Criteria Draft Score Score /1 /4 Introduction starts with a hook. /1 /4 Thesis sentence is at the end of the first paragraph. /2 /10 Thesis sentence tells the importance of the essay. One major event (or piece of the story) is in each body Organization /3 /10 paragraph. /3 /10 Body paragraphs are organized logically. /1 /4 Transitions are used to show time. /1 /4 Concluding paragraph re-emphasizes the importance of the story. /2 /4 Essay tells a story that is not too big to be told in 2-3 pages. Content Descriptions and details of places, people, or events are /3 /10 detailed enough to give the reader a picture of the story. 2-3 pages with proper formatting: Times New Roman, 12 pt font, Length /2 /5 1-inch margins, double-spaced, left-aligned, centered title. Ideas and writing are clear; grammar does not affect overall /3 /5 understanding of ideas. Grammar /3 /5 Past tense verbs are used correctly. Totals /25 /75 Comments: