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Essay topics: The chart below show the

expenditure of two countries on consumer goods
in 2010.

Submitted by Daniel2016 on Thu, 08/11/2016 -

10:59

The given bar chart depicts data on the amount of

money the French and the British spent on five
consumer goods, namely cars, computers, books,
perfume and cameras in 2010. Units are
measured in pounds sterling.

Overall, it is clear that both France and the UK

expended the greatest amount of money on cars.
Moreover, perfume was the least preferred good
by the British consumers, whereas the French
spent the least money on cameras.

In terms of cars, France spent 400,000 pounds

sterling, while the figure for the UK was slightly
higher, at 450,000 pounds sterling. The French
and the British paid out 300,000 pounds sterling
and just over 400,000 pounds sterling respectively
for books. A significant difference in the country's
expenditure can be observed in the figures for
cameras: France spent only 150,000 pounds
sterling, as opposed to the UK, which spent
350,000 pounds sterling.

With regard to the remaining goods, France spent

more money on each one. As regards the
expenditure on computers, the amounts spent
were similar: the UK expended 350,000 pounds
sterling, compared to France, which spent by
approximately 30,000 pounds sterling more. The
French spent 200,000 pounds sterling on perfume
and for the same good the British paid out just
below 150,000 pounds sterling.

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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

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Essay evaluation report by e-

grader
Submitted by e-grader on Thu,
08/11/2016 - 11:00
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'moreover', 'whereas', 'while', 'as regards',
'with regard to']

Attributes: Values AverageValues

Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% =>
Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:

Nouns: 0.282700421941 0.268076937826
105% => OK
Verbs: 0.105485232068 0.116061578633
91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0970464135021
0.0759168565197 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0379746835443
0.0366838410393 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0042194092827
0.0131127313244 32% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126582278481
0.155750635184 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0464135021097
0.0379272487307 122% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41773133003 2.65546596893
91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0126582278481
0.0210936926555 60% => OK
Particles: 0.0084388185654
0.00175180941692 482% => OK
Determiners: 0.113924050633
0.0948980150116 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0042194092827
0.00437022459523 97% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0084388185654
0.00967000014798 87% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:

No of characters: 1292.0 1161.00487805
111% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.9 106% => OK
Chars per words: 6.18181818182
5.90752243213 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058
3.73763899035 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars:
0.430622009569 0.337110787985 128% =>
OK
words length more than 6 chars:
0.291866028708 0.247514529752 118% =>
OK
words length more than 7 chars:
0.172248803828 0.171178102325 101% =>
OK
words length more than 8 chars:
0.0909090909091 0.112407865282 81% =>
OK
Word Length SD: 2.41773133003
2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% =>
OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497607655502
0.546246751206 91% => More unique words
wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.508854301
49.3433353143 88% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146
112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9 23.0094962315 91%
=> OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1709456
42.9750493124 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.2 135.714022679
95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 23.0094962315
91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.689975730869 87%
=> OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% =>
OK
Readability: 50.0866028708 47.7609492067
105% => OK
Elegance: 3.08571428571 2.94281807926
105% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:

Essay topic to essay body coherence:
0.356545308225 0.418131533498 85% =>
OK
Sentence sentence coherence:
0.188057750798 0.181151798455 104% =>
OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD:
0.120198393706 0.0850326197045 141% =>
OK
Sentence paragraph coherence:
0.715533014885 0.706616315825 101% =>
OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD:
0.179292021195 0.157042692854 114% =>
OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193807531506
0.228904883108 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD:
0.0950308240221 0.108899403657 87% =>
OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence:
0.476111269089 0.367819155151 129% =>
OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD:
0.154337430188 0.0812612215331 190% =>
OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286024518926
0.316326947829 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD:
0.084877030721 0.0921553760075 92% =>
OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0
3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0
1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0
4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854
158% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976
0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268
165% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 7.1512195122 140%
=> OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral

sentiment?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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