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Branden Hatcher

Professor Tubbs

ENGL 1301

22 November 2019

Profile Essay Peer Revision

Peer Comment : Branden has developed a strong working thesis and it goes on topic with

each body paragraph he is introducing. He has a very organized essay based on the direction and

events he talked about throughout his interview.

Throughout my interview with Sabrina, we had a conversation about education. She talks

about how education has helped her life financially and was also knowledgeable. Her thoughts

on education were very important to her character. Because she strongly supported education and

that defines her as a person. The experiences she has in education has landed her a scholarship

and was able to get her expenses paid for and is financially doing well. Worked in fields with

kids with disabilities learning has benefited greatly and has changed her perspective on how

serious the education system needs to be treated. She had a big saying throughout the topic on

education and therefore has helped my interview. ​Sabrina is involved in her education based on

her involvement in the work field and experiences along with it.

The work field she was apart of was helping children with disability learning teaching

them on achieving tasks and even learning how to swim. I asked her how her typical day at work

and she told me she usually comes in excited because she was eager to teach young kids. It also

came to mind that I can say she loves kids and enjoys taking care of them and keeping them

company. She is never in it for the money that's why she volunteered full time because that's how
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much of a relationship you can have with education. It really opens up your emotions and mind.

That can be a good thing for some people which was what I mentioned in the interview. ​Her job

has helped her find programs that are direct to what career she wants to pursue after college. ​The

points she has made backing up with her work field changed my perspective going on throughout

the interview. ​I learned that you can get benefits from being apart of a great organization and

educating kids or adults on anything they haven't learned. Not only that but you're also going to

be referred to a good job based on the progression in the previous job to move up.​ That’s why

she has been specific about her job duty because not only is she a teacher but qualified at work

too.

The experience Sabrina has on education and developing as a whole was quite

challenging. This section of the interview gets a little personal so I try to avoid questions that

follow under. It seems going well she talks about her experience growing up. How she had an

issue with her family quite often and to escape. She enjoys clearing her mind working out or

traveling and spending time with friends. Reading was a passion she mentioned because she said

she learns new words every time she reads. I do agree that reading is a great hobby or

time-consuming. Besides, the fact that she has problems dealing with paying attention due to her

condition. So it motivates her to help others so they can learn without any measures of not

understanding. That plays a big role because that contributes to how she is feeling throughout the

day and her personal life.

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