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PLAGIARISM
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Contextual Spelling 4
Misspelled Words 2
Confused Words 2
Grammar 11
Determiner Use (a/an/the/this, etc.) 9
Wrong or Missing Prepositions 1
Faulty Subject-Verb Agreement 1
Punctuation 15
Punctuation in Compound/Complex Sentences 11
Comma Misuse within Clauses 3
Misuse of Semicolons, Quotation Marks, etc. 1
Sentence Structure 3
Misplaced Words or Phrases 2
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Style 27
Passive Voice Misuse 22
Intricate Text 2
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CBA-Apa-ap Chapter 1
INTRODUCTION
Rationale
Bohol’s aplenty gifts of nature lead many tourists to flock
the province. The flourishing tourism and the establishment
of the Bohol Panglao International Airport are indeed an
indication of the province’s continuous progress. The
anticipated completion of the Bohol Panglao International
Airport will surely generate additional economic activities
which have rarely been seen 1 previously here. Expected
various businesses would be slowly visible years from now.
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The research of Music Theater Restaurant was chosen 2 for Passive voice
and a tasty dish add more satisfaction and delight to Passive voice
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Filipinos are known for being food lovers as well as music [, and]
customers.
In Maslow's hierarchy of needs, physiological and social
needs are listed 10. Restaurants can meet these needs, and
therefore, it is essential to have a first drive – the most
straightforward act of eating – and turns it into a civilized
ritual that includes hospitality, satisfaction, warmth, etc.
(Mehta and Maniam, 2002)
Customers are not any more inexperience and oblivious
when it comes to a restaurant setting. That is why they
developed a set of standards when choosing a restaurant for
its superb dining experience. Hence, restaurant owners and
managers should be ready and equipped to meet the
growing needs and appeals and the changing lifestyle of
customers (Marković and et. Al 11, 2011). As the world
continues to revolve, so as our tastes and preferences.
Thus, if a business is not ready for any changes 12 it will
absolutely experience shortfall and eventually be
exterminated from the market. 10
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One method of ensuring sustainable business performance
and having a competitive advantage is to focus on service
quality (Marković and et. Al 13, 2011). Having a good 14
quality service is another way to sustain business existent.
People will have their ways to come back if they are
treated 15 great. Accordingly, there are distinctions in
service quality perceived by customers and the actual based
on the valuation regarding the stages of satisfaction. The
latter's priorities are the accuracy of billing, the language of
greetings, cleanness of the environment, and safety and
hygiene. The stated preferences are also declared 16 in
service quality perceived by customer except for the
accuracy of billing and the language of greetings. Instead, 11
[et. Al → et al.]
it is replaced 17 with the coziness of the seats. (Cheng,
2009)
Since the customers are generally from diverse culture, 12
[changes,]
ethnic, and economic status, and typically have their food
taste. The restaurant must offer a wide assortment of food
choice. Menu assortment required to serve dining
preferences of the random client. (Payne-Palacio and Theis,
2005) A concept of a restaurant is also significant since it
defines the demographics and psychographics of the 13
[et. Al → et al.]
prospect customers. To attain the desired concept 18, it is a 14
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must to determine what type of cuisine you are offering to Overused word: good
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the customers. To help find the ideal customers’ Passive voice
café menus is significant, banter exists on what explicit Repetitive word: concept
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Picking an area for your restaurant is one of the keys to Overused word: biggest
RELATED STUDIES
According to the Actor's Equity Association, a dinner 41
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theatre will be regarded as a middle-size theatre holding
about 350 people. The establishment will provide
entertainment to the community. Most presentations such 52
as suspenseful murder-mysteries, operas, dramas, and
musical visitor artists will perform at the dinner theatre.
(Hall, 1997)
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When people decide to go out and eat, it gives us the idea 43
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[¶ On the other...]
that the customers want something more than food alone.
They need a place where there is an atmosphere of
kindness, warmth, and openness. You can help your servers
achieved the goal of creating friendly service using the
metaphor of the theater. (Romm, 1986)
The restaurant should establish a unique reputation to have
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take pleasure with some dancing at night in the bar area. [manner,]
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functions?
How many performers needed in the play?
What is the best schedule in the opening and closing the
restaurant?
What are the preferences of respondents regarding genre
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play? [, such]
Marketing Aspect
What is the profile of the customers in terms of:
Age
Sex
Nationality
Income
Occupation
Is there a market demand for dining in Music Theater
Restaurant?
What are the best strategies to entice more customers?
Technical Aspect
How much is the cost of the instrument?
What is the equipment, tools, and instrument needed in
the play?
Financial Aspect
How much is the working capital in Establishing Music
Theater Restaurant?
Is putting a play in the restaurant financially viable?
Socio-economic
What are the socio-economic benefits of Music Theater
Restaurant in the community?
business in Tawala, Panglao, Bohol. It covers the fact and Repetitive word: point
perform the research study in two semesters. To collect 55 Repetitive word: performed
Repetitive word: performed
open data for this study, the researcher shall survey the
entire Panglao Island.
However, researchers will depend on the speculation of 56
Unusual word pair
information gathered from the surveys conducted on
Establishing Music Theater Restaurant. Researchers will
collect all information from Panglao Island.
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RESEARCH METHODOLOGY
Research Design
The methods will be used 60 in this study include survey
and interviews with local which 61 is a middle to high
earner and foreign visitors/tourist and document reviews to
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Number
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of Residents
Percentage Number of Respondents
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Research Instruments
This study shall make use of data gathered from the
conduct of paper-pencil-questionnaires as the main 73
research instrument to gather 74 pertinent data and
information required for this study. A list of guide
questions has been created 75 by the researchers based on
past research to facilitate a fast 76 and efficient conduct of
the interview. Questions 77 that will evaluate the status of
the existing business of the proponent will also be
utilized 78.
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Research Procedure
Acquiring authority and consent. The researchers shall first
ask permission from the office of the Vice President for
Academics of the University and from the Dean of College
of Business and Accountancy of the University of Bohol.
Pretest. Thereafter 79, upon being given consent and
authority from the dean and VP for Academics, the
researchers shall conduct a pretest from student 80 in
University 81 of Bohol to test the validity of the guide
questions. 62
[in middle → in the middle]
Gathering 82 of Data. After the pretest, the respondents shall
send formal letters to ask permission for conducting the 63
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study to the different.
Ethical Procedures
Following ethical procedures are keenly observed. Hence,
proper consent is a requirement to conduct such activity. A
letter was provided to ensure that the researchers adhere to
the ethical standards and guarantee confidentiality and
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2. To describe the profile of the respondents 87, the [a reliable or the reliable]
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percentage will be computed 88. The 86 measure of
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dominant quantity was utilized to determine the most [a 93]
probable scenario. 85
Formula: P=F/(N*100)
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[were → was]
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Where: 70
[which was]
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P= Percentage 71
[on → in]
F= Frequency
N= Total number of population
3. The process of finding the “Weighted Mean”, 89 which is
referred to as central tendency 90 was used 91. The formula
is given 92 below:
X=∑ WM/N
Where:
X= weighted mean
W= weighted factor
∑= summation
N= total number of respondents
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DEFINITION OF TERMS
Theater
Refers to the musical instrument and musicians which
plays and other dramatic performances to draw a large
group of audience for the restaurant.
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Overused word: main
Book or Libretto 74
Repetitive word: gather
A book of words of an opera or other musical composition. 75
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Stage Production 76
[ a fast]
Is any work of theatre, such as staged play, musical, 77
Repetitive word: Questions
comedy or drama produced from a written book or script.
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Restaurant
79
[Thereafter → After that]
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[a student or the student]
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[the University]
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[Gathering → I am gathering]
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[the analysis]
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85
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Dangling modifier
88
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89
[”, → ,”]
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[tendency,]
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Restaurant
[is → Restaurant is]