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Social System and Population
JOURNAL REVIEW
Writers : Anak Agung Gede Oka Wisnumurti, I Ketut Darma, Ni Nyoman Reni Suasih
Book : IOSR Journal Of Humanities And Social Science (IOSR-JHSS) Volume 23,
Issue 1, Ver. 7 (January. 2018) PP 23-34
Source : repository.warmadewa.ac.id
CHAPTER I
MAIN IDEA
As we know, Indonesia will face demographic bonus and thus demographic bonus
predicted by the experts will end up in 2036. In the other hand, Indonesia also has a program
called “Indonesia Gold” and expected will be realize in 2045 or in the 100 th years of
Indonesia independence. Demographic bonus is a condition in which economic productivity
increases rapidly as the impact of the low ratio of dependency (dependency ratio) and size of
the population labor force (Suryahadi et al., 2012). Indonesia Gold is a condition in Indonesia
is superior, advanced to compete with other nations in the world in 2045.
First of all, in my opinion, this journal does not have a good language. Many words
that looks like just translated from Indonesian to English. So, some statements are not
delivered to the readers clearly.
For the discussion, I think it is quite illustrate the condition and situation in Indonesia.
The data collection is also adequate in terms of explaining the main topic, both qualitative
and quantitative. This paper contained quite lot of quantitative data and delivered in a good
way, such as tables and charts, so readers can understood easier. But, for explanations of the
data, back to the language problem, I think it will be hard if the readers are not Indonesian,
because the arragement of words in some sentence just like in Bahasa. About the contents of
discussion, in my perspectives, there is a missing part, especially in literature review. That
part is about government policy. For me, it is important to explain the criteria of a good
policy, how to make a good policy, especially in Indonesia, which is a very diverse nation.
Because, from the title of this paper also mentioned about government policy that will affect
the people of Indonesia itself. So, it is important to show ways to make a good policy
compared to the people itself.
For the conclusion part, in my opinion, the writers should have linked about the
policies and the effects. In the discussion part, the writers showed plenty of data about
government policy, but I think, none was linked explicitly. And also for the solution from the
writers, for me, it is still too general for encounter the demographic bonus and for Indonesia
Gold 2045. It has to be more specific and clear to be implemented. Also there sould be some
short explanation about suggestion effects compared to the existing policies or regulations.
CHAPTER III
IDEAS FOR SOLUTION
My solution for this journal, first one is to paying more attention about the using of
language, because if the language that used not good, it will affect the delivery of jounal’s
message itself. Second one is to add mor literature review to support the arguments or results
that contained in the journal. If we wanted to state something, we must to have a “base” to
state that, not just state by our subjectivity. Furthermore, the literature review should have to
more specific, in this case Indonesia. For example, maybe if we are talking about policy, add
some literature about norms or culture that grows in the society that coresponds to the case.
Or literature about constitution or law in Indonesia. And also rather than just suggesting
general suggestions, it is better give suggestion that can easily implemented and also can give
a good effect according to the main problems. For example: to plan the development of
human resources, the government needs to revise the curriculum in Indonesia to be more
practical than theoritical as soon as possible. The curriculum also have to included about
digital technology and enterpreneurship.