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    This document contains an assessment for a history assignment asking students to write a letter or diary entry from the perspective of a soldier or someone at home during World War 1. The assessment criteria focus on demonstrating knowledge and understanding of people, events, and motivations during the war as well as reflecting on and evaluating why people acted as they did. The comment provides feedback on a student submission, praising the work for its well-researched, articulate content that captures life for a soldier through a creative inclusion of an authentic telegram. While communication was clear, more evaluation in the letter was suggested.

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    9 HISTORY Topic: World War One (Journal/diary entries or letter)

    Assessment 1 RESEARCH & INTERPRETATION

    Task: A letter or diary


    Using researched material to
    entries, from the perspective The perspective of people
    create a simulated record
    of a soldier at the front or fighting on the front lines or
    outlining motives, actions, and
    someone at home during from the home front
    interpretations of the past
    WW1

    Assessment Design Criteria A B C D E


    Knowledge & Knowledge and understanding of people, place, events, developments and
    Understanding
    KU1 ideas in history including chronologies. ✓
    Knowledge and Understanding of why individuals and groups acted in
    KU4 certain ways at particular times ✓
    Evaluation of why individuals and groups acted in certain ways at particular
    Reflection and
    Evaluation
    RE2 times. ✓
    Explanation and
    Communication
    EC1 Communication of well-informed and relevant explanations. ✓

    Overall Assessment Result A

    Comment (if necessary):

    Absolutely fabulous work, this was a pleasure to read. Your presentation is very well done and your
    content is well researched and articulated, there is good evaluation here and you have really
    captured what life was like for a soldier at the time. You have shown good knowledge and
    understanding of people and events of the time is evident. The inclusion of the telegram is a great
    way to show some authenticity in your work, it is very creative. Clear and concise communication
    however I would have liked to have seen more information in the letter, some examples could have
    included more evaluation. Good references and correctly displayed. Really happy with this
    assignment, it looks like you have put in a lot of work. Thank you.

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