Jessica Robles

Professer Batty

English 101

25 May 2019

Reflection

I revised my essay on college athletes. My main topic and thesis I wanted to get out there is

why college students are failing academically and the help they aren't getting. The feedback I

got is to not leave your topic sentence and thesis as a question which was the first thing I took

out. Doing this I thought how I can turn my question into a sentence. My paragraphs and MLA

weren't organized in my first essay as well. I took a few sentences out that I think now made no

sense reading back on it. As well as my grammar I caught the mistakes and worded it out better

and more professional. Doing this reflection essay helped me realize all final drafts aren't the

best we can do. It helped me catch my mistakes and getting feedback helped me see what

other readers would notice. I know now to always read over my final draft till I think it’s perfect

and always try to get feedback from as much people I can.