The underlying diagram show shows the changes and developments of the horse from 40 million Commented [MM1]:

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years ago tilluntil now. During that those yours years, the horse's appearance had dramatic changes.
The First impressive fact is the size of horse that by passing time the where getting bigger and after Commented [MM2]: The where?!!!
that about there mane 40 million years ago it is invisible or better just they were no mane however Commented [MM3]: Check the usage of transitions.
10 years after that it changed and by the time it looks that at the mane has grown. Not to mention
on the horse's hoof from 40 million years ago till now changes a a lot. Not only the appearance of
the horse's hoof are is changed, but also it become stronger by passing time. Thus by around 40 Commented [MM4]: Present?
million years ago, horses appearance and body strength both were changed and develop in a way
that their capability in this time is more than 40 years ago.

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