A traditional hindu wedding

A traditional hindu wedding lasts all day and well into the night. On the day of
the ceremony, one of the groom's brothers goes to
the bride's home with gifts, these gifts seal the union of the
two families. Then the groom arrives at the bride's home with his family and
his friends. Dressed in rich clothing and wearing a special headdress. He usually arrives in
a white car or on a white horse, but he sometimes rides a white elephant. Then the
wedding ceremony takes place. During the ceremony, the couple sits around a sacred fire
under a special canopy. A hindu priest performance the ceremony by chanting special
wedding prayers. After that the bride's dress is tied to
the groom's scarf and they walk around
the fire seven times. The groom makes seven promises. To make his wife happy
to share his feelings with her, to share his possessions with her, to be
faithful to respect her family and to make her a part of his life. The
seven promises is to keep the other six promises ¡the party begin after
the ceremony! Musicians provide entertainment. Then a feast of
traditional indian food is served. During the party, the bride, the groom and their guests
play some traditional games. The party may go on until midnight, everyone is
pretty tired at the end.

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A traditional Hindu wedding lasts all day and well into the night. On the day of
the ceremony, one of the groom's brothers goes to the bride's home with gifts, these
gifts seal the union of the two families. Then the groom arrives at the bride's home
with his family and his friends. Dressed in rich clothing and wearing a special
headdress. He usually arrives in a white car or on a white horse, but he sometimes
rides a white elephant. Then the wedding ceremony takes place. During the ceremony,
the couple sits around a sacred fire under a special canopy. A Hindu priest
performance the ceremony by chanting special wedding prayers. After that, the bride's
dress is tied to the groom's scarf and they walk around the fire seven times. The groom
makes seven promises. To make his wife happy to share his feelings with her, to share
his possessions with her, to be faithful to respect her family and to make her a part of
his life. The seven promises are to keep the other six promises ¡the party begins after
the ceremony! Musicians provide entertainment. Then a feast of traditional Indian
food is served. During the party, the bride, the groom, and their guests play some
traditional games. The party may go on until midnight. Everyone is pretty tired at the
end.