Proposals: The narrative (3rd person), Oliver tells the story, he was the last survivor, but it is not

told
already “It was March 23th when Emma saw Sophie, she was not sure what her eyes seeing.”(page
1, example 24)

Page 4: “The way Emma and Oliver met”

Emma was passing through the crossline. Suddenly a car stamped on the brake almost hitting her.
The arriver was Oliver, and the started to argue and shoot out.

Page 5 and 6: “The parents”

Due to the occupation of both parents they did not have the enough to spent with Emma that is
why she was mad at them. The
parent’s purpose to travel together because of a job after and they wanted to take advantage of it.

Dad: Cesar.

Mother: Violeta.

Page 8: “The reencounter”

Emma apologized to Oliver at school because of the car issue.

Page 10 and 11: “Illusions”

She started illusions due to her conditions. But she could not distinguish reality and illusions and
there is where she saw Sophie.”

Page 12: “Leila appearance”

Emma saw, in an illusion, Sophie and Leila together and that is why she started to look for Leila.

Page 13:

The second faint is omitted, she about opens the door of her house, she fainted again. When she
woke up her mother was taking care of her. So, she went to the doctor and he says to her mother
that she a had a virus named Mortem Virus (to clarify how the virus works.) Her mom was sad, and
she had to take aspirins and antibiotics.
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She has a conversation with Oliver, she tells him about her illness, the part when she dreamt with
monsters and creatures is eliminated. The virus spread out around the city (to explain how the virus
is spread out).

Page 16:

When she heard this, she called to Oliver, in the story is explained why some people died more
quickly than others (showing illustrations). Two weeks later, his father died also Oliver’s mom died.
They escaped to Argentina (they have difficulties to escape). In Argentina, the doctor is discovered
that Emma has the virus.

(Change: Oliver decided to come back to Bolivia with Emma), suddenly there is an earthquake in
Argentina (Emma watches it on TV).