LANGUAGE TRAINING CENTRE

UNIVERSITASMUHAMMADIYAHYOGYAKARTA
UJIAN AKHIR SEMESTER
GENAP 2018/2019

ESSAY WRITING

Name : PRADIPTA KURNIA P Date of Test :May 13th 2019

Student Number : 20180310012 Lecturer : Bunga Ika Sari
Faculty : Medicine & Health Sciences Signature :
Department : Medicine

Same Family but Different Atmosphere

Painting is a branch of the fine art that the way it is expressed is through two-dimensional works
where the main elements are lines and colors. Painting is an activity to process a two-dimensional or
surface medium from a three-dimensional object to get a certain impression. Medium paintings can
form anything, such as canvas, paper, boards, and even films in photography can be considered as a
medium of painting. Here are two similar animal painting of family felidae but have had a disparity in
the visual atmosphere. The first is a tiger in the forest painting and the second is two cats in the flower
garden painting.
In the tiger in the forest painting, the painting is painted on a rectangular canvas with gold
frames. On it there is a gaping fierce tiger. The tiger has two ears, two yellow eyes, and a pink nose. It
also shows the tiger's sharp nails and sharp canines. Besides that, the tiger has a long body and a golden
yellow fur. He also had a long mustache. There were also grass and trees. The background of the
painting is in the deep forest.
In the two cats in the flower garden painting, this painting is painted on a rectangular canvas
with a wooden frame. Painted two extremely adorable cats. The cats may have been siblings because
of the same identifying traits. They have the same two ears, two gray eyes and a pink nose. They have
grey and white fur. They also had long mustaches. They were spotted in a basket set up by a flower
garden. Several sunflowers have been seen with yellow petals and brown roundabout, and other flowers
are yellow and purple. Also there are many green leaves around them.
The similarities we can see from both paintings are identical in describing a furry creature with
two standing earlobes, two round eyes, long mustaches, and a pink nose. They are also around the
leaves. Tiger and cat’s fur looks very natural. The color is also very pleasing to the eye. It matches the
personalities of tigers and cats. The difference you can see is the atmosphere of the paintings. The color
tiger in the painting is very sharp and precise. Green in grass and brown in the dirt are very real. The
painter can describe the atmosphere in the forest in a beautiful and lifelike way. The way the painter
paints the tiger also looks like he's really mad. This painting is very real and can enliven the violent
atmosphere. As for the cat painting of the flowers that surround them, it is beautiful. Also the expression
of both the adorable and cute cats like being caught by the camera. How painters described their fur is
also soft and smooth. The atmosphere it gets from this painting is the quiet and cuteness. The body 1
shape to facial expressions are very authentic.
The conclusion is that the similarities between the two are equally well painted. The tiger and cat’s fur
 is also soft and smooth. The atmosphere it gets from this painting is the quiet and cuteness. The body shape to
facial expressions are very authentic.
The conclusion is that the similarities between the two are equally well painted. The tiger and cat’s fur
painting is so natural. The color is also very pleasing to the eye. It matches the personalities of tigers and cats.
But the difference lies in the atmosphere of the paintings. In the tiger the atmosphere built is fierce and in the cat
the atmosphere built is the calm and cuteness.

Scoring*: Total score: Plagiarism:

Introductory paragraph 5 4 3 2
Body paragraphs 5 4 3 2
Concluding paragraph 5 4 3 2
Organization 5 4 3 2
Style 5 4 3 2
Mechanics 5 4 3 2
*Circle the appropriate score based on the rubric