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5-4 Milestone One: First Draft of Critical Analysis Essay
"Some Lessons from the Assembly Line" is an article written by Andrew Braaksma for
Newsweek magazine and is a story about his time spent as an automotive factory worker during
his summers away as a college student. The article alludes to the advantages of being able to
receive a college education and the opportunities it affords, while simultaneously appreciating
his college experience through the eye-opening and labor-intensive factory he works at during
his holidays from college. While the advantages of a higher education are heavily implied,
Braaksma’s real purpose and claim to his article is about the life lessons of the everyday
employee working the blue-collar lifestyle and his choice to work in such conditions that taught
him about the workforce but also taught him to appreciate the simplicity and redundancy of
college life.
As Braaksma states in his article, "There are few things as cocksure as a college student
who has never been out in the real world, and people my age always seem to overestimate the
value of their time and knowledge. " (Braaksma, 2005) He is emphasizing on the arrogance of
the average young adult who always seems to know everything yet knows nothing about labor-
intensive work with little take home to show for their hard work. Braaksma identifies with this
typical college kid attitude by confessing that this was him before he began working at the
factory. It is easy to mark Braaksma’s change of heart when he compares the working conditions
of the factory to the opulent and vast college campus he spends most of his time. (Braaksma,
2005)
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Braaksma insinuates a feeling of displacement but also almost inquisitorial and
investigative in his need to gain skills and work ethic. He states, "At times, I feel almost
voyeuristic, like a tourist dropping in where other people make their livelihoods. " (Braaksma,
2005) He feels lucky because, at the end of his two months, he will get to return to his laid-back
college life while others continue their labor-intensive and unstable work to make a living.
Braaksma takes advantage of his time spent in the factory by using it as a motivational force that
allows him to appreciate each time he steps foot on campus after his time spent in the factory.
His theory is that just when classes become too mundane, and he becomes just a bit lazier, he
will return to the factory, which will ultimately remind him of what the other side is like. College
When Braaksma states, "My friends who take easier, part-time jobs never seem to
understand why I am so relieved to be back at school in the fall or that my summer vacation has
been anything but a vacation. " (Braaksma, 2005) His friends are uneducated on the hardships
and daily life of the blue-collar working individual; an experience exemplified by Braaksma,
which his friends could have learned from. It is his friend's comments that point out the
differences between college life and the workforce, and how his experiences have taught him to
"Some Lessons from the Assembly Line" is an educating and eye-opening article
explaining the hardships of the everyday blue-collar workforce and how Andrew Braaksma uses
his experience to motivate him through the mundanity of college life. He highlights aspects of
his experience, including feeling out of place in the factory, but also feeling relieved and
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appreciative of his experiences after returning to college. Braaksma shares his story about what
he believes to be a prosaic, day-to-day college experience and how hard work and dedication
taught him to appreciate his college opportunity, and help teach his readers what life could be
References:
Braaksma, A. (2005). Some Lessons from the Assembly Line. Newsweek, 11.