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Hello! My name is Bea, and I'll be your RareJob Tutor for today.

Hello! I am your RareJob tutor for this lesson. How are you? I made a call to you
but could not confirm your reply. Please do send me a message or give me a call
when you are ready to take this class. I will be waiting for you anytime during the
reserved lesson period. Thank you very much!

Hello! I hope you're doing fine. I have waited until the end of our lesson time but
could not confirm your availability. I hope I can talk to you next time. Thank you
very much and have a good day!

Hello, Seiji-san! It was nice to meet you, and thank you for booking a class with
me today. We discussed about the the Daily News Article entitled "Electronics
Company Launches Tracking Device That Uses Adhesives." You were able to read and
understand the article very well.

My feedback based on your performance earlier is written below:

Hello, Seiji-san! It was nice to see you again, and thank you for booking a class
with me today. We discussed about the the Daily News Article entitled "Study: Too
Much Exercise Bad for Brain Functions of Athletes." You were able to read and
understand the article very well. My feedback based on your performance earlier is
written below:

Hello, Satoru-san! It was nice to meet you, and thank you for booking a class with
me today. My feedback based on your performance earlier is written below:

2.

Hello, Yuta-san! It was nice to see you again, and thank you for booking a class
with me today. We had a very interactive lesson because you actively participated
in our discussion. You were able to express your thoughts well.

My feedback based on your performance earlier is written below:

V. Feedback
Today, we discussed the material . We talked about .

Constructive Feedback:
1. Strengths
> You did a good job... (reasons)
Expressed thoughts clearly
and smoothly some tasks

2. Areas for Improvement


> For your areas for improvement/These are the things you need to improve on...

sentences
* ~Vocabulary*
You were able to understand all the words correctly.

* ~Grammar*
1. You said: My day... it was very tire
*CORRECT: My day was very tiring/exhausting. *

You said: I prefer malls because they has more spacious parking space.
*CORRECT: I prefer malls because they have a spacious parking space. *

* ~Pronunciation*
1. success

You were able to understand all the words correctly.

You were able to express your thoughts well.

You were able to pronounce words

correctly. Great job!


You did very well today, -san!

We learned a lot of things today. See you again next time, take care!

*Personalized FEEDBACK*

*RANGE*
Segrerate- to separate

You said: Garbage is divided.


Better: Segregate the garbage. *

*COHERENCE*
No problem, great job!

*PHONOLOGY*
1. image
[ IM-ij ]
2. psychologist
[ sahy-KOL-uh-jist ]
3. replacement
[ ri-PLEYS-muh?nt ]

*Lesson Goal Achievement SCORE 4*


4 / 3 / 2 / 1

*Personalized FEEDBACK 4*

*RANGE*
You used appropriate words! Great job!
*ACCURACY*
1. You said: Their coffee is best!
*BETTER: Their coffee is the best! *

2. You said: This tea is the most healthiest tea.


*BETTER: This tea is the healthiest tea. *

*FLUENCY*
You did well today! Very good!

*INTERACTION*
Very *ACTIVE* during the lesson! Great job!

You: Did not ask follow-up questions.


Better: Ask things like "How about you?" to continue the conversation.

*COHERENCE*
You: Gave short answers.
Better: Expand your answers by adding more details.