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ABSTRACT
The present study deals with “Figurative language in Ghose’s poems: a pedagogic
paramount. The analysis is based on the checklist suggested by Leech and Mick Short
synecdoche and metonymy used in the poems. Similarly, the study focuses on lexical
as well as syntactic structure in which these figures of speech have been employed.
The grammar followed for the analysis in the checklist is ‘Green Baum and Quirk’s ‘A
The selected poems are the part of the curriculum designed for BS English
students in Pakistan. It is often observed that many target language learners have
difficulty in identifying broader patterns of texture and they are not conscious of the
practices which are used to analyze and interpret the text. Thus, they fail to describe
the ways linguistic features in a text are used as they rely heavily on teachers and
critics for making interpretation of literary text. They use cheap stuff available in the
market and reproduce it to get through and promote in the next classes. As a result,
they cannot develop communication skill in the target language context which is the
major aim of learning second language. Therefore, it is expected that this study would
harmony with the teaching goals of target language learning environment like ours.
The analysis is likely to be useful to the teachers and students of BS English across
Pakistan. It is also beneficial for English language students, teachers, general readers
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and researchers who have interest in using stylistics in teaching literature in non-
Content list
CONTENT page
Introduction ………………………………………………………………………………………….1
1.1Background………………………………………………………1
1.5.1 Tropes……………………………………………………………10
1.5.2 Schemes………………………………………………………..10
1.5.3 Simile…………………………………………………………..10
1.5.4 Metaphor……………………………………………………….11
1.5.5 Personification………………………………………………..11
1.5.6 Metonymy……………………………………………………11
1.5.7 Synecdoche………………………………………………….12
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1.7 Rationale behind the selection of Ghose’s work…………………13
2 LITERATURE REVIEW…………………………………………….16
2.1 Preliminaries………………………………………………………16
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2.3.6 Post Modernism Theory……………………………………24
Literature…………………25
2.4.5 Graphological
Level………………………………………………………33
2.4.6 Phonological
level…………………………………………………………33
2.4.7 Morphological
level……………………………………………………….33
2.4.8 Lexico-syntatic
level………………………………………………………..33
2.5 The Role of Stylistics in Teaching of Figurative Language……………..34
3 Research Methodology…………………………………………..42
3.1 Descriptive
Research………………………………………………………..42
checklist…………………………………………………….43
3.2.1 Lexical
categories…………………………………………………………..43
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3.2.2 Grammatical
categories…………………………………………………….43
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contexts……………………………………………………….43
modification…48
3.4 Researcher as a
Tool……………………………………………………………49
procedure………………………………………………………….50
IMPLICATIONS…………….51
poems……………………………52
Analysis………………………………………….109
4.3 Suggestive
Lesson…………………………………………………………………….112
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CONCLUSION……………………………………………………118
5.1
Findings……………………………………………………………………….118
5.1 Researcher
contribution………………………………………….119
5.3
Recommendations…………………………………………………………….119
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References………………………………………………………………………121
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Appendices……………………………………………………………………….128
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Chapter 01
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INTRODUCTION
In the first place, the introduction and background of the study will be stated in
this chapter. Second, a brief overview of teaching literature as a subject in non- native
approach in target language state will be discussed. Fourth, the discussion will be
made about poetry and teaching of literature. Fifth, figurative language and the figures
of speech proposed for the study will be discussed. Sixth, the introduction of the
poetry of Ghose and the reasons of selecting this topic will be stated. Seventh, the
purpose of the study, objectives and research questions will be presented. In the last,
the significance of study, arrangement of chapters, and the delimitation of study will
be stated.
vital that language based perspective be used in the study of literature. Since
linguistics is the discipline that studies language, linguistic based approaches should be
the most valid and reliable approach for the study of literary texts.
1.1 Background
English language to EFL students. Literature is often taught to enrich the knowledge of
the target language to the students like ours; and this practice is done in almost all
target language learning setting. However, it does not produce the desired results
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because of faulty ways and method of teaching. In the traditional pedagogy, much of
the work with the literary texts is done by the teachers and students have no active role
in this type of teaching. This practice makes the students passive and reduces them to
study about literature through cheap stuff available in the market; and pass exam to get
degrees instead of working with the literary text itself to enhance their communicative
skills. Therefore, the students fail to conform to the objectives of incorporating the
literature in EFL contexts like ours. They heavily rely on teachers and get a little
benefit of literature; which having authentic texts could be exploited in better manner
teachers that many foreign language learners, despite having handy excellence and
fairly good competence of English language, are at loss to identify broader patterns of
According to Hill (1998), literature is language in action, a focal point, a living context
for learners in their efforts to communicate. It suggests that literary texts are rich in
topics, registers and styles; and they can ignite class room discussions by opening
bases is paramount in the background of EFL setting. The most potent and impressive
pedagogic manners makes it more realistic, limited and attainable. He further says
when we treat literature as subject, its principle aim becomes enhancing the capacity of
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learners to give individual response to the texts (Ibid. p.76). He further elaborates his
argument and says if anyone who looks at the subject in this way, he would find the
logic and apparent immediate reason of teaching literature overseas (Ibid. p.80). He
further argues if we teach literature keeping this sense and perspectives in mind, it
language and literature becomes two sides of the same coin in this context.
through linguistic based analysis. Carter (1996:5) says that stylistic studies are helpful
between the lines. It equips the students with techniques and methods of scrutinizing
texts. In this way, it opens ways for comprehensive interpretation. In terms of teaching
point of view, students deal with the texts without resorting extrinsic means-to go
beyond the texts. They do not depend upon teachers and critics to arrive at the
interpretations; rather they use their own consciousness about the literary text to make
The objectives of using stylistics in literary studies are multiple. The main
objective is to help students nurture and develop their response to the literary texts, for
eliciting response is the prime measure on the side of teachers in nonnative teaching
contexts. The leading stylisticians like Widdowson, Short, Brumfit Carter deem it a
corner stone in this regard and lay immense emphasis in developing response among
oversea learners. Only the students responding effectively to the literary text can have
genuine access to what they read and enjoy and get experience of what they read.
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The second objective is to develop students’ skills and capacities of experiencing the
world created within the literary texts; and these abilities are necessary for them to
Third aim is to develop students’ literary competence which will help nurture the
The fourth aim is to sharpen and enhance the students’ awareness of linguistic
non-literary texts. This is, as a matter of fact, helpful in elimination of their sense of
alienation and strangeness of target texts. One thing can be observed that non-native
students rate literary language more than native speakers and they have more tendency
to use it in their verbal and written expressions. This phenomenon has been confirmed
The fifth objective is strengthening the links between students and literature as
Brumfit and Carter (1986:introd.) put it while claiming that it turns them into serious
reader. It is important in this sense because in non-native situation like ours, we cannot
ours- we find because of wrong pedagogy- literary texts like poetry are being
transformed into dull text books. With the help of cheap helping stuff about literary
texts, the students are passing their school and college examinations.
Finally, another argument given in this regard is that analytical precision given
by stylistics is handy for the learners of English in EFL teaching contexts as non-
natives have better grasp of structural elements than that of native speakers. So in this
situation, stylistics can be useful discipline in the interpretation of difficult poetic texts.
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Professor Irina Arnold (2004:8) states that stylistics not only develops close reading
but also creates and develops the foundation for the development of artistic taste.
Further, it encourages language normalization and helps students speak and write
Literature has many genres like prose, poetry, drama, fiction etc. However,
Poetry is thought to be one of the most popular models of literary works as it contains
elements of beauty and conciseness. Poetry offers a wide and extensive range of
in EFL environment. Povey (1967) states that literature; especially poetic texts
skills of language. It is glaring fact that there would be no poem that has no simile,
focus of stylicticians as compared to others. This can be better seen from the poem
suggest stylistically is very important skill for appreciating literature for learners in
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for foreign students. While teaching poetry, a teacher has a golden opportunity to make
the students realize the value of linguistic devices like figures of speech and so on used
by the poet. Poetry can nurture in learners strong sensibility and robust feel in terms of
choice of words, lexico- syntactic patterns and aesthetic beauty. It can make learners to
express unique thoughts. And, this is something which adds their communicative
These linguistic based activities encourage the students to have close reading of the
poem without knowing any biographical and sociological details about the poet. Such
type of analyses, as one supposed to be done here, will encourage students to learn
more complex meanings so it has always been a challenging area for all readers,
without the knowledge and understanding of figures of speech and the linguistic
patterns such as lexical and syntactic ones. Figurative language is inherent in poetic
discourse.
literature, there are many perceptions about figurative language. Mc Arther (1992:402)
says figurative language is the language in which figures of speech such as metaphors
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freely occur. He also explains that figures of speech are rhetorical devices and used
frequently to achieve a special effect. Abrams (1999:960) opines that figures are
described as primarily poetic; and necessary as well for the capital discourses. Simply,
figurative language is a word or phrase that departs from every day literal language for
the sake of comparison, freshness, clarity and emphasis. Mick short (1981:78) says
that the analysis of figurative language includes choice, purpose and meanings as
desired by the poet or author of figurative language. The style of an author can be
assessed by the evaluation of the use of his figures of speech. Metaphors and similes
are the most common examples of figurative language; however it includes other
figures of speech too. Girous and Williston (1974:10) opine that figurative language
transcends from every day common use of words. It creates wonderful effect in
conveying meanings, clarifying ideas besides making writing robust and colorful.
unorthodox, and different from literal interpretation of words. It is the most important
movies, poems etc. But it is more telling in poetry. Figurative language has also used
in cognitive linguistics, which has made great advancement in relating the language
1.5.1 Tropes which are to do with meaning variations in the use of lexemes
1.5.2 Schemes that are concerning with lexical, syntactic and phonological
as per the nature of poems, the researcher has applied simile, metaphor,
under:
1.5.3 Simile
are:
2. He behaves as he is a child.
In the above sentences, ‘he’ in either sentence is tenor; Hercules and child are vehicles;
1.5.4 Metaphor
It is not only the most important trope, but it has been under the study of literary
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critics, philosophers and psychologist. Metaphors not only provide writers with the
ability to express their thoughts in innovative way, but they are also very significant
In the first example, life is compared with shadow; in second sentence, life is
compared with what is opposite to bed of roses. However, in metaphor, ground is not
1.5.6 Personification
inhuman objects are given a human touch. The examples of metaphor are as follows:
Here stones and hills are given human touch; same is the case with the arm of chair.
1.5.7 Metonymy
It is a figure of speech which is used when whole stands for part. According to
thing and thing to which it stands relation. For example: I study Iqbal; Islamabad is
silent at the issue of Palestine. Here, ‘Iqbal’ means works of Iqbal; ‘Islamabad’ means
1.5.7 Synecdoche
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It is opposite to metonymy. Holman (1986:210) states that synecdoche means
when a part or single fragment represents the whole. Martin and Wren (1990:341) say
that in this figure of speech, part designates the whole or the whole designates a part.
emigrated from Pakistan and settled in USA. He has contributed immensely in English
literature. Rehman (2012) held him among one of the best South Asian English writers
who has contributed immensely in English literature. In his poetry, he gave an explicit
response to the major events of his time like the partition of India and the break of
Pakistan. Mostly, he writes long poems in blank verse but casually, he writes smaller
poems with regular meter. His style is figurative and full of imagery. His poems are
full of ideas and meditation; and find expression in the style, which is fastidious and
scintillates the reader mind with brilliance. Abbasi (2012) observes that Goose
paramount consideration remains ‘how it is said’ rather than ‘what is said’ of the
language. The poems in this study are: ‘Decomposition’ ;‘A point In Metaphysics’
poems would be explored as well as the lexico- syntactic structure in which figurative
language is used.
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This study deals with the five selected poems of Zulfiqar Ghose which are the
parts of the south Asian literature designed for BS level and which I have been
teaching too. As it has been earlier that Ghose contributed immensely in English
literature despite his being nonnative writer. His work constitutes an important part of
south Asian literature. It is general agreement, and researcher has also observed that
relatively a little heed was paid to his valuable poetic work especially in this part of the
world. Therefore, the researcher thought it would be convenient to select only those
poems which are the part of curriculum to investigate them stylistically. In the
level with specific lexical and the syntactic structure can be used to make an
explained what are the crucial implications of this study in non-native environment
like ours.
how meanings are constructed in literary text, and how they can be taught to non-
native learners.
2. To identify how Ghose’s poems reflect lexical and syntactic structure in which
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3. To explore the pedagogic implications of this type of stylistic studies in non- native
teaching context.
1-What are the figures of speech used in Ghose’s poems and how they constitute the
teaching contexts?
The major problem faced by the teachers and students in non-native context is
that the desired goal of incorporating literature to improve the communication skills of
students is not achieved. After, reading literature for many years, the students don’t
have the ability to interpret the literary texts especially poetry independently.
The main contribution of this study is that it will enhance the involvement of students
in the poetic text independently without relying on extrinsic means to make the
interpretation of the text. It will help teachers adopt right techniques to make the
students give independent opinion on the bases of their own linguistic analysis, thus
of teaching literature in EFL context; therefore, it is hoped that it may ignite the efforts
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The traditional methods are teacher centered and have proved insignificant to
bring forth the desired results. Therefore, this study will give them a useful way of
studying figurative language thus enhancing their lexical and syntactic knowledge by
The study will change the paradigm of conventional thinking and make them
realize that language can be better learnt by interacting and working with the text
instead of cramming, paraphrasing, and memorizing and so on. Last but not least, as
these poems are part of syllabus designed for BS English students, the result of this
research is expected to be handy for the current teachers and students of English
departments ;and also to all the English teachers at all levels in nonnative contexts.
This research is divided into five chapters. In the first place, there is an
third chapter, methodology will be discussed. In the fourth chapter, data will be
presented and analyzed, along with the suggestive lesson to show the efficacy and
implications of this study. In the last chapter, the conclusion of this study will be
presented.
The study is focused on the five poems of Ghose which are included in the
in these selected poems. The study is delimited to the figures of speech: simile,
Short.
Chapter 02
LITERATURE REVIEW
The main aim of this chapter is to review the theoretical works and study the
subject of this thesis. To begin with, the preliminaries will be stated. Then, the
current practices of teaching literature which are not aligned with the desired targets. It
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would be followed by stylistic approach to language teaching through literature. In this
regard, the notions like stylistic approach to language teaching, the position of
stylistics, stylistics and foreign language learning through literature have been
discussed at length for further clarifying the approach of stylistics. Similarly, in the
end, it would be discussed why stylistics has been proposed to teach figurative
some scholars on linguistic based analysis of some important literary works will be
showcased in order to create a consolidate foundation for the analysis. Finally, poetic
works of zulfiqar Ghose and its analysis have also been showcased to identify the gap
and the need of the analysis to justify the stance regarding the subject.
2.1 PRELIMINARIES
learners. There is general consensus that because of immense variety and real life like
experiences, literature, especially poetry offers authentic material for target language
learning. However, the way it is taught to the students in non-native situation does not
produce the desired results. The teaching approaches, exercises books, testing and
examination system-all are designed in the way which is not student friendly. We can
assess, in the winking of an eye, if we look at the teaching activities which are
designed to teach literature to the non-native students. The typical exercises used in
school and college text books are: vocabulary exercises, rephrasing exercises or central
on and so forth.
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We will see here briefly all the approaches and theories to teach literature besides
exploring why stylistics is the best model to teach literature in non-native teaching
context.
certain societies are interested in preserving. At the same time, literary critics have the
right to discuss and change those values. In this sense, critics’ responsibility is not only
the preservation of traditional values but also the right to question them. In the
scholars. They are: the language model; cultural model; personal growth model. Carter
and long (1991:2) asserts that these models are very significant in terms of teaching of
literature.
working with familiar grammar, lexical and discourse categories. It focuses on the way
language is used in the literary text. There is no emphasis placed on creative thinking
and communicative ability but on acquiring information regarding the target text. In
this method, texts are taught in systematic and organized manner. The exercises given
to the students are those which are typical for EFL classrooms. They are: prediction
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exercises, jumbled sentence, role plays, summaries etc. This approach is considered
does not account for how the linguistic analyses contribute to the evaluation and
interpretation of literature.
It focuses on language acquisition and also on the knowledge of the culture and
other than lexis. In this model, students are asked to explore and interpret the political,
social, literary and historical context of the texts. This approach is faulty in this sense
that it makes the students to go beyond the text and examine the external means and
stuff to understand the text. In EFL context, it is not useful approach as students read
It aims at creating a link between the language model and cultural model. It
focuses on the use of language but it keeps the specific cultural context. In this
approach students are not supposed to be the passive receivers relying on the teacher
the teaching activity. In this approach, literature is used as a resource not merely a
subject. Carter and Long (1991:3-4) say that students develop their knowledge about
literature independently. The students are encouraged to express their opinions and
belief besides making connection between their experiences and the context by using
critical thinking. This model is very handy for the native students. But for nonnative, it
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is not effective where learning literature means improving communication skill of
There are different theories and methods for teaching literature that are based
on different conceptions of literature, the three main general theories in the context of
It is based on this traditional concept that it is the task of the teacher to present
all the facts about literary text. It is teacher dominated theory. The role of the student is
reduced to reproduce those facts without thinking and get through. This sort of practice
is very common in the country like us. Many studies expose the disadvantages of this
theory. It makes the students passive listeners; and class room activities rotate around
without involving them in positive interaction. Hawang and EMBI (2007) carried out a
study in Malaysia which reveals that students have least motivation in this type of
teaching and their learning skills are retarded. They limit themselves to the views and
opinions of teachers about the text which they are forced to learn. As a result, no active
the students are supposed to be responsible for their learning. They have all liberty to
choose the material of their own choice in accordance with their aptitude; however,
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many critics have observation that as the students learn according to their experience,
learning. The students have greater opportunity to enhance their knowledge from the
aesthetic and linguistic understanding of students; and history is read and understood
in the manner as is discussed by authors and poets. Lindblom (2003:97) states that
students are trained to shut out the world from their class rooms as well as their mind.
It simply means the aim of teaching methodology is to facilitate students to read about
literature; rather than learn to read literature. Hence, these approaches undervalued and
neglect the evaluative and creative abilities of the students. The students are not trained
to see the feature of the texts; and the reality is constructed by literary texts.
These approaches and models are essentially teacher centered, viewing literature as
knowledge regarding literary genres, socio cultural context of the text and
interpretation given by selected critics. In this way, students get saturated with
abundant information about the texts but cannot become creative thinkers and problem
solvers. They can’t get confidence and always rely on the opinions of teachers. Also,
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Keeping in mind the limitations and gaps of these approaches, there are other
the reading of literature achieve the aims of modern pedagogy with their stress on
reader. These approaches utilize the principles of modern approaches to learning and
help nurture cognitive processing of the students by connecting them with the world
outside the class room. The students are not supposed to follow the traditional
They are reader based, interactive and students’ friendly in many ways. They
meaningful and detailed learning can happen when learners are actively engaged in the
learning process. They further assert that this can be made possible by connecting the
learners between teaching contents and their individual lives outside the class rooms.
These theories make the readers engaged in reading independently in the process of
deciphering meaning with the text. However, the students reading literature with the
angle of literary theories see literature as a part of larger text outside the text and class
rooms. Teachers give them training to decode the text in connection with cultural and
social realities as well as institutions. These literary theories make the readers active
and independent setting aside the authority of the teachers. Discussion and dialogues
It was the outcome of theory of deconstruction by Derrida who made the reader
and interpreter co-creator of the text by bringing them onto the center stage. Zima
(2002:43) explains that meanings can never be present as they are developed in open
context of reference and thus become subject to change. The prost structuralism
lectures and teacher becomes facilitator to promote inquiry and investigation in the
classroom. They use texts not to find out author beliefs but the world to be
about the function and structures of patriarchal ideology in the text. Therefore, it is an
ideological angle to look into the text to expose patriarchal dominance expressed in the
text. In this way, it enhances the understanding of cultural processes in which gender
roles are constructed. In this sort of studies, the reader tries to explore and deconstruct
binary confrontation happening between male and female genders in male dominated
patriarchal culture.
in the readers. It equips the readers with analytical knack to look into the authority of
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bourgeois groups which favour and promote dominated classes interest structures
through literary texts. A Marxism based interpretation of the text makes the reader to
set aside his neutrality and conforms to the ideology of authors and their anti-class
agenda.
In the similar ways, post-colonial theory tells the reader about racial issues
through literary texts. The aim of critical reading strategies like colonial discourse
analysis aims at encouraging the readers to read canonical texts from some specific
angles and interpret them by using different lens. This approach limits the texts
It is type of theory which has become prominent after the world war second. It
suggests an angle to look at literature in specific manners. Instead of searching for the
standard literary meanings, it tends to find out the possibility of meanings. In this
approach, literary world is seen as fragmented, troubled and chaotic. It is quest to find
external tools to evaluate literature instead of appreciating the internal features of the
text.
The post structuralism approaches are reader based as they are reader centered.
They encourage reader to interpret text in social and political context. There is no
doubt that these literary approaches of teaching literature have drawn their theoretical
concepts from different disciplines, they provide a new angle to reader to deal with
literary texts with reflexivity. These approaches challenge and call into question the
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traditional notions of gender, race, history, class and culture which are conventionally
used in the interpretation of literary texts. Davis and Womack (2002:51-53) agree that
Reader Response approaches of poststructuralist literary theory give active role to the
reader so that they find the text relevant in terms of life and society.
native teaching contexts for different educational levels. All teaching activities should
strategies which can guide the students towards developing useful grammatical and
communicative skills.
handy pedagogy especially in EFL teaching context where the main aim and need of
Leech and others pioneered the usefulness of systematic analysis of literary texts in the
comprehensive and have detailed theories of language that can at least tackle the
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Stylistics allows the reader to be explicit about his reaction to the text. This
explicitness can only be reached after the reader response and close investigation into
the linguistic choices which constitutes the text. Widdowson (1975:4) holds that
literary critics are concerned with the message of the text whereas linguistics
investigates the code. However, he believes that code and message cannot be seen in
isolation. It is of course a fact that the choice of linguistic forms necessarily generates
meaning.
Carter (1988:10) subcategorized stylistics into five sections which are important to
It deals either the study of style and language variation. It is the purest form of
It deals with any piece of literary text. It has provided comprehensive bases for
critics and linguists. Pedagogical stylistics claims patterns are significant only in this
Only stylistics can offer the genuine study of literature rather than history,
concerning to the study of style. To further the discussion about the role of stylistics in
the teaching of literature, the concept of style needs to be understood. It will clarify
the shift from traditional concepts of style to the modern linguistic based approach
The word style is difficult to define and there is no consensus about the concept
of style. In traditional approach, style is defined as set of devices which are used
according to occasion and the subject of discourse aiming at producing right kind of
according to classical assumption. It implies that there is separation between form and
propounded by W.k Wimsatt (1967). He says that style is the selection and
that style and meaning are inseparable. What is confusing about these traditional
definitions is that they are too confusing and inadequate practically in the study of
style. This concept underlines conformity to the established genres; however, in the
Distinctiveness of language, culture and synchronic study has mainly attracted the
models of describing the language and analytical tools to study the style in objective
way.
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The shift in emphasis on the primacy of texts and close reading of the linguistic
features in the texts paved the way for modern stylistics. The most modern important
thing about modern stylistics is that it is based on analytical methods of linguistics and
gives precise and adequate description of the language used in literary texts. Therefore,
the analysis of formal features of texts shows the facts about a writer’s style. In this
regard, it is the linguistics which provides theoretical framework and analytical tools
for studying a writer style. Sol Saporta (1960:93) says stylistics is, in many ways based
Lehman (1996:303) the term style is applicable to periods, genres and individuals.
Lehman is the voracious readers of Shakespeare’s writings and is all in praise of him
because of his style. Chapman (1973:11) says styles spring out from social conditions
and the reflective of relationship existing between the users of language. Among the
modern approaches in the study of style, the theory of style as a choice is very
significant in the field of stylistics. Similarly Richard Ohmann (1972:43) further says
that patterns of language reflect the patterns of thought and stylistic preferences are
cognitive preferences. He says that the words we use in text as compared to other
words of same meanings, and their specific way of arrangement can have cognitive
dimension. Richard Ohman has the similar views about the style; however he adds the
surface and deep structure has also far reaching consequence in the study of style.
Another theory of style is ’style as deviation’- which is the most popular theory in
terms of style. The style of an author is termed as deviant when it is departure from
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ordinary use of language in some certain way. In poetry; linguistic deviation is the
The theory of style as poetic function was born largely from Roman Jacobson
closing statement of the 1958 Indiana conference on style ‘the poetic function projects
to principles of equivalence from the axis of selection into the axis of combination’
Halliday and Geofferry Leech. Besides, lexical sets and collocations is another concept
of style. The notion of collocations is meant to account as one object can occur in the
same linguistic environment for certain items of language which are close to each
other. For example the word, gardener, plants, seed, flower, garden can come in the
same environment. It’s an important concept of style as literary writers use usual
collocations and unusual collocation to compact their style. Thus, we see that different
scholars have defined the style differently and there are several approaches of style in
Sell (1991: xiv-xv) states that all language processing entails syntactic
involves the interpreter ability to build around a world in which it makes sense. So this
view involves that everybody looks at the text according to his/her views and they
and rigorous linguistic descriptions. It further aims to proceed from these descriptions
major risk that involves is entering of subjectivity specifically when you attribute your
findings to certain interpretations. Because he argues that there are many ways a data
can be interpreted. He says that as far a stylistician goes, he would be using formidable
apparatus between descriptive and interpretative acts. Fish argues strongly to give
interpretation of the texts. He holds opinions that the interpretative conclusions ought
that we can proceed more firmly on the basis of solid correlation between syntactic and
Widdowson (1996) asserts that stylistic analysis aims at investigating how we can put
the resources of language in producing the actual messages. It accounts for the patterns
employed in literary text.
Stylistics deals with such type of literary messages which are embedded in the text. Its
major objective is to find out and identify messages which lie in linguistic units.
Similarly, it tells us what is the role and effects of different conventions in the
organization of text to convey messages. It implies that stylistics is the study of the
social function of the language. It thus becomes a branch of sociolinguistics.
Stylistics links linguistics to literary criticism. It uses linguistic analysis to
explicate meanings of the text thus facilitating the process of interpretation. Thus it
bridges the gap between linguistic studies and literary criticism. Widdowson (1975:34)
explains that stylistics is not only a subject but it forms bridge between two
disciplines: linguistics and literary criticism. He further says that stylistics is a happy
marriage between linguistic and literary methods. It provides linguistic evidence
regarding the intuitive judgment.
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The role of Widdowson is very vital in terms of determining the positions of stylistics.
The following diagram explains how he visualizes the role of stylistics in relation to
Stylistics
stylistics that it does not negate the role of literary approaches in the evaluation of
English
literature nor it raises its eyebrows on literature
the analysis of linguistics which has nothing to
doing stylistic analysis, students can make their own commentaries about any poem
and they have something newer for that poem although it has already been said.
understanding of a poem over and above that promoted by the literary approach, then
there ought to be something more to be said about the poem than has been already
said.
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Auzike (1992:109) discusses different theories of style and concludes that all
the stylisticians agree that the concept of stylistics is nebulous. As a matter of fact,
stylistics grew out of the conflation of various discipline, literary criticism, literary
bridge between linguistics and literature. Out of these concepts, we can conclude that
stylistics forms bridge between linguistics and literary criticism. Carter (1988:4)
suggests that practical stylistics deals with literary texts analysis which is based on the
in the reading of literary texts. He further adds that the means which stylistics provides
can be related to a piece of literary writing to his own experience of language thereby
interpretation initiates and how reader realizes which aspect should be focused in
writing. They suppose that artistic value can be realized by using intuition. In order to
express their opinions, they rely on impressionistic vocabulary. The difficulty with this
point of view is that the intuitive awareness is something which reader cannot share
with the critic especially language learners in non- native environment. In this state of
affairs, it is stylistics that creates difference and makes its contribution. It investigates
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those patterns of the text and those features which constitute artistic value. In this, the
awareness of artistic value is clearly stated by using stylistic analysis of the patterns.
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In 1989, in the interface series, 112 which takes its premise as Jacobson
statement, he says that a linguist who is deaf to the poetic function of language and a
he means there are similarity and dissimilarity, antonym and synonymy. This argument
of Jacobson is very significant, as it gives us insight about the poetic text. He himself
applies it in the analysis of many poems to substantiate this claim. Despite limitation
of this argument, to me it still suggests a handy model to involve the students in the
literary text thus making the students to center around their attention to text. It helps
Every reader gives the meaning to the text according to his experience, which
responsibility cannot be transferred. So, every reading entails another reading of the
text.
Figurative language is the main tool of literary writers especially poets. Teaching
figurative language is challenging area for the teachers as neither dictionaries nor
context help figure out their meanings. Therefore, in traditional methods, teachers rely
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on critics for the explanation of them. Some time there are so diverse explanations of
speech are considered lying outside the text. This situation becomes very challenging
The reader response approach lays stress that intimate relation between reader
and text should be encouraged. The main proponents of this theory are Wolfgang Iser,
and Louis Rosenblatt (1978). In this theory, they stress that there must be intimacy
between the students and poetic discourse and meanings of rhetorical devices and their
students should use their experience of reading to the meaning. Apparently, it sounds
like better theory in interpreting lexicon and become active learner; however, it does
not suggest any model or base to probe into the figurative language and patterns they
cultural awareness. Here too it is thought that figurative meanings entail cultural
understanding. Therefore, it is the job of the teacher to thrust upon the meaning to the
students thus reducing the students as receptors. Cadorath and Harris (1998) state there
lays no meaning in the text itself, it is only the signboard for the learners to figure out
meanings from his experience. They say that meanings of any sort including rhetorical
devices take place when reader develops the ability to consolidate them from the text
(ibid, 55-53). All the other traditional models have similar ways and means of dealing
with meanings and lexicons in the similar manners as all are relying on teacher in one
way or another.
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Stylistic approaches lay stress on figurative language as it enhances the
awareness of poetic patterns which are important in understanding the poetic language
figurative language can be learnt in an effective way. And, hence stays in the part of
active vocabulary to be recycled again. Stylistic approach makes it possible to learn the
Stylistic approaches focus the attention of learners on the figurative language inside
the text. Instead of relying on critics for the explanation of them, they equip the readers
with the tools or checklist to analyze it in interactive manners with the texts. It also
makes the learners to look at the text independently. Importantly, the learners are made
derived from lexicon but also from lexical and syntactic patterns in which they are
Barry (1995:202) is of the view that one of the crucial aims of stylistic study in
literature is to deal with syntactic and lexical structure of literary text to figure out their
contribution in overall meanings. These structures are words, phrases, clauses and
sentences. In the analysis of them, it is seen: what is their frequency of them; and do
they imply some patterns that help in interpretation? More importantly, in the EFL
class rooms, they are they part of authentic text. When the students identify them, their
non-native students.
Teaching English language through literature has always been part of curricula for
target language learners especially since 1945. Since literature has abundant
resources, therefore it presents handy stuff for learners in target learning scenario.
Many approaches are prevalent in terms of pedagogy employed for teaching literature
especially English literature to the students. The main approaches are the content based
learning in which everything is poured into the mind of the learners by teachers; and
discipline can be better approach to teach and enhance the capacity of learners in non -
stylistics is handy for the learners of English in EFL teaching contexts as non-natives
have better grasp of structural elements than that of native speakers. So in this
situation, stylistics can be useful discipline in the interpretation of difficult poetic texts.
Professor Irina Arnold (2004:8) states that stylistics not only develops of close reading
but also develops and creates the foundation for the development of artistic taste.
Further, it encourages language normalization and helps students to speak and write
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During this study, of figurative language used in Ghose’s poems, it comes out
that that stylistic analysis is not confined to literary text, but it encompasses other
discourses too. Ahamed (2014) analyzed Barrak Obama speech rather his second
inaugural speech stylistically to identify figurative language with its structure. The
findings revealed that Obama achieves effectiveness by the use of figurative language.
Similarly, fiction too has been a little focus of stylistic analysis. However, during the
study it was found that that poetry has been chiefly the focus of stylistic analysis
especially the English poetry because of its richness and brevity. Style based studies of
poetry have been done largely aiming at enhancing the understanding of nonnative
analyzed the poems of Robert frost and gave their findings that different interpretation
of the same text can be made by different critics. Sadiq (2014) analyzed the poem
‘Onset ‘and shown that this poem suggests death while, Tafreshi (2010) analyzed this
poem by using the same frame work and gave different interpretation. This study
suggests that interpretation of poems is open-ended and linguistic choices may suggest
Mansoureh (2012) explicated in one study that there is the conversation and
dialogue between the reader and the text and as a result the reader understand the text
and its meaning. This study is analyzed through the view point of Gadamer's
Hermeneutics. Saeedi (2011) attempted to belief in her study the situation after World
War-1, and the emergence of nationalism and explained that the poet identifies another
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apocalypse coming. Bhagawati (2012) exclaimed in a study that T.S. Eliot used myth
in his ‘Waste Land’ in order to form a complex traditional background to highlight the
nature of the spiritual waste land by analyzing the work through mythical perspective.
There are many other researchers who carried out stylistic analysis of figurative
language especially used in the poems. One of them is Arina Ruainida Fera
apostrophe, imagery, irony and parody. The theory of loneliness was analyzed too by
other researchers. It is fairly good study which gives us insight about figurative
language, though the work is much focused on the theory of loneliness. Ijoh (2004) did
that figurative language is the powerful expression of feelings, passion and emotion.
She further says that studying poems for language, learners improve their language
competence especially in literary terms. Dian (2010) did the study of ‘the figurative
language of Nirvina’s song’. She explained the figurative language of these songs. She
paradox pun, hyperbole. She found that figurative language carried significant implied
meaning. Ita (2010) has done research about figurative language on a song of famous
singer Dion’s song’ -’a study on figurative language In Celine Dion’s song’. From the
research, she concluded that there are three kinds of figurative language namely simile,
metaphor, and rhetorical terms. However, he concludes that it is metaphor which is the
most potent and used to state analogies in the songs. What is understandable in this
research is that metaphor is the most potential figure of speech which may be used to
variety of implied and connotative meanings. Thus some previous researchers from
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year to year have been the same object of research with this study-to analyzes
Zulfiquar Ghose has been relatively unknown poet notwithstanding his being
an accomplished nonnative English writer. His fictional work was analyzed by some
stylistically. While taking up his novels, he had his mind specific audience primarily
for South Asian students, particularly, Pakistan where he has been recently included in
syllabus. Therefore, he tried to avoid over theorization and he asserted that reading a
writer through style is important for students, particularly international students, for it
helps the students to learn the nuances of the language through style.
His poetic work has been little in focus of critics in our context. Some Critics
Ghose, a poet of the Pakistani diaspora who removes the cobwebs from the tombs of
history. Writing from 1959 till date (his latest collection appearing in 2010), his poetry
displays a gradual evolution in content, themes and style. His poetry is reminiscent of
the Romantics, the Modernists, and moves on to the likes of Lowell, Roethke, Plath
and Sexton. Ghose’s poetry displays the rhythm of speech synchronizing in chorus
with controlled and formal versification. The subject matter too moves from exile,
nothing new, for nothing in the human condition has changed since Homer, or, if you
like, Rumi or for Ghose, India “was no country for princes” (Ghose 7). Manzoor
(2012) is of the view that sense of loss is pervasive in the poetic work of zulqar Ghose.
She concludes that demanding independence; he was forced and pushed to such place
that he seems to have become cynical observer. We find this loss of sense in his poems
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‘stranger’. Guns and ammunition thunder constitute the background of his poem like
‘The Attack on Sialkot.’ These types of studies of poetry of Ghose were made in a
specific context of post partition period which was marked by bloodshed, sense of loss
and displacement and no one has given any heed to the linguistic beauty of his poetry.
final verdict. It is an attempt to understand the poem from three different angles of
empathy among readers, which might be neglected by them. The analysis of the poem
delineates Gose’s versatile use of words and phrases, mastery in the art of portraying
the vivid picture of a beggar; make him alive for his readers. He has successfully
fulfilled the job of an expert artist, and detached observer. The poem is charged with
The review of his works suggests that there is the least work done in terms of his
poetry stylistically. Finding this gap, the researcher has taken his five poems which are
the researcher thinks it a very significant area beneficial for students and teachers of
English which merits attention in non-native contexts. Importantly, in the sense that it
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Chapter 03
RESEARCH METHODOLOGY
This chapter explains the methodology used for presenting the detailed
information about the research design. To begin with, it describes the type of research
and its nature. After that, the checklist of Leech and Mick short which is used as
referential tool for this study will be introduced in detail besides rationale of selecting
this model. Then, it highlights the role of researcher as a big tool in data analysis.
Using Leech and Short model- with little modification- as guiding tool, all the data
will be put into ‘data sheet’ designed to present the research data used in this study.
After integrating the frequency of data of every poem in ‘Frequency data sheet’
respectively, it will be explained what do they suggest and what can be the possible
explanation of it. At the end, implications of the study in terms of pedagogy will be
stated; a suggestive lesson plan will be presented as an example to show the efficacy of
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In this study, descriptive research has been applied. Descriptive research is
Bogdan and Biklen (1982; 28) says that qualitative research is, essentially,
descriptive. We collect data in the form of words or pictures. Usually, the result is
presented in the form of quotations taken from the data used in the study. Schohamy
(1989:124) says that descriptive research includes the method of collecting data to
Leech and short are the great stylisticians. In order to give stylistics a central
role in the study of literature, they propounded many models and methods. One of
them is Leech and Short checklist especially for studying fiction; however, it can be
used in studying poems chiefly blank verse or free verse type of poetic texts.
According to leach and short (1981:75-82) the checklists for these categories are
Let see them briefly as without explaining this checklist, we cannot see what
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Lexical categories include vocabulary. It is seen in lexical study if the
described in lexical structure, like noun, verb, adjective, and adverb. They are
-Nouns
ideas, or concepts. It can function as subject, objects of verbs, direct object of the verb,
and indirect object of the verb or object of preposition. It is discussed in relation with
noun: if the nouns are proper or common, abstract or concrete; and what is specific of
Adjectives
An adjective falls under the class whose members modify every parts of speech
except noun and pronoun. Adjectives answer what kinds of attributes they possess-
whether they are physical, visual, auditory, referential, emotive, and evaluative? In the
analysis of adjective, it can be seen what the degree of adjective is. The credibility,
positioning and structure can also be appreciated if they suggest some patterns.
Verb
describes actions, events and states. It can function as singular word, phrase; and there
can be many phrasal unit of verb phrase. It can have different categories: transitive,
intransitive, linking auxualry, dynamic and stative. Similarly, the significance of the
Adverb
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This category covers the kinds of meanings which adverb carries in showing
manners, place, direction frequency or degree. Adverb modifies verb, another adverb,
adjective, preposition and even the whole sentence. What semantic functions do they
perform? Similarly, it is also understood whether adverbs take place in the form of
includes clauses and their types; sentence types and their complexities. It also includes
phrases like noun phrase, verb phrase, adjective phrases adverb phrases as well as
word clauses.
Clause is vital part of the checklist. In this study, it is seen what types of
dependent clauses are favoured. These clauses are relative clauses, adverbial clauses,
different types of nominal clauses or non -finite clauses; and their specific significance
in the text.
Clause structure
In the analysis of clause structure, we have to see the elements of clause like
the frequency of objects, adverbials or the verbal elements –transitive and intransitive
verbs and so on. Then we have to figure out their effects in making some specific
meanings.
Sentences/line/stanzas
Seeing the pattern of sentence involves the analysis of three types of sentence.
They are simple sentence, complex sentence and compound sentence. In the
It is to be noted here that the terms- lines and stanzas are used in poetry instead
of sentences. Here, with little modification for the sake of the analysis of class
structure, the researcher treated the part of lines ending with full stop ‘.’ as one
sentence. Fundamentally, the selected poems are in blank verse mostly narrating
events of the history having no obvious deviation in terms of punctuation and have a
Noun phrases
In relation with phrases, we study they are simple or complex phrases. Where
their complexity does lie? The other things include pre modification by adjectives
noun etc. or post modifications by adjectives, nouns etc. coupled with sequence of
Verb phrases
We see in this analysis that if there is any significant departures from the use of
simple past tense? Similarly, occurrences of present, progressive and perfective aspect
and model auxiliaries are examined as well as their significance in terms of meanings.
Here, it is evaluated if there is anything to be said about other phrase types like
Word classes
After the analysis of major lexical word classes, we have to see ordinary minor
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interjections. We have to see in this analysis that these words have any particular use
When we make the analysis of figures of speech, we try to find how they are
foregrounded and what are the implied meanings of poet or an author in their use in
irregular or extra regular manners. In order to identify these features, we explore these
metonymy, syndoche and all other traditional figures of speech. Most importantly, as
opposite to the traditional studies in isolation, they are studied in the context of the
Cohesion
It is seen in the study of cohesion how the text is linked together-how one part of a
text is attached to another is taken into consideration under cohesion. It deals with the
inventory of logical as well as other links among sentences. It also answers the
Context
It simply means social relations between participants like author and reader
etc.; and their shared knowledge and assumption and so on. It is seen how external
reader response to the text whether it is through some fictional character or directly by
the reader. It also accounts for the linguistic clues expressing the relation between
addressor and addressee as well as the author intended attitude towards the subject.
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3.3 The validity of this model, rationale of it selection as well as modification
The researcher will use this checklist in the analysis of poems in a little bit
modified and simplified form following having observed the nature of the poems.
Similarly, lexical and syntactic structures and what do they suggest will be presented.
It is also seen what their relevance is in terms of interpretation. The researcher has
chosen this checklist model because it is very reliable and compact design of studying
literary texts.
artistic principles existing in writer‘s choice of language. All writers and all literary
texts have their individual characteristics. Therefore, the features seeking attention and
getting prominence in one text shall not necessarily significant in another text even by
the same author or a different one. There is not dependable technique for selecting
what is significant. We have to make ourselves aware of artistic effect and the
linguistic details constituting that effect every time we deal with a text. For this
purpose, Leech and Short prepare a checklist of features and list of questions which
can produce such a range of data which may be examined in relation to the literary
effect of each passage. This checklist enables us to collect data on fairly systematic
bases and very relevant for stylistic analysis. It is not exhaustive as it consists of good
bits.
The researcher has preferred this model as against the others is because
figurative language is abundantly used in the poems which are in free verse and mainly
researcher is supposed to be the planner, initiator, data collector, data planner, analyst
and data interpreter and reporter. Bogdan and Biklen (ibid: 27) says that qualitative
research has natural data. It is always useful to use qualitative design in a poem as it is
picture of the phenomenon under study as it takes place in natural settings. The
researcher chooses this method because there are some reasons: firstly, qualitative
method is open ended. The data would be in the form of sentences in which the
figurative language is used. The data in this research are gathered from the poems of
Ghose.
1. Following collecting the textual data of poems from text book of BS, the researcher
2. Following putting textual data in a data sheet identify the sentences in which
figurative language is used; and categorize it into different types and make the brief
explanation of it.
3. In the light of checklist, the lexical and syntactic structure of each sentence would
4. The researcher will analyze and interpret the figures of speech and lexico- syntactic
5. A suggestive lesson will be proposed for teachers and learners to help them opt for a
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6. At the end, conclusion would be drawn in the light of findings emerged from using
The sample of data sheet designed to present the data and its analysis are as under.
Lexical
Structure Lexical
Structure
Sim Mtp Per Mtn synd Syn Wrd Phr Cls Smp Cmx
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Note:
Chapter 04
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In this chapter, the data of poems has been presented. First of all, the data of
poems have been tabloid in the data sheet; and then the figures of speech are identified
in each poem included in the analysis sheet with brief individual explanation of each
figure of speech. Following this process, the frequency of data has been furnished in
frequency data sheet at the end of each poem. Further, the explanation of these
analyses is made to see if this data of figures of speech make any patterns so that the
as an example to show the efficacy of this type of linguistic based study of literature.
The five poems selected for this study are now presented for analysis after inserting
abbreviated symbols.
This is the list of abbreviated symbols used for the different figures of
speech in the table:
Sim: Simile Wrd: Word Cmp: complex
_Underline used for identifying figures of speech; T: denotes tick-s positive option
1. DECOMPOSITION
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Figurative Language Lexical Syntactic
Structure Structure
No. Sentence Explanation
Sim Mtp Per Mtn syn Wrd Phr Cls Smp Cmx Cmp
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S.no Sentences Figurative language Lexical Syntactic Explaination
structure structure
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Following identifying figurative language as well as lexico –syntactic structure, the
analysis and interpretation of data is given in the next part. It is used to show how
linguistic based analysis helps make the evaluation and interpretation of literary text.
For this purpose, a data sheet has been developed to show the frequency of figurative
language as well as lexico-syntactic structure.
1 simile 1 1 1 1
2 Metaphor 6 6 6 6
3 personification 1 (1) 1 1 1
total 8 8 8 8
The explanation of the data of the poem ‘the poem Decomposition is presented as
below:
Figurative language
In the poem ‘Decomposition’, the poet uses figurative language of three types:
simile, metaphor and personification. The data of metaphor are seven, simile two and
Metaphors
The most frequent use of figure of speech in this poem is metaphor. Metaphors used in
this poem can be categorized into two groups:
1. Cracks in the stone, veined into the stones, a fossil man.
2. Pavement trickster, composition, to compose art.
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The first category makes a unique pattern here. They all suggest pathetic and
miserable condition of the beggar. Cracked into the stone, veined into the stone have
relevance in turning him into a fossil man; - all these are implicitly related to the
have similar pattern yet suggesting opposite meanings related to the overall meanings
of poem. They are reflecting contrast in the poem while referring to composition-
namely standing for the well-off classes or apathetic people and spectators who have
no empathy and compassion for beggars and vulnerable section of the society.
Simile
The poet has used one simile in the poem. The simile ‘his shadow thrown like
blanket’ shows beggar being a common place thing, having no life and animacy in him
Personification
Like simile, we have one personification in the data which can also be called
humanizing metaphor. Brain-washed by the sun into exhaustion shows that nature
Now, we look and assess lexical and syntactic structure in which figurative language is
used.
1. The lexical structure of single simile ‘his shadow thrown like blanket’ used in the
above poem is NP. The poet uses complex sentence for this simile.
2. Among four metaphors- Cracks in the stone, veined into the stones, a fossil man,
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Pavement trickster, compose art- there are two NPS and two VPS implying
uniformity and equivalence in terms of meaning. The contrast in them strike balance at
the level of two sections of the society-Have and Have not- who are present in the
poem.
For all the figures of speech, the poet prefers to use complex sentence. This
To conclude, we can say that the poet has employed more metaphors in the poem
message more forcefully. He finds more variety and depth in imparting his thoughts
about the condition of beggar and apathy of well-off people. However, this is only a
tentative analysis giving only the subjective opinion of researcher. The aim of this
analysis is to give one form of opinion and opens it for further interaction and
interpretation as it is the main aim of applying the stylistic analysis to literary texts.
2. A POINT in METAPHYSICS
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timelessness
or the deceiving
impression
that the hour had
never struck or
that the past is
retrievable.
2 The two public Clocks,, the
clocks in Blauvac deceiving
express a two- impression” is an
minute difference adjective phrase
when sticking the personified. It is
hour, providing thus animistic metaphor
two minutes of too showing
timelessness or the Adj.P indefiniteness of
deceiving time and animacy
impression *2 puzzling to human
senses.
that the hour had
never struck or
sim mtp per mty syn wrd Phr. cls sim cmx cmp
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flies
plucking at strings of their
juice;
the bees, pursuing the
perfumed
air, turned from lavender to
thyme;
the hills, pipelined with
rows of vines,
were reservoirs for the sun’s
overflow that Provencal
noon.
4 Butterflies hung above the “As if pinned to needle”
flower-pots is a phrase showing
in their short, sharp VP(PP) directly the short sharp
movements movements of flies above
as if pinned to needle,*4 the flower pots. it is
the air quaking around them, connected by the
when connector “as.”
the first clock slowly struck
the hour;
fallen figs lay on the
roadside
like deflated balloons with
flies
plucking at strings of their
juice;
the bees, pursuing the
perfumed
air, turned from lavender to
thyme;
the hills, pipelined with
rows of vines,
were reservoirs for the sun’s
overflow that Provencal
noon.
*1 Line no.5 , P.115 i.a , *6, *7,*8
sim mtp per mty syn wrd phr Cls. cmx cmp
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5 Butterflies hung above the It is termed as
flower-pots personification and
in their short, sharp animistic metaphor either
movements T VP as quacking is giving +
as if pinned to needle, animacy to air which is –
the air quaking*5 around inanimate. It has been
them, when used to show the severity
the first clock slowly struck of air.
the hour;
fallen figs lay on the
roadside
like deflated balloons with
flies
plucking at strings of their
juice;
the bees, pursuing the
perfumed
air, turned from lavender to
thyme;
the hills, pipelined with
rows of vines,
were reservoirs for the sun’s
overflow that Provencal
noon.
6 Butterflies hung above the Fallen figs lay like
flower-pots deflated balloons is
in their short, sharp simile as it shows how the
movements figs lay on the roadside.
as if pinned to needle, “like” is the connector to
the air quaking around them, join this simile.
when Adj.P
the first clock slowly struck
the hour;
fallen figs lay on the
roadside
like deflated balloons*6
with flies
plucking at strings of their
juice;
the bees, pursuing the
perfumed
air, turned from lavender to
thyme;
the hills, pipelined with
rows of vines,
were reservoirs for the sun’s
overflow that Provencal
noon.
*1 Line no.5 , P.115 i.a , *6, *7,*8
s.no sentences Figurative language Lexical structur Syntactic Explaination
structure
sim mtp per mty syn wrd phr Cls. sim cmx cmp
7 Butterflies hung Flies,,pursuing the
above the flower- performed air is
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pots metaphor, since it
in their short, sharp reflects bees going
movements after flora having nice
as if pinned to smell.
needle,
the air quaking VP
around them, when (Adj.p)
the first clock slowly
struck the hour;
fallen figs lay on the
roadside
like deflated
balloons with flies
plucking at strings of
their juice;
the bees, pursuing
the perfumed*7
air, turned from
lavender to thyme;
the hills, pipelined
with rows of vines,
were reservoirs for
the sun’s
overflow that
Provencal noon.
8 Butterflies hung The hills pipelined
above the flower- with rows of vines
pots are a phrase in which
in their short, sharp word pipelined is
movements as if categorized as
printed to as if metaphor since it
pinned to needle, shows resemblance of
the air quaking the rows of vines and
around them, when their alignment and
the first clock slowly symmetry.
struck the hour; VP
fallen figs lay on the (pp) T
roadside (pp)
like deflated
balloons with flies
plucking at strings of
their juice;
the bees, pursuing
the perfumed
air, turned from
lavender to thyme;
the hills, pipelined
with rows of
vines,*8
were reservoirs for
the sun’s
overflow that
Provencal noon.
*1 Line no.5 , P.115 i.a , *6, *7,*8
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Sentences Figurative language Lexical Syntactic Explaination
structure structure
sim mtp per mty syn Wrd. Phr. cls sim cmx cmp
9 Butterflies hung “
above the flower-pots
in their short, sharp
movements as if
printed to as if pinned
to needle,
the air quaking
around them, when
the first clock slowly
struck the hour; Reservoirs for the
fallen figs lay on the sun’s overflow is a
roadside NP phrase classified as
like deflated balloons (pp) concrete metaphor as
with flies it shows storage of
plucking at strings of sun heat and energy
their juice; for all sort of
the bees, pursuing the vegetation observed at
perfumed that noon.
air, turned from
lavender to thyme;
the hills, pipelined
with rows of vines,
were reservoirs for
the sun’s
overflow that
Provencal noon.*9
10 And then the second Clock, tricking the
clock struck, VP consciousness into
tricking the (NP) thinking is
consciousness into (PP) personification and
thinking*10 that humanizing metaphor
nothing had happened giving animacy to
or that everything clock because of the
must happen consistency and
again and again and regularity.
again,
that the insects,
flowers and trees,
extracting one
another’s juices
in a common
dependence on
the earth, had a
timeless origin
or had begun now, at
this hour.
*1 Line no.5 , P.115 i.a , *6, *7,*8
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s.no Sentence Figurative language Syntactic Explaination
Lexical structure
structure
sim mtp per mty syn wrd Phr. Cls. sim cmx cmp
11 And then the second It is clause showing
clock struck, metaphoric
tricking the meanings since
consciousness into extracting one
thinking that another juices here
nothing had implies human
happened VP beings exploitation
or that everything (NP) of one another.
must happen
again and again and
again,
that the insects,
flowers and trees,
extracting one
another’s juices
*11
in a common
dependence on
the earth, had a
timeless origin
or had begun now,
at this hour.
After identifying figurative language as well as lexico –syntactic structure, the analysis
and interpretation of data is given in the next part. It is used to show how linguistic
based analysis helps make the evaluation and interpretation of literary text.
In the following table a data sheet has been developed to show the frequency of
figurative language as well as lexico-syntactic structure. The aim of this data sheet is
find out any patterning of figures of speech which is suggesting some interpretation.
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Figurative word phrase clause simple complex compound
language
1 simile 2 - 2 2 - 2
2 Metaphor 1 4 5 4 1 5
3 Personification 3 3 2 1 3
total 1 9 10 8 2 10
Simile
Pinned to needle, deflated balloon are different similes used for butterfly hung
and figs fallen on the road. But they suggest some patterns. They equally have the
We can likewise see two different lexical structures in the similes telling us the same
description.
There are same syntactic structures of complex sentence for both of them
Metaphors
In expressing profound philosophical abstract meanings, metaphor is the best
language resource. In order to describe the immeasurable concept of time, the poet
consciously seems to opt for them. Reservoirs of the suns overflow, pipelined with
rows of vines, insects extracting another juices, providing- all implying activities
done or going on. They all express that time is same as yesterday, only the activities
done or going on give you the impression that time has a cycle. However,
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philosophically and scientifically, it is same. Bee hung, bee pursuing, insects
Personification
personified phrases are interestingly describing the faulty impression made on our
ears. They are deliberately used by the poet in animate sense. In literal realm, these
phenomena are inanimate but in the context of this poem, they take on unique value.
We have four phrases one clause and one word. The dominate uses of verb
There are four compound sentences implying again that there is no cycle like thing-
The lexical and syntactic structures of personification imply variation that the
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1. POLITICAL SCIENCE
The identification of figurative language as well as its lexical and syntactic strcture of
the poem ‘POLITICAL SCIENCE’ is as follows:
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We must erect suggesting the
cunning’s dyke. challenging
Lords, nobles, circumstances and
leave me with the dire state of affairs
Brahmin in faced to Shivagi’s
privacy. Army.
We shall pray for
an end to our
troubles”.
*1 Line no.5 , P.115 i.a , *6, *7,*8
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S.No Sentences Figurative language Lexical structure Syntactic Explanations
structure
Sim Mtp Per Mty Syn word Phrase Clause sim Cmx Cmp
4 a war would be Erect cunning
short “as a swim in dyke is phrase
a tempestuous VP which is lexically
sea”, speaking a verb
(Adj.P)
phrase. It is
We must erect personification as
cunning’s animate feature has
dyke.*4 Lords, been given to dyke-
nobles, ditch, in figurative
sense which refers
leave me with the
to the proposed trap
Brahmin in
to get rid of Afzal
privacy.
Khan.
We shall pray for
an end to our
troubles”.
I shall embrace
him by the garden
wall
and resign my
will to the
Emperor.*5
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say we shall be
lovers if then we
meet.”
Sim Mtp Per Mty Syn Word Phrase Clause Sim Cmx Cmp
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Shivaji accepts
It represents his
weakness, then he is
wise.
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*1 Line no.5 , P.115 i.a , *6, *7,*8
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S.No Sentences Figurative language Lexical structure Syntactic Explaination
structure
Sim Mtp Per Mty Syn Word Phrase Clause Sim Cmx Cmp
12 If he agrees, we Embrace is
shall welcome categorized as
NP metaphor
his embrace.*12 suggesting
Say, sunset or gay agreement.
sunrise,
13 If he agrees, we
shall welcome
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crows.
When we embrace,
bosom to bosom
press.
sim mtp per mty syn wrd phr cls sim cmx cmp
When we embrace,
bosom to bosom
press.
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17 I shall sign a treaty On the stiff
with the tiger’s parchment of his
claws Prp.P T chest is metaphor
suggesting putting
on the stiff Prp,p
dagger into the chest
parchment of his of Afzal Khan.
chest.*17 The dark
Sin Mtp Per Mty Syn word Phrase Clause Sum Cmx Cmp
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20 They sprinkled The “soft” is
water on the lawns, metaphor used to
his walk show soft gait of of
Shivaji.
towards Afzal
Khan would be
soft:*20 he would
22 They sprinkled VP
water on the lawns,
his walk (Adj.p)
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air like a flower-
stalk
S.No
sim mtp per mty syn word phrase clause sim cmx cmp
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27 Frogs coughed VP It is metaphor
their silly (Adj,p) suggesting the
jokes.*27 hoarse cries of frogs.
28 Only Shivaji’s Burst again is
men behind the T metaphor standing
trees the trickling of the
noticed that what fast blood.
burst*28 was
Afzal Khan’s heart
and the short
cough of hate was
Shivaji’s
as he unscrolled
the flag of Afzal’s
shirt
29 Only Shivaji’s The short cough
men behind the (Adj.P) of hate is a phrase
trees (AdjP) standing for
noticed that what metaphorical
burst was Afzal meanings of all
Khan’s heart prejudice and
and the short aversion Shivaji had
cough of hate *29 for Afzal Khan.
was Shivaji’s
as he unscrolled
the flag of Afzal’s
shirt.
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S,no Sentences Figurative language Lexical structure Syntactic Explanation
structure
sim mtp per mty syn word phrase clause sim cmx cmp
30 With the gale- (Prp.P The gales a force of
forces of his )(Prep.P) his dagger point is
dagger’s metaphorical clause
point.*30 unfolding the force
In the court, the of poisonous dagger
Lords prayed, inserted into the
tapping the sticks heart.
of their throats at
their god. They
rose then to join
In praise of
Shivaji’s shrewd
sense of politics.
31 In the court, the VP It is phrase as
Lords prayed, metaphor showing
tapping the sticks (NP) resemblance of the
prayers which were
of their throats at (Pre,P)
made by Shivaji’s
their god.*31 disciples or
They rose then to subordinates to gods
join for success.
In praise of
Shivaji’s shrewd
sense of politics.
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*1 Line no.5 , P.115 i.a , *6, *7,*8
In the following table ,the frequency of the data of the poem ‘Political Science’ has been presented
to find out the any type of specific patterning, possibly suggesting some sort of interpretation.
1 simile 4 - 4 4 4
2 metaphor 22 (5) 22 3 13 6 22
3 personification 4 (4) 4 - 2 2 4
Total 28 (9) 30 3 19 8 30
Metaphor
Metaphor is again major tool for the poet to give vent to his feelings while
maneuvering. Metaphors here like other poems are used very consciously on important
places again orchestrating specific sense of meanings. Stealing bricks, embrace, with
tiger claws ,on the parchment of his chests ,glow worms of my men, gale forces of
dagger are aptly in tune with the theme of the poem and telling us the sequence of
events which cause this tragedy. They are the indirect expression of trickery, stabbing,
conspiracy, maneuvering to execute this horrendous act. There are many metaphors
which reveal ironical meanings. The metaphors like brotherly embrace, resign my will
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to emperor, embrace, with outstretched arms are lexis having pleasant sense of
emotions and feelings but they are ironically suggesting vice versa. They are
beautifully in harmony with the dubious political science-showing you are not meant
Similes
The poet like others poems have less use of similes as compared to metaphors.
We shall be lovers than we meet suggesting again irony, as swim in the tempestuous
sea is exaggeration stating the rival forces which have the power to end the war in
short span of time. His word we accept as that of rich hue in our faith suggesting
ironical meanings as context endorses that he does not accept his word, rather he stabs
him to death. He would sway in the air like flower stalk ironically suggesting the
politics which he was not really aiming it. Therefore, these similes having different
structure have been artfully used in the specific context of the poem, generating
Personification
As like the other poems, the poet has banked on personification as another
dyke has strong affinity with evening whispers, showing conspiracies and traditional
illicit whispering at the highest echelon of powers to do any heinous act. So there is
similarity and pragmatism in giving animate sense to these two inanimate entities.
Each tree will breathe showing the great numbers of his men hiding behind the trees.
The combination of these men to whispers and cunning maneuvering reinforce the
political trickery which causes success to Shiva Ji in political terms. So the words
which seem inanimate make robust animate sense in the context of this poem.
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Lexical and syntactic structure
In the lexical and syntactic structure, we have more adjective phrases. Adjective
does function as a modifier of noun and pronoun. We have more modifiers adjectives
in this poem seemingly used by the poet to highlight the features of political attributes
at work to crush the rival enemy in the guise of peace and reconciliation. The
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The identification of the figurative language of the poem ‘EGYPT’ with lexico-
4.Egypt
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come to drink from vulnerability.
the dry interior.
4 Egypt is straw to Beasts come to
the sun’s flame, its drink from the dry
monuments I.C T interior is simile
are slipping into the
which shows the
floodwaters like
beasts comparison of
come to drink mountains slipping
from the dry into the flood of
interior.*4 water- may be,
because of their
manner of
displacement.
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s.no
sentences
Figurative language Lexical structure Syntactic Explanation
structure
sim mtp per mty syn word phrase clause sim cmx cmp
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smelling these huge
darkness, monuments.
mummified,
perfect as
butterfly
specimens:
the more
advanced a
civilization,
the subtler the
refinement of
vanity.
sim mtp per mty syn word phrase clause sim cmx cmp
7 Cranes, absurd “King might lie
as science entombed..” is
fiction personification as
creatures, stand here the dead
VP N.C
kings are
where slaves supposed to lie as
(Adj.P)
once tore their per their dogma
muscles so that in these huge
kings tombs.
might lie
entombed in
cool,*7 musk-
smelling
darkness,
mummified,
perfect as
butterfly
specimens:
the more
advanced a
civilization,
the subtler the
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refinement of
vanity.
8 Cranes, absurd
as science
fiction Adj.P It is metaphor
creatures, stand used to show bad
where slaves odor prevailing in
once tore their the darkness of
muscles so that these tombs.
kings
might lie
entombed in
cool, musk-
smelling
darkness8,
mummified,
perfect as
butterfly
specimens:
the more
advanced a
civilization,
the subtler the
refinement of
vanity.
*1 Line no.5 , P.115 i.a , *6, *7,*8
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specimens:*9 mummified.
the more advanced a
civilization,
the subtler the
refinement of vanity.
10 Cranes, absurd as It is
science fiction metaphor
creatures, stand “The
where slaves once NP subtler the
tore their muscles so refinement
that kingsmight lie (PP) of
entombed in cool, refinement
musk-smelling ” is giving
darkness,mummified
, perfect as butterfly as concrete
specimens: image of
variety.
the more advanced a
civilization,the
subtler the
refinement of
vanity. *10
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country’s
blood.The
concrete lifts
its pharaoh
head abovethe
people in
Cairo,
compelling
submission to
the hours of
work. They
sky is a scrap
of iron.
The concrete
lifts its
pharaoh head
abovethe
people in
Cairo,
compelling
submission to
the hours of
work. They
sky is a scrap
of iron.
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*1 Line no.5 , P.115 i.a , *6, *7,*
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sno Figurative Lexical structure Syntactic
language structure
sentences Explaination
sim mtp per mty syn word phrase clause sim cmx cmp
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submission agriculture.
to the hours of
work. The sky
is a scrap of
iron.
__------------------------------------------------
sim mtp per mty syn word phrase clause sim cmx cmp
to the hours of
work. The sky is
a scrap of iron.
Second hand
vision records
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Egypt myths
Endure. The
same old Egypt
contracts like
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s.no Sentences Figurative language Lexical structure Syntactic Explanation
structure
sim mtp per mty syn word phrase clause sim cmx cmp
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*1 Line no.5 , P.115 i.a , *6, *7,*
In the following table, a data sheetof the frequency of figurative language as well as lexico-
syntactic structure of the poem ‘EGYPT’ is presented to find out the possible interpretation of
the patterns in the poem.
1 Simile - 5 - 5 1 4 - 5
2 Metaphor - 10 10 1 9 - 10
3 Personification 3 (3) 1 2 - 3
4 Syndoche - 1 1 1 - - 1
5 Metonymy 1 - 1 1 - - 1
Total 20 (3) 17 5 15 19
The findings of the poem ‘Egypt’ and the explanation of the frequency of figures of
speech in it are presented as follows:
Metaphors
In this poem metaphors, straw to sun flame, tore their muscles, old, sun wearied earth,
transfusions from the Nile waters, the bank of country blood, the sky scrap of iron, Egypt
contracts show old and present life of Egypt. Tear their muscles stands for the hard grinding
labor put into by the slave in erecting the tombs for kings so that they could get a decent burial,
after their death. Transfusion from the Nile and water being the bank of country blood stand
for the agriculture banking on traditional river Nile is another dimension of life. The sky scrap
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of iron, contracting, stand for the degenerated state of Egypt which was once famous for its
grandeurs and magnificent civilization.
Simile
Perfect as butterfly specimen, absurd as science fiction creatures, diffused image of the sun,
and contract like the dried figs are similes clearly and precisely standing the life of Egypt
which was degenerating and deteriorating in the opinion of the poet.
Personification
The concrete lifts its pharaoh’s gives animacy to tombs as like animate creature, pharaohs
construct them to make themselves immortal.
In this poem, there are seventeen complex sentences and no independent sentence which show
interdependent life structure of Egypt taking its value and self- sufficiency from other
elements. In the same way NPS and PPS were nicely balanced by VPS and ADJ Phrases. In
this balancing, the poet seems to suggest that he has tried to explore the old and new facets of
Egypt life by wearing the neutral spectacles.
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The identifcation of figurative language and its lexical and syntactic structure of the poem
‘ATTACK ON SIALKOT’ is as under:
1 Grandfather, eighty
now, his pilgrimage
advertising my
patient secularism
he sat in the
courtyard of a
mosque, still It is termed as
metaphor as
as a poster against the advertising my
whitewashed wall patient secularism
has been used to
in my mohair suit and show resemblance
corduroy hat, of what his wearing
reflecting.
advertising *2 my
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patient secularism.
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sno sentences Explaination
Syntactic
Figurative language Lexical structure structure
sim mtp per mty syn word phrase clause sim cmx cmp
advertising my
patient secularism*3 Adj.P
in the intruding
heresy of tanks.
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*1 Line no.5 , P.115 i.a , *6, *7,*
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s.no Sentences Figurative language Lexical structure Syntactic Explaination
structure
sim mtp per mty syn wrd Phr. clause sim cmx cmp
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s.no Figurative language Syntactic Explaination
Sentences Lexical structure structure
sim mtp per mty syn wrd Phr. Cls. sim cmx cmp
8 I see that arrow still: N.C Arrow still aimed
aimed at at grandfather is
grandfather.*8 metaphorically and
symbolically
suggesting the life
threatening dangers
and destruction
faced to grandfather
and Sialkot.
the holy
direction,*10 the one
truth he knew.
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*1 Line no.5 , P.115 i.a , *6, *7,*
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S.no Figurative language Lexical structure Syntactic Explaination
structure
sentences
sim mtp per mty syn wrd Phr. Cls. sim cmx cmp
Grandfather, the
landmarks are falling,
which
Grandfather, the
landmarks are falling,
which
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Stubborn as a child,
while
sim mtp per mty syn wrd Phr. Cls. sim cmx cmp
I religion is irrelevant
to grief:
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you will not agree, nor
will Pakistan
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Figurative Syntactic
language structure
s.no sentence Lexical structure Explanation
sim mtp per mty syn wrd phr cls sim cmx cmp
As like above, the data sheet of the frequency of figurative language along with lexical and
syntactic structure is presented here in the table along with interpretation to check any
possible patterning, emerging from this frequency.
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The frequency of categories of figurative language as well as lexico-syntactic structures of
the poem ‘Attack On Sialkot’
1 simile - 4 - 5 1 1 2 4
2 Metaphor 2 9 1 12 3 7 2 12
3 Personification 1 - 1 - 1 - 1
total 14 1 6 4 9 4 17
Simile
Mosque still as poster, Islam fragile as china; Islam stubborn as child; are similes
which simply state direct and precise comparison. Here the comparison is quite
precisely explicit in terms of meanings. All the similes used in this poem state that
faith based on bigotry, devoid of reason and expediency is wrong type of strategy -
vulnerable against the challenges of anti-Islamic forces. Therefore, the aim of the use
of similes explicitly reveal that the poet has clear cut views against the preparation and
so called beliefs of local Muslims in the face of war taking place in Sialkot.
Metaphors
All the metaphors used in the poem are consciously used. They have religious
connotations. Earthen pot faith; grandfather breast plate of Islam, a child’s pudding
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plat; in massive pilgrimage; bloodier than the sacrifice of goats at the end of
Ramadan, pork, Islamic pride- all these metaphors have religious implications. They
imply the war that is causing hell upon the land of Sialkot is the offshoot of religious
animosity, existing between two nations after partition. All this suggest compact
relevance with the main metaphor Sialkot kiln of fire; and globally with the title of the
poem ‘The Attack on the Sialkot’. The predominant use of metaphors can open the
Personification
may have profound meaning; the poet wants to show that his secularism has
ideologically better choice than the fierce overall pervasive fanaticism which has
Lexical structure
The structure, he uses for these figures of speech is very interesting to analyze. The
poet has used eight NPS and Adj.p respectively. There are five PPPs. However, he
does not use single VP for these figures of speech. He wants to show no change or hint
Syntactic structure
The majority of sentences are complex which are seven in numbers. Whereas, there are
three simple and four compound sentences equalizing complex sentences in their sum.
Ghose has used figurative language in his poems to make his work memorable and
worth remembering. Mostly, he used metaphors to express his philosophical thoughts.
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4.2 Teaching Implications of This Analysis
In this chapter, research findings are presented founded on research objectives. The
research objectives are: To find out and explain the figures of speech in Ghose’s
poems; to pinpoint how Ghose’s poems reflect lexical and syntactic structure in which
The aim of this analysis was to demonstrate and sought to show that how poetic texts
can be used to enhance the capacity of language learning of students in the English
class rooms by engaging them with meaningful texts. It would lead them to become
According to Hill, literature is language in action, a focal point, a living context for
learners in their efforts to communicate. It suggests that literary texts are rich in
topics, registers and styles and they can ignite class room discussions by opening
linguistic activities was found very handy for students and teachers of Kashmir and
on with the poems is learners centered. Learners were encouraged to analyze the
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useful motivation and opportunity for learners to delve deep in learning process. It
Figurative language is deeply entrenched in literacy texts to express deep felt and
subjective opinion. Its presence is so dominant in the texts that it creates massive
problems for native learners in general and non-natives in particular. Therefore, the
teaching based stylistic model presented above is very useful and interesting for all
levels of language teaching. It can develop the taste, personal growth and imaginative
abilities of the students. Half the work is done in the understanding of literacy text if it
in non-native environment.
It is worth noting that the figurative language can be explained and interpreted in better
way, when we study it as a part of coherent work as proposed here rather than
valuable linguistic inventory for interpretation and opening it for valuable interaction
and evaluation.
teacher wants to improve the lexical and syntactic knowledge as done in the analysis,
he could encourage the students to notice this in the poem. If he wants to improve their
knowledge of clauses, he can ask them to see it in the sentences of poems. Stylistics as
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language learners who are motivated to improve their proficiency by involving them in
There is another advantage of ownership. If students use literary texts in the class
rooms in interactive manners, they would feel that they have made personal investment
and it is more likely they may use it for extending personal understanding by further
reading it at home. Language based approaches to literature makes the texts more
accessible for students engaging them in collaborative activities that are learners
centred.
The above analysis and models suggest that poetic texts can be used profitably if
The course designers and scholars should consider that literature must be taught by
using different pedagogical approach for non-native speakers. In our country literature
is reduced to content based learning. The texts books contain material where focus is
It has already been discussed there is no room for the traditional exercises mentioned
in the above analyses of the poems. Therefore students fail to use the information for
their own interpretations. They have no analytical and creative abilities and mere
reduced to be reproducers. So, in EFL context like us, the teachers direct them to
literary text to reproduce or summarize and so on; and they have no chance of
analyzing the texts lexically, phonologically and syntactically in order to reach the
meaning of it. Therefore, it is best way to engage the students by using stylistic
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analysis of literature especially poetic text for the acquisition of linguistic knowledge
of foreign language.
In order to further demonstrate the benefits of using stylistic based model for the
teaching of literature, a teaching model was suggested. It shows how a teacher can
The main aim of this suggestive lesson is to demonstrate chiefly the model of stylistic
analysis of poetic text which can be handy for teaching literature in non-native
context. The model lesson here is intended for BS students of English language. Many
poetry with complex lexical and syntactic structure. The poem taken for this
suggestive lesson is one of the poems of Ghose selected for this particular study. The
suggestive activities are based chiefly on this particular model of study which the
researcher has undertaken for this particular wok. It is believed that these sorts of
stylistic based models of teaching make the students to interact and work with the
text individually without referring to external resources outside the literary text.
Being the teacher of English language and literature, the researcher himself applied
this model and found it very effective and useful. However, it is one tentative
example; other activities based on different level of stylistic analysis may also be
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Teaching of “Decomposition”
By TIME.1hour
Level: BS
The main objective of this stage is to elicit from learners the real literary experience
of the main theme and the context of the texts. The teacher after initial greeting may
1. What is composition?
2. What is decomposition?
3. What does the picture of poem suggests? (Showing the picture of a beggar lying on
the pavement)
4. What do you anticipate to come across when you read the poem?
Stage 2
Presentation stage
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1. In this stage, learners would be exposed to the original text through reading and
listening focusing on the specific content of the text. It is advisable that they do listen
the text two or three times keenly and then read it silently again and again to get
2. Then, the text is given to them for close reading. It is expedient that teacher reads
out the text with full rhythm and intonation and then asks one or two students to
Teacher gives them samples of data sheet of Figurative Language and asks questions
to each student. He may execute this activity in group work, pair work or individually.
Lexical Syntactic
Structure Structure
Sim Mtp Per Mtn Par Hyp Syn Wrd Phr Cls Smp Cmx
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2
Note:
Cls: clause
Simp; Simple
per : Personification
Mtn : Metonymy
Par : Paradox
Hyp : Hyperbole
Ironic, satiric
Formal informal
Forceful, vigorous
Rhythmic, eurythmic,
3. Audience
5. Technique of development
6. Emotion or sentiment
7. Diction
How many words are euphony (having pleasing sounds) or cacophony (harsh sounds)
in the poem?
Colloquial
Humorous
Formal
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Aggressive
Pensive
Earnestness
All these above activities are text based and student centered. They involve the
students in the literary text individually and independently. Students are not supposed
to read the analysis of critics or expect from the teachers the interpretation of the text;
rather they work with the poem freely. Resultantly, it does not only enhance their
consciousness of the unique pattern of poetic language but also make them suggesting
To sum up, it is important to mention that teacher should give orientation and
Chapter 5
CONCLUSION
5.1 Findings
The focus of this study was stylistic analysis of figurative language in Zulfiquar
Ghose’s poems to demonstrate a better pedagogic approach to teach English literature
in non-native teaching context. This study proves that stylistic based approach to teach
literature is more robust and effective in improving the language skills of students. It
helps convert them active into interactive learners- a practice which is in harmony with
modern pedagogy.
The great aim of practicing this model as an example is to give stylistic based analysis,
a due place in the context of foreign language learning. However, the question
remains, whose responsibility is to sensitize students to the literary texts. To me, it
involves teachers, academics, educationists and linguistics and policy makers to
determine the place of stylistics in the curriculum keeping in view the national
objectives of teaching target language. In fact, stylistic model is the best suited in EFL
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environment like ours. Therefore, measures have to be taken to ensure that the teachers
are trained; and programs be devised to accommodate the practice of stylistics in
pedagogical context.
This model, as against traditional model of teaching figurative language in poetry is
based on variety of linguistic activities, would be very handy for students and teachers
of Kashmir and Pakistan. It is learners centered and encouraged analyzing the poems
grammatically, lexically and syntactically. Therefore, this stylistic model creates useful
motivation and opportunity for learners to explore deep in learning process which is
enjoyable, involving and meaningful.
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1. It is job of the course designer that in selecting the literature especially poetic texts,
they should be very careful. Old poetic texts should be avoided. Poetic texts should be
interesting and taken from the contemporary literature for common language students
by keeping their age, taste, needs, level and abilities. Thus, they can be a source to
contribute their language proficiency and personal discovery.
2. Activities should be incorporated in the text books which promote students response
and interaction with the text and lead them explore all the resources that a text offers.
3. Teachers of language and literature should be trained in stylistics so that they can
understand the language pedagogy and apply it in better way.
Same study can be revised on different level or with other works where there is similar
background.
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7. APPENDICES
1-A Decomposition
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2. B point in Metaphysics
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22. plucking at strings of their juice;
2- Political Science
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determined Shivaji, the insurgent
king of Marathas. Below the fortress,
Afzal Khan encamped with ten thousand men.
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Trumpets rang through the halls of Shivaji’s court,
the Generals assembled for his speech.
“Afzal Khan has agreed to come; his escort
will be two officers. Thus, I shall reach,
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4-D Egypt
3- Descending towards, Cairo, an arid land,
4- is like a misted mirror, its haze the diffused image of the sun, Egypt is
5- Straw to the sun’s flame, its monuments are slipping into the flood water
6- Like beasts come to drink from the dry interior.
7-
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5-E The Attack on Sialkot
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the holy direction, the one truth he knew.
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