League of Legends Review

by Tyler Luu

Submission date: 01-Oct-2019 04:39PM (UTC-0500)

Submission ID: 1184106534
File name: 110241_83942175_1069666388_League_of_Legends_Review.pdf (86.3K)
Word count: 1242
Character count: 5945
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League of Legends Review
ORIGINALITY REPORT

18 %
SIMILARITY INDEX
13%
INTERNET SOURCES
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PUBLICATIONS
18%
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www.ign.com
Internet Source 6%
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Submitted to Rochester Institute of Technology
Student Paper 3%
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Student Paper 2%
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Submitted to University of Wisconsin, Oshkosh
Student Paper 2%
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Submitted to Oxford Academy
Student Paper 1%
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www.reference.com
Internet Source 1%
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Student Paper 1%
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Submitted to Arizona State University
Student Paper 1%
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hal.archives-ouvertes.fr
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League of Legends Review
GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

100
PAGE 1
/100

Comment 1
Word Count 1157
Focus 25/25
Logic 25/25
Style/Correctness 0/25
Research 25/25
Total 75

QM Quote
Needs to be in quotes

Comment 2
,)

QM Missing ","
Missing comma:
Though it may not always be grammatically necessary, a comma can often help to prevent a
misreading. When a sentence opens with an introductory element (a phrase, clause or word that is
logically related to another phrase or clause in the same sentence), it is a great help to your reader
to place a comma after that introductory element. Such phrases will often begin with words like
"because," "while" or "although," as in the following example: "While everyone was fighting, the bear
wandered away." As you can see, without the comma, the sentence would be confusing.

QM Number
spell out numbers that can be expressed in two words or fewer

QM SVA
Subject-verb agreement
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Comment 4
,"

Comment 5
.)

QM Quote
Needs to be in quotes

QM Quote
Needs to be in quotes

Comment 6
???

PAGE 2

QM Citation Needed
Cite Source:
Please use the link below to find links to information regarding specific citation styles:
http://www.plagiarism.org/plag_article_citation_styles.html

QM No Cap.
no capitalization

QM hyphen
hyphen

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article a.

S/V This subject and verb may not agree. Proofread the sentence to make sure the subject agrees with
the verb.

S/V This subject and verb may not agree. Proofread the sentence to make sure the subject agrees with
the verb.

S/V This subject and verb may not agree. Proofread the sentence to make sure the subject agrees with
the verb.

QM Frag.
 fragment

Frag. This sentence may be a fragment or may have incorrect punctuation. Proofread the sentence to
be sure that it has correct punctuation and that it has an independent clause with a complete subject
and predicate.

Confused You have used to in this sentence. You may need to use two instead.

Confused You have used to in this sentence. You may need to use two instead.

QM 1st/2nd Person
No 1st or 2nd person

QM sense
Doesn't make sense

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

QM 1 word
one word - combine

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QM Frag.
fragment

Comment 7
.)

QM Frag.
fragment

S/V This subject and verb may not agree. Proofread the sentence to make sure the subject agrees with
the verb.

QM 1st/2nd Person
No 1st or 2nd person

S/V This subject and verb may not agree. Proofread the sentence to make sure the subject agrees with
the verb.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

 QM Number
spell out numbers that can be expressed in two words or fewer

QM Number
spell out numbers that can be expressed in two words or fewer

QM 1st/2nd Person
No 1st or 2nd person

QM 1st/2nd Person
No 1st or 2nd person

Comment 8
.)

QM 1st/2nd Person
No 1st or 2nd person

Comment 9
.)

Missing "," You may need to place a comma after this word.

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QM Citation Needed
Cite Source:
Please use the link below to find links to information regarding specific citation styles:
http://www.plagiarism.org/plag_article_citation_styles.html

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Comment 10
Works Cited

Comment 11
alphabetized

Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article the.