Chapter I

Add more sa background, at least 5 pages. You can have yung mga nilagay nyo sa conceptual sa
background. Di napansin na konti yung background before coz of the pictures. And if ever lacking or u
want a sequence. Pwede the theory tapos the area of coverage ang sabihin nyo as inspiration for the
study.

e.g.

garbage problem ( topic/theory) tapos globally papuntang local.

Conceptual framework – di ba ang conceptual is how we use the variables we have and merge them
together at ano magiging output at what iinterpret ng output via our prototype ang content nung. I
think yung variables na yun such as the parts of the boat to fabrication to data gathering to
interpretation ang laman ng conceptual. Kaya nasabi ko din yung idea na pwede nyo imove mga nalagay
sa conceptual na di nagcocomply sa mga sinabi ko as our conceptual

Statement of the problem:

Dapat may each process sa methodology na sasagot sa statement natin

Per paragraph sa conclusion/interpretation aang sagot

e.g.

1 brief paragraph for questions 1 and 2

Tapos another for question number 3

Tapos sa statement of the problem madederive mga hypothesis

e.g.

Ho: the solar panel increases the operating time of the skimmer boat

Ha: the solar panels DOES NOT increase the operating time of the skimmer boat

Ho: there is a significant effect of trash to the speed of the skimmer boat

Ha: there is no significant effect of trash to the speed of the skimmer boat

Contents of research paradigm not contented pero if di puna ng panelist un then I guess its ok

Operational definition of terms

At least 10
Nag palit ang chapter 2 at 3?

Chapter II

Research design: u have mentioned the focus part

I think we should focus more on the performance of the boat such as the duration of the operation with
or without panel

Tapos effect nung trash sa speed

So gaano kabilis yung boat with and without trash

Yung data dun yung ma-ttest

Hypotheses. Please revise it

There is no significant difference. The battery cannot

power the boat motor.
There is a significant difference. The battery can
power the boat motor with solar panel.

Restate these please. Dapat isang statement lang ang Ho at Ha and focus nga dun sa research problems

Padagdag yung RRL since dapat madagdagan yung background

Mas madami dapat RRl

Block diagram

Use flow chart symbols please. And properly

Figures- place captions

e.g.
Figure 1. Isometric View of the Skimmer Boat

Operations of prototype

Should be in sequence

T test results. No need for screen shots

U can include it sa table na yung p value average and results

Results – irerestate nyo lang kung alin inintrepret ng ttest

Eg. Kung ang lumabas would be favorable sa Ho for question 1

Then ang sagot natin sa part na yun is “the solar panel increases the operating time of the skimmer
boat” which is galling sa hypothesis na dinerive natin.” Magiging basis din ito for chapter 5

Chapter 5\

And we can simply answer I think questions 1 and 2 in one statement

How long will it take to discharge a fully charged battery with the solar panel

connected, and while the motor is operating?

The average time to discharge of a fully charged battery and with a solar panel connected

is 189 minutes.

How long will it take to discharge a fully charged battery without the solar panel

connected, and while the motor is operating?

The average time to discharge of a fully charged battery and with a solar panel

connected is 166.3 minutes.

Pwede nyo sabihin na. kasi na:

The solar panel increases the operating time of the sklimmer boat. The average time to

discharge of a fully charged battery and with a solar panel connected is 189 minutes while

it takes an average time to discharge of a fully charged battery and with a solar panel

connected in 166.3 minutes.

So example lang to aa. Please check our data for the appropriate interpretation

Same goes with the last problem

What could be the effects of the trash collected to the speed of the skimmer boat?
there is a significant effect of trash to the speed of the skimmer boat. The average time of the
skimmer boat to reach 10 meters with trash in basket is 104 seconds. And without trash
in the basket has an average time of 83.5 seconds. Having this results, the speed of the
boat decreased due to the drag committed by the trash in the basket.

Then draw conclusions from here.

P.S.

Lets do this well. One last push guys. Redefense pala tayo. Wasn’t able to convince all
our panelist sa dina redefense. I hope u get what I want to say. Thank you and good
luck