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Introduction
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Introductions
These account for 24% of the corpus and are much longer than the average
lengths of 424 words found in the Introductions to electronics articles by
Cooper (1985) and of between 100 and 150 words in the Swales (1981) corpus.
This reflects the authors’ need to review thoroughly previous ideas, theories,
and research in their chosen topic. As the research questions posed and an-
swered by sociology articles are formed by distilling previous research, this
section contains careful and thorough abridgments of noted sociological en-
deavour. Such summaries, in a field without unanimous agreement on its body
of accepted knowledge, need considerable space, and occupy the bulk of In-
troductions. An informal analysis of 10 of the articles (results not shown here),
using the Create a Research Space (CARS) model (Swales 1990: 141), re-
vealed a similar use of the three “moves.” However, these were all organised
cyclically, duplicating Crookes’ (1986) observation that the longer and diverse
Introductions are less likely to be linear.
Methods
This section occupies 20%, and is perhaps longer than its equivalent within
the “hard” sciences. There appear to be three tasks for the sociologist in the
Methods section. The first is to describe how the data which form the quan-
titative base for the study have been obtained. In some articles, they were
collected by the researchers, for example, 13, (all articles are numbered as in
Appendix B); in others, they were derived from external sources, for example,
10, which used government statistics. The second task is to explain how the
TABLE 1
The Number of Pages in Each Section of this Corpus
concepts and variables of the research were made operational. Many socio-
logical concepts (e.g., “well-being” or “sociopolitical orientation”) are intangi-
ble but have to be translated into numbers. For example, “skin tone,” was
derived by rating “skin color on a scale from one to five, with one indicating a
very dark brown skin color and five denoting a very light brown or very light
skin complexion” (1: 766). Lastly, the statistical techniques which are proce-
dural warranty for results in quantitative sociology (e.g., “multivariate analy-
sis” or “Pareto curves”) are stated but not explained, reflecting a shared
understanding and acceptance of these procedures within the discourse com-
munity (e.g., “we performed binomial tests on the frequency of deaths . . .”
(2: 1062). Huckin (cited in Swales 1990: 169) attests to the de-emphasising of
the Methods section in The Journal of Biological Chemistry, but it appears that
this is not happening in sociology. The greater length of the Methods section
in sociology, as compared to the hard sciences, reflects a discipline in which
there is less unanimity as to methodological practice.
Results
This is the largest section (40%), and typically includes tables, graphs, and
figures. These present the numerical products of the various statistical manip-
ulations which are the substance of the results. However, these numbers
would remain meaningless without the text; they have to be reconstituted to
represent the people and human behaviour from which they were originally
derived. It is here that new knowledge claims are made. These are stated
tentatively, suggesting that they will not be beyond dispute by other sociolo-
gists.
Discussion
Presentation Categories
0.3 Procedural. Explains how and why data have been produced. Example: “To
evaluate the correspondence between . . . , we cross-classified . . .” (3)
0.4 H@othesis Restated. Restates the aims of the research, or creates further
hypotheses out of the findings that have already been discussed. Example:
“ . . . we aim to assess the applicability of five competing models . . ,” (14)
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1.1 Statement of Finding. Extracts meaning from the numerical data with a
written statement about it. The three ways of doing this provide the fo~o~g
three subcategories.
(a) Comparison. Compares two or more of the subjects of the study. Ex-
ample: “. . . indicate that annual cocaine use among Mexican and Puerto
Rican males is sZightZy higher than average.” (5)
fb) Tome-belted chase. Describes change in the subject of study over a
period of time. “In general the optical poverty trends for children since 1960
are similar to those for all individuals.” (10)
(c) Relationsh@ Between Variables. Indicates relationships between the vari-
ables in the study. Example: “There is a highly sign&ant inverse associa-
tion of 1982 public p~cipation in religion with ~nctional disab~ty in 1983,
1984 and 1985 . . .” (2)
2.1 Substantiation of Finding. Additional discussion of the results produced by
the other variables also analysed, which, as they do not produce significant
results serve to support or not to conflict with the major finding as presented
in category 1.1. Example: “Rates of deep poverty and relative poverty charged
& a s~milayfashi~ . . .” (9)
2.2 Non-validation of Finding. Accounts for data and analysis of other variables
that do not support the major Wing. Example: “‘However other results . . .
indicate that neither marital duration nor . . . have significant effects . . .” (2)
Comment Categories
3.0 Explanation of Finding. Suggests reasons for the finding. Example: “I
suspect ex-offenders are more aggressive because . . .” (18)
3.1 Comparison of Finding with Literature. Three ways of comparing findings
with the literature were found in the corpus.
(a) 3.1 + Same. Strengthens credibility of the findiigls under discussion by
reporting completed findings which concur. Example: “Consistent with Klep-
per, Nagin and Tiemey (1983) . . .” (4)
(b,i 3.1 ? Neither the Same nor Difierent. Indicates that current findings
neither agree nor disagree with previous studies. Example: “. . . some
&ons~t~t with available studies, some previously unseen.” (19)
(c) 3.1 - Different. Indicates that present findings diverge from previous
research. Example: “Contrary to Katner’s predictions about . . .” (9)
3.2 Evaluation of Finding re: Hypotheses. There were two ways of evaluating
bogs with regard to the hypotheses.
fa) 3.2 -t Same as the H@otheses. ConGrms that the finding(s) match the
original hypotheses. “‘Asexpected, occupational dissimilarity has a significant
positive relationship , , .” (12)
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(b) 3.2 - D$eerent from Hypotheses. Indicates that findings are not in line
with the original hypothesis. Example: “. . . is contrary to the ex#ectutions
outlined earlier in the paper.” (8)
3.4 Implications of Finding. Author provides his/her ideas about the implica-
tions an present/future consequences of the finding. Example: “This implies
that such women’s satisfaction might decline over time.” (15)
TABLE 2
The Lexical Signals and Grammatical Realisations Associated with the
Communicative Categories
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No. Signalled by Realised by
Table 2 details some of the lexis and grammar regularly associated with each
of the categories. A longer example of part of a Results section with the
communicative categories highlighted, is given in Appendix A.
Only three of the categories appear in all of the articles: Pointer, Statement
of Finding, and Substantiation of Finding. Quantitatively, about 30% of cate-
gories used are Comment, reflecting sociologists’ need to urge and persuade
the reader, which extends beyond the mere presentation of numbers, in at-
tempt~g to establish rne~~l statements about humans and their patterns
of behaviour. The use of comment categories is, I suspect, greater in sociology
than in the hard sciences.
possible ways of making comparisons with results from other studies, that is,
the same, different, or neither. This study has also chosen to give separate
categories to Structure of the Section (0.2) and to Summarising (3.5), although
it could be argued that these are not genre-specific.
More significantly, the present study reveals the existence of communica-
tive categories not documented as appearing in either Results or Discussion
sections elsewhere and which merit further discussion. There were 59 occur-
rences of Procedural (0.3), which was found in all but 3 of the RAs. The
function of this category is to provide information on the methodological and
statistical techniques used to examine further explanations which had been put
forward or to investigate new questions suggested by the tindings. There was
a strong association in the cycles between this category and Further Ques-
tion(s) Raised by Finding (3.3), which normally preceded it. The quest for new
knowledge frequently raised further possibilities which needed investigation
before meaningful statements could be made. These extra avenues only be-
came apparent to the researcher after initial explorations of the data and find-
ings were declared. That there is a need to examine further and refine findings
perhaps reflects a discipline which, without the benefit of objective proof, has
difficulty in determining how conclusively the accumulated evidence supports a
theory. For example, “In order to test these explanations, we ran the 1984
model using just the sample of 1985 survivors . . . (2: 1068) or “We created an
interaction term using the product of the explanatory variables to represent the
joint effect we wanted to examine.” (7: 401)
The categories Substantiation of Finding (2.1) and Non-validation of Finding
(2.2) were also significant in that they appear in all the RAs and account for
comparatively large sections of the text. These categories follow the State-
ment of Finding (S of F; 1.1) which highlights a major finding. When analysing
the effect of any one of a number of variables on a dependent variable (multi-
variate analysis) some of the effects will always be more noteworthy than
others, and these yield the S of F. However, the effects of the variety of other
variables used in the analysis and presented numerically also have to be dis-
cussed and accounted for. This discussion, which deals with many more vari-
ables than just the ones shown and stated to be significant, takes up much more
space than the presentation of the S of F. There are the effects of many more
variables to be discussed. These may reinforce and substantiate the S of F
(Substantiation [2.13) or lessen and negate it (Non-validation of Finding [2.2]).
The grammatical realisations for these follow the three types specified above
for S of F. For example, an S of F which is then followed by Substantiation of
Finding, as in the following example, “. . . Jews were considerably less likely
than Catholics to become depressed between 1982-85. Few other variables
are predictive: the most important are functional disability in 1982 and change
in disability from 1982-85, but high alcohol use and being married in 1982 are
also significant or marginally so.” (2: 1067)
In sum, this analysis has suggested a model of the communicative options
used in the Results section of sociology articles. The Results section of soci-
ology articles serves some of the roles of Discussion section of Science/
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Conclusion
This study has put forward a description of the organisation of sociology RAs
and of the communicative categories found in the Results section for use in the
EAP classroom. It extends and refines previous descriptions of the communi-
cative categories of this section and shows that there are certain similarities
with Discussion sections of Science RAs. This analysis affirms that the mate-
rials and tasks used to increase learners’ comprehension and production of such
texts should be authentic and disciplinarily appropriate, the pedagogic genre
analyst should not readily accept models based on analyses of disparate disci-
plines. It also conIirrns what Swales suspected about disciplinary variation of
genres, “the major differences do not lie so much in Introductions and Discus-
sions (where I believe most people would expect it) but rather in the Method
and Results sections” (Swales 1990: 175-176). It is a matter for further re-
search as to whether other social science disciplines (e.g., social psychology),
exhibit similar communicative categories and as to what extent the Methods
section of sociology likewise shows evidence of disciplinary variation.
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Appendix A
This shows a worked example of the communicative categories as they occur in a part of a
Results section. The lexical signals are in bold with category number on the left.
0.1 The General Model shows /the relative effect of each
variable. Sii of the explanatory variables are
significantly associated with disposition in this
1. UC) model. / Consistent with previous research,
3.1+ Cameron 1964; Hindelang 1978), retail value is
1.1(C) positively associated with disposition. /Sex,physical
resistance, Neighborhood SES, Dummy SES, and minority
security involvement in an apprehension also shape private
corporate justice. Males are significantly less likely to be
arrested because they were apprehended with items worth less
2.1 at retail than women (X = $64.69 for women, $51.45 for men). /
Given what is known about public police responses to
challenges to authority (Westly 1953; Hemandez 1989)
physical resistance of private police authority
3.1+ predictably increases the probability of arrest.
Evidence of skimmiig on the basis of social class (Klein
1976) is clear as apprehended shoplifters living in less
affluent areas were significantly less likely to be arrested
than those residing in less affluent zip codes. Apprehended
shoplifters with missing zip code information were more
1.1 likely to be arrested. / Contrary to Katner’s predictions
about people who are under-represented in groups (1977: 206
242), minority security not only made more apprehensions, /
3.1- they were more likely to arrest as well. / (7: 404)
Appendix B
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4. Barkan, E., et al. (1991). Punitive attitudes towards criminals: Racial consensus or racial
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5. Bachman, J. M., et al. (1991). Explaining racial/ethnic differences in adolescent drug use: The
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6. Teachman, J. D. (1991). Contributions to children by divorced fathers. Social Problems, 38,
357-369.
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forces. The Sociological Quarterly, 32.
15. Baron, J. N. (1991). Satisfaction? The psychological impact of gender segregation on women
at work. The Sociological Quarterly, 32, 356387.
16. Hwang, S. S., et al. (1991). Ethnic enclosure or ethnic competition: ethnic identification
among Hispanics in Texas. The Sociological Quarterly, 32, 469-476.
17. Ellison, C. G., (1991). Identification and separatism. The Sociological Quarterly, 32, 477-494.
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