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To what extent do you agree or disagree Commented [Office2]: These words have the same
meaning – ‘status quo’ or ‘current
What other measures do you think might be effective? situation’.
increasing the price of petrol is the most reliable methods to solve the problem.
e.g. I have a remedy for that
Although it can alleviate the situation in status quo, it is not the remedy to the
fundamental cause.
Commented [Office5]: Clearer grammar here would be
The root cause of annoying traffic and pollutions problems in cities is constant inflow - ‘it can alleviate the situation in status quo, it does not
of population. More residents bring about utilization of more resources, either of the remedy to the fundamental cause’
roads or parking lots. Raising up the price of gas alone can just alleviate the problem
Commented [Office6]: ‘pollutions problems / problems
to some extent but city dwellers would not like to move out of urban areas merely
of pollution’ are the two possibilities here. ‘Pollution’ can be
considering the gas price. After all, the bigger the city is, the more promising the used a an adjective without ‘s’.
career will be like, as a result, the more money will be made to compensate the cost
Commented [Office7]: ‘’the constant inflow of
for increasing fuel price and dealing with waste.
population’ – you need ‘the’ + noun + of + noun’ always.
In my point of view, better solutions to traffic and pollution problems within cities lie Commented [Office8]: ‘the utilization of more
on the shoulder of the governments. City governors can widen roads and open up resources’ - – you need ‘the’ + noun + of + noun’ always.
more parking lots at citizens’ convenience. It is simple to understand that the reason
that people encounter traffic problems is lacking sufficient public transportation
Commented [Office9]: ‘Raising up’ – just ‘raise’ - better
infrastructure. Likewise, pollutions arisen from traffic problems mainly occurs when to avoid phrasal verbs when a singular verb will be suitable.
there is a traffic jam. The more straightforward and effective method is to provide
Commented [Office10]: You could use ‘relieve’
more routes and parking lots for drivers. ...
Commented [Office11]: Unclear – ‘Raising the price of
...
To increase the price of petrol is one of the comproises to deteriorating traffic and
Commented [Office12]: ‘do not want to/ tend not
pollution issues in cities, especially for some metropolitans. We have to take other ...
measures to fix the problem fundamentally instead of relying on simply one way out. Commented [Office13]: Unnecessary.
Overall Score: 7.0 - Some good ideas and language but some grammar needs to be
looked at.