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Script

Group 3

Tragic Comedy

“Fear Diary”
Scene 1:

Dear diary!

I want to tell you about my friends. They are:

1. Samara

She is a woman who is firm and has a strong character. She is a child who loved to argue with her
mother. If there is a problem, surely She immediately comes to my house, it is very disturb me.

2. Fanny

This jolly girl is very noisy, but kind. Which she didn't know, that her family was on the verge of collapse
because her father is having an affair with another woman. sssstttt don't tell anyone about this..

3. Hermosa

This man, eh wait he's a man right? hehe. He really more noisy than Fanny. And sometimes his attitude
is very excessive. disgusting.

4. Justin

He is a cool guy who thinks he has everything. But he will lose it soon. Why doesn't he realize it too? It
was because he never cared about what happen in surround him.

5. Kelly

She is very fond of music. But sometimes she is rather happy to be alone by using that "item"

I also have a very good boyfriend, his name is Brad, a Singaporean. Lately, sometimes I feel like
someone is following or just watching me from the distance. But maybe it's just my fan, haha.

Hopefully tomorrow will be a fun day too.

Best Regards

Sydney

{Sydney, Samara, Fany, Kelly, Hermosa and Justin}

Sydney: “Look guys! I’ve got a new bag from Brad. After we’ve spent our holiday in
Singapore.”

Hermosa: “Is it an original or nahh?

Kelly: “Mmmm or is it an imitation? Isn’t?” (All of them laugh simultaneously)

Brad : “It’s an original one of course, fyi I bought it for more 5 millions.

Justin : “I think it’s 50 thousands only”.


Sydney : “Ohhh man, It’s an original one. We bought it from Singapore, you know
Singapore?”

Hermosa : “Ohhh please guys, stop discuss it!

(In the campus)

Michelle:” Hi Rachel! How’s your holiday?”

Rachel: “Hi Michelle! Mmm.. You know my holiday is flat as usual.”

Michelle: “Oh come on. There must be something interesting! How’s about your crush,
baby?”

Hermosa: “Ooh please... don’t talk about it anymore!”

(Rachel and Michelle are passing)

Fany : “Hayyyy Michelle, Rachel, where did you guys spend your holiday?”

Rachel : “Why? It’s not your business right?” (She said with scared)

Sydney : “Look at her, you’re just a poor girl who is pretending be a beautiful one!”

Michelle : “Sorry, we don’t have any problems with you! We just want to sit down and study
now!”

Hermosa : “Ehhh, stopppp! (He blocks their way)”

Kelly : “Come on, we have to talk you some manners! (She pushes them to the wall and start
to scolds them)

Justin : “Ssstttt, Mam Bogel is coming, guys”

(Mam teaches about grammar)

Bogel kas masuk materi yang se mau ajar sdah.

Sampe se tutup pelajaran atau cuma kasih tugas sa ka.

Rachel: "Why are they so happy to disturb us?"

Michelle: "I don't know, Rachel"

Rachel: "What is their problem? It really sucks."

Michelle: "Come on, let's go home."

Scene 2:

(Sydney’s house)

Samara: “Sydney! Excuse me! Sydney!”

Sydney:”Yes. Please come in”


Fanny: “Hi Sydney!”

Kelly:”Hi Sydney”

Justin & Hermosa: “Hi, we are here!”

Sydney: “What’s our planning today, guys?”

Justin:” Let’s go watch movie!”

Brad: “Its so boring! We’re too often watch movie”

Hermosa:”Hmm yah and then there are no good movies this week”

Kelly: “Just go party! And we gonna have a lot of fun. Uhuu”

All of them: “Let’s go!”

{At the club}

{DJ Play}

Sydney: “Yeay! We’re in the club right now”

Brad: (embrace her) “We’re gonna rock, enjoy it”

Sydney: “Yah, of course honey!”

Samara: “ Let’s go take a picture together!”

Fanny: “Yeah, this is the best day of my life”

Hermosa: “ Uhuuu. Let’s dance!”

Tory: “I have to go home now.”

Justin: “Let me ride you home.”

Tory: “No, I have ordered Grab”

Justin:” Are you sure?”

Tory:”Yeah. Bye-bye”

Justin: “Take care”

{Kelly at the back}

Kelly: {Using drug by inject herself but someone saw her}

Hermosa: “Justin is really cool, he is so care and kind.”

Sydney: “Really? I doubt that”

*Brad just stroking his girlfriend hair.


Kelly: "Hey, wake up! He already has a girlfriend."

Hermosa: "It's just a girlfriend not a wife"

Kelly: "Whatever"

{When Kelly is walking back to her home, suddenly someone with a black hood stops her}

Kelly: “Who are you? What do you want?”

{The black hood directly stabbed her to death}

Black hood: “It is revenge for what you did to me! That’s what I want.”

Dear diary!

See? Kelly is a very bad drug user. She thinks


nobody knows. but I see it, I also don't know why
She is like that but I'm not sure I have to say it to
others or not.

Sydney

Scene 3

{At Pasir Putih cafe}

Rachel: “Excuse me, we want to order.”

Waiters: “Yes, Miss. Here’s the menu, what do you want to order?.”

Michelle:” 2 glasses of iced choco oreo and a plate of toasted bread.”

Waiters: “Okay please wait a minute, Miss”

Rachel: “Thank you”

{Tory and Fanny’s father come}

Tory:”Dear, I want something. It’s brand new!”

Fanny’s dad: “What is that?

Tory: “I-phone XS dear, I want it”

Fanny’s dad: “It’s a piece of cake. I’ll get it for you”

Tory: “Thank you so much. And I need some money too”

Fanny’s dad : “Anything you want, I will give it.”

{Suddenly, Fanny’s mom comes and screaming very angry}

Fanny’s mom: “So, this is what you did? Cheating with a young woman?"
fanny's dad: "Hey calm down first, this is a public place!"

Fanny's Mom: "Let it be! Let everyone knows that she is a woman who destroys people's
relationships!" * While pointing at Tory's face.

Tory: "Don't be pathetic, huh! Your husband wants to be with me because maybe his wife
isn't as beautiful as before!"

Fanny's mom: "What are you saying?" * She wants to slaps Tory but Tory dodges and the one
who gets hitted is her husband.

Fanny's dad: "Aww! It hurts so bad"

fanny's mom: "Let's go home now!"

* The husband and wife go home and Tory also leaves the cafe annoyed.

Tory: "I'm so unlucky today! I haven't even received the money, huh!

Michelle: "Wow. This is a very, very much drama."

Rachel: "Yes. I think it's only on TV but I can see it now."

{Now they are all leaving the cafe}

{Hermosa, Justin, Kelly, Fanny, Tory came to the cafe at the same time as the news of
Samara's death from TV news on the television}

Reporter news: “The body of a woman named 'Kelly Hudson' was found at Sunny Club last
night. It was reported that this was a murder that had no motives and unknown murderer.

That’s a few reports from me, thank you”

Fanny: “Is that samara? Our friend?”

Tory: “Yeah. I’ve heard her name is Samara Hudson, right? What happened last night, Justin?

Justin: “I don’t know. I think I saw her went home”

Hermosa: “This is really bad! Our friend is dead”

Scene 4:

{Sydney home}

Brad : “Excuse me, mom! Good evening!”

Sydney mom : “Oh, good evening Brad! Sydney,come here. Brad is coming!”

Sydney : “Ok mom.”

Sydney sister : “Sydney, we have to go to uncle Sam’s house, because his wife is in the
hospital so he asks us to takes care of their children.”

Sydney :”Oh poor, uncle Sam. I hope his wife is getting better.”
Sydney’s mom :“But can you stay here all alone, dear?”

Sydney : “Yes mom. I can take care of my self”

Sydney’s sister : “She is not a child anymore.”

Sydney :“Yap, just count on me.”

Adelai : “Hi bro! You look good.”

Brad : “ Well, thanks.”

Sydney’s mom : “Sydney, Brad, we have to go now. I hope you’re alright.”

Sydney sister : “Yeah. We will be back tomorrow morning. Maybe around at 11 a.m.”

Sydney : “Okay, see you. Be careful!” {hugs her mother and sister}

Brad : “Bye! Be careful! Ah, this is a special present for a special lady.”

Sydney : “Woah, thank you honeyy!” {hugs brad}

Brad : “But, I am so sorry. I have to go home now.”

Sydney : “Yeah, you have to. Bye! Text me when you’re arrive.”

Brad : Bye!

{Sydney’s room}

Sydney: {Opens the present from Brad} Oh my god! This is a really pretty dress. Brad is so
romantic!”

{Black hood person enters the house with a knife in his hand. Tries to finds the right time to
kills Sydney. When Sydney tries to takes off her clothes, someone stabs her in the back
repeatedly so she was unconscious and died}

Black hood: “It will be your death gown.”

{Before he leaves the house he sees a book that interests him to opens it, and he smirks as a
sign, it makes him really happy}

It turns out that she wrote a diary with very interesting story. Tells someone's weaknesses and
secrets. But acting good in front of all of them, hypocrite! Well, let’s check who is the next
target”

*make a cross in a photo of Sydney and Kelly in the diary. And start to continue the content
of the diary.

Fear Diary.

Two more down. I have killed them. I am an evil? No I’ve just


killed some evils. See you in the hell guys.

Black hood killer

Scene 5
{Sydney’s house)

Sydney’s mom: “Sydney, we are home!”

Adelia : “Sydney! Can I come in?” {knocks her door} {still knocks} Why don’t you
answer me? I will come in now. Aaaaaaaa ! What is happening here?“ {crying}

Sydney’s mom: “Why do you so noisy, Adelia?”

Adelia : “Look, mom! Sydney, Sydney! Hiks, hiks”

Sydney’s mom: “Oh my god! (crying) Oh my dear, Sydney. My sweet honey. Who did this to
you?”

Adelia : “I don’t know, mom. I will call the police.”

{Police, forensic team is coming}

Police 1 : “Excuse me, mam. We want to ask several questions.”

Police 2 : “Yeah. When were you when this thing happened?”

Sydney’s mom: “We’re just arrived from our relatives home this morning and saw her like
this.”

Adelia : “ Yes sir. I do confuse why my sister is in this condition,”

Police 2: “Do you know maybe she has a problem with someone?”

Sydney’s mom: “No, of course not. She is a good girl.”

Adelia : “But I think I know someone who was with my sister last time.”

Police 1: “Who is that?”

Adelia : “It’s Brad. Her boyfriend!”

Police 2: “I will find him!”

Police 1: “Forensic team, please report.”

Forensic team 1: “Ok sir. Based on the stiffness level of this body is shown her death time
was at 11 p.m. But sir we find this” {shows the bracelet}

Police 1: “what is this? This is really odd. Or this is a kind of clue.”

Forensic team 2: “So, sir, as a result of our inspection, the victim was stabbed using a knife
for 4 times and the death caused by the victim's blood loss. However, the evidence of sharp
weapons was not found around the victim's house, sir. "”

Police 1:”Yes I got it. Thank you, sir.”

{Reporter from news TV shown up}

Reporter Diana: “Alright, lad and gents. Now, I am in the crime scene. Where a student is
being murdered in her house. Now, we want to know what is the progress of this case.

Sir, do you already know who is the suspect?

Police 1: “No, not yet. But we keep on the investigation.”


Reporter Diana: “But do you have some suspects that might be behind this case?

Police 1: “Yes, my team is looking for the suspect”

Diana: “Okay lad and gents. Don’t change your channel. Because we will give the update
information for you soon.”

Reporter Diana: “Hmm Rika, I think something is wrong with this case.

(Cameraman) Rika : "What do you mean?"

Diana : "The forensic team said that there were 4 stab marks on the victim's body."

{Finds something that hold by the Forensic team}

Diana : “What is that, sir?”

Forensic team 1: “This is a bracelet found in the crime scen,e mam. Excuse me.”

Diana : “The bracelet was in crime scene? Maybe it’s her accessory or maybe not!

Rika : "So, what is the connection?"

Diana :"She could be killed with just one stab if left to run out of blood. But why did the
killer stabbed up for 4 times?"

Rika : "Yes, yes. Really cruel."

Diana : That's him! Maybe he is a cold-blooded killer. We are less of information at this
time. Let's start to look for other proofs."

Rika : "Ok, let's go"

{Brad’s house}

Before the police officer knocks on Brad's door. He checks the condition of the house and
finds that he had a bloodied knife in Brad's yard. Then, he puts the knife in evidence bag.

Police 1: “Excuse me, Mr. Brad! Opens the door!

Brad: "What's the matter? Why did the police officer come to my house?"

Police 1: "I want to inform you that your lover has been found killed in her house."

Brad: "What? No way! Last night he looked fine."

Police: “But I’ve just found this on your home page (while showing the knife)!”

Brad: “Its not even mine!”

Police: " You are the last person who was with the victim, you must go with us for further
investigation right now."

Brad: "I didn't kill her! I love her so much!"

Police: “Save your word later.”


Scene 6

[In the Sydney’s house environment, suddenly the TV reporter arrived in Sydney’s house
while the polices are still investigating the crime scene]

Diana: "Well everyone, now we’re still at the house of students who were sadly killed in her
own room. It seems that the murderer is her own boyfriend. For that, we will report on the
condition of the victim's house environment."

Cameraman: "A little to the left, a little again,ohh not to the left but right there,"

[Sydney’s neighbor comes and asks the police about the case]

Paula: "Excuse me, sir. Has this investigation case been completed?"

Police 2: "Not yet. Sorry, Who are you ma’am?"

Paula: "I am Paula, sir. I live in front of the victim's house."

[And the reporter also hears a question from Mrs. Paula]

Police 1: "Mam, did you see who was the last person at the victim's house?"

Paula: "Yes, I saw someone wore black shirt entered the victim's house but nothing’s
happened"

Police 2: "Someone wore black shirt? Was that boyfriend from the victim?"

Paula: "No. The person came shortly after Brad left."

Police: “We have to check the evidence right now!”

[The two police officers directly left the crime scene after hearing the testimony from Mrs.
Paula.]

Diana: "Are you sure?"

Paula: "Yes, Ms. reporter, I'm sure because I often see Brad visited that house."

cameraman: "But all the evidences are pointed to Brad."

Diana: "That's it! The murderer tries to lead all mistakes to the victim's lover. There is one
thing we forget. We must investigate their friends!"

{At Samara’s house}

Samara :“I’ve just got the call from Sydney’s sister that Sydney had been kill.”

All of them : “What??”

Justin :”You’re joking, right?”

Fanny :”She’s death? Oh nooo” {crying}

Hermosa : ”Oh my! I can’t believe it. She is our best friend!”
Justin : “Yeah. Who killed her? I will find the murderer”

Samara : “All of us have to find the murderer!”

Fanny : {Gets an anonymous letter} What is this about? It’s really creepy. Why does
this person know my story?.” {With a very confused and frightened face}

Justin : "What is that, Fan? Why is your face like that?"

Fanny : “Nothing, it’s just a note.”

Samara :”Okay then.”

{Their cellphones ring and they check it at the same time.}

Hermosa: “Justin? Is this your girlfriend?”

Samara: “Wow, she’s really amazing!”

Fanny:”Oh my god! They’re so disgusting! Look at that! They’re holding each other hand!”

Justin:”This cannot be allowed. How can she cheats with an old man like that! "

Samara: “But wait, I think I've seen this man, but where?”

Hermosa: “Oh my goodness! Oh my god! oh my goddd! This is your father, Fanny! Yeah,
I’m sure of it!”

Justin:”What? Wait a second. Yes, this is your father.”

Fanny: {With a pale face she feel embarrassed} I have to go home now!”

{Fanny leaves Samara’s house}

Justin:”For whatever sake! I have to talk to Tory right now!”

{Justin leaves the class}

Samara: “What will happen to our friendship?"

Hermosa: "Everything is messed up, guys."

{Fanny’s coming home}

Fanny’s mom: “You!{pointed at him) You should be ashamed of yourself! I will make our
divorce papers right now!”

[Fanny’s mom leaves the house]

Fanny’s dad: “Wait! Don’t be like that! Fanny, you wait for us, mom and dad will be back
soon. "

Fanny: “Don’t touch me! Just go there and never back again!"

[Fanny’s dad leaves]


Fanny: “Why? How come? Sydney is killed! Now my family is broken, ruined! God, why is
everything happened so fast. Sydney! My family! My friends! {crying down}

{Justin goes to see Tory}

Justin: “Tory!

Tory: "Hey babe!"

[Brushes off Tory's hand]

Tory: "What's wrong babe? Why are you like this?"

Justin: "Have you seen this video?"

Tory: "Oh so you already know, great."

Justin: "What? Has our relationship been meaningless to you all this time?"

Tory: "I need money! And I can't ask you, you won't understand."

Justin: "You can just say it. I will definitely help than you are dealing with that disgusting old
man!"

Tory: "I'm just asking for the money! No more. After all, the old man is stupid. Now, don't
disturb me. We have nothing to do."

[At Samara’s house]

Samara: "What about Tory, Justin?"

Justin: "I don't know. She doesn't want to answer my phone."

Hermosa: "You don't have to think about it, Justin. You have me, I mean us"

[Everyone just smiles weird looking at Hermosa's behavior]

(Fanny gets an anonymous message, in the letter written that the sender wants to kill her.)

Fanny: “It's already late. Let’s go home."

Hermosa: "Can I go home with you, Justin?"

Justin: "Yes, whatever"

Hermosa: “Justin is so cool! I think I like him. UU uu”

Fanny: "I have something to do in my campus, you can go first."

Samara: "Ok, bye Fanny."

[Fanny goes back to the campus. But suddenly, she hears something]

Fanny: “What's the matter with this letter? Who is the sender? Why does this person want to
kill me?
Rachel: "{on the phone}I am really worry about what have we done to Sydney. No I am
really afraid if we get caught. Now, I am going to your home, Michelle ."

[Fanny surprised and immediately run to meet her friends and at the same time the campus
guard is watching them]

Campus guard: “Hmm, they are so weird.”

Scene 7

{In the afternoon Rachel come to Michelle’s house to ask for stop this revenge}

Rachel : “Michelle! Michelle!”

Michelle mom: “Yes Rachel please come in.” [while listening to the music with earphone]

*Michelle comes out from her room.

Michelle : “What now Rachel?”

Rachel : “Where is the diary? I want to take it to police . We have to stop this!”

Michelle : “You’re such a coward! It’s our chance to make them suffer.”

Rachel : “You’re crazy! And I am not going to jail! [take the diary forcefully]

Michelle :”No. Hands off from the diary! I got it after I killed Sydney.”

(Rachel fight with Michelle because of her emotions Michelle killed Rachel by strangling her
in the neck with diary string)

Michelle : “{shock after Rachel died} no Rachel! Wake up! I didn’t mean it. I am sorry sorry.
Please wake up”

*polices, and Sydney’s friends see that Rachel is dead in Michelle’s hand. And then they rush
into the house.

Police 1 : “Freeze!”

Michelle’s mom: “What? What is this? What happened?”

Fanny : “She is the Sydney’s murderer and now she kill Rachel too.”

Michelle’s mom: “No, it can’t be true. She is a nice girl”

Justin : "Every mother always say that!"

Hermosa: “Yeah. We see by our own eyes.”

Samara : “Really sadistic girl”

Police 1 : “Arrest her!”

Police 2 : “Yes!” {Instead of arresting Michelle, the police takes her hand tightly}”
Police 1: “I said arrest her!!!”

{Finally, Michelle is arrested by the polices to be investigated and punished}

{At the police investigation room}

Police 1: “Now we got you! And you have to answer us!

Police 2: “Why did you killed 3 of your friends?

Michelle: *going crazy “Ha Ha Ha I love to kill them. They deserve to die in my hand!”

Police 1: “you’re doing a cruel things and you will get the death penalty!”

Michelle: “I don’t care! They are the evil ones! Not me HA HA HA

[End the scene with creepy back sound]

Scene 8

[At the campus, before the class end]

Ma’am Bogel: "Okay students! That’s enough for today, class is dismissed!"

Students: "See you mammmmm"

[In front of the class door, Tory is waiting for Fanny to come out, at the same time she also
sees Justin but they don’t want to look at each other]

Tory: "Fanny!"

Fanny: "Yes?"

Tory: "Can we talk for a while?

Fanny: "What do you want to talk about?"

Tory: "I want to apologize for what I did to your family. I made a mistake and really needed
much money for my life. But now, I have no contact with your father anymore."

Fanny: "I can understand, but please don't do that to anyone else."

Tory: "Yes I promise, thank you Fanny"

Fanny: "We'll have a small meeting at the park, I hope you will come."

Tory: “I will, see you"

Fanny: "See you"

[At the park]

Brad: "Hi everyone !!!"

Justin: "Hey bro!"


Fanny: Hi brad. Glad to have you back! "

Hermosa: “Prison is comfy, right?"

Samara: "Just go and feel it yourself!"

Fanny: “By the way, my family is complete like before.”

Samara: “Yeaay your family is together again”

Brad: "Yes, we were glad to hear it. The important thing is now all the problems are finished."

Fanny: "Are you still sad about what happened to Sydney?

Brad: "Of course, but she certainly doesn't want me to be sad and mourn her all over the
time.”

[They gather in the garden, with candles arranged beautifully along with photos of their
friends, put between the candles]

Justin: So, today we gather here to remember our friends who have left us first. "

Samara: "Sydney and Kelly"

Fanny: "And also Rachel"

Hermosa: "I really hope they’ll rest in peace "

Justin: “Everything happens for a reason”

Brad: “Absolutely. What happened to us, is actually a lesson, about Michelle and Rachel we
just have to learn from it.”

Hermosa: “From now on, we have to live without hurting other people.”

Samara: “Yes, you’re right. Let’s give them the last tribute.”

*the holding hands and pray together. After that they put the flowers.

[Justin approaches Tory and wants to invite her to talk]

Justin: "Hey (greeting Tory who is sowing flowers)

Tory: "Oh hey Justin."

Justin: "Can we talk?"

Tory: " Yeah"

[Justin pulls Tory away from other friends]

Justin: "Look, I know that we're not together anymore but I can't just put away my feelings
for you. Every time I think about you, it reminds me of what you did."

Tory: "I'm really sorry"

Justin: "I just can't accept all of this, do you know how much I love you?"

Tory: "I know I'm sorry. but it’s not as simple as you think, Justin."

Justin: "Then what? You left me just for money?"


Tory: "See, you can only judge me from the outside. I did all of that because my life is really
hard. Now I have to pay for my younger siblings needs. I will never be able to ask for your
money, just like that. I don’t have courage to admit that I've been poor and I don't think I've
deserved you anymore Justin "

[She cried so much until she fell down. but, Justin is look at her, pulls her arm up and hug
her]

Justin:”Don't say anything like that. It’s not only hurt me but it also hurts your own heart
Tory. Now if something happens, whatever it is! please tell me, you can lean and depend on
me. sorry if all this time I was ignorant, but I really really love you, it's just that I just can’t
able to show it to you."

Tory: “Sorry Justin I’m sorry”(still crying)

Justin: “Well, like this it's good. You can blow everything up to me until you're calm, babe”

Tory: “Thank you”

All of them: {Whistle to tease them and clap their hands.}

Brad: “Who’s getting back together huh?!”

Hermosa: “Oh my god. My heart is broken awww.”

Brad : “So what we are going to do with this diary?”

Hermosa : “Just bury the diary here!”

Justin : “Yes. So anyone won’t do evil things like what Michelle did.”

Fanny : “It’s such a Fear Diary!”

Everyone smiles and laughs thankful that all problem is solved.

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