DEL INSTITUTE OF TECHNOLOGY

ASSIGNMENT 1

Odd Semester 2016/2017

Date of Assignment …..September 2016

Subject KUS 1102 English 1 for Sarjana_Electrical Engineering 1

Deadline By 08.00 am Monday morning on my desk

Lecturer Rumondang Miranda Marsaulina

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INSTRUCTION

Read this article, and identify 34 errors in these stories. Put the errors you identify and
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Candice Janell Bineyard

TITLE: Managing Director, Rolls-Royce Engine Services Oakland
EDUCATION: Bachelor of Science, Industrial and Systems Engineering, the North Carolina
Agricultural & Technical State University (NC A&T), 2003
EXPERIENCE: "As a plant managers, I responsible for ensuring engine maintenances and overhaul
deliveries on time to cost, quality, and schedule," says Candice. "Mine responsibilities also include
leading a 360 person organizations across three site: Oakland, Calif., Kingsville, Texas, and Meridian,
Miss."

Candice knew early on that she wanted to be a engineer. " first report I ever wrote was on what I
wanted to be when I grew up. I was in 6th grade and wrote five page summary on becoming a
industrial engineer, in which me was very specific. My older sister inspired myself to pursue
engineering. She too was an industrial engineer, and through discussions with hers I learned about
the challenges woman face in such an highly technical field. Personally, I am wired to take on
challenge and overcome it against all odds. My sister paved the way for me and showed me that a
career in engineering is possible.”

Candice continues, "The NACME Scholarship sponsored by the Ford Motor Company meant that I
was able to come up with enough tuition to attend an out-of-state institutions and pursue I goal of
becoming an industrial engineer. The impact was huge in that I not only received financial assistances
to pursue my dream, but I also had the opportunity to participate in all of the professional development
and networking activities NACME sponsored."

Candice offers the following advices to students who are looking to go into an engineerings field.
"Pursue it with a passion. There’s so many diversity in engineering, and you will find that your breadth
of knowledge will grow throughout your career. I always tell students that engineering teach you
discipline and how to solve complex problems. This can be applied in any personal or professional
setting. Engineering does not just set you up for a good career, but it also sets you up to be a good
well-rounded individual.”

Stefan B. McCall
TITLE: Field Engineer, ExxonMobil
EDUCATION: Bachelor of Science in Mechanical Engineering, University of Arkansas at Fayetteville
EXPERIENCE: As a recent hire at ExxonMobil, Stefan works as a Field Engineer on the Baton Rouge
Area Projects Construction team.

“I have always had a love for a mathematics, but wasn’t introduced to engineering until middle
school,” says Stefan. “I decided to go into engineering after I junior year in high school when me
attended the Engineering Summer Academy at University of Arkansas. At a camp, we had the
opportunity to select electrical, mechanical, or chemical engineering. I elected to go the mechanical
route. It was the mechanical engineers’s job to design and build the hull for a solar-powered
mechanical boat and to get the internal propeller system working. This project cemented my desire to
major in mechanical engineering. I also like mechanical engineering because it allow for employment
in numerous industries.

“The NACME Scholarship helped me avoid the debt that so quickly accrues in college. When I was
awarded the NACME scholarship, I was instantly put in touch with a collegiate and corporate network
dedicated to helping me obtain an internships. Through NACME I was able to become a member of
the inaugural class of the ExxonMobil Future Leaders Academy program, which led to me receiving
an internship with ExxonMobil. At the end of my internship with ExxonMobil, I was offered a full-time
position. It is quite easy to see the impact that NACME has had on my life.”

“Be passionate about what you’re studying. It’ll make the long nights seem worth it. Engineering is not
the field to pursue solely for monetary gain. There are plenty of resource and peoples at your disposal
to help you with your work and the class material—use it. Also, find a group of like-minded individuals
who are as dedicated to success as you. It helps to have a group of people that will keep each other
accountable.”

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