią sudaro
testas ir po to suteikiamas laipsnis”. Though it was not completely correct, but at least it almost exactly
expressed the meaning of the sentence.
The correct translation would be: Studentams universitete siūloma mokymo programa, kuri
yra sudaryta iš testų, ir galiausiai suteikiamas universiteto baigimo laipsnis.

3. “I’ll bring some sandwiches in case we don’t find anywhere anything decent to
eat.”
This sentence is similar to the previous one. It shows that if there is chosen a wrong meaning of the
word, the sentence is translated incorrectly. Students confront the problem of choosing the correct
meaning of the word. The problematic words in this sentence were “in case” and “decent”.
Some students translated this sentence like that: “Aš parsinešiu keletą sumuštinių jeigu
nerasime niekur jokio gero maisto“, or like this: „Aš atnešiu sumuštinių tuo atveju, jeigu mes nerasime
bet ko ar bet kur padoraus maisto“. Of course there are several correct versions of translation of this
sentence. But, as it has been stated above, our students have lexical and stylistics problems while
constructing a nice Lithuanian sentence. They understand the meaning, but they cannot translate it
correctly into the Lithuanian language.
The correct translation would be: “Aš pasiimsiu sumuštinių, jei kartais niekur nebūtų
normalaus maisto. “

4. “I first met Steve and Jane when they had been going out together for five years, and they did
not get married for another three years after”.
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This sentence is very complicated because of the tenses. It is a difficult for foreigners, because the
English language has many tenses of verb and sometimes it is really difficult to understand the
sequence of actions.
Moreover there is the rule for using past perfect tenses, which is important to know for every translator.
The rule is: the past perfect continues can be used to talk about situation or activity that went on before
a particular past time and finished at that time, continued beyond it, or finished shortly before it.
Students translated it in various ways, but the worst translation sounds like that:
“Visų pirmą sutikau Styvą ir Džeinę kada jie išėjo kartu penkeriems metams ir jie nesusituokė dar
trejus metus“. Apparently, student do not have sufficient skills of usage of verb forms, and
misunderstand the meaning of the sentence.

5. “I have not liked ice cream since I ate too much and was sick.”
This sentence is easy enough. And most of the translators translated it correctly. The errors that were
made, translating it, were not very serious. The information of the sentence was passed out correctly
but the language stylistic use is not as good as it is supposed to be.
Some of the translations are the following: “Aš nemėgstu ledų nuo tada, kada jų persivalgiau ir
susirgau“and “Aš nevalgau ledų nuo to karto, kai suvalgiau jų perdaug ir apsinuodijau”. Certainly these
translations are correct, but if they had been translated more literally, using nice expressions of our
language, then they would not have had such a strong influence of the Slavic language.
The best translation was this one: “Aš nebemėgstu ledų nuo to karto, kai jų persivalgęs susirgau“.

6. “My decision to resign from the company was made after deal of thought.”
There is an idioms in this sentence “deal of thought”, and it was quite a clumsy thing to translate.
Idioms – one class of figurative expressions which occurs in all languages, but which is very specific.
Idioms are expressions of at least two words which cannot be translated literally. The translator needs
to learn to recognize the idioms and other figures of source text.
So in this case some students translated the text literally, for example “Aš nusprendžiau
atsistatydinti iš kompanijos po sandėrio“or “Mano sprendimą atsistatydinti iš kompanijos nulėmė
sutartis”. In case the listener does not know English these sentences do not sound nonsense for him, but
actually the translator has passed quite a different message. That is why students should be careful
when translating idioms, they should be absolutely sure about the meaning they use and their
translation would not sound funny.
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Fortunately, there were some students that translated sentence correctly and they noticed that
“deal of thought” means “po ilgo svarstymo” or “gerai apsvarsčius “.
So the correct translation would be: “Gerai apsvarstęs nusprendžiau atsistadydinti iš kompanijos”.

7. “We decided not to go to Paris.”


This sentence was the easiest and the one that all the students translated it correctly. This sentence
involves the usage of infinitive. Usage of infinitive is similar in both languages English and Lithuanian
that is why the translation as not problematic.
The sentence was translated like this: “Mes nusprendėme nevažiuoti į Paryžių“, ‚Mes
nusprendėme nevykti į Paryžių“.

8. “If I am going to catch the train, I’ll have to leave now.” (p.166)
The sentence contains a conditional clause. It is one of the more difficult topics of the English
language grammar. This is the first conditional which describes possible future events or situation and
their results. There are conditional clauses in the Lithuanian language too, but their usage is not so
complicated.
The mistakes in translations were made because of confusing word constructions. If the
translator wants to understand the meaning he has to read the sentence a few times.
The students that translated it had to cope with understanding the meaning of the sentence. And
there were quite a few problems to translate it correctly. The first one was the strange construction of
the sentence. It is really confusing. The second problem was to translate it properly. Some students
translated in the wrong way: “Aš neišvažiuosiu jeigu aš pagausiu traukinį“, „jeigu aš nespėsiu į
traukinį, turėsiu pasilikti dabar“. The translation is wrong, because of false understanding of the
sentence, and the lack of knowledge of the English grammar. Moreover, the translated Lithuanian
version simply is not logical.
The best variants of the translations were: “Jei noriu spėti į traukinį, turiu išvykti dabar”or “jei
aš noriu spėti į traukinį turiu tuoj išvykti”.

9. “He couldn’t remember if he had turned the computer off (68). 10. The president is to
return to Brazil later today (24).”
The last two sentences in the survey were very simple and the students dealt with them quite
well. The only difficulty was in translating the infinitive of the last sentence “…is to return to
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Brazil…”. This kind of structure of the sentence is quite weird for Lithuanian students. The
structure be to + infinitive is used to talk about future events that can be controlled by people. The
Lithuanian language grammar does not have similar infinitive structures therefore the translator has
to recognize the English infinitive structure and know how to translate it.
The result of the research will be summarised below.
6. THE RESULT OF THE SURVEY
According to this survey, it could be said that students make a lot of mistakes, and the reason
could be the lack of English language knowledge. Also was noticed that Lithuanian language is very
difficult as well. The result was collected and classified as it is showed below:
The most common mistakes:
 Speech culture mistakes
 wrong translations of prepositional phrases
 bad knowledge of the vocabulary and disability to choose the appropriate meaning
 bad sentence construction of the target language
 errors in translating idioms
 errors in translating infinitive structures

These results also can be shown in the Table 3


Language Wrong The lack of Bad sentence Errors in Errors in translating
usage translations of vocabulary; construction translating
infinitive structures
mistakes chosen in target idioms
prepositional wrong language
phrases meaning

79% 45% 55% 90% 30% 0%

Table 3

To translate from one language to another language is very difficult. The translator must know
mother – tongue and target language perfectly. If he is not perfect in none of this languages, his
translation will be dull and the reader will not understand the text. The worst translation that might be
done is the text translated literally. This kind of text will not be amusement for the reader.
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CONCLUSION
The target of this course work is fulfilled. By analyzing the collected material and
conducting the research we can state the following:
The translation difficulties when the target language is Lithuanian comprise of translating
lexical gaps. A major group of lexical gaps can be explained by social and cultural differences of
source and target language. A lexical gap could be identified when users do not know a concept of a
source language. Misunderstanding of concept is also a common translation mistake.
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