CHAPTER IV

COMPARATIVE ANALYSIS
OF
THEIR SHORT STORIES
A. PORTRAYAL OF INDIVIDUAL CHARACTER

Individual human being is the basic matrix of a complex social system

likewise, the moral values of a particular individual acts as a building material in
him; stronger the value system in an individual firmer the society. Poets, writers
and men of letter have always contributed to instil correct moral values in an
individual. In the writings of Muhammad Ali Jamalzadeh (1895-1997) one can
find the realistic portrayal of noble human characteristics, which are part of good
morals.

In the story "Dusti yi Khala Khirsa" ("the Friendship of Aunt Bear") the
kind hearted, gallant cafe waiter acts like a good Samaritan by saving the life of
a Russian Cossack. The hero of the story, Habibullah, could not leave the
wailing Russian Cossack in the snow to die, instead takes him up in the cart. On
his way, he sacrifices whatever he had in his possession; his robe, hard earned
money. At one point of time, Habibullah covers the cold hit Russian Cossack
with his own robe; the narrator was moved by his gesture of sacrifice and said:

"By his compassion and support (to a stranger), I was

profoundly moved; not giving way to my shyness, I stood straight and
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kissed his broadforehead"

One can see the similar pm1rayal of sacrifice in Premchand's short story;
'Idgah' where a five year old boy sacrifices his petty tips to buy a pair of tongs
for her grandmother, who does not have one to hold chapattis, while making
them. Here, the portrayal is very real and pathetic. Premchand brings up the
scene at the end of the story, when he says,
" .. The infant Hamid had played the role of a matured Hamid.
The old lady Ameena had turned into an i11{ant when she bursts into
tears". 4

3
"Dusti-yi Khale Khirsa", Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud, Kaveh, Berlin, 1958, p. 64
4
"idgah", Mansarovar, vol.l, Sumitra Prakaskan, Allahabad, 1997, p.24

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 Human beings usually repent when they find after introspection that a
crime or an unjust act has been committed by them. Repentance although,
appears apparently to feel oneself humble in his own eyes but wins the heart of
others and brings respect for the one who admits his flaw and shows repentance.
In the story "Sawab ya Gunah" ("Divine Reward or Sin") by Jamalzadeh, the
hero, Sohrab, a murder convict, finds after introspection that he has killed an
innocent human being. He seeks death to recompense the crime he has
committed. The magnificent portrayal of repentance can be seen in the story
when Sohrab says:

"I do not want my penitence to be accepted by God. I have done

a blunder and need a noose around my neck to end my life. This life with
its every minute brings death sentence for me; even breathing has turned
out to be a persecution for me. The only thing which I seek from the
God, the world, the people and you; who are my only friend on earth
are; the death. "5

Premchand too, brings forth the feeling of repentance in one of his short
stories titled "Julus" ("The Procession"). In the story Birbal Singh, a mounted
police inspector hits out an old man who is leading the procession against the
British Government, marking the observation of "Complete Independence". The
old man dies of head injury. The police inspector is hated by his compatriots for
his brutal act. Realising his mistake, Birbal visits the martyr's house and tenders
his apology before the dead man's widow. The scene of remorse and repentance
is painted nicely in the story; when wife of the guilty inspector stepped into the
old widow's house she sees a young man talking to the old lady with tears in his
eyes. Miththan (Inspector's wife) was surprised to find that the young man was
his husband.

Unkind treatment of the older and aged folk by the people is a mark
of shame for the society. The pathetic condition of an old vagrant. who is

5
"Sawab ya Gunah", Kohne wa Nau, lntesharat e Sukhan,2005, Tehran, p. 24

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exploited by the people of an area is shown by Jamalzadeh in his story "Vilan ud
Daulah" ("The Vagrant").In the story everyone goes on using the services of the
poor old man for themselves and does not have give damn care for his basic
·requirements. He goes without food and medicine when he is ill.

Out of desperation over the indifferent attitude of people towards him,

he terminates his life by taking heavy dose of opium. He dies inside a public
mosque as he was without a home. His tragic end speaks the reality of people's
selfishness and unkind treatment towards the hose aged and homeless folk.
There is touching death scene in the story:

"He slowly took out a pouch of opium from his picket and cut it
short into pieces by a pen knife, without giving any way to reason
understanding, he quickly put the whole morsel of opium in his mouth.
Holding water pipe in his hand drank some water.... He headed towards
the Shabistan 6 ..• put his pair of shoes beneath his head, closed his eyes
and prayed... Next .morning when mosque's attendant came to the
Shabistan, he found 'Vilan -ud daulah' dead. " 7

Munshi Premchand has portrayed a similar situation in his story "Budhi

Kaki" ("The Old Aunt"), where a very old lady is living in bits and pieces in her
own house after she had transferred all her wealth and property to her nephew.
In the story, a sumptuous feast is being organised by her nephew on the occasion
of engagement of his son. Everyone has his full but the 'Old Aunt' is left
without food. Irresistible hunger and her urge to taste relish food items compels
her to eat from the left-over plates, late night.

Muhammad Ali Jamalzadeh describes 'greed' for money as one of the major
short comings in one's personal character. It makes one blind and erodes some
other virtuous characters, too. In the story of "Dusti-yi- Khala Khirsa"
("Friendship of an Aunt Bear") the Russian Cossack gets tempted at the sight of

6
Shabistan: A mosque having a courtyard meant for nocturnal prayer
7
"Vilan ud Daula", Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud, Kaveh, Berlin, 1958, p.l06

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the money lying with Habebullah. The narrator could see the evil -intention in
the eyes of the Russian Cossack, He says:

"When the money poured out of Habebullah's scarf I saw the eyes
of Russian Cossack displayed a strange evil flash. He stared as a hungry
man reacts on sighting a tempting food and wanted to swallow the
money with his eyes " 8

This greed leads the Russian Cossack astray and he contemplates to kill
his own saviour. The last scene is really pathetic, the narrator says:

"Cossack hurriedly came near to the dead body and stooped down after
looking around and searched in Habib's scarf took out something and hid it
under his arm ....... suddenly I could recollect that the Cossack had ill
intentionfor the money .For the sake of petty worldly wealth he forgot all the
courage and kindness extended by the young man and stooped to kill an
..
innocent human bein.g". 9

Premchand also portrays greed as one of greatest v1ces m individual

character which tends to harm relationships and brings misery to the family. In
the story "Lottery" all the family members buy lottery tickets in the hope of
becoming rich soon. They are ready to cross any limits and plan to go to any
extent to keep the major portion of prize money as some of the buy the tickets in
share. At last, an American wins the lottery and family realises after
introspection that they had gone blind for wealth and were ready to sacrifice
mutual confidence, respect, friendship and were too, selfish dreaming about the
Wlll.

While dealing with the issue of moral corruption, Jamalzadeh very

vividly describes 'exploitation' as one of its reasons through the story "Namak-
i-Gandeedah" ("Rotten Salt"). Caught several times for pilfering, and stealing

8
"Dusti yi Khale Khirse",Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud, Kaveh, Berlin, 1958, p. 63
9
"Dusti yi Khale Khirse", Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud, Kaveh, Berlin, 1958, p. 68

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money of the house owner, the domestic help of Mirza Saleh at last discloses the
reason for his moral corruption. It was an eye-opener for Mirza Saleh, when he
finally realised that he was exploiting his domestic help by not paying him the
optimum salary.

"I may sacrifice myself upon you, I have a wife and children.My wife is
weak and she is in post natal stage and requires food and medicine timely.
You know well that my children are in what a condition (deplorable), without
food. When I return home and see their pale faces, which looks like and un-
watered twigs, I go mad and the world becomes dark for me that moment. I
cannot differentiate between what is right and what is wrong ". 10

Premchand in his story "Ramlila" brings out moral corruption and the
lack of sense of responsibility in narrator's father when he does not bother to
raise a good collection to pay the poor artiste, instead gives a huge sum to a belle
(Tawaif). The poor artiste had been performing in the village play since long.
Seeing a very low collection that year, the narrator bids farewell by giving away
all his small savings to the poor artiste.

The noble characters in a human being are always appreciated by the

people. Munshi Premchand seems to have mastery in the field of portrayal of
noble or ideal characters in human beings. He has the power to display the latent
noble character found inside a commoner. It is a psychological truth that a bad
person is not always bad some good characters are there in him, too. Most often
they become victim of circumstances and lose their integrity in moral character
due to some preoccupied wants or pressing needs.

In one of his stories he displays forgiveness which makes a man loftier

than many others.In the story "Mantra" Doctor Chaddha refuses to see the ailing
child of the hero, Bhagat as his visting hours were over and it was his sport time.
Many years rolled on , once Dotcor Chaddha's son is bitten by a poisonous
snake , Bhagat who had turned into an old man was called on to see the doctor's

10
"Namak e Gandideh", Kohne wa Nau, lntesharat e Sukhan, Tehran, p. 49

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son who was nearly dead. Bhagat could easily avenge his son's death long back
but he overcomes his agony and vengeance. He rushes to the scene and bring
back the doctor's son to life by his special power of hynms which could
neutralise the poison of snake. Thus a lowly person exhibits noble character of
'forgiveness'.

In the same way duti-boundness with utmost sincerity could be seen in

Premchand's story "Namak Ka Darogha" ("Salt Inspector") in which Pandit
Alopideen despite being posted in a very profitable department discharges his
duty honestly and courageously following the guidance from his conscience. He
dares to arrest the great salt mafia. He is expelled from the service for doing so
as the salt mafia had wider influence in administrative circles and other
government departments. A time comes when the salt mafia becomes a changed
man. He begs Alopdeen to assume charge as an overseer of his estate and
persuades him to join as Permanent Manager of his estate.

In the story "Sujan Bhagat", Munshi Premchand very delicately and

passionately brings out the issue of self-respect. He says through his story that,
be it a sexagenarian or a youth when it comes to secure one's self-respect one
can go to any extent to protect it and nature too helps those who fight to win
back their lost self-respect. In the story an old, religious and renowned farmer
'Sujan Bhagat' is humiliated by his wife and son for being generous in giving
alms to the poor. His self-respect is hurt. He re-starts farming at the ripe age.
The produce of that year is double than the last year's farm produce and thus
gets back his lost rights in the family.

While describing some good individual moral characters and moral

com1ptions, both Muhammad Ali Jamalzadeh and Premchand are firm and
robust and understand their responsibility well that how literature influences the
minds of the individuals and shapes the character of human beings. By
portraying the good moral character they intend to instil confidence and courage
among the readers to adopt and emulate the noble characters in the 'characters'

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they present. By highlighting the moral corruption in an individual they try to
put a check on the overall degradation of human and social values.

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B. SOCIAL CRITICISM

Poverty is directly or indirectly related to unemployment, exploitation,

oppression, negligence of a particular social class in the development process.
Writers have always brought forth the condition of poor masses, their
exploitation and oppression by the capitalists in their writings. Whether an urban
poor or a rural one, the suffering remains same and the basic question of survival
or existence is always at stake. In Muhammad Ali Jamalzadeh's writing we find
'characters' representing urban poor. In "Bila Dig Bila Chuqandar" ("Every man
to his deserts") the writer shows a group of people who are mostly peasants and
servants and live in abject poverty and destitution. Referring this class of people
he sarcastically says;

" .. they all live in abject poverty. They carry this equality to the
grave with them. The fact that, there are no tombstones on their graves,
not even bricks to mark the place, testifies to their equality. After all, how
long does it take to obliterate initial markers that might be placed on a
new grave? This expression of equality or 'brotherhood' is carried into
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their vernacular as well".

In the story "Vilan-ud-Daula" ("The Vagrant"), Jamalzadeh highlights

the conditions of a poor vagrant who goes on serving people tirelessly, but no
one has time to reciprocate for his services. His condition becomes wretched but
the people continue exploiting him. Describing his dress the writer says;

"Vilan-ud-Daula wants people to see what he dresses, his pair of

socks have holes like a bee hive and his shirt resembles the shirt of love-
.ken peop le, torn at many p laces ,.j )-
s t nc

11
"Bila Dig Bila Chuqandar", Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud, Kaveh, Berlin, 1958, p. 96
12
"Vilan-ud-Daula", Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud, Kaveh, Berlin, 1958, p. 103

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 The reply of Habiba Khanum in the story "Sawab ya Gunah" ("Divine
Reward or Sin") is an answer to the most important question, whether education
is a cure to poverty? Habiba Khanum rightly says;

"We do not have food or shall are stitch my stomach. With what
money shall I send this illegitimate progeny (abuses) to school? You
mean to say I must resort to stealing at this ripe age, which will be
unfounded ofme". 13

The description of urban poor by Jamalzadeh reaches its high point in the
story "Namak-i-Gandidah" ("The Rotten Salt") when narrator and five of his
friends visit Masgharabad at the comer of the city, where there are urban poor
settlements. The description of the area, deplorable condition of people, exposes
the real condition of urban poor. Cities and towns are often seen as an indication
of development and growth in a country. The writer accurately finds out the
negligence of the government authorities to look into their problems as the truth
behind existence of crimes like, snatching, robbing, stealing, pilfering, forced
begging prevalent in the cities. They are forced to do such activities to get their
daily bread.

In the story "Namak-i-Gandidah" ("The Rotten Salt") the writer says:

"all indecent words and rough tone in their speech ..... Clearly
showed that they either know nothing or have been disburdened by
things like God, law, customs, divine canons, social administration. All
their worries are to fill the empty stomach; stealing and snatching are
the petty means to cure thousands of their ailments. " 14

13
"Sawab ya Gunah", Kohne wa Nau, lntesharat e Sukhan,2005, Tehran, p. 14
14
"Namak e Gandideh", Kohne wa Nau, lntesharat e Sukhan,2005, Tehran, p. 55

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 Similarly in the story "Atash Zer-i Khakistar" ("The Fire Under the
Ashes"), youthful and energetic Siyamak realises the importance of food or
medicine over books. Siyamak represents a typical Iranian youth full of energy.
He selects teaching as his profession to nurture innocent children into good
human being. Sometimes, he laments that he is not doing justice to his
profession as he was not able to give equal effort to all his students. However,
when one of his students commits suicide as his father did not have enough
money to provide bread for the family; Siyamak realises that Iranian children
needed bread and medicines more than the books.

"I was going through a tough time related to my life, started to abuse
him and said I don't care if you do not go to school for the next thousand
years. Should I steal for buying books" ?15

Thus, we see that the realistic portrayal of the condition of poor and
neglected class of people in the short stories of Muhammad Ali Jamalzadeh
serves the prime objective of the twentieth century literature; when it started
proving itself to be a reflection of the society and not only a pleasure or leisure
reading of some privileged class people. Here, we see that through short stories
the literature accepts one of the biggest challenges of its time.

In the whole annals of Hindi and Urdu literatures produced in India, the
short stories of Munshi Premchand have been the real interpretation of vows,
miseries of oppressed and low-class people living in village. This was primarily
because the author hailed from rural background and had first had information
on the plight of forced labourer, low caste, farmer, artisans or others. In the story
"Kafan" ("The Shroud") the abject poverty of a low-caste Hindu (Chamar)
family is shown. The expression is so real that the father-son duo appears as the
poorest of the poor in the whole world. Both are unable to arrange a piece of

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"Atash Zer-i Khakistar", Talkh o Shirin, lntesharat e Sukhan,2005, Tehran, p. 152

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shroud for the dead. The remark by Madhav tells the complete story of wretched
people who do not have clothes to cover them up. He says :

" .. What a bad custom is this! The one, who could not get clothes to
wrap her up when she was living, needs a shroud when dead. The shroud
gets burned with the dead body and what is special there in it. If we could
get these five rupees earlier, we could have arranged for her
. . ,]6
me d zcznes.

In the story "Poos ki Raat" ("January Night") poor and wretched farmer
somehow manages to save some money to buy a blanket to save himself from
biting winter months. He is forced to give away his petty savings to his money
lender to avoid getting insulted before his wife. Lastly, he had to spend the
whole night in his fields without a blanket. The spine-chilling cold waves do not
allow the poor farmer to leave the campfire and he could not help the whole
farm being eaten up by the herd of Nilgai. The helpless condition of the
wretched farmer can be visualised well when the moving through the climax of
the story;

"Jabra (pet dog) was barking. Animals were grazing the field and the
crop was ready. What a good crop it was this year! These ruthless animals
are destroying it completely.Halku (the farmer) stood up with firm conviction
stepped forward but suddenly he felt striken by stinging cold wave which
appeared to pierce through his body, he came back and sat before the dying
campfire, started to turn the ashes to get some warmth from the fire under
the ashes. " 17

Acute penury of the grandmother (Ameena) of a five year old kid

(Hamid) attracts the sympathy of the reader in Premchand's the story "Idgah".

16
"Kafan",Premchand ke Numainde Afsane, Qamar Rais ,Educational Book House ,Aiigarh,2001,
p.230
17
"Poos Ki Raat", Mansarovar, vol.l, Sumitra Prakaskan, Allahabad, 1997, p.97

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The pathetic condition of Ameena on the eve 'Eid' speaks about the extent of
poverty. Premchand's unique ability to aptly portray pathos related to poverty
makes the reader feel as if he is watching an interesting movie. Ameena says:

" .. that day I had sewed Fahiman's dress and got eight Annas, which I
had been saving like faith but (what a bad luck) I had to part with it
partially for paying dues. There is nothing left for Hamid (to be given as
tip). Two Paisa is needed for milk and only two Annas() are left. Three
Paisa is with Hamid and five Paisa in Ameena's purse. This is all our
status and top of it, today is Eid. May God save us! Washerwoman, mid-
wife, cleaners, milk-maid, bangle-seller; all will come for Eid tips ... " 18

Premchand is a master in portraying the condition of rural-poor. His

sketch is apt and heart rending too. Poverty begets exploitation. In our social
system a poor person resorts to do any kind of odd jobs for his livelihood and
the privileged class uses this as an opportunity for his exploitation. The
exploitation can be in form of not paying proper wages against the services
taken or even corporal punishment for asserting one's supremacy over the other.
In a society, where class difference is distinct and deep-rooted, the exploitation
of the low class people by the privileged or capitalist class tends to be more.
Caste-oppression was one of the kinds of exploitation in the name of caste. The
higher caste-Hindus exploited the low caste, who were generally poor and
thought they were predestined to be used by high caste. Premchand wrote
extensively about such exploitation in the Indian society. Writers of Progressive
Movement vowed to right about the masses highlighting tortures, atrocities,
exploitation, injustice received by the oppressed. Premchand was a protagonist;
highlighting lives of labourers, farmers, outcastes. In one of his famous stories
"Sadgati", both the husband and wife belonging to a low-caste called 'Chamar'
are at the service of upper-caste Brahmin. The cunning Brahmin engages Dukkhi
for his household work all day long, without food. Dukkhi dies chopping woods

18
"ldgah", Mansarovar, vol.l, Sumitra Prakaskan, Allahabad, 1997, p.16

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in Brahmin's house. As Dukkhi was an untouchable, no body dared to touch his
dead body .Adding to his misery, untouchables from Dukkhi's clan too, refused
to remove the body from Brahmin's house. They were protesting against the
killing of their fellow men. Next day, when it was dawn Brahmin tied a noose
around the feet of the dead body and dragged it out of the village. The story is so
realistic that it appears as if the writer was the witness to the whole incident.

In the story "Thakur ka Kuan" ("Thakur's Well") Premchand describes

the pathetic condition of an untouchable from a lower caste who is unable to
bring a pot of clean water for her ailing husband. At that time Untouchables
were not allowed to draw water from the wells belonging to upper caste. This is
the sordid tale where the young woman dares to draw water from Thakur's well
secretly at night. The fright of being caught is deep in her mind that when she
hears the opening of the doors of Thakur's, she drops back the drawn water in
the well. Some stories of Premchand strike hard over the wrongs of the society.
Premchand has touched upon almost all the major social evils prevalent during
his time. Discussing the monster of 'usury' which had ruined many lives he
paints the picture of a poor farmer Shankar who had taken some wheat flour
from a local money-lender(Vipraji) to honour his guest. Shankar had paid many
times more than what he received but did not declare it out of modesty. The
small debt turns into an enormous loan with interest compounding over the
principal. Shankar dies in harness of the debt and in return his son is engaged to
work for the money lender as a debt recovery. Usury was like strong and tight
claws of a hawk which holds its prey tightly and does not leave till it is dead.

Muhammad Ali Jamalzadeh too speaks about exploitation of poor by the

rich . In the story ""Bila Dig Bila Chuqandar" the narrator reads the diary of a
European bath attendant who once visited Iran. The bath attendant classifies
Iranian people according to their headgear. Those who wore yellow hats
belonged to peasants and servants or the oppressed class. White hats are sported
by "Shaykh or Akhunds" (religious clerics) and Black hats are called "Khans"

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occupying government positions and make laws for the public. On the sheer
exploitation working class people by religious clerics he says:

" ..... a major preoccupation of the White hats and the Black hats whose
only goal consists of possessing more and more Yellow hats....... Very much
like our European tradition of buying and selling honey bee in hives, in Iran
and yellow hats are sold as families with their house, hamlet and even
village. For instance, you might hear that today so and so bought one
hundred yellow families for the such and such an amount. " 19

Some social evils like 'bribery' initially emanates from the moral
corruption of an individual. Muhammad Ali Jamalzadeh dared to attack the
corrupt Iranian politicians during his time. In the story "Rajul-i-Siyasi" ("The
Politician"), the writer shows how an ordinary cotton beater catches the skills of
a seasoned politician, who is normally an expert in receiving bribes. The cotton
beater takes bribe due to some comedy of error and at last turns into a full-
fledged politician of same lot. In the story "Bila Dig Bila Chuqandar"
Jamalzadeh sarcastically exposes the habit of taking bribes in religious clerics
"Akhunds". He says:

"One day I said to one of my I rani an acquaintances, 'I knew that these
white hats (Akhunds) belong to a profession that involves some sort of
manual activity. But I do not know what profession that is.' He said 'there is
truly an industry on which Iran's very existence hinges. Without this
industry all the country's affairs will come to a full stop and country with
destruct.' 'What is the name of this sublime profession? I asked
'Bribery' he said" 20

In Premchand' s story the hero witnesses the corrupt system before him. He
is a man of principle and would not budge an inch to sacrifice his principles. In

19
"Bila Dig Bila Chuqandar", Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud, Kaveh, Berlin, 1958, p. 98
20
Ibid, p. 95

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the story "Namak ka Darogha" ("The Salt Inspector"), hero of the story,
Bansidhar, a Salt Inspector is assigned to check on the transit of salt. A famous
and rich trader Pandit Alopideen is an influential merchant who has links with
government servants and administration. The honest inspector stops his truck
loads of salt being transported illegally. Alopideen could not bribe him for
relinquishing his duty. Premchand describes it as the battle between 'wealth' and
'duty'. He says:

"the 'wealth' started to attack excitedly. The rate started from one
thousand to five, then to ten and fifteen, and from fifteen it reached to
twenty thousand, but the 'duty' with its immense courage stood calm,
composed, determined and firm like a mountain before the large army of
wealth. .. will forty thousand suffice you?'even for forty lakhs it would be
impossible' . The 'duty' had routed 'wealth'. " 21

In the early twentieth century the objective of literature had undergone a sea
change. It started.speaking of the society and started to take giant stride towards
the new challenge of 20th century .It was no more a mere tool for entertainment.
Diverse issues from various social sections classes needed to be attended.
Muhammad Ali Jamalzadeh was one of the courageous writers of his age. He
started exposing the ill practices prevalent in the Iranian society at that time. He
criticised the ruling class, religious clerics for the exploitation of common
masses. A journey through his short stories reveals that he was an ardent social
critic of his time. One of the striking features of his social criticism was that his
approach was mostly direct.

The first story of his collection of short stories "Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud"
("Once upon a time") published in Berlin in 1921 starts with a satire on the
contemporary Iranian regime saying:

21
"Namak ka Darogha", Mansarovar, vol.lll, Prakaskan Sansthan, New Delhi, 2004, p.201

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 " in no other place of the face of earth but in Iran are saints and sinners
alike ... " 22

Commenting on judges the so-called "khans" he says that all the

government offices are controlled by this tribe. They have a private club and
whoever from the outside can enter it finds him to be in a clover. They call their
assembly as "Diwan" or court. One of scathing attacks he has made in his story
"Atash Zer-i- Khakistar" where he condemns the Western political thought
imposed on Iran. Through the character Mirza Ruhullah, he has given message
to those who always talk big but actually do nothing for the welfare of people.
He says the Iranian multitude does not want to understand the meaning of
democracy propounded by America and definition if revolution by Russia in
empty stomach. Our world is the woman who has the body of the child with her
hands bleeding and drops of blood trickling on the earth. Inspiring the politicians
and administrators of the country he says:

" ... your world is these common masses who neither know America or
Russia, they are hungry, weak and want bread, clothing and medicines. " 23

His story "Bila Dig Bila Chuqandar" ("Every man to his deserts") is a
piquant satire on the despotic order, way of life, ruling circles and class
distinction in Qajar times. Fate takes a European bath attendant to Persia, where
he becomes advisor to a minister and his memoir 'People and Government' in
Iran is a direct attack on the religious clerics, state administrator. It was mainly
the remarks made in this story that disturbed the religious and state dignitaries in
the early 1920's, when the book was first published. He accuses the "Akhund"
being rampantly involved in receiving bribe. Their headgear and rosary in their
hands is a mask to deceive people. Criticising about their headgear he writes in
the story:

22
"Farsi Shikar Ast", Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud, Kaveh, Berlin, 1958, p. 19
23
Atash Zer-i Khakistar", Talkh o Shirin, lntesharat e Sukhan,2005, Tehran, p.167

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 "One day I asked an Iranian, 'why do the Akhund tie so much
material around their head?
'It is quite simple', he replied. 'When your finger is injured, don't
you wrap some bandage around it to keep it away from further harm?
Perhaps the brains of the Akhunds are damaged and they intend to
prevent fresh air from reaching .... " 24

He charges that the profession of 'Akhunds' is to take bribes and

comments on their habit of reading beads. He sarcastically says:

"Whatever the profession I believe, the thumbs and the forefinger

play a major role in its performance. I say this because the White hats
(Akhunds) constantly rub these digits against each other. Could it be
that they keep them well exercised? They have gone so far as devising a
means for the proper exercise of the digits. It consists of running a
string through the holes of a number of coloured stones " 25

Criticism of the contemporary society IS seen m the stories of

Premchand, too but in a slightly different form and style than Jamalzadeh.
During Premchand's time India was ruled by the Britishers. In the aftermath of
India's 'first war for independence' termed by the Britishes as the famous
'Revolt of 1857' or even 'Sepoy Mutiny of 1857' the sense of India as one
country was generating among the masses. Premchand came at a time when the
freedom movement had already started in India. Now, it was the duty of the
writers to generate to feelings of 'nationalism' in the common masses so that the
idea gets proliferated well in society. Premchand was no doubt an intelligent
writer; he understood the responsibility of men of letters at that time. In his first
collection of short story "Soz-e-Watan" ("Passion for the nation") most of the
stories incite the readers to love one's country and stand united for the cause of
setting the country free. In one such story he very nicely blends romance with

2
~"Bila Dig Bila Chuqandar", Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud, Kaveh, Berlin, 1958, p. 97
25
Ibid, p. 98

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patriotism. In the story "Duniya ka Sabse Anmol Ratan" ("World's most
invaluable Jewel"), the hero 'Dilfigar' falls in love of the unparalleled beauty
named 'Dilfareb' and proposes her. The lady asks 'Dilfigar' to bring for her the
most invaluable thing in earth. The lover presents one after another many things
to her, but she rejects those calling them, not the invaluable one she wanted. At
last when the lover gifts her drop of martyr's blood who died defending his
country, 'Dilfareb' accepts it as the most invaluable thing on earth and agrees to
get married to 'Dilfigar'. The dialogues are really inspiring and instil courage to
fight for the nation. At one place the dying warrior says:

"what is the use applying ointment over wound! Let the blood ooze
out. Shall I live for the sake of being a slave in my own country? I would
rather choose death. Death like this one rarely comes. " 26

In the story "Samar Yatra" a seventy five-year old woman lady inspires
the village folk to come to the support of 'Satyagrahi' (Truth-Seekers) fighting
to make the country free. She is not cowed down by the mental and physical
atrocities inflicted upon her compatriots who were in the services of the rulers,
instead she stands against them. She manages to mobilise a huge rural masses to
join for the cause of the freedom movement. Inciting the village folk she says:

" For how long will you be thrashed? .... Show them that you
are alive and care for your self-respect. When your self-respect is lost
there is no use of gaining virtues? Leave this corwardness! After all you
all are going to die, why not die fighting for the noble cause and die like
,27
a hera

The emergence of Mahatma Gandhi in national politics and propagation

of national values were simultaneous. Britishes had intensified the efforts to
quell the anti-British sentiments in India. Several leaders were being rounded up

26
"Duniya Ka Sabse Anmol Ratan", Duniya Ka Sabse Anmol Ratan Tatha Anya Kahaniyan, Amrit
Rai, Saraswati Publication, New Delhi, 1986, p.21
27
"Samar Yatra", Mansarovar, voi.VII, Prakaskan Sansthan, New Delhi, 2004, p.52

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and put in jail, press freedom was curtailed, people's rights were substantially
clipped, men of letters were warned producing literature that arouse the national
sentiment or criticises the incumbent administration. It was really testing time
for the men of letters. In this atmosphere, Premchand' s first collection of short
stories "Soz -e-watan" ("a passion for the nation"), comes in public and
Premchand is charged with sedition. The copies of his first collection of short
stories is confiscated and ordered to be burned by the British Administration.

In the story "Shatranj ke Khiladi" ("The Chess Players"), Premchand

portrays the playing of chess as an ill omen and symbol of luxurious life,
prevalent in Nawabs of Lucknow those days. British forces are advancing to
capture the Nawab of Lucknow, Wajid Ali Shah. Instead of fighting the British
forces to defend their seat of power,the clan members continue playing chess
and chose to go on with their relaxed life. They don't dare to ponder that they
are on brink of disaster their own ruin is in the offing. The scene portrayed by
Premchand at the time of the arrest of the Nawab Wajid Ali Shah is marvellous,
he says:

"Nawab Wajid Ali Shah had been captured and the army (British)
has been transporting him to some undisclosed place. There is no hustle
and bustle in the city; no free country has ever lost the battle in this
peaceful manner. This was not the non-violence on which Gods would
feel happy, instead it is sheer cowardice ... " the Great Nawab of Oudh is
imprisoned and being taken away (by Britishes) and Lucknow is busy
merrymaking. It is the height of political downfall. " 28

In the same manner, we see that during Muhammad Ali Jamalzadeh's

time that Constitutional Movement was going on ( 1905 - 1911 ). The chief forces
behind the Constitution Movement and the coup de tat of Reza Shah ( 1921)
were the result of increased contact with the Western world. In addition to these,
the first Russian Revolution (1905) affected the developments in Iran. In 1907

28
"Shatranj ke Khiladi", Mansarovar, vol.lll, Prakaskan Sansthan, New Delhi, 2004, p.197

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Anglo-Persian agreement was signed dividing the country literally into three
parts "Sphere of Influence" a Russian zone in the north, a British zone in the
south and a neutral zone in the middle. The despotic regime of Mummad Ali
Shah ended in 1909, when Majlis reopened. The Russian Revolution of 1917
brought a relaxation of Russian pressure. This was a time when Jamalzadeh
appeared on the scene with his first collection of short stories "Yaki Bud Yaki
Nabud" ("once upon a time"), published in Germany in 1921. The collection
speaks about the contemporary society in a satirical manner. In the story "Rajul-
i-Siyasi", Jamalzadeh vividly describes about the scene of Majles (the
Parliament) from the view point of commoner. The commoner says:

"Oh! The over- dressed people, God's mercy be upon them ... one of
the over- dressed person with a white beard sat in the first row (Prime
Minister) said to me ... After him some people talked in complex and
complicated manner. I could only understand that the over-dressed
person who spoke first was the 'Head of Ministers' and the rest were
among the rotten lost of 'Democrats' and 'Moderates'. " 29

Attacking the 'Reformist' brigade among the law-makers referred in the

story as "Bila Dig Bila Chuqandar", as Black Hats. The narrator says that this
group is willing to entertain certain changes or "reform" in the divan or
assembly. For instance, they believe that the full import of constitution has not
been done by the Akhunds. The prosperity of some of the Akhunds, disrupts the
harmony cultivated in the land. They intend to replay the situation so that at the
end the Akhunds and the 'peasants and workers' become truly equal. Whenever,
there is lust of power or position the sincerity of the job is compromised.
Muhammad Ali Jamalzadeh very clearly brings out the tortures inflicted upon
the common masses at the hand of government officials. Most often the officials
are extra cautious by virtue of which they tum the life of a common man into

29
"Rajul-i-Siyasi", Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud, Kaveh, Berlin, 1958, p. 44

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misery. In the story "Farsi Shikar Ast" ("Persian is Sugar"), commenting on the
attitude and behaviour of the passport official says the narrator says:

"... that very morning a new official had arrived in Anzalifrom Rasht.
To prove his loyalty and viability, they said, this official was turning the
wet alongside the dry, as it were. His behaviour was like that of a rabid
dog that, without any apparent reasons, attacks innocent people left and
right. Additionally, this very official was eying the governorship of the
region. Preparing the ground for becoming the governor of Anzali,
thought the morning, he had tied up the entire Anzali-Tehran telegraph
30
line, transmitting information of his own activities".

The similar high handedness of government official with the general

public can be seen in the stories of Munshi Premchand. The Britishes often
manhandled or treated Indian masses badly. At times the situation became very
complex when a member of a family served for the Britishes and often became a
party to the British oppressors. Premchand very artistically manages to strike the
balance between the two sides. He would always cling to the theme of the story
till the end. In the story "Julus" ("The Procession") a mounted police inspector
charges batons on the procession brutally as a result an old man leading the
procession dies of head injury. The populace detests the sub-inspector for his
behaviour with his compatriots. People dislike him, even his wife feels sorry for
the incident as she was the sympathiser of the Satyagrahis. In the story, the
inspector introspects the reason for his criticism His wife finds mental peace
when she meets her remorseful husband at the widow's house. It was the
stinging remark from his wife which compelled the Inspector to go for soul-
searching. His wife had said:

" .. you may get promotion, but what is the use of getting such a
promotion when your hands are stained with blood of an innocent.' You

30
"Farsi Shikar Ast", Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud, Kaveh, Berlin, 1958, p.23

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 shall be rewarded (by the Britishers) for outstanding performance but
. a trmtor
wou ld remazn . " .31

It is very difficult to understand a child's mind; at times it thinks those

things which surpass the thought of grown-up people. Understanding a child's
mind and to inculcate right moral and values, family and social etiquettes in
them is a difficult task. Writers need to produce such a work which caters to
both the demands, i.e. that of the parents and the child. A child seeks pleasure in
his inquisitiveness, flight of fantasy or imagination. The parents are worried for
the right character building of the child. Therefore, it is essential for a writer to
know the basics of child psychology. Both Jamalzadeh and Premchand are
skilful in handling child character. For instance, in the story "Farsi Shikar Ast"
("Persian is sweet"), the main character is a young boy who is unable to
understand the various dialects of Persian. At the top of it, his urge to know why
something has gone wrong remains crucial aspect in the whole story. The young
boy seemed to be relaxed when he found that somebody could understand and
converse in the language he spoke. Jamalzadeh nicely puts in the story:

more importantly when he realised that we spoke the same

language, he grabbed my hand repeatedly kissed it. His delight knows
no end, as if he had been given the world. He said, 'May I be sacrificed
for your words? You must be an angel sent from above to rescue
1ne... " 32

Jamalzadeh's theme in the story wants to persuade people to use simple

Persian in their speech. After creating a complex situation due to dialectical
intricacies of the language, he resolves the crisis with this suggestion from the
young boy:

31
"Julus", Mansarovar, voi.VII, Prakaskan Sansthan, New Delhi, 2004, p.39
32
"Farsi Shikar Ast", Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud, Kaveh, Berlin, 1958, p. 29

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 " .. whenever you find you do not understand them (the European and
the Mullah) help yourself to these sweets and remember me. " 33

In the story "Hoomza wa Loomza", Jamalzadeh very delicately brings

out the physical and mental trauma faced by a child of a 'madrasa' when he is
unable to pronounce a couple of Arabic words. The madrasa teacher, a Mullah,
serves as an executioner of the child and does not spare at the child for
committing mistakes. The child lives in a state of complete mental excitation
and fear of punishment continuously haunts his mind. Difficult words often
create hallucination to him. The torture at the hands of the Mullah makes the
child so worried that the two words started to appear like demons, remembering
his childhood days the narrator says:

" .. the old magicians by dint of their magical tricks could turn human
beings into smoke and even made them disappear .I kinds of stories I
had learnt that these kinds of story very much. Therefore, the words
'Hoomza' and 'Loomza' started to take the shape of a child's
perception of magicians, tricksters. One day I could see their physical
,34
appearance too ....

Premchand pays much attention to building of 'character' in the story.

He gives emphasis on every minute details of the child's thought process. In the
story "Idgah" he very smoothly manages to move the story with five children
'characters'. The hero of the story is a five year old poor boy, whom Premchand
has portrayed so lively that his actions seem fully justified and the reader sides
with the hero. A child has an impressionable mind and powerful memory, he
remembers things or events which attracts or influences him. He may remember
a trivial event and forget a major event or the other way, in other words he has
an unpredictable but strong memory. Premchand gives a detail account of his
childhood days spent with an ordinary postman. The writer very aptly describes

33
Ibid, p.32
34
"Hoomza wa Loomza", Kohne wa Nau, lntesharat e Sukhan,2005, Tehran, p. 143

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the child's psychology that a child knows no constraint in mixing with people.
He remembers only those who give him love and affection. In the story "Kajaki"
a poor postman who worked under narrator's father came to their house
regularly and used to play with the narrator when he was very young. One day
the postman reaches late on duty and could not deliver mails on time. He kept
himself busy with catching a young deer for the child. He was suspended from
work. The poor postman loved the child very much and child also loved him,
too. Unable to meet the child daily, he becomes mentally weak. When narrator's
father came to know his condition, he is asked to rejoin duty. The story shows
selfless love in its pure form.

Love for one's country can be found in the stories of Jamalzadeh. He

very nicely expresses the condition of a Western-educated Iranian youth who
returns to his country to see the woes and desperation. Sometimes he is unable to
cope with the situations and put himself in trouble. Many 'characters' of this
type appear in Jamalzadeh's work but none of them is able to tolerate the
prevailing socio-political environment in Iran and finds difficult to
accommodate with his fellow countrymen. They are not only seen as an alien
being in the social environment but also seen as an outsider in their own family
circle. In "Atash zer-i- Khakistar" ("The Fire under the Ashes"), the hero
Rahmatullah returns to Iran from Europe after acquiring high skills in carpentery
and set up a factory in Tehran. He becomes popular as a master craftsman and
his trade flourishes rapidly, rival firms could not tolerate the success of their
young colleague and their secretly plot to harm his business. He becomes their
victim and Rahmatullah had to close the factory and relinquish the profession.
Later, he becomes an interpreter to a Persian military mission in Germany; once
again his honesty with the profession brings him grief. Upon the instigation of
the officers, to whom he had exposed in a case vent their ire against him and he
is forced to return to Persia. No sooner did he return to Iran than he is arrested
and charged with communist activities. In the end, he and other members of his
family are reduced to misery and complete destitution.

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 In "Khana bi dush" ("Vagabond"), the story revolves around Ahmad.
Ahmad goes to Britain to study for a brief period. During his stay in Britain he
dreams of serving his countrymen when he returns there. When he returns, all
his dreams are shattered once he returns home. Morover, the job he is given by
the government is a petty one; of sticking labels on the bars of opium! Even in
this menial employment he finds the opportunity to voice against the prevailing
bribery and corruption at the work place. His complains are ridiculed by his
friends, his father too does not take his complains seriously. At the end, he finds
a teaching job among the wandering tribes, who later regard him as a saintly
icon.

The same state of mind of another Euorpe-returned Iranian can be seen

in "Farsi Shikar Ast" ("Persian is Sugar"), the Europeanised fellow is puzzled
why the government passport official has locked him up in the cell and is
surprised at the government's treatment towards a west-educated Iranian. He
says:

"I have not come up with an 'absolument' answer, either 'positif' or

'negatif'. Besides is this not 'absolument comique' for them to treat me,
a diploime, from the best of families, as if I were a 'criminal' and
'nouveau' "35

Thus, it is seen that Jamalzadeh's stories portray the tragedy of West-

returned students; much of their unhappiness comes when they are in a state of
transition and intend to settle back in their country. Unhappy with the Western
life, idealistic and ambitious young students returning to their country, where
prejudice and the predominance of selfish and influential classes with no sense
of civic responsibility still existed. Jamalzadeh is most suitably attends the
theme. He himself is an archetype of such Iranian student who find difficulty in
adapting himself to prevailing conditions in this own country.

35
"Farsi Shikar Ast", Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud, Kaveh, Berlin, 1958, p.30

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 To acquire education was the privilege of a lucky few during
Premchand's time. Only children of well off families like those of landlords,
government servants, and upper class people could get education. Premcharid
understood that youth are the potential resources of a country and if they were
directed towards Independence movement, substantial pressure could be belt on
the British government. He believed in shaping of the youth by influencing their
thought process. He argued that in whatever, sphere one lives or works, he must
adhere to the basic ideals. In the story "Prerna" ("Inspiration") the narrator's
pupil comes to visit him. He is now the Deputy Commissioner of a district. The
narrator is taken aback, as he was a very weak student when he taught him. He
inquires the reason for the outstanding success. The pupil disclosed that his
source of inspiration was a nine year old boy in front of whom he had to present
himself as an ideal elder brother. He had to relinquish all his ill habits and
concentrate on studies, which later brought good results. Thus, one finds that
Premchand' s emphasis is on character building and sense of responsibility in an
individual.

Similarly, in the story "Bade Bhai Sahab" ("The Elder Brother") the
elder brother of the narrator is not good in studies. He fails at least twice or
thrice in every class, but he very well understands the responsibility as an elder
brother. His inner conflict can be ascertained well when he at discloses to his
younger brother one day:

"I do not forbid you for flying kites; I too get enticed to it but what I
must do! If I go astray, how will I be able to protect you? This
responsibility is also upon my shoulders! " 36

To employed youth, Premchand appeals to be honest and sincere in

discharging one's duties .He asks not to compromise with sincerity or nobility of

36
"Bade Bhai Sahab", Mansarovar, vol.l, Prakaskan Sansthan, New Delhi, 2004, p.56

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the profession. In the story "Namak Ka Darogha" ("Salt Inspector") the hero,
Pandit Aloopdin despite being in such government department where illegal
money making could be very easy, he chooses to perform his duty with great
courage and acts as per the voice of his conscience. The result is that he dares to
arrest a very influential person of the coterie of illegal traders on the charge of
'bribing an official on duty' and consequently loses his job. In the end, his sense
of responsibility and honesty brings him both respect and money when his worth
is identified. But in the story "Julus" ("The Procession") he paints the character
of a mounted police inspector in a slightly different way. The inspector charges
baton on a group of Satyagrahi in which an old man is severely injured and
succumbs to injuries. Above all, we see that in the story Premchand intends to
impart an important message to the youth serving in the British administration,
that they must have compassion for their compatriots, who may be seen as a
threat in the eyes of British administration. Another important point in the story
is that; even a smart, advanced and educated individual would be hated by the
common masses if he serves in the British government and would be regarded as
a traitor .who disrespects the freedom struggle. In such an environment it is
logical for the hero of the story "Julus" ('The Procession") to admit that he has
committed a mistake. The 'hero' is remorseful on not supporting the
independence seekers. Rebuking his colleague he says:

" .. do you know who is called a rebellion? They are those who rob,
steal or kill people. Those who dare to die for the sake of the country are
not rebellion. It is our misfortune that we are on the opposite flank, and
not supporting them. This is not a moment of feeling proud or rejoicing
(at the death of compatriot), but a matter of great distress or shame. " 37

The theme that appears large in Muhammad Ali Jamalzadeh's writing is

the criticism of the religious clerics called 'Akhunds'. This is because he is
thoroughly a representative of a middle class and by birth a member of the
clerical professional element. He can portray middle-class people with an

37
"Julus", Mansarovar, val. VII, Prakaskan Sansthan, New Delhi, 2004, p.42

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accuracy and vividness born only of the most intimate acquaintance as in "Farsi
Shikar Ast" ("Persian is sweet").In the story one finds a verbose speech of
Mullah, apparently appears to be humorous ; is not out of context to the question
raised by the 'hero'. In the story the writer introduces Mullah to the reader by
mixing satire with humour. The narrator says:

"I could make out something shiny and white that resembled a cat
curled over a bag of coal. In reality, however, I was looking at a Mullah
who sat in the manner of school children, with his arms wrapped around
his knees. His entire body was covered with his cloak. What I had
mistaken for a shiny, white cat was his turban the tail end of which,
dangling over his shoulder, looked like the tail of a cat. The hissing
sound of course, was the sound of his Arabic prayers. " 38

In "Bila Dig Bila Chuqandar" ("Every man to his deserts"), Jamalzadeh

heaps scorn on the 'amama' (turban) saying:

" .. their heads, thus resemble a minaret on which stork has built a
nest. One day I asked an Iranian 'why do the Akhund tie so much
material around their heads? 'It is quite simple', he replied. 'When your
finger is injured, don't you wrap some bandage around it to keep it
away from further harm? Perhaps the brains of the Akhunds are
damaged and they intend to preventfresh air from reaching there. " 39

Jamalzadeh is slightly more sympathetic or more urbane towards the

clergy, he believes, that the institution they represent is noble, but the clergy
themselves fall short of its ideals and requirements. Jamalzadeh writes
scathingly about the Mullah in the story "Dard-i-Dil-i-Mullah Qurban Ali"
("The Grievances of Mullah Qurban Ali"), an infatuated Mullah tells about his
reckless love for the daughter of a neighbouring merchant. The girl dies and the

38
"Farsi Shikar Ast", Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud, Kaveh, Berlin, 1958, p.22
39
"Bila Dig Bila Chuqandar", Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud, Kaveh, Berlin, 1958, p.95

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unfortunate Qurban Ali, of whose love the girl's family knows nothing, is
invited to spend the night beside the coffin praying for her soul. During the night
he cannot quench the temptation to see the beautiful face of his beloved once
more. He is caught kissing the lips of the dead girl and ends up in jail.
Jamalzadeh's unique ability to beat 'Akhund with Akhund's own stick' can be
seen in the story. Jamalzadeh is well versed with terminologies clerics use unlike
others who, while criticising clerics in their writing limits themselves to bare
statement like 'the clergy are a vile collection of reactionary hypocrites who bar
progress.

Jamalzadeh's pre-emmence m Persian literature is mainly due to his

timely clarion call for 'literary democracy' and regeneration of prose by using
simple and colloquial Persian language in the writings. In an interview in 1938
he stated that he was very proud of his "Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud" ("Once Upon a
Time") for it was the origin of a new school of prose; yet he rightly affirmed that
the innovation had been in the air already and he believed that if he had not
started some else would have. In "Farsi Shikar Ast" ("Persian is Sugar"), he
weaves a story in such a realistic way that the reader is compelled to ponder
upon the problem of a language and its different dialects. He brings forth an
important issue before the Iranian masses. After him, followed the trend of
simplification of language in literary writings and penetrated deep into the
masses. Common people could understand various vital issues and the gap
between the educated class and the common mass was bridged. Jamalzadeh's
effort in this regard had two major dimensions: one, simplification of the literary
language; second, wider proliferation of literature among the populace.
Jamalzadeh's cry for the use of simple Persian as a common language of
Iranians can be heard from the mouth of Ramazan, in "Farsi Shikar Ast"
("Persian is Sugar"). He says:

" .. tell me you Muslims, what crime have I committed that I don't
know about? If I am thief have any hand cut off,· if I am guilty of
something, flog me, pull out my nails, nail my ear to the gate, pull my

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 eyes out of their sockets, shod me, shackle me, pour hot water on me.
Otherwise, for God's sake, release me from the cell and from the clutches
of these mad demons. God know, I am about to go crazy. You are forcing
me to share a grave with these loonies. " 40

Jamalzadeh has mostly written about the problems of the urban masses
but sometimes he speaks about the condition of tribal people. In "Khana bi
Dush" ("Vagabond"), he portrays the tribal life where common folk accord a
princely welcome to an educated person from the city. The tribal people
consider the hero as a messiah who has come to bring them out of darkness.
Ahmad begins his work with full vigour and zeal; devotes himself to the cause
of the tribesman. With his selfless service he finds a place in the heart of every
tribesman. They also keep him dear to their lives. From imparting education to
curing children and elders, making bridges he is present everywhere working
with full energy. He is fully contented with the purity of life there He breathes
his last among the people who are pure at heart. After his death, people gave him
cult status and later started linking his lineage to Imams. They built a tomb on
his grave and visit it every day.

The story has two dimensions. In the first part, the author describes the
urban lifestyle and psyche of the people who live in cities and towns. They are
the people who are dishonest and cunning. But the tribal are simple and
ingenuous. Welcoming Ahmad in their tribal area, tribal chief says:

" .. we are tribal people, are simple and uneducated people of open
field and it is equally true that we understand the value of knowledge
and importance of reading and writing. People call us thieves or bandits
and when you get more familiar to us, you would see that the real
thieves and bandits are those with lots of oppression and many false
pretentions, rob ourselves with our wages and leave us hungry and our

40
"Farsi Shikar Ast", Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud, Kaveh, Berlin, 1958, p.29

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 children without schools. Our ailments or disease are left unattended by
doctors and are without medicines. " 41

Munshi Premchand too, portrays the contrasting psyche and attitude of

an educated doctor and an illiterate poor old man living in a village, in the story
"Mantra" ("The Hymn"). Once, the only child of a poor villager becomes
seriously ill. The poor man carries his son to a city doctor who has just finished
seeing patients at his clinic and was getting ready for his sports. The poor man
implores hardly to save the life of his dying child son, but all goes in vain and
the boy dies. The life of the rural couple is ruined. One day son of the same
doctor is bitten by a poisonous snake; doctor tried all efforts to save his son but
could not do. The poor man hears the news of doctor's son battling with life .At
last, he brings the doctor's son back to life with his supernatural power of curing
snake bites by reciting hymns. The beautiful contrast of psyche of an educated
urban rich and a simple poor villager appeals the reader.

Unlike Premchand, women 'character' does not appear as. the mam
character in the short stories of Jamalzadeh. But many shades of a woman are
nicle portrayed in the short stories of Jamalzadeh. In the story "Sawab ya
Gunah" (Divine reward or Sin) the domestic help Habiba Sultan faces much
hardship in bringing up her child. She is unable to provide food and education to
her child due to severe poverty, but she never wants to compromise with her
good morals and resort to unlawful means of earning money like stealing.

In "Dard-i-Dil-i-Mullah Qurban Ali" ("The Grievances of Mullah

Qurban Ali"), Muhammad Ali Jamalzadeh very successfully explains the beauty
of the daughter of Qurban Ali's neighbour. The writer very candidly builds up
the scene mixing the simulations and beauty of the neighbour's daughter which
impels Mullah to get attracted upon the girl. The Mullah narrates;

41
"Khana bi Dush", Kohne wa Nau, lntesharat e Sukhan, Tehran, p.134

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 "after having tea and hookah, I was prepared to step out from the
house, suddenly I heard a soft voice which trembled me at once ...... the
currency notes slipped from my hand...... when she bent to pick up the
currency notes her chadur (veil) slipped, I could see her pink-rose face
tree, the hairs got loosened... For a moment, it appeared the sun has
dazzled my eyes, my heart started beating fast. " 42

In the story "Aqd-i-Tamhidi" ("Facilitative Marriage") the theme is on

the exploitation of woman in form of marriage prevalent in Iranian society. A
new type of marriage is discussed in the story which is aimed at exploiting
women by men to facilitate their objective of earning wealth or property. There
is a young, handsome and attractive man who can easily seduce women. He
entraps an old woman in his love and gradually gets control of her wealth. His
wife is a partner in the false-love drama harped by the man on the old lady. The
lady when realised the truth, dies heart-broken. The hero later abandons his wife
too and looks out for another woman. The issue of exploitation of women by the
institution of marriage is the theme of the story. The story there is a sharp
criticism on "Sigheh" ("Limited Period Marriage") type of marriage. In the story
one of the friends narrates what his father had said about "Sigheh" ("Limited
Period Marriage"). His father said:

"beware! Do not rush for 'sigheh' and other types of things in this
city (Mashhad), as any woman or a girl comes into marriage contract
with could be your erstwhile mother. There is a probability that your
father had known her previously". 43

In the story "Bila Dig Bila Chuqandar", Jamalzadeh has nicely presented
what a foreigner says about Iranian women. In the story a European bath
attendant travels to Iran. He writes a memoir titled "People and Government in

42
"Oard-i-Dil-i-Mullah Qurban Ali", Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud, Kaveh, Berlin, 1958, p.78
43
"Aqd-i-Tamhidi", Kohne wa Nau, lntesharat e Sukhan, Tehran, p.77

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Iran", in which he makes comments m lighter vein low presence of Iranian
women in public;

"One day, on the street, I observed the people had surrounded a

youth with long hair, a clean face, a long dress and a sash. Thinking
that they had surrounded a woman, I headed in that direction...... I
discovered the fellow was a Dervish. " 44

Commenting on the veil "Hijab" of Iranian women he says:

" ...... wrap themselves in black bag so thoroughly that their entire
body, from head to toe, is covered. There is no opening in the bag, not
even for breathing..... they cannot enter public places like teahouses
and the like. " 45

Premchand also portrays every shade of Indian women ranging _from

poor, weak and oppressed women of lower class, outcaste; to rich and effluent
society women. The portrayal of ideal Indian woman having a fair
understanding of family values can be seen in the story "Bade Ghar ki Beti"
("Daughter of a high family"), the main character of the story is the daughter of
a rich man possessing dignity and honour in the society. She is married to the
graduate son of a landlord named Srikanth. Once, Srikanth finds that his
younger brother had misbehaved with his wife Anandi, when he was out for
some days. Srikanth becomes awfully angry and rebukes his brother sternly.
His younger brother could not tolerate the heart-breaking talks of the elder
brother and decides to leave the home. Anandi an intelligent girl,she acts
judiciously and efforts to reunites the warring brothers. The home is saved from
being broken. Here, Anandi rightly discharges the duty of an ideal housewife
and an excellent homemaker.

44
"Bila Dig Bila Chuqandar", Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud, Kaveh, Berlin, 1958, p.94
45
ibid, p.95

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 In "Shanti" ("Peace") the main character is a teenage girl who loves her
self- respect and has a much developed thought of husband and wife relations.
Being brought up in an in open atmosphere, she believes that love must flow
from both sides; a husband must treat his wife as an equal partner and not as a
subservient being. The girl does not want to give in her self-respect and wants to
be treated fairly; like an equal partner. Moreover, the husband wants his wife to
be subservient to him. The husband leaves the house due to the conflict and the
wife commits suicide. The relationship is severed, but the mother adores her
daughter's death, who fought for her right. The mother says;

" my Sunni was really a goddess. ... man does not live to cry for
whole life. When one comes to know that there is nothing left in life
except, woes and miseries, what is the use of living such a life? Just to
eat, sleep and die ....... the mother of a martyred son feels happy at her
son's courage .. so my daughter was equally courageous as a martyr. " 46

Premchand's hallmark is his ability to portray 'characters' lively and

utilise it as per the theme of the story. In "Samar Y atra" the chief inspiration for
the mass awakening for freedom struggle comes from a seventy five year old
woman. She inspires locals to work for freedom struggle and support the
'Satyagrahis'!. In the story "Julus" ("The Procession") the mounted police
inspector beats the old man leading the procession commemorating 'complete
independence'. His wife scorns at the husband for his brutal act. Premchand has
very carefully attended to the scene building which helps the police-inspector in
his soul- searching; the inspector later repents at his mistake. The writer says:

" ... when a man insults another man, he feels angry, but when a
woman insults a man, he feels remorseful. Birbal Singh (the Inspector)
could not dare to stand before the womanfolk" 47

46
"Shanti", Mansarovar, vol.l, Prakaskan Sansthan, New Delhi, 2004, p.66
47
"Julus", Mansarovar, vol.ll, Prakaskan Sansthan, New Delhi, 2004, p.41

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 Thus, we see that Premchand has been successful in the highlighting the
spirit of nationalism and mass-awakening for the freedom struggle.

Muhammad Ali Jamalzadeh (1895-1997) is the founder of the

European-style short stories as a genre, per se in Iran. In the same way,
Premchand also adheres to the Western model of short story writing. Therefore,
the fundamental elements of the criticism of the modem short stories shall form
the basis for the comparison of the short stories of the writers in question.

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C. METHOD AND STYLE OF WRITING: A COMPARISON

Human life is composed of a series of closely related events, the result

of environment modified by inherent tendencies and individual
characteristics. As they ordinarily occur, these events are so frequently the
result of the same or a similar chain of circumstances, occurrences, and
incidents, as to attract little more than passing notice; yet they hold the real
heart-interest of life, because they are the medium through which human
character is made manifest. No event of life is unimportant.

The chief aim of fiction is to provide a suitable, artistic setting for these
every day events, and thus make them both attractive and entertaining. The
short-story is a form of fiction intended to present a word-picture of a single
event of human experience in an artistic setting. This setting must consist of
plausible, influential circumstances, striking occurrences, and remarkable
incidents so deftly massed as to emphasize the laugh, the tear, or the thrill
which the event holds. It is a literary genre of fictional, prose narrative that
tends to be more concise and to the point than longer works of fiction such as
novellas and novels.

Short stories have their origins in oral story-telling traditions and the
prose anecdote, a swiftly sketched si~uation that comes rapidly to its point. With
the rise of the comparatively realistic novel, the short story evolved as a
miniature version tends to be less complex than novels. Usually a short story
focuses on only one incident, has a single plot, a single setting, a limited
number of characters, and covers a short period of time. In longer forms of
fiction, stories tend to contain certain core elements of dramatic structure.
However, the endings of many short stories are abrupt and open and may or
may not have a moral or practical lesson. As with any art form, the exact
characteristics of a short story will vary by author. The simple narration of an
event, disconnected from its antecedents, while it may possess a passing
interest, is not entertaining because of its commonplaces.

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 Because of their length, short stories may or may not follow this
pattern. Modem short stories only occasionally have an exposition. More
typical, though, is an abrupt beginning, with the story starting in the middle
of the action. As with longer stories, plots of short stories also have a climax,
crisis, or turning point. Determining what exactly separates a short story
from longer fictional formats is problematic. A classic definition of a short
story is that one should be able to be read it in one sitting. Other definitions
place the maximum word length at 7,500 words. In contemporary usage, the
term short story most often refers to a work of fiction no longer than 20,000
words and no shorter than 1,000. Stories less than 1,000 words are usually
referred to either as "short short fiction" or "short shorts."

PLOT
Plot is a series of events and character actions that relate to the central
conflict. The conflict is a struggle between two people or things in a short
story. It is a link in the chain which is the story. A simple definition of plot is
this: A narrative in which an obstacle is interposed to interrupt the free action
of the chief character or characters of the story, and thus to complicate
matters. The great news stories are those which give or strongly indicate all
the links. There is no story without these, the essences. Humour and pathos,
subtle tenderness, suspense, philosophy, surprise, dramatic climax-all these
may be added, giving colour, flavour, spice; but plot and character, the
essences, must be there or the whole will fall flat. No directions have ever
been written for manufacturing a plot.

If the obstacle is successfully overcome the story ends happily; if not,

it is a tragedy. Sometimes the obstacle appears as a matter of principle,
sometimes as human frailty or ignorance, sometimes as an enemy plotting
against the hero. But it is this obstacle, this predicament, and the struggle of
the two opposing forces which makes the situation, is called a plot.

Plot refers to the systematic chain of events which make up the short
story. Each link in this chain helps to build suspense and to solve a problem.

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The main character is presented with a situation which presents a problem or
conflict which he must resolve. The largest part of the story will deal with the
main character's struggle to resolve this problem or conflict. The conflict can
exist within the main character himself (internal conflict) or it may exist
between the main character and outside forces (external conflict). The point in
the story in which the conflict is resolved is the high point or climax of the
story. The adolescent finds himself at odds with parents, teachers and other
authority figures. His resulting alienation from the adult world often leads him
to his contemporaries for solace and as a result he often becomes the victim of
peer pressure, another external conflict.

CHARACTER

Character is a person, or sometimes even an animal, who takes part in

the action of a short story or other literary work. The setting of a short story is
the time and place in which it happens. Authors often use descriptions of
landscape, scenery, buildings, seasons or weather to provide a strong sense of
setting. Readers know the characters in the short story through the indirect
method of physical description, the character's thoughts, feelings and words,
the comments and reactions of others and the actions of the character and the
direct method of the author's stated opinion about the character. The main
character is usually on one side of the central conflict. On the other side, the
main character may struggle against another important character, against the
forces of nature, against society, or even against something inside him or her.

To be a story, it must entertain; to entertain, it must possess heart-

interest; to possess heart-interest, it must include the antecedent
circumstances, occurrences, and incidents necessary to emphasize the laugh,
the thrill, or the tear which the event holds. These circumstances occurrences,
and incidents must be consistently and logically arranged with a view to
holding the attention of the reader until the point or climax-the laugh, thrill,

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or tear-is reached. Such an arrangement of the antecedents of an event is
popularly called the plot of the story.

SETTING

Setting or the time and place of the action in a short story have a definite
impact on the character development and plot. The setting is often found in the
exposition of the plot and readily establishes time and place. Frequently it plays
an important role in the conflict giving credence to the rising action as a climax
or turning point is approached.

The element of setting m a short story quite readily lends itself to

writing activities that focus on figurative language and effective use of
adjectives to create vivid, exact sense images and impressions. The study of
setting in the short story not only enables the students to analyze the importance
of this element to the whole but will allow them to reflect upon the importance
of time and place in their own life and understand how it contributes to their
own character development and conflicts.

SEQUENCE

The necessity for a close study of sequence is shown by the fact that
this quality is one of the essentials in good writing. Its presence or its
absence shows the difference between an amateur and a finished writer. The
lack of it shuts out a composition from consideration by editors and readers
alike. Such deficiency indicates not only the lack of capability in writing, but
also the poorer quality of mind; the mind stuff that is produced by the
childish, the garrulous, the insane. Every one, be the writer or no, should
look after the continuity of his thought, both for his own sake and that of the
people with whom he comes in contact.

There are two phases of the subject for the writer, one dealing with the
visible forms of sequence, and these are very important both as an aid to the
reader and also as a means of keeping the mind of the writer steady; and the
other phase is, in fact, but the enlargement of these visible aids to the whole

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 field of correlated thought. In dealing with the 'visible forms of sequence'
the relationship is indicated by words of retrospective and prospective
reference. The pronouns, pronominal adjectives, certain adverbs,
conjunctions where there is a choice or rejection of choice, all of these and
some others are the links of the great chain of connected ideas. In the perfect
adaptation of these to a production of thought we find great pleasure in the
reading; without, there is none.

POINT OF VIEW

A critical part of the maturation process involves the ability to see things
from the perspective of another. The adolescent is very often so involved with
his own concerns that he does not even recognize the points of view of others.
The adolescent point of view is very often limited to self. The understanding of
others points of view is a crucial part of life and that the short story can serve as
a vehicle in which to help students to understand the positions of others.
The action in a short story can be seen through 1) omniscient point of view the
narrator knows all, the thoughts, motives and feelings of each character 2)
detached observer the narrator can describe the characters and what they do and
say but not their thoughts and feelings 3) first person the main character tells
his own story and refers to himself as "I".

A vital element in the modem short-story is its view-point. This is a

fact which beginners do not appreciate, and which even old stagers find it
hard to learn. As a result, beginners and old stagers alike suffer. In this
present day, the story-teller no longer describes, explains, discusses and
analyzes his characters, nor does he conclude by drawing a moral from their
acts. His art has reached a higher plane. He tells simply what they do; and in
so doing, lures the Reader, that one great, impersonal Reader, who typifies
the vast army of readers, into inferentially describing, explaining, discussing,
analyzing and moralizing. It is by his ability to lure the Reader,
unconsciously, for the nonce, into the place of the leading character and to

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 persuade him that that character's actions and emotions are his own, that the
story-teller's success must be gauged.

To the reader, the story must appear as something which actually

happened; it will appear actual only in so far as the Reader feels, at the
moment of perusal, that he is actually experiencing the events depicted. In
the hero's place for the time being, he must thrill with the same hopes, be
weighed down by the same despair, face the same doubts, conquer the same
difficulties, and achieve the same triumphs. In so far as the Reader is led to
this pass, the story is successful; in so far as he falls short of reaching it, the
story fails.

CLIMAX

The importance of a study of the climax cannot be overestimated. For

however, interesting the introduction, close the sequence, or rapid the action,
it is always the climax toward which the mind is ever reaching. If not in the
right place, if not well prepared for, or if not of sufficient importance, or bare
possibility, if it be not in evidence at all, then is there disappointment in the
whole theme. The main thing in either fiction or essay, in scientific or non-
scientific, in anecdote or obituary, is to have a central point of interest, in fact
a climax.
There are two places in a story in which the climax may be introduced-the
position being determined by the character of the writing and the object to be
accomplished thereby.

The plot is the planned series of incidents that makes up the action of the
story. In a short story the important incidents are a succession of crises or
complications against which the character struggles, successfully or
unsuccessfully. Thus, plot is action-the developing struggle through crises to
climax to outcomes, whereas, theme is the significant points, the observed truth
that the author wishes to reveal in telling the story. The plot is designed to let the
reader himself live through the experience so that he may arrive out the truth. It

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is the nucleus of the story; the detailed working out of the nuclear idea requires
integrity. In the story ""Farsi Shikar Ast" ("Persian is Sugar"), the plot is well
formed. The story starts actually when the author is detained by a passport
official in cell. Inside the cell he meets two more inmates, one a Europeanised
Iranian and the other, a cleric. The conflict starts when the main character of the
story, a young boy wants to reason out why he was detained and put in a dark
cell? Desperate, the young boy goes to cleric for an answer, but does not
understands his verbose way of talking which contains more Arabic words that
Persian. He then goes the Europeanised Iranian to seek an answer to his worry.
There he hears Persian mixed with Europeanised word. The situation becomes
complex. Out of desperation he starts wailing. The author comes in the story to
resolve the crisis, when he speaks simple Persian the situation starts improving.
All the four detainees including the narrator are soon released.

The story "Vilan ud Daulah" ("The Vagrant") describes the pathetic

condition of a city vagrant who is exploited by everyone till he dies a tragic
death. Although the literary piece has a nice narration and a fine sketch of
people's character and a satire on the privileged class of people, but lacks
movement of actions and therefore does not have a definite plot. It could be
called a "narrative". The story "Dusti yi Khala Khirsa" ("the Friendship of Aunt
Bear") is the tragic story of a kind-hearted, enthusiastic and gallant cafe waiter
who saves the life of an wounded Russian Cossack lying in the snow on the road
to Kermanshah. The wounded soldier learns that his rescuer is carrying a small
sum of money with him. When he is transported to a safe place, the Cossack
incites a group of Russian dnmken troopers to arrest the waiter and have him
shot by a firing squad. Barring of some inessential details, the movement and
pathos make the piece as good as some of the best short stories of European
literature.

In "Hoomza wa Loomza". the story starts in a relaxed way with the

description of the some irrelevant details. The theme of the story is the
description of hardships faced by the narrator in learning two Arabic words,

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when he was a child. The hallucination effects coming up in the minds of a child
has been vividly and explicitly portrayed. The piece is a memoir narrating a
childhood incident .The story lacks the essential 'movement' of action leading
toward resolution of a conflict or a crisis.

Apart from having a basic plot, the story "Atash Zir-i- Khakistar" ("The
Fire under the Ashes"), has sub plots too, the first part of the story deals with the
social condition prevailing at the time of the last Qajar king. Although elaborate
description of the contemporary society in which the 'characters' live is
generally out of scope of a short story .It hampers the brevity and compactness of
the story. The story revolves around the main character "Rahmatullah" but the
characters "Enayat" and "Siyamak" are discussed under sub-plots. The main plot
and the sub plots appear to be disparate and disjoint with one another hampering
the movement of the story.

The smooth movement of the story with a definite plot and setting can
be observed in the story "Dard-i-Dil-i-Mullah Qurban Ali" ("The Grievances of
Mullah Qurban Ali"). The writer is able to involve the reader in the story with
efficiently applying 'character' development, progress of the events and action.
In the story an infatuated Mullah tells about his reckless love for the daughter of
a neighbouring merchant. The girl dies and the unfortunate Qurban Ali of whose
love the girl's family knows nothing, is invited to spend the night beside the
coffin praying off her soul. During the night he cannot quench the temptation to
see the beautiful face of his beloved once more. He is caught kissing the lips of
the dead girl and ends up in jail. In the beginning of the story, there is elaborate
description of the narrator and his uninteresting sermons. The actual story starts
when the narrator recounts his experience. The short stories of Jamalzadeh's are
mostly anecdotal type where the plots plays important role along with the action
to move on the events. The stories externally appear to emerge out of some
event or incidents and progresses forward with the help of actions surrounding
the characters.

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 In terms of short story writing, Premchand is an idealist; he adheres to
the fundamentals or ideals of the genre. He gives ample time to work out his
'plot' and build 'character'. He generates a crisis and develops it gradually up to
the climax before giving an end. He gives much effort to maintain the brevity in
dealing with the events, as for example, in "Thakur ka Kuan" ("Thakur's well")
he starts the story by placing a situation which needs to be resolved; a poor and
sick outcaste is groaning of pain he is severely thirsty but cannot drink the
stinking water they have . The main character is the wife of the sick person. She
decides to bring water from other wells; ready to do a forbidden job. The writer
moves towards the resolution of crisis gently and reaches to the climax when the
wife has almost drawn water out from Thakur's well. But when she suddenly
hears the door of Thakur's house flung open, she drops the water pot; thus
giving an anti climax to the situation. The story ends with last scene; the wife
returns empty-handed and sees her husband drinking the same malodorous
water, holding his nose tight. In the story, the 'character' wins the sympathy of
the reader from the beginning as the writer is able to strike the reader
psychologically; the main character being a woman, taking a giant stride against
the age-old oppression of upper caste. The action of the hero is justified by the
simple reason that every one struggles for existence; here, it is matter of
someone's life and death. One more striking feature of the story is that the
characters are not introduced as done in a conventional style, rather 'type'
character is used; one representing the upper caste, the other the outcaste . This
is one of unique styles of Premchand where he involves the reader in the story.
Here, he does so by leaving the reader to imagine the 'character' according to
their perception.

Sometimes we find symbolism in Premchand's story. In "Shatranj ke

Khiladi" (The Chess Players) he uses playing chess as the symbol of relaxed and
carefree life. The progenies of Nawabs are so engrossed in the game that they
have abandoned all their household responsibilities and have lost their family
pride, too. They shamelessly witness the historic moment of the capture of

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Nawab of Lucknow, Wajid-Ali Shah before their eyes; but do not move. The
story very clearly portrays the last phase of the downfall of Moghul Empire.

Premchand as an idealist can be seen in the story "Bade Ghar ki Beti"

("Daughter from a high family") where he portrays the main character as an
ideal housewife and a great home maker through a family drama. The chain of
events in the plot is nicely woven and every 'character' justifies his or her
action. In the story, when the conflict starts and the matter aggravates, the hero
comes up with a new plan to resolve the crisis. Her noble character 'forgiveness'
comes into the forefront which not only resolves the conflict but also saves the
family from destruction. The hero in the story behaves like an idealist; crucifies
her ego for the sake of saving a home from destruction. She remembers her
prime responsibility as a home-maker even at the thick of actions. The nobility
of thought and character makes a man great, is the underlying theme of the
story.

In "Nasha" ("Intoxication"), the writer places the reader in a new and

extra-ordinary situation with the hero, thus making the story slightly
adventurous. The reader journeys through the 'character' and thereby attaches
himself to the story. In the story much attention and great care has been given to
the development of 'character'. The striking feature of the story is that the
change in behavior of the main 'character' is developed slowly. The story
"Duniya ka Sabse Anmol Ratan" ("The world's most precious gem") represents
a tale or an anecdote and differs from a typical short story. There is elaborate
description of love scene, the adventure tour of the hero in the form of Arabian
Nights. There is no psychological crisis or conflict involved in the story, which
needs denouement. The story has a very bold theme that the love for one's own
land is shown loftier than the love for a beautiful maiden. This transformation in
presentation of love theme by writer was the need of the hour.

In the stories of Premchand, incidents and characters come from real

life. They are generated by writer's own experiences or observations. The more

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experienced the writer, the wider are his themes and more diversified are his
characters. To weave a psychoanalytical story the writer has to know the basic
elements of human psychology. Premchand writes "an incident cannot be a story
unless it demonstrates a psychological truth"

The 'characters' are the living creatures involved in the events and crises
of the story. The impression that one form about 'character's stems from a
number of sources: what the 'character's do; what they say about them; what the
author may say about them in description or in passing. The eyes through which
one sees the 'character' is called- the point of view. The story can be told in the
first person; the narrator can be merely an observer or both an observer and an
actor. The author can use the method of third-person narration; the narrator can
either see or report everything (the omniscient narrator) or he is limited to a
specific view. A 'character' may be presented with only surface detail or in
depth; but the development of the 'character's must be in keeping with the plot,
theme and setting of the story.

Muhammad Ali Jamalzadeh is a social critic; like Premchand, he

chooses his 'characters' from everyday life. "Khana Bi dush" ("Vagabond"),is a
'character' oriented story, revolves round the central 'character' 'Ahmed Aga'
who goes to Britain to study for a brief period. During his study in Britain, he
dreams of serving his countrymen, but all his dreams are shattered once he
returns home and find people indifferent to him, including his father. He wants
people to be truthful and honest but there is no taker of his words, except his
sister who understands his feelings. Although, he is a Ph.D. but the job he is
given by the government is that of sticking labels on bars of opium. Even in this
menial employment he finds occasion to complain of the prevailing bribery and
corruption. His complaints are ridiculed by his friends and his own father. He
feels an absolute stranger at home and finally, after giving up the attempt to
settle down with his people, finds a teaching job among the wandering tribes. He
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winning their love and gratitude for teaching children. When he dies his tomb is
venerated and turns into a place for pilgrimage.

Most of the 'characters' created by the writer belong to middle class, but
occasionally we also find hermit type of 'character' dispelling philosophical
ideas, sage remarks and discussing super natural phenomena. In "Darvish-i-
Mumiyai" (Mumified Darvish), the hero is an outcast. Though a learned and
conscientious student, he has locked himself up in a room in Geneva, without
proper food or sleep. He is brooding on abstract ideas such as existence of God,
the secret of creation, free-will and predestination. He is a bookworm and lives
like a hermit.

In another character-centric story, "Dusti-yi-Khala Khirsa" ("Friendship

of Aunt Bear"), Jamalzadeh pays due attention and care to the development of
'character'. It is so nicely developed that and the reader does not realize when he
has actually entered into the story. The scenes, action, all are in unison and help
maintaining the movement of the story. In the story a brave cafe-waiter,
Habebullah, the hero, the narrator and two other persons form travel partners
heading for Kermanshah in a cart. While they were passing through snow laden
hilly area, Habebullah saw a wounded soldier lying in the snow, groaning. Out
of compassion he lifts him up and arranges a place for him sacrificing his own.
He pays no heed to the warning and alarm of fellow passengers for carrying the
soldier with them. The 'character' displays the nobility in the being and
surpasses in sacrifice. His sacrifice is selfless and sincere. When the caravan
reached Kangavur, the wounded soldier having the ill-intention of acquiring his
saviour's small sum of money whispered to his soldier friends and had him shot
by firing squad. In the end, the narrator saw him stealing the money from the
hero's corpse. In the most of stories of 1amalzadeh the 'character's are not
introduced gradually but appear suddenly in a drama-style as in the story "Bila
Dig Bila Chuqander" ("Everyman to his deserts") the introduction of the hero a
European bath attendant "Dilak" appears all of a sudden.

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 In "Aqd-i-Tamhidi" ("Facilitative marriage") the story starts with a chat
room discussion on "Motaa" (Limited period marriage) and then everyone
shares his own observation of the marriage institutions in different parts of the
world. The elaborate introduction is a deviation from the set-style of a typical
short story. The main plot appears when the house owner 'Kaab-ul-Akhbar'
comes to narrate his experience of a special type of marriage prevalent in the
city and narrates a story in this regard which formed the theme or a title of a
story. There appears an irrelevant discussion in the story, which seems to be
detached from the story. The story looses brevity and compactness. However,
the second part of the story which starts with a new plot is more interesting.

Most of the stories of Jamalzadeh are told in first person narration

,where the writer is both an observer and actor like in "Farsi Shikar Ast"
("Persian is Sugar"), "Dusti-yi-Khala Khirsa" ("Friendship of Aunt bear"),
"Bila-Dig-Bila Chuqandar" (Everyman to his deserts), "Sawab ya Gunah"
("Divine Reward or Sin") and other stories. The story like the one "Rojul
Siyasi" ("The Politician") is in third person narration. In the story "Namak-i-
Gandidah" ("The Rotten Salt") the writer tells in third person and is an
omniscient narrator; who can see and report everything.

The 'characters' in the stories of Jamalzadeh are from all walks of life. It
seems that he has mastery in presenting Europe-returned Iranian youths and
religious cleric or mullah. While demonstrating the West-returned Iranian youth
he excels as he is able to grasp the complications in the minds of the youth. In
the story "Khana Bidush" ("The Vagabond") the inner self of a foreign returned
Iranian youth finds peace and solace when he joins a group of nomadic tribe
people and serves them. He finds pleasures in his work. The crises created and
their denouement is touching. The story concludes with a happy ending.

Whether it is the description of the class of people wearing white head

gears in Dilak's memoirs in the story "Bila Dig Bila Chuqandar" or the village
school master in the story "Hoomza wa Loomza" or the religious cleric wearing

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robe and head gear in "Farsi Shikar Ast" ("Persian is Sugar") or Mullah Qurban
Ali in "Dard-i-dil-i-Mullah Qurban Ali" ; all are 'type' characters belonging to
a specific class called Shaykh or Akhund. The writer does not require any
development in these 'characters' and focuses himself on the 'plot' and the
'action' of the story. When Jamalzadeh presents these type 'characters' in his ,
he deals in a critical way, criticizing them for their moral corruptions, religious
dogma, snobbery and pompousness.

When Jamalzadeh speaks of lower rung of the society through his

'characters', he involves the reader and attracts his attention. In the story "Dusti-
yi-Khala-Khirsa" ("The Friendship of Aunt bear") the 'character' despite being
poor cafe waiter proves to be an epitome of sacrifice when he lends his coat to
the wounded soldier and is ready to face the chilling blizzard. In "Vilan-ud-
Daula" ("The Vagrant") the main 'character' is a poor vagrant who goes on
helping others selflessly. He cannot manage for himself even the basic
necessities of life but the people cannot see his misery and continue his
exploitation. The theme is to portray a society where privileged class simply
exploits the poor and deprive them of their due. In some of the stories
Jamalzadeh tries to portray the society through "character". This sophisticated
skill of Jamalzadeh can be seen in the story "Aqd-i-Tamhidj" ("Facilitative
Marriage"). In the new kind of marriage narrated by Kaab-ul-Akhbar under a
separate plot, a facilitative marriage is undertaken by a youth to facilitate his
own interests. In the story Faramarz is a well built, smart and handsome young
man married to Farida. Faramarz has all the attributes of bringing woman down
to her knees and utilize her for his own means. He is an idle and irresponsible
kind of a person. He thinks the fools earn money by their hard work, whereas
smart people have many ways to earn money without hard work. One day
Faramarz conspires a trick to acquire the wealth of an aged lady named Qudratus
Saltanah, who is among the renowned and influential ladies of the city. In the
trick, his wife is an active partner. Through, his tricks and chicanery Faramarz
entraps the lady into his false love. No sooner did the old woman marry him, on
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make the life of the aged woman a hell and she dies heart-broken. Faramarz
becomes legal master of the property and later abandons Farida too, and starts
looking for another woman. Apparently, the story appears restricted to the main
hero, but actually it symbolizes the moral corruption and exploitation of women
through 'marriage' for material gains.

The portrayal of contemporary society at micro or macro level through

'character' is the hallmark of a good writer. It is the individual in the 'character'
who gains experience from the society or people around them, so whatever
comes out of him in the form of thought or action could be the reflection of the
society around him. In "Farsi Shikar Ast" ("Persian is Sugar") the story moves
through the linguist conflicts among the four 'character's, including him.
Jamalzadeh successfully handles the 'character's and their speeches. Similarly,
'Dilak' the European bath attendant in the story "Bila Dig Bila Chuqandar"
("Everyman to his deserts") presents a section of Iranian society,but adventure
was the medium for such a portrayal .

In Jamalzadeh's story we also across 'static character'. In the above

story the hero visited Iran, travelled the country extensively, and worked in
various Iranian government ministries as an assistant to an Iranian minister who
brought him to Iran. After going through many ups and downs, he returns to his
home country with all his wealth lost and with some bitter experience in Iran. In
the end He is the same bath attendant and thus remains a static 'character'. In
"Rojul Siyasi" ("The Politician") we find 'dynamic character'. The hero is a
menial cotton beater who wants to progress in life and make some money. He
chooses his neighbour as his ideal and tries to emulate him. Through some
comedy of errors relating to rejecting the bribe offered to him, he turns into a
typical politician and learns the nitty- gritty of the profession, including
accepting bribe from people. Therefore, we see that an ordinary cotton beater
transforms into a cunning politician and thus, represents a dynamic 'character'.

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 Jamalzadeh stresses more on 'plot' and 'action' rather than on
'character'. Having spent most of life outside Iran, his 'characters' either
emanate from his child memories or intermittent brief stay in Iran during his life
time. There is a dearth of wide range of 'characters', but surely his observations
and experiences of being in European country is an added advantage to him. He
is able to present various pathos of a European educated Iranian youth returning
homeland more interestingly than his contemporaries and no doubt, a master in
this art. In contrary to the stories of Premchand, 'character's appears directly in
drama-style in stories of Jamalzadeh.

The stories of Premchand are be character- dominated, which means the

whole plot of the story revolves round the 'character' and every action is linked
to the 'character' tightly; this is the reason why Premchand gives much
importance and the required time in the development of 'character'. The calm
and composed development of 'character' by Premchand creates an
unforgettable impression on the reader. Sometimes, the story may be forgotten
but the 'character's remains in the mind. In his story "Mantra" the hero an old
man known as Bhagat carries his sick child to Dr. Chaddha for treatment. The
child's condition is serious. When Bhagat reaches the doctor's house after a long
walk, the doctor is getting ready for his sports, as his timing for seeing patients
is over. The poor old man implores hard to get his son checked but all went in
vain, the poor boy dies. The life of the old man is ruined by the death of his only
son. After a few years, he hears one day that the son of the same doctor is bitten
by a snake. The old man had the ability to cure snack-bite by super natural
powers of hymn. Leaving his vengeance and anger at the doctor, he rushes to
doctor's house and brings the doctor's almost dead son, back to life by his
powers of hymn.

The portrayal of the character 'Pandit Vanshidhar' in "Namak ka

Daroga" ("The Salt Inspector") is very lively and touching when Pandit
Alopideen offers the highest bid to the principled and duti-bound Salt Inspector
Pandit Vanshidhar to avoid his arrest, but the hero declines the offer. Here, the

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writer is portraying an ideal inspector who performs his duty sincerely and
honestly and never compromises his principles. Whenever, he is in difficult
situation he listens to the voice of conscience. The character creates an indelible
impression on reader's mind. It is a psychological truth when a person is
determined that no one can buy his principles or his 'inner self, he is invincible.
The moral conflict between 'sense of duty' and 'wealth' ends with the victory of
'sense of duty' over wealth. The writer who is an observer says "Sense of duty
has trampled 'wealth' under its feet".

Through the 'character' of "Alopideen" Premchand intends to impart the

reader, that there is always a scope for reformation in one's life. On realizing
that he has met a noble man, Vanshidhar offers the post of permanent manager
of his whole estate, giving no place for revenge Both the 'characters' Pandit
Vanshidhar and Aloopideen represent the two ideologies; one is the idealist and
the other a realist, respectively. At the end of the story the realist succumbs to
the idealist. This transformation from realism to idealism is the crux of the social
dynamism.

Like the 'characters' m the Jamalzadeh's stories, Premchand's

'characters' are also sometimes 'type'. In "Sadgati" ("Good Treatment")
'Dukhi' represents outcastes and 'Pandit Ghasiram' represents upper-caste
Brahmin. Since the 'characters' are 'type' they do require much introduction. In
"Sawa Ser Gehun" 'Vipraji' represents a money lender and 'Shankar' a poor
farmer. Premchand has also used animal as 'characters' in his stories. In "Do
Bailon ki Katha" ("The story of two Oxens"), two oxen Hira and Moti are the
main 'characters'. The plot, character and action, are in unison and make the
story charming. The main 'character' in 'Idgah' is a five year old boy; who is an
epitome of sacrifice. The dialogue among the kids when they are returning from
'Idgah' is instrumental in the movement of the story. The handling of the
situation with five children 'characters' keeping in mind about the scene and
their arguments is praiseworthy. The writer displays immense grasp over
children's behavioral pattern and their psychology. The 'character' is developed

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in such a skillful manner that a reader is likely to gradually forget the chain of
events in the story but the characters put deep impression on memory of the
reader. If we analyse the story minutely, we would see that a plot has been
woven from a psychological complication arising in the child's mind is.
Through the 'character' of Ameena relevant setting or scene is created.
In the story "Bade Bhai Sahab" ("The Elder Brother") the portrayal of
an elder brother and a younger brother is apt. The seriousness and sincerity in
studies is due to the elder brother, whereas the younger brother is rightly
youthful and filled with mischief and pranks. A conflict always persists in both
the 'characters'. It is related to the hours put in and 'result obtained'. It is
unfortunate that the one who works hard but yields less result. The conflict turns
into a psychological crisis as the elder has too assert supremacy over the
younger, when he goes on failing in same class. He resorts to the sage remark
saying:

" .. one day you may become my class fellow or even move to a
higher class, but the difference of 5 years which is between us, neither
you nor God can undo. I am five years older to you and shall remain
forever. You can never equal my experience of life " 48

We come across numerous 'characters' in our everyday life, although,

we do not tend to remember each and every 'character'. The 'character' which
impresses our mind and is generally out of stock, attracts us. In the same
manner, Premchand takes the 'character' from a slice of life and develops in
such a way that it becomes unique. This uniqueness in 'character' is brought out
by giving him or her actions which is very near to a psychological truth or tries
to resolve some psychological complications. Premchand says,

"The best short story is one, which is based on a psychological truth.

An honest father when sees his moral degradation in his son, he feels
upset; it is a psychological truth. The emotions and sentiments appearing

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 in father's heart and mind with reactions thereof, if portrayed, could
make the short story full of attraction. A bad man is never completely
bad, somewhere there is an angel in him, and this is also a psychological
truth. The job of a successful short story writer is to arouse the dormant
angel in a bad person and bring it in the fore-front. " 49

It has been seen that Premchand adheres to the models of short story
writing, accordingly to which, before discussing the plot the 'characters' must be
introduced well. Majority of Premchand' s stories start with the introduction of
'character's for example in "Bade Ghar ki Beti" ("Daughter of High Class
Family") the main 'character's 'Srikant', 'Aanandi' and 'Lalbihari' have been
introduced and developed with utmost care and the introduction of 'character's
and the main events are very coherent which facilitates smooth flow of story,
unlike Jamalzadeh where 'character's if introduced, sometimes appear to be
disjoint from the main plot. This hampers the flow of the story. Premchand
disliked the idea of writing story without proper introduction in the beginning.
He says;

"Nowadays a story finds its beginning in a number of new ways.

Somewhere it starts as a friendly chat or sometime starts with 'a page
from police report'. The introduction of 'characters' comes late. This is
the copying of writing style in British stories. By this there arises
unnecessary complications and the story becomes difficult. " 50

In the stories of Premchand, the 'characters' are mostly static i.e. status
of the 'character' remains the same till the end. In the theme oriented story,
Premchand by dint of choosing some 'type' 'characters' weaves the story where
actions play an important part of the story and the 'character' is developed
through its action and the reader starts justifying the action of the story. In

49
Premchand ke Numainda Afsane,Qamar Rais,Educational Book House,Aiigarh,2001,p.9
so lbid,p.7

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"Thakur ka Kuan" ("Thakurs well") 'type'; needs no introduction but the reader
attaches himself with the 'character' for the 'denouement' of the 'crisis'.

Premchand successfully handles every class of 'characters', be they rich

or poor, lower or upper class or casts, outcastes, labourers, farmers, children,
young or old, women or widows. He has used wide variety of 'characters' in his
short stories which shows his versatility of knowledge and expertise in dealing
with emotions of various 'characters'. His penmanship of painting 'character'
can be seen in story "Samar Yatra" where a seventy five year old widow inspires
the village locals to fight for the cause of freedom struggle. The hero 'Nohri'
becomes the centre of attraction in the story.

It would not be an exaggeration, if it is said that Premchand had the

umque ability; he could paint society through a 'character'. Reflection of a
society in a 'character' is a herculean task for a short story writer. In "Poos ki
Raat" ("January Night") the hero Haiku says to his wife in the beginning of
story,

"Sahna has come, let me give the money which is kept safely, in any
way we must get rid of him. " 51

If one tries to understand the psychological complications going on in

the mind of the poor farmer who has to part away with the petty sum of money
he had saved to buy a blanket to protect him from the biting cold .. There are lots
of question which arises in the reader's mind, for example; why it took him long
to save such a small amount? Why he does not have even a single blanket to
ward off cold? Why did he take money from the moneylender? What kind of a
person is the money lender and, why it becomes necessary to get rid of him by
clearing his payment? The answer to all these questions reflects his society and
people around him. Thus, a journey through the short stories of Premchand gives

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us the knowledge that a 'character' could be the interpretation of a particular
social set up.

The scene or setting and behavior of a 'character' depend on their

environment quite as much as on the personal dynamic with which the author
endows him. In some, environment determines the 'character' so it of overriding
importance. The entire action of novel or story is frequently determined by the
full length presentation of scene or setting as it is done in novels is not possible,
yet the 'setting' is an important aspect which cannot be neglected. In the stories
of J amalzadeh we find much care is taken to describe the scene or setting as in
"Dusti-yi-Khala Khirsa" ("Friendship of aunt bear"), "Bila Dig Bila Chuqandar"
("The Fire under the Ashes"), "Namak-i-Gandideh" ("The Rotten Salt") or
"Aqd-i-Tamhidi" ("The facilitative marriage").
In "Atash Zir-i-Khakastar" ('The Fire under the Ashes"), the description
of scene or setting is elaborate which loses the interest of the reader. The great
task of a short story author is too present the scene in a compact way. In some of
the stories of Jamalzadeh as in "Hoomza wa Loomza" the setting is too elaborate
and one starts feeling uneasy to carry it through. The presentation of scene must
not compromise the brevity of the short story and the forward movement of the
story.

In the stories of Premchand the "scene" or setting plays an important

role. The story "Thakur ka Kuan" is very short but the entire locale in which the
plot is set is crystal clear. In "Shatranj ke Khiladi" ("The Chess Players") the
exact bearing of the incident can be visualized as per the 'scene' described in the
story. It sometimes happens that the main locale of a novel or a short assumes an
importance in the reader's imagination comparable to that of 'character' and yet
somehow separable from them. The title of story "Idgah" comes from a 'scene',
which is of more importance in the story. Premchand knew that if the reader
failed to understand the scene of Idgah or at least visualize "Idgah" the reader
would not be involved in the story. Therefore, he deals the 'setting' of the story
with great care. The importance of 'scene' or setting' in the story can also be

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understood from the fact that Premchand starts his story by describing the details
pertaining to the locale of the story; a deviation from his own style of
introducing his 'character's first in the story . When Premchand deals with some
real life family problem or conflict he does so at the back drop of developing the
apt family set up required for the story. In the stories like 'Shanti' ("Peace"),
"Bade Ghar ki Beti" ("Daughter of High Class family"), "Sujan Bhagat" he
gives due emphasis to the development of proper locale of the story.While
describing a 'scene', or 'setting' Premchand describes it only to some extent and
then leaves it to reader to develop it according to his own perception. This is in
fact the hallmark of an outstanding story writer, who tends to involve the reader
some way or the other, as for example the 'scene' building in the story "Kafan"
(Shroud") is not elaborate but the reader makes up the complete picture of the
locale in his mind.

Jamalzadeh mostly uses 'satire mixed with humour' as his style. He is a

master in this art form. His satire is directed towards the ruling class, cleric,
businessmen, and politicians. In 'Farsi Shikar Ast' ("Parsian is Sugar") he mixes .
humour with satire in a very beautiful manner. At a place the hero of the story
says:
" ... upon catching up, he handed me a handkerchief full of sweets
and whispered, 'Excuse the straight talk, sir, but I believe that their
madness has affected you as well. Otherwise why would you want to
travel with that lot! Whenever you find you do not understand them, help
yourself to these sweets and remember me. " 52

One can find the biting sense of humour in stories like "Kabab-i-Ghaz"
("Roast Goose"), "Palang" (Leopard) and "Nau Parast" ("Modernist'). The
stories exhibit the freshness, vigour and pathos that characterize his early
writings.

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 D. ANALYSIS OF COMPARISON

Jamalzadeh brought about renaissance in Persian letters; he is one of the

innovators of the modern literary language and was the first to introduce the
use of colloquial language in literary pieces. This he termed as 'literary
democracy'. His first story in his first collection of short stories deals with the
linguistic intricacies of the spoken Persian language. He uses simple Persian as
the main language of the story. He portrays simple Persian as the true bond
between the diversified sections of the Iranian people. It can act as a real
communicator lest there would be a great confusion in understanding each other.
The peace of mind and solace which the hero of the story, "Farsi Shikar Ast"
("Persian is Sugar") received after hearing simple Persian has been nicely
portrayed by the writer. The hero says:

"when he saw that I spoke Persian, more importantly when he

realized that we 5poke the same language, he grabbed my hand and
repeatedly kissed it. His delight knew no end, as if he had been given the
world. He said, may I be sacrificed for your wards. You must be an
angel sent from above to rescue me ..... " 53

Describing the linguistic features of Jamalzadeh's writing related to use

of language, Jan Rypka says;

" .. his means of expression, his style and dictions are consistently
modern. They are brought into closer conformity with the spoken
language often enlivened with expressive vulgarisms. " 54

The present day writers of Iran are equipped with a settled brand of
modern Persian and disseminate their thoughts, ideas, and experiences to the
common masses through it. He made the clarion call for literary democracy by

53
"Farsi Shikar Ast", Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud, Kaveh, Berlin, 1958, p.30
54
History of Iranian Literature, Jan Rypka,D.Reidel Publishing Co.,Holland, p.389

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which he meant that the language of the literature must be changed from the
style of writing ornate and decorative to the spoken language of the common
masses viz. the colloquial language. In this manner, he tried to break the
shackles of old tradition by reforming the language. His 'Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud'
was although new in form and content, but was strikingly Persian. In the preface
of a book, which served as a kind of manifesto of a new literature, the author
recommends a simplification of literary language and invited others to write in a
style closer to colloquial speech with copious use of everyday expressions. He
appended to his collection of stories a short glossary of popular idioms that are
not found in ordinary dictionaries.

The style advocated by him did not become a model until later, with
Sadiq Hidayat, in whose works the new style reached perfection. It is mainly due
to the influence of Hidayat that the present generation of writers has turned
wholeheartedly to an uninhibited use of popular speech. Jan Rypka too writes:

"the differentiation of 'character', social or occupational status by

means of linguistic elements in the dialogue, which at the beginning of
the modern prose, was something quite unprecedented and later
becomes a matter of course in good prose writing. " 55

Jamalzadeh's first story "Farsi Shikar Ast" is a satire on the unresolved

linguistic battle between the purists, who have fascination to use Arabic words
and the intellectuals or nouveau rich, who are obsessed to use loan words from
European languages. The writer portrays the linguistic complexity very nicely
and also very boldly shows its relation with the common man. The hero in the
story represents a common man who understands simple Persian only and
dislikes any other dialectical derivatives of the language. The uniformity and
consistency with regard to the language in his short stories indicates clearly that
he truly and sincerely stood for the cause of reformation in language of the

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literature and established its viability through works, which were widely
acclaimed during his life time. He says in his preface to "Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud"
("Once upon a time") that:

"A live language is much like a runmng river: the rich and
stronger the source, the less likelihood of its contamination. As such,
even if weeds and twigs enters it the force and the energy of the water
carries them away, destroys them, or gradually assimilates them into its
own body. The real danger lies when the water becomes stagnant. Then,
soon, it loses its colour, taste and smell. It becomes malodorous and the
source of diseases. Even worse, when the source becomes dry- that will
be the end of the river, " 56

Jamalzadeh's writings have many adjectives and plenty of popular

idioms and phrases along with words of every day expression. In order to
explain a point, he mostly becomes more verbose. Throwing light on some of
the critical aspects of Jamalzadeh's technique Hasan Kamshad says:

"there are Dickensian flow of words, with adjectives piled up,

numerous repetitions and popular phrases never omitted where they can
possibly be squeeze in .... He seizes every opportunity for quoting
maxims, poems, proverb and popular sayings as well as Koranic verses
and quotations from Traditions". 57

Last but not the least, the language which Jamalzadeh uses in his short
stories has the uniqueness of being consistent all the stories he has written. He
adopted a colloquial or spoken language style of writing. Therefore, with respect
to his use of language in his literatures one can safely say that he 'practiced what
he preached'.

56
Preface to Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud, Kaveh, Berlin.
57
Modern Persian Prose Literature, Hasan Kamshad,Cambridge University Press,1966,p.lll

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 The call for the simplification of language in the literary writing in India
was given by Premchand. In the Lucknow session of "Progressive Writers
Association" in 1936, he advocated the writers to use "Hindusthani" in their
writing. The connotation means the generally spoken language of the masses
which has both Hindi and Urdu words. The connotation represents the
understandable and spoken language of the Indian populace, in wider sense. He
practiced his preaching in his short stories and novels. When we analysis his
stories, linguistically, we find that he uses simple Hindi or Urdu and wrote the
story in a language near to spoken one. Premchand was a bilingual writer and
had versatile knowledge and wide experience. He was fully aware of the trends
of short story writing prevailing in the west. At the same time he had widely
read the Urdu and Hindi literature of yesteryears. He had the incomparable
ability to blend the pathos from the eastern literature into the new form of
Western style short story writing. Unlike Jamalzadeh, he is very judicious in
words and expressions. Some times his arrangement of words appears as
symmetrical design or pattern wh~re a single asymmetrical entity would ruin the
beauty of the patter. One of the biggest challenges of short story writing is its,
brevity. For being brief, there must be economy of words.

Premchand adored the language and style of Bankim Chandra

Chatterjee's stories and novels, the topmost among prominent fiction writers in
India at that time. He was in his formative years when Bankim Chandra died in
1894. Bankim Chandra's novels were technically the most successful novel
during that time because he used clear and easily understandable language very
close to 'Hindusthani'. It could be easily translated into Urdu and Hindi. This
was the time when standard novels are very scant and the translations were
regarded as a high artistic literary skill and read by people from the educated
class. Regarding the use of words in short story, Premchand said:

"In order to maintain the integrity of passion in the story, there

should not be a single word or phrase which would appear superfluous
to the central theme of the story. It is evident from his short stories that

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wrztmgs.

From the discussion it is clear that both Jamalzadeh and Premchand

advocated the use of simple language in short stories. Although Jamalzadeh
seems to be a trend- setter in using simple Persian as the language of the stories,
yet we come across the Dickensian flow of words with juxtaposed adjectives
and numerous repetitions. Popular phrases are squeezed intentionally. On the
other hand, Premchand' s language is technically apt and exemplary.

Jamalzadeh is considered as the first writer of European style modern

short stories in Persian on. His first collection of short stories 'Yaki Bud Y aki
Nabud' was published in 1921. He was the first to introduced techniques of
European style of short story writing in Iran, although the short story genre per
se gained momentum later with the short stories of Sadeq Hedayat (1903 -
1951) and others. His stories focus on plot and action rather than on 'mood' or
'character' which reminds the works of Guy De Maupassant and O.Henry.
Jamalzadeh's stories have the appeal of Persian tradition folk tales like 'qessa'
which are also plot based. Unlike Sadiq Hedayat, Jamalzadeh does not use the
literary models from realism, naturalism or surrealistic fantasy and did not
experiment with disrupted chronology and non-linear or circular plot, instead he
expresses his strong opposition to the tendency to imitate foreign models.

"We ought to remain Persian, think Persian and write for Persians.
The Persian writer has nothing to do with those astonishing and bizarre
schools which are called surrealism and existentialism... Persian
literature is over a thousand years old and includes in its varied corpus
all the known genres, be they 'realist', 'symbolist' or even 'surrealist'. 5 9

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Premchand ke Numainda Afsane,Qamar Rais,Educational Book House,Aiigarh,p.8
59
Preface to Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud, Kaveh, Berlin, 1958.

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 In broad sense of the term short story is one of the oldest forms of
narratives in Persia, although it existed under names such as Hikayat, Qessa,
Dastan etc. Jamalzadeh brought about the modern literary movement or the
renaissance in Persian letters by showing that the popular and principally old
form of narrative about the adventures, passions and other situations of the
ordinary people could be produced in the language of the people in a written
form. Hasan Abedini in his book "Sad Saal Dastan Navisi Dar Iran" ("Hundred
years of story writing in Iran") says:

"Hasan Muqaddam(prior to Jamalzadeh) did not take story writing

seriously and spent most of his artistic skills in writing plays. But
Muhmmad Ali Jamalzadeh is the first writer in Iran who knowingly and
intentionally used the art of European story writing and also made use
of the old tradition of story-telling in Iran. He . . . developed the
characters to 'type' style in the novel, like Dehkhuda did ... " 60

In India, it was Premchand who took seriously the modern short story
as a genre and used it as a means of displaying his thought and creativity.
Although, various translations of some Western fictions had appeared before
Premchand, but it was he who actually adopted and promoted it further. The
tales or stories prior to Premchand were however, dull and insipid technically.
The characters were not individualized; little effort was made to go into the
complexities of human nature or of social situations; the plots were invariably
contrived; and there was a strong tendency to exhort and sermonize.
Nevertheless, they clearly reflect the turn towards social consciousness. In
contrast to the earlier trends, we find Premchand' s stories grounded in social
reality and human psychology. The stories are by and large distinguished by the
authenticity of the author's experience and his 'idealist-realism'. The writers
who followed Premchand' s style were Vishambhamath Sharma "Kaushik" and
Sudharshan. Some story writers initially adopted Premchand's style but later
deviated from it and set new trends. They were Brindavanlal Verma, Pandey

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Bechan Sharma 'Ugra', Jainendra and Yashpal. Premchand is essentially a
writer of Urdu. He began with Urdu and the most of what he wrote was in this
language. Later, he turned to Hindi but continued writing in Urdu, too. During
his life time, he moved from reformism to revolution, from Gandhian idealism
to Marxian realism and if his writings are studied it will be found that he was
always on the side of progress. His short stories disclose a progressive evolution
of art and thought.

Premchand' s first collection of short story "Soz-i-Watan" was published

in 1908. It consisted of a collection of five short stories. At that time it contained
new themes like patriotism and liberty, but stylistically it resembled more to the
earlier forms of fiction; the tales and anecdotes. The style of presentation of the
stories was romantic and ornate. After 'Soz-i-Watan' ("The passion for
homeland"), he wrote stories like 'Bade Ghar ki Beti' ("The daughter of High
class family"), Karishma-i-Inteqam ("The Miracle of Revenge") which
stylistically resembled with the 'modem short story'. He took the short story to
its zenith till he breathed last in 1936. He said:

"The objective of a short story is to portray the analysis of one's

psychology and the natural realities of life. In it there is less room for
imaginative thoughts and more space for experiences. In fact, the
experiences take the shape of creative thought and become interesting
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aspect to fonn a story"

Therefore, it can be safely said that both Muhammad Ali Jamalzadeh

and Premchand introduced the western style 'short story' as a literary genre in
Iran and India, respectively. They both ushered in the new era of "modem short
story" writing in their respective countries and may be regarded as a trend setter.
For Premchand, the connotation "introduction of 'short story' in India" is

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restricted to Hindi and Urdu literatures, as he was a bilingual writer who has
written many short stories and novels both in Urdu and Hindi.

With regards to similarity in selecting characters, both Jamalzadeh and

Premchand have used 'type' characters in his short stores. The 'characters'
represent a particular class or section of people, say for example in "Farsi Shikar
Ast" some social 'type' gather and discuss over an issue. In the story the
exponents of the society indirectly talk about autocracy and administrative
flaws. 'Ramazan' the hero of the story represents the poor, ignorant and general
mass, the Firangi Ma ab stands for the so-called intellectual who has returned
from a foreign country to his homeland, the 'Sheikh' symbolizes the
traditionalists. One may also find the similar 'type' characters in the story "Bila
dig Bila Chuqandar" ("To every man his deserts") where every class or group is
a representative is portrayed by his hat or headgear. The 'yellow hats' represent
the common folk living in penury and destitution, who have been exploited by
other class of people. The "White hats" represent clerics or Akhunds enjoy
respect among the masses. The "Black hats" are the lawmakers. The characters
like 'Rahmatullah' in "Atash zer-i- Khakistar" ("The Fire under the Ashes") and
'Ahmad' represent the class of Iranian youth who have acquired education in the
west and when they return to their homeland they feel anarchy and sense of
pessimism in people's mind. Jamalzadeh has mastery in portraying this 'type'
character of Europeanized youth.

Like Jamalzadeh, Premchand has also used 'type' characters in his short
stories. He uses wide range of 'characters' and is widely known for his career-
oriented stories. He gives great emphasis on development of 'characters'. In the
story "Kafan" (Shroud) the characters 'Ghisu' and 'Madhav' or 'Dukhi' in the
story "Sadgati", represents the untouchable 'outcastes' who have been exploited
since long and were destined to live in destitution and poverty. Everyone knows
that 'Haiku', the farmer in the story "Poos ki Raat" ("January Night") is a 'type'
character representing thousands of poor and distressed farmers who don't have
enough money to meet their ends. The 'character' Vipraji' in the story "Sawa

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Ser Gehun" represents the class of moneylenders who do not stop until they
have extracted the last drop of blood from their poor debtors. By the tools of
usury they used to exploit the less privileged people. 'Anandi' represents the
'untouchables' who were not allowed to take water from the well of Upper Caste
people; which forms the theme of the story "Thakur ka Kuan" ("The Thakur's
Well").

Apart from selecting 'type' characters, Premchand has made use of

individualistic character. He develops 'characters' with utmost care, that
sometimes the character leaves an undeliable impression on readers mind and he
tends to remember the story by 'character' only, as in "Idgah" , the hero
'Hamid' and 'Bansidhar' in the story "Namak Ka Darogha" ("Salt Inspector")
and 'Bhagat' in the story "Mantra" (The Hymn). Thus, with regard to the use of
'type' characters for the social criticism in their short stories, both Muhammad
Ali Jamalzadeh and Premchand share certain commonalities with some
differences as well in their style of presenting the characters. Jamazadeh presents
characters straightforwardly and pays less attention to their development;
whereas Premchand introduces the character candidly and takes every care to
develop them.

Jamalzadeh portrays the psychological complications of Europe return

Iranian youth and deals with them aptly and with great care, but he does not go
on experimenting the psychological principles of Sigmund Freud as Sadeq
Hidayat does in his short stories and novels. There is no doubt that Jamalzadeh
makes the plot of the story from the psychological complications arising out of
one's mind.

One finds numerous stories of Premchand having their plots based on

'Psychological truth'. Premchand himself admits that:
" I don't write stories just for the sake of narrating an event,. I want
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 such a foundation, I do not feel like writing ... an incident. An incident
cannot be a story unless it expresses a psychological truth." 62

In fact in Premchand we find 'denouement' of the psychological

complications arising in characters mind as the basis of the plot. For example the
psychological complication in the mind of the hero of the story "Idgah" forms
the basis of the story.

The theme in most of the early stories of Jamalzadeh is predominantly

social criticism, especially his first collection of short stories, "Yeki Bud Yaki
Nabud" ("Once upon a time"). The story "Farsi Shikar Ast" ("Persian is sugar")
represents the ignorant mass of Iranians during the early years, after the
'Constitutional Movement' in Iran. The story "Rajul-i-Siyasi" ("The
Politician"), is the portrayal of the failure of Constitutional Movement and the
grabbing of the reins of the movement by the 'opportunists' from the hands of
the sincere people fighting for the cause. Jamalzadeh intends to portray the
method of the 'Revolution' which was.replaced with anarchy and lawlessness.
The story "Dard-i-Dil-i-Mullah Qurban Ali" ("The Grievances of Mullah
Qurban Ali") is a criticism of the infatuation of a religious cleric which goes
against his profession. Jamalzadeh' s robust criticism of the 'cleric' IS

incomparable. Jamalzadeh is concerned about the outmoded institutions of

marriage, rights of women, etc. He not only spoke against various social ills like
corruption, bribery, exploitation of weak and poor, shameless career hunters, but
also tries to find reason behind it. In "Namak-i-Gandidah" ("The Rotten Salt")
he puts the essential reason for corrupt morals among the poor masses in this
manner:

On the one hand, indigence, poverty and deprivation; on the other

hand, the absence of security of person and property. As long as
people's stomach remain empty, and the fear of oppression and injustice

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 and lack a refuge or protection, fearing the shepherd as much as they do
the wolf, having no assurance about the next day in their lives, and not
being master of their own life or property, fighting against corruption
will be to measure water in a sieve and to collect air a wicker basket. 63

From the twenties onwards, following Jamalzadeh as an example,

Persian writers began to introduce social criticism into their short stories and
novels, but none could equal him in penetration and non-sentimentality of his
view of life. The authors began to have knowledge of Western views of society.
Even after spending a major part of his life in West, Jamalzadeh does not
hesitate to criticize the west and their social pattern. In "Atash Zir-i- Khakistar"
("The Fire under the Ashes") through the character of Mirza Ruhullah he says:

"We will not understand the meaning of democracy propounded by

America or the definition of revolution by Russia in empty stomach .....
our world is the women who has the body of her child in her hand and
her wounded hand is bleeding and trickling, drops of blood on the
earth " 64

Like Jamalzadeh, Premchand too, was a staunch social critic. The

extent of his courage and valour can be estimated when his first collection of
short stories ""Soz-e-Watan" ("Passion for the nation") was published, where he
openly sought the Indian masses to fight to liberate their country from the
oppression of British rulers. He was charged with sedition, copies of "Soz-e-
Watan" ("Passion for the nation") were confiscated. This compelled him to
change his nom-de-plume, but he continued writing. Premchand knew very well
that majority of the Indian populace lived in village and there was a need to
build consciousness about the ongoing freedom struggle. He tried to awaken the
masses by his short stories and novels. Although the first story published by him
was "Ishq-:i-Duniya aur Hub be Watan" ("Love for the world and love for

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"Namak e Gandideh", Kohne wa Nau, lntesharat e Sukhan, Tehran,2005, p.69.
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homeland") was in the form of a tale, yet thematically, it bore the features of
modem short story writing, that is, social criticism. In its preface Premchand
wrote:
"The literary learning of every country is the true picture of the society.
The idea which triggers the mind and emotions which fills the heart, they appear
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in form of prose and verse clearly as an image on a mirror".

Prior to Premchand, the themes in the fictions were personal valour,

love, battles, adventure, which appeared in ornate style and written for a 'class'
to use it as their leisure. With the onset of the twentieth century, the dimension
of fiction changed and 'modem short story' appeared as an independent geme.
The literature started to play more positive and responsible role. Through his
stories, Premchand opposes the capitalist oppression which caused poor farming
and exploitation of labourers in the urban industries. According to him the
capitalist oppression is related to privileged class of people who may be
moneylenders. Premchand through his stories inspires the common masses to be
honest; sincere in their work thus puts stress on the individual reformation. The
reformation can occur in any phase of life, to any individual, at any place. For
social criticism he chose the style of presenting the 'types' of society through
individualistic 'character'. This helps in greater attachment of 'character' in the
fiction and the 'type' to the real world, for example the government official
serving somewhere would yearn to be like the character 'Bansidhar' in the story
"Namak Ka Darogha" ("Salt Inspector") and change himself from relinquishing
'sense of duty' or resorting to accept 'bribe'.

It can be conclusively said that both Jamalzadeh and Munshi Premchand

produced literatures which spoke of their times. By social criticism both the
writers wanted to awaken the inner- self of an individual which is always the
prelude to a massive social reformation.

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 Indeed J amalzadeh' s stories bear the hallmarks of literary revolution. It
challenged the administrators, religious clerics, law makers and was by and large
critical of the regime. For Jamalzadeh, the strength of his writing is limited to
his early works before 1925, after which he refrained from literary activities for
the next twenty years. The publication of Y aki Bud Yaki Nabud" ("Once upon a
time") had caused tremendous stir and controversy among the reading public of
Persian. Regarding Iranian reaction to J amalzadeh' s first collection of short
stories "Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud" ("Once upon a time") Jan Rypka rightly says in
his "History of Iranian Literature":

"When the stories first reached Iran, they were not very favourably
received; nor were condemnatory demonstrations lacking against the
writer who had dared to criticize his compatriots, in some places the
book was actually publicly burned. All of this only serves as proof that
the stories of Jamalzadeh were in their way, a literary revolution. The
further development of prose and the role of the short story in it
confirmed such a view" 66

Premchand' s first collection of stories "Soz-e-Watan" ("Passion for the

nation") published in 1908 had faced the similar situations. Premchand describes
the event himself in 'Jeevan Sar' as:

"One night I received a letter from District Collector who had

summoned me ... Saheb asked me 'have you written this book'? I accepted.
He asked me the meaning of every story and said 'your stories are filled with
sedition. You must feel fortunate that you are in British administration, if it
were Moghul administration both your hands would have been chopped
off"67

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History of Iranian Literature, Jan Rypka,D.Rektel Publishing Co.,Holland,p.395
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 Premchand was an unrelenting antagonist of the British rule. At the call
of Mahatama Gandhi during the 'Non-Cooperation Movement' ,he gave up his
government job. He actively participated in 'Puma Swaraj', 'Satyagrah
Movement' and various other movements. Under the influence of Marxism
which had gained ground in India too, Premchand wrote stories which spoke
against the British Imperialism in the same tone and tenor as the fight between
the 'proletariats' and 'bourgeois' was described in Communist literature.
Therefore, the nature of his writings is undoubtedly revolutionary and his first
collection of short stories a genuine "literary revolution". Both Premchand's
"Soz-e-Watan" and J amalzadeh' s ""Y aki bud Yaki N abud" was the start of the
'literary revolution' required for the intellectual leadership to fight against the
injustice done by the regime over the masses in India and Iran respectively.

Realism as a style initially appeared when some major French novelists

reacted against Romanticism in the 19th Century. They wanted the 'softer'
qualities - tenderness, idea_lism, chivalric passion, and the like - which seemed
to them to hide the stark realities of life in a dreamlike haze. However, some
extreme novelists swang to the extreme of 'realism; which makes a synonym for
unrelenting pessimism. In 20th century realism has frequently been put in the
service of a reforming design, which implies a qualified optimism. Novels about
the suffering of the oppressed, human by deg adaption needed realistic approach.
In Iran, realism found place with the works of Muhammad Ali Jamalzadeh.
Discussing the influence that Jamalzadeh's first collection of stories had on
Iran's contemporary literature, Bolotnikoff, quoting K. Chaikine says:

"Only with Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud did the school and style of realism
find a beginning in Iran. And this school and style in fact laid fresh and
new foundations for the art of storytelling in Persian literature; and it is
only from the time of their inception that it is possible to discuss the
appearance of the novel, tale and romance in the thousand year old
literature of Iran .. .In brief it must be stated that Jamalzadeh is for u.s
without doubt a writer who ranks equal to the best novelists of Europe.

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 Furthermore he successfully accomplished a formidable task, in that he
introduced into the thousand-year old frame-work of Persian language
the spirit and technique of European prose " 68

He chooses 'realism' as his style as his 'characters' are from the real
life and portray the picture of a slice of life from the real world. Be it "Ramazan,
Habebullah, Rahmatullah, Khanum Habebeh Sultana, Qudratus Sultaneh; all
come from real life and portray either some psychological truth hidden in one's
mind or the bare truth of real life. Life itself is a story and human beings are like
characters in it, therefore, to a reader it appears he is listening to a fellow
member of the society. It is argued that 'realism' a synonyms for unrelenting
pessimism. To some extent the shadow of pessimism can be seen in the stories
of Jamalzadeh, but overall it gives a firm base for reformation of the individual
and his society.

At the onset of the twentieth century 'realism' as a style appeared in

Hindi literature. Regarding the characteristics of realism, noted Hindi writer
Jaishankar Prasad says that stress of 'realism' is on "showing trivial aspects'
Criticising Premchand, over his style, Jai Shankar is of the view the Premchand
was the first to use 'realism' in his writings but his novels and short stories
generally racal 'Naturalism'. According to him portrayal of base picture of life
(as in Kafan "Shroud") and human weaknesses is a kind of deviation from
'realism', which is closer to 'Naturalism'. He says like French literature,
'Naturalism' sprouted first in Hindi Literature too. But according to the
description of Naturalism as given in Encyclopedia Britannica:

"It is difficult to separate the two categories, but naturalism seems

'character'ized not only by a pessimistic determinism but also by a more
through going attention to the physical and biological aspects of human
existence ... The naturalistic novel is a development out of realism, and it

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 is again, in French that its first practitioners are to be found, with Emile
Zola leading. " 69

The stories or novels of Premchand are in no way closer to the theory of

'pessimistic determinism'. There is a great emphasis on the psychological
aspects of human being in his stories too, therefore it can be conclusively said
that Premchand's short stories or novels are not naturalistic writings. Last but
not the least, both Jamalzadeh and Premchand were the first to use 'realism' in
their stores. Each did so with in their own way, but they were essentially 'realist'
writers.

Muhammad Ali Jamalzadeh spent most of his life outside Iran; he lived
in Beirut, Baghdad, Luazanne, Paris, Berlin and Geneva. Out of 106 years of his
life, he lived altogether 13 years in Iran including his all intermittent visits. He
used to visit Iran regularly for a short duration, but was well informed about the
socio-political and all vital developments in Iran. He had great love for his
country and has spoken about it at length in various literatures he produced. A
groups of writers accused Jamalzadeh of portraying Iran as he saw in his
childhood days. Iranian scholar, Abdullah Waziri in the book "Jamalzadeh and
his Thought" compiled by Mehrdad Mehsin,speaks thus:

" .... due to his longer stay outside Iran, Jamalzadeh was unaware of
the situation in Iran, mentality, behaviour and thought process of the
Iranian people. Jamalzadeh does not know today's Iran better and
whatever he writes about it, is mere his imagination. He sees before him
the fifty years back people and cannot see except the same narrow lanes,
houses without windows, mosques, grounds, caravanserai, the
government ... like someone who suddenly goes blind and cannot see any
picture except the picture secured in his mind when he was not blind" 70

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New Encyclopedia Britannica, Macropedia,Vol.23,p.l32
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 Jamalzadeh produced the entire bulk of his work outside Iran, yet the
striking thing about him is, that in his compositions one senses the life spirit and
atmosphere of Persian more than in those of any other writers living in that land
.He was only twelve when he left his country, but the impression left upon him
by childhood training and environment has proved indelible.

Unlike Jamalzadeh, Premchand was genuinely an Indian writer and

remained the same till his last breath. He takes the character from the rural
masses around him and speaks about the oppressed. During his time labourers,
farmers, outcastes were oppressed by the capitalists who were in the form of
moneylenders, landlords, and village esquires. Owing to his great experience of
the rural life he could paint it more accurately. Contrary to Jamalzadeh,
Premchand had first hand information of what was going around him. He
appears to be more confident, forceful, fresh, versatile and artististic in social
criticism in comparison to his Iranian counterpart, since he was more
experienced.

One of the most contrasting features of Jamalzadeh and Premchand

stories is that the former presents the picture of urban society, but the latter
portrays rural and village life. The reason being Jamalzadeh lived mostly in
cities whereas Premchand comes from a simple middle class having spent a
greater part of his life in a village. However, he lived in cities and towns of
northern India too, though for a short period. As Jamalzadeh lived mostly out of
Iran he could not associate himself with the literary and national movements of
his country, but Premchand quit his job of a teacher, on Gandhiji's call during
the 'Quit India Movement' in 1921. When Indian leaders and masses were
struggling to free the country from the British occupation, he contributed with
the power of his pen and came to be known as "Kalam Ka Sipahi" (Soldier with
a pen).

The dawn of the 201h century witnessed the appearance of two great
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masses at the turbulent times and in the process made significant contribution
towards the emerging new dimension of literature. It got transformed from
leisure reading to responsible caveat. Both Jamalzadeha and Premchand
displayed love for their motherland and their citizens through their literatures,
which is also a source of inspiration for the commoner to understand 'man and
his society' in a more realistic way.

There was a close similarity in their language and style of writing, social
criticism, portrayal of individual behaviour, using 'realism' as a literary genre,
setting new trends for future writers and the popular impacts of their short
stories upon the masses. Their association with the literary circles, organizations,
and their participations in various literary missions and movements definitely
prove that both Jamalzadeh and Premchand were aware of their responsibilities.
They were dedicated professionals and can be regarded as the chief contributors
to the world literature.

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 The dawn of the twentieth century witnessed the emergence of two great
literary luminaries from India & Iran. Muhammad Ali Jamalzadeh from Iran
and Munshi Premchand from India were the first to speak about the common
masses, at a time when the world at large, was witnessing great political and
social upheavals. Both Jamalzadeh's "Yaki bud Yaki Nabud" and Premchand's
"Soz-i-Watan" proved to be the Magna Carta for the new generation and
served as a manifesto for the literary revolution in their respective countries.

Both Jamalzadeh and Premchand were social critics of their times ..

Their first acclaimed literatures produced, bear testimony to the fact that each
criticised the ills of the society forcefully and courageously. The first collection
of Jamalzadeh's short story" Yaki Bud Yaki Nabud" published in Iran was
critical of the social system and challenged the administrators, religious
clerics, law makers. The literature caused tremendous stir and controversy
especially among the religious clerics and the copies of the collection were
burned in Tehran.Similarly, Premchand's first collection of short stories "Soz-i
watan" had to face the wrath of the British administration. He was summoned
and given a warning by the authorities, not to write seditious literature. All the
copies of the collection were confiscated by the District Collector. Thus, the
first collection of short stories of both Jamalzadeh and Premchand proved to be
the initiation of new literary revolution; which called for a more responsible
role for the forthcoming literature.

Individual human being is the basic matrix of a complex social system,

stronger the value system in an individual, firmer the society. Therefore, poets,
writers and men of letters have always contributed to instil correct moral values
in an individual. In the writings of both Muhammad Ali Jamalzadeh and
Munshi Premchand one can find the right portrayal of noble characteristics like
Sacrifice, Repentence , forgiveness, dutiboundness etc by means of their
'characters' . The two writers also tried to highlight the moral corruptions like,
greed, bribing present in an individual, who tends to become common and
corrupt the social system.

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