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Copywriting Mistakes
(And how to fix ‘em!)
@JoelKlettke
TL;DR
I help companies
get more leads to
do what they want.
HAVE YOU EVER ASKED…
You “We‘d”
all over your copy.
Your leads don’t care about you.
EXAMPLE: WE, WE, WE!
EXAMPLE: YOU, YOU, YOU!
Talk pains, gains, and
verbs over nouns.
Instead of… Write…
“We strive to…” “Get more leads with…”
Talk pains, gains, and
verbs over nouns.
Instead of… Write…
“We strive to…” “Get more leads with…”
“Our services include…” “Grow your business with a team
who can…”
Talk pains, gains, and
verbs over nouns.
Instead of… Write…
“We strive to…” “Get more leads with…”
“Our services include…” “Grow your business with a team
who can…”
I have opinions,
beliefs, and ideas,
but no problem I’m
aware of.
COMPLETELY UNAWARE
Define a baseline.
“These types of
sections, in this
order, because…”
EXAMPLE: THE NEW CASE STUDY BUDDY.COM
Write.
Wire.
Evolve.
EXAMPLE: HUBSPOT.COM
2x
Conversion
Rate 2x
Inbound Call
Volume
+35%
Demo
Requests +27%
Product
Signups
https://blog.hubspot.com/marketing/customer-driven-copy-conversions
You forgot (or buried)
the “So what?”
Your leads need to see an
immediate, obvious benefit.
SAD EXAMPLE: TOO CLEVER, NOT CLEAR
SAD EXAMPLE: WHAT, BUT NOT WHY
SAD EXAMPLE: WARM-UP COPY KILLS KITTENS
Warm-up copy
So you can…
GOOD EXAMPLE: IN AN EMAIL
“So what?”
And again!
1. Finish the sentence, “So you can…”
3. Answer them.
4. Prioritize.
Why should I care?
Hero What is it?
Who is it for?
1. What is TTT?
2. How will life improve?
3. Why not read blogs (for free?)
4. What do I get?
5. Why is this credible?
6. What next?
EXAMPLE: TRAFFIC THINK TANK
EXAMPLE: TRAFFIC THINK TANK
EXAMPLE: TRAFFIC THINK TANK
EXAMPLE: TRAFFIC THINK TANK
You weren’t specific.
Nobody wants “high quality.”
They want what it MEANS.
WOULD YOU RATHER BUY…
What’s going to
happen next?
EXAMPLE: CLARITY
EXAMPLE: WHAT STANDS OUT?
EXAMPLE: OOPS.
2
Finish the sentence
“I want to __________”
Combine:
Outcome + Action
EXAMPLE: I WANT TO…
Desired
outcome
Required
action
EXAMPLE: I WANT TO…
1. Stick to one primary CTA in emails,
landing pages, and ads
3. Be specific.
Was there
a contest?
How do I
know?
EXAMPLE: UNSUPPORTED METRICS
Why should I
believe you?
EXAMPLE: UNSUPPORTED METRICS
Now that’s
more like it!
Use social proof…
1. Near areas of friction (like pricing)