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INT.

PRISON - ENTRANCE - MORNING

Gin (physical description) is entering a


cellar with cubicles where clothes are
stored, the camera shows a close-up of his
facial expressions. Gin goes to one of the
cubicles and grips one of the clothes, his
hands shaking. (the spectator hears Gin´s
steps 0s-5s) (there is no sound from 5s to
10s in order to generate attention to Gin´s
actions ) (just after Gin takes the clothes
an acute sound/chirp is heard 10-13s) ( sound
of voices in jail )

EXT. STREET - MORNING

Jena, (physical description) is jogging, then


she stops and bends down, breathless. A close
up of her face shows her sweating and
gasping.(in order to do not be repetitive by
using Jena`s steps the sound of her heart is
displayed for 10 seconds/or the time she
takes jogging )(sound of rocks while
jogging)(the scene ends with the sound of
Jena´s heavy breathing)

INT. HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - MORNING

Gin is stressed out, , lying on the floor,


sweating.A body is seen in the background.
(intensive heart`s rate sound and breathing)

INT. HOUSE - SHOWER - MORNING

Jena is in the shower and a close up of her


face, she closes her eyes as water falls to
her face. (water falling sound such as in
American psycho
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RjKNbfA64EE)(
all the scene)

INT. HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - MORNING

(Gin is seen hiding a box in the closet of


the room, Jenna arrives and asks him what is
that and why is he acting in such an
aggressive and mysterious
way.)(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vIgX450
Rd68 15 seconds of Requiem 2.47-3.02 )

INT. HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - MORNING

Jena gets out of the shower and enters the


shot, puts on her shoes, grabs a purse and
her keys of the car on the table and exits
the house through the main entrance door, the
camera is behind her.(sound is recorded while
the scene is being shouted in order to give
authenticity to the scene)

EXT. HOUSE - PARKING - MORNING

Jena arrives at the entrance of the jail,


enters at the driver's seat of the car and
the car drives away from the shot (Jena´s
steps sound is displayed for a few seconds
and at the moment she enters to the car the
engine sounds for 2 secs while the car drives
away from the shot).

INT. CAR - MORNING

Jena in the driver's seat of the car arrives


to the jail closed door, the door opens and
the car goes inside (a slight chirp is
heard while the door is being opened ).

INT. PRISON - FAMILY MEETING ROOM - MORNING

JENA is in a small square table in the center of the room,

where she meets her father with a smirk face.

Her father enters into the room where he meets with her
daughter.

She greets her father with a very piercing voice (heavy

father's steps from the moment he enters to the scene to

the moment he sits, sound of the chair being dragged in

the flor and the conversation begins).

Jena

Hi dad.

(Talking very secure but in an exagerated way)

GIN

(He sits down)

Hi sweetheart. You look


nice.
(Gin acting a little bit strange and comfortless. )

JENA

Thanks. How’ve you been

feeling?

She says it (Rolling her

eyes)

GIN

Got rid of that head cold

finally. Took months.


JENA

You got more color in your

face.

GIN

I feel good. How about you?

Every time I see you, you’re

more beautiful than before.

How are things? How’s your

wacko mother?

JENA

She’s

alright. I

been

taking

care of

her.

(with a

piercing

voice)

GIN

Leaving her was the best

decision of my life.

JENA
(She laughed)

She threw you out, what are

you talking about?

GIN

Yeah, but I didn’t go

crawling back like she

wanted.

JENA

That makes you

happy?

(She speaks in an

ironic tone)

GIN

At least I have some pride

left in the salt shaker.

JENA

...Look, if you’re going to

act like this the first

minute of me sitting down,


than I’m outta here.

(With a persuasive voice)

Jena stands up and the cop monitor stares mad at her and
Gin. And makes a sign to Jenna to sit down inmediatly.

GIN

Alright, alright, just sit

down, okay? Jena, I’ll cool

it. I haven’t had the best of

mornings. Someone stole my

soap and I had to shower with

just water.

JENA

Well, I’ve had a bad

life, so we’re even...

GIN

Alright, Jena, Sit down,

just sit down, I’m sorry.

Jena sits. A tense moment between them.

How is your mother, really?

JENA

She drives me

crazy?
(Gin looks at Jena with intrigue, Jenna looks at him
nervously but still with a strong voice.)

But she’s okay, I guess, you know she’s taking

heavier doses of meds now and she...lately, I

catch her in daydream states. She’ll be

talking with me and suddenly stop and she’s

off somewhere else. Then she’ll snap right

back into the conversation like nothing

happened. She seems a little bit crazy.

(She says it with hate)

GIN

Right.

She has

changed

since she

has been

taking

care by

you.

JENA

Mmmm, I think she knows she

goes off but we never mention

it to each other, cause, you

know...it’s just---

Jena holds back the nervous welling up inside of her,


not knowing exactly what to say. SHe moves around in
her sit, nervously)

GIN

I’m going before the board

next month and you never

know, most likely they will

want me to stay the whole ten

but since I’ve done half, you

never know, they may let me

out sooner. I doubt it but if

they do, things will change

and get better. I’ll be home

and I’ll be there.

JENA

It’s a long shot.

They gather solid

evidences, Dad.

GIN

Yeah Yeah solid evidences.


(says it with a mocking tone)
They open up the case again,
they was another person
involved.

(Jenna looks staigth to his


father´s eyes, Gin stares back
at them without hesitation)

They were searching for more


clues, they found out someone
took a ring out of the corpse.
Not my DNA. But since there
are new questions, it might
help me.

(Jenn starts to swallor saliva


rapidly)

But let’s not depend on it

but---I know your situation

cause it’s my situation. You

understand?

Jena oddly hids and

Are you keeping up with things?

JENA

Yeah, things get rough but

we’re getting by. I put a

hundred in your commissary.

GIN

That’s plenty, thank

you. Is Harvey taking

care of you?

A dark aura descends over Jena.

JENA

Yeah, he, he gives me the

money to survive.

GIN

I did a lot of favors for


him, got him out of a lot of

shit. He knows what to do.

JENA

Yeah. I should go now, take

care.

(while the conversation is

taking place there will be

complete silent in the room

so there will be no place for

non diegetic sounds, the echo

will be controlled by the

usage of cloth and paneles.

The conversation must be the

priority )

INT. (Final flashback location)- MORNING


A dead body is shown and a close up shot shows a ring on the
body's hand, Jena's hand reaches for the ring and takes it
off the body’s hand.
(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vIgX450Rd68 10 seconds of
Requiem)(to be chosen with the director and producer)

INT. PRISON - FAMILY MEETING ROOM - MORNING

Jena gives a smile to her father and waves at him as she


sends a kiss. Jena stands up. (the spectator must hear the
kiss clearly as the smile and waves produce no sound)

INT. CAR - MORNING

There is a close up to Jena´s hands as she starts the engine


and puts her hands in the steering wheel.(engine´s sound 2
secs- …….)

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