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ADVANTAGES / DISADVANTAGES ESSAY:

1. Intro 1. Intro: 2. Adv. 3. Adv. 4. Disadv. 5. Conclusion:


i. General i. Topic i. Topic i. Topic
2. Adv. i. To sum up,...
statement sentence sentence sentence
3. Adv. ii. Opinion ii. 1st Adv. ii. 2nd Adv. ii. Disadv.
4. Adv. iii. Points iii. Reason iii. Reason iii. Reason /
5. Conclusion iv. Evidence iv. Evidence Solution
v. Conc. line v. Conc. line v. Conc. line

Question:
Some people believe that more and more women are employed now-a-days. Do the advantages
outweigh the disadvantages?

Answer:
Women employment is a fairly recent phenomenon and is increasing even in developing nations. I
believe it to be extremely beneficial not only because it would help in the growth of world’s
economy, but also it would give women the much needed financial independence. This essay will
explore how these two mega advantages can outshine any potential drawback.

Women employment is normally associated with many potential merits. The first worth mentioning
advantage of this development is the fact that women can aid the global economy. As women
constitute 50% of the world’s population, their employment can technically increase the workforce
in the world’s economy, directly contributing in its progress. This fact can be better explained with
an example of a recent report published in Australia where it revealed statistics showing that
women contribute a significant proportion of Gross Domestic Product (GDP) in the Australian
economy. Thus, women employment contributing directly in the development of world’s economy is
a worthwhile advantage.

Secondly, women employment gives females a financial assurance for future financial stability. Is this
the merit than can almost single handedly outperform any drawback? Yes, I believe so. In case of
crisis women can empower themselves to support their family especially in cases of divorce or
separation. Take an example of North America where a large majority of single mothers successfully
support their children through their employment. Hence, in time of dilemmas, employment is the
most viable option for females.

However, the only minor drawback that I can associate with this development is the fact that
women are often criticized for not giving their families enough time. But this flawed argument can
be more than compensated with part-time work. Therefore, this insignificant drawback can easily be
overcome.

To sum up, even though women can be questioned on the fact that their families suffer due to their
employment, but part-time work has rendered this flaw ineffective. From my perspective, the
advantages in terms of supporting the world’s economy and establishing an individual financial
stability have the potential to clearly undermine any disadvantage.
1-STATEMENT AGREE / DISAGREE ESSAY:

1. Intro 1. Intro: 2. Your opinion 3. Your opinion 4. Your opinion 5. Conclusion:


i. General i. Topic i. Topic i. Topic
2. Your opinion i. To sum up,...
statement sentence sentence sentence
3. Your opinion ii. Opinion ii. 1st point ii. 2nd point ii. 3rd point
4. Your opinion iii. Points iii. Reason iii. Reason iii. Reason
5. Conclusion iv. Evidence iv. Evidence iv. Conc. line
v. Conc. line v. Conc. line

Question:
Some people believe that only local food items should be available in shops whether these are
present or not, and imported food items should not be allowed. Do you agree or disagree?

Answer:
Food is an inevitable part of human life and its quality determines whether it is beneficial of harmful.
I completely disagree with the statement regarding prohibition of imported food items. This is
because restricting them will not only discourage competition but also because of availability of such
items ensures presence of a wide variety of food products along with its contribution to the national
economy. This essay will explore how these aforementioned factors justify my opinion.

Selling of branded dietary products is associated with many potential merits. The first worth
mentioning advantage of this development is the fact that it will enhance the competition in the
market at local level. In presence of multinational companies, the local food sellers will certainly
improve the quality of their products. This fact can be better explained with an example of a survey
conducted in North America where it revealed statistics showing that with the introduction of
imported food items at domestic level, the rise in quality of already present products was observed
owing to the competition that was created. Thus, this factor justifies my point of view.

Secondly, the revenue generated from taxing the luxurious food products is another factor that
urged me to disagree. Reason being the amount collected by imposing different levies on foreign
eatables, contributes directly to the national treasury. Take an example of a recent report published
in The New York Times which highlighted that after application of different duties on goods
imported from abroad, the Chinese economy experienced an upsurge that eventually increased their
foreign reserves. Hence, this fact further justifies my argument.

Finally, the availability of foreign edible products would definitely increase the existing range of
dietary items. If there are only locally produced food products, then this will limit the variety of
edibles. So imported food items should be present in the local stores in excessive amounts.
Therefore, vast variety of food items would be guaranteed if foreign edibles are allowed.

To sum up, even though some might argue that restricting the imports will benefit domestic food
industry, but the reduced competition and lesser variety of products as well as incoming revenue in
form of excise compelled me to disagree with this statement.
2-STATEMENT AGREE / DISAGREE ESSAY:

1. Intro 1. Intro: 2. 1st opinion 3. 2nd opinion 4. Your opinion 5. Conclusion:


i. General i. Topic i. Topic i. Topic
2. 1st opinion i. To sum up,...
statement sentence sentence sentence
3. 2nd opinion ii. Rephrase ii. 1st opinion ii. 2nd opinion ii. Your opinion
4. Your opinion question iii. Reason iii. Reason iii. Reason
5. Conclusion iii. Points iv. Evidence iv. Evidence iv. Conc. Line
v. Conc. Line v. Conc. line

Question:
Some people believe that a father should take the responsibility of upbringing of a child while others
believe that a mother should take this responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your own
opinion.

Answer:
Developing a child’s personality is one of the biggest challenges for parents. It is often argued by
some that a father being the head of the family should bear this challenge. Meanwhile, others still
consider mother to be a perfect contender for this duty as on average, they spend more time with
their children. This essay will explore both side of the argument before developing a logical
conclusion.

On one hand, the supporters of the idea that a father should carry this responsibility claim that
father, being the family head, should solely bear this obligation. As the father takes care of the
financial matters, so psychologically he holds an authority. This fact can be better explained with an
example of a recent survey conducted among students of University of Western Australia where it
revealed statistics showing that a significant number of respondents attributed their success to their
fathers. Thus, a father plays an important role in the development of a child’s personality.

On the other hand, the advocates of the view that a mother should deliver this responsibility base
their claim on the fact that a mother spends relatively more time with the children. This additional
time give mothers a sense of responsibility to develop a child’s personality. For example, a study
conducted in North America highlighted that children brought up by single mothers tend to have a
well-developed identity. Hence, a mother’s responsibility carries equal weightage compared to a
father.

After analyzing both sides of the argument, what would be the most rational approach? From my
perspective, an ideal scenario will be that both parents should actively participate in the grooming of
their children. In this way, the father can exercise his authority and a mother can make her time
more productive. Therefore, both parents should ensure their active participation.

To sum up, in order to make a child an active member of the society, both father and mother should
work in close coordination to enhance different personality traits in their children.
RANDOM ESSAY (CAUSES/SOLUTIONS):

1. Intro 1. Intro: 2. 1st Cause 3. 2nd Cause 4. Solution(s) 5. Conclusion:


i. General i. Topic i. Topic i. Topic
2. Cause i. To sum up,...
statement sentence sentence sentence
3. Cause ii. What will ii. 1st Cause ii. 2nd cause ii. 1st solution
4. Solution(s) this essay iii. Reason iii. Reason iii. Reason
5. Conclusion explain iv. Evidence iv. Evidence iv. 2nd solution
iii. Points v. Conc. line v. Conc. line v. Reason
vi. Conc. line

Question:
Now-a-days more and more people are getting over-weight. Give causes and solutions.

Answer:
Recent years have witnessed a rapid increase in levels of obesity among young people. This essay
will outline the higher levels of consumption of fast food and lack of exercise as the major reasons
behind this problem. It will then discuss how we can curtail this problem through heavy taxation of
junk food and by encouraging regular exercise regime.

Firstly, there are multiple factors that contribute towards young generation being over-weight. The
most dominating factor is the higher levels of consumption of fast food. Most of the convenient
snacks contain abnormally high levels of fat contents which are readily absorbed by the human body
resulting in obesity. Take a recent example of North Africa where the invasion by the International
fast food chains has resulted in a rapid increase in the average weights of North Africans. Thus,
consumption of unhealthy food is a primary source of obesity.

Secondly, lack of exercise is another significant factor that provokes obesity. In time deprived
societies where time is considered money, availability of time for physical activities is a luxury very
few enjoy. This fact can be better explained with an example of a report published by the World
Health Organization in which it revealed statistics showing that a significant proportion of
youngsters are over-weight worldwide due to lack of physical exertion. Hence, inadequate exercise
regime can fuel this problem massively.

However, there are certain viable measures that can be taken into account to reduce this problem to
a large extent. The most effective solution would be to levy heavy taxes on junk food which would
further force consumers to reduce its intake. Moreover, encouraging people to have regular
exercised in order to burn the extra calories would also be a practical solution. Therefore, through
individual will-power and state regulations we can combat this menace.

To sum up, even though the consumption of fast food is wide spread and lack of time availability is
unavoidable in many situations, but with heavy taxation on unhealthy food and encouraging a
change of lifestyle, we can curb this problem.

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