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An Undergraduate Thesis
Presented to
The Faculty of the College of Nursing
University of Perpetual Help System-DALTA, Molino
Campus
Molino, Bacoor, Cavite
In Partial Fulfilment
Of the Requirements for the Degree
Bachelor of Science in Nursing
CHAPTER 1
THE PROBLEM AND RELATED LITERATURE
Introduction
The World Health Organization stated that a competent
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premiere school in Region IV (CALABARZON), in which Passive voice
overall view of caring science so that they can care for the
health of individuals as professional nurses (Zamanzades, 49 39
Passive voice
et al., 2014). 40
[, the → ; the]
Synthesis
The purpose of this synthesis is to express the central
conclusion of the researcher findings on the teaching
competency of nurse educators and caring attitude of
student nurses.
The teaching competencies of nurse educators and the
caring attitude of student nurses are two different terms 41
[has also → also has]
which can have a common factor that may interconnect
them and affect the students' response. One of these factors
is the year - level study conducted in Zamansadeh V, 51 et
al. (2014); the attitudes of junior students were compared 52
with senior students ; junior students reported that they
valued the knowledge and technical skills of nurses, but
senior students did not assign nurses as technical skills,
even valued understanding and sympathy more than the 42
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knowledge and care skills of nurses. 50 Teaching
competencies are an integration of professional attitudes,
knowledge, and skills and enable the individual to fulfill
his/her role and effectively influence the students' learning
process (Rudiyati, Sari and Pujaningsih, Pujaningsih and
Mumpuniarti, Mumpuniarti, 2017).
Theoretical Framework
This study is grounded 53 on the following theoretical
models: Jean Piaget's Theory of Constructivism and Jean
Watson's Theory of Human Caring.
The theory of Constructivism of Piaget's argues that people
produce knowledge and form meaning based upon their
experiences. The theory 54 covers the learning theories, 43
Overused word: simply
teaching methods, and education reform. The thought of
constructivism theory, the learners 55 bring their personal
experience to the learning situation, and these experiences
form a foundation of the truth they carry away from the 44
[in]
45
instruction (Hunter, J., 2014). The theory of Piaget's [Salehiam, ]
46
constructivism impacts the learning curriculum because [, and]
play in student education. The role of the teacher is very Overused word: main
1996).
55
Research Paradigm [learners,]
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The result of the study would be beneficial to the Repetitive word: theory
following:
Future Researches: This study will serve as a basis in
conducting a more 76 comprehensive research for the future
researchers, and it can also be used 77 as reference 78 and a
guide that will give them an review 79 on the factors that
affects the teaching competency of nurse educators and
caring attitude of nursing college students.
Nurse Educators: The outcome of the study may assist
them in developing and enhancing their teaching
competencies in more effective strategy in teaching the
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student nurses on caring 80 patient. Passive voice
Student Nurses: The result of this study may enable them
to assess and evaluate their own 81 selves on their caring
attitude as student nurses considering that care is the core
65
and basic 82 foundation for nursing practice. Thus, teaching [the Figure]
competency of nursing educators can be specified, and the
results may be identified 83 on how to improve the nurse
caring 84 attitude of students.
Scope and Delimitation of the Study
This research covered the student nurses of the three
Philippine Universities. A total of 50 student nurses was
chosen to be the respondent for the research, whereas 17
respondents from school 1; 7 respondents from school 2;
and 26 respondents from school 3. The quantity of the
respondents was attained by means of 85 purposive
66
sampling technique. [a caring]
The researcher focused on how the nurse educators
teaching competency affect 87 86 the caring attitude of
student nurses in a Philippine University as a basis of
competencies 88 of nurse educators.
Definition of Terms
The following terms have been defined 89 as used in the
study:
Age: This refers to the length of person's 90 existence in the
world. This 91 is categorized 92 as 15 – 20 years old; 21 to
25 year old; 26 – 30 year old and 36 – 40 year old.
Sex - This refers to the concept of socially constructed
views of feminine and masculine behavior in individual
67
social groups. It is classified 93 as male or female.
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Year Level of the student – This refers as 94 the educational Passive voice
CHAPTER 2
METHODOLOGY
researcher was able to know the relationship between the 84 Passive voice
[nurse caring → caring nurse]
intervening variables: age, gender, and year level and
answered a certain 102 phenomenon.
Descriptive 103 designs gather information about conditions,
attitudes, or characteristics of individuals or group of
individuals (Fain, J., 2017. This 104 involves measuring one
or more separate variables for each individual 105 with the
intent of simply 106 describing the individual variables
(Gravetter & Wallnau, 2016). The purpose of descriptive
research is to describe the meaning of existing 107 85
[by means of → using]
phenomena (Fain, J., 2017). One purpose 108 of this study,
describe the relationship between the teaching competency
of nurse educators and the caring attitude of student nurses 86
[to affect]
87
in a Philippine University. [affect → affects]
Perhaps the most widely used type of descriptive 109 design 88
Repetitive word: competencies
is the correlational study (delos 110 Santos, A., 2017).
Correlation is a statistical technique for the measurement
and description of the relationship between two variables
(Gravetter & Wallnau, 2016). The reason why 89
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correlational 111 study is used 112, 113 is to find out if the two
variables, Teaching Competency of Nurse Educators and 90
[a person's]
Caring Attitude of Student Nurses, are connected. 91
Unclear antecedent
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Population Sampling Passive voice
The samples of this study are from the three (3) schools of
nursing. The researcher includes all students from 3rd and
4th year. This sampling technique is called total
enumeration sampling (TPS). Including all possible 93
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participants of the 3 114 campuses are necessary for them to
evaluate the topic discusses. TPS is a technique where the 94
[as → to]
entire population that meet 115 the criteria (e.g. 116 specific 95
[the year or a year]
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skill set, experience, etc.) are included 117 in the research Passive voice
being conducted 118 (Etikan, I., Musa, S., Alkassim, R.,
2016). This type of sampling technique is commonly 97
[, and]
used 119 where the number of cases being investigated 120 is
relatively small.
Respondents of the Study
The respondents of the study are the student nurses of a
Philippine University in the 2nd semester, year 121 2017 –
2018 from 3nd 122 year and 4th year 123 college. The
researcher identified a total of 50 student nurses as the total
number of participants of the chosen year level. The
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remarks and the comments were applied to improve the [the student]
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Cavite on November 11, 2017, then 143 reliability and Overused word: certain
103
validity testing was done at the R&DC office. The result of Unusual word pair
measures 146 what's it's supposed to measure 147 and 148 eight 105 Unclear antecedent
[each individual → each]
items from the caring attitude was 150 removed 149. The 106
Overused word: simply
following are the scale items that are removed 151 from the
questionnaire tool of caring attitude: VAR00008,
VAR00013, VAR00014, VAR00018, VAR00023, 107
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VAR00026, VAR00027, and VAR00028. The covariance 108
Repetitive word: purpose
matrix determinant is zero or about zero. It is not possible
to calculate statistics based on its inverse matrix and 152
they are displayed 153 as missing system values.
Data Gathering Procedure 109
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The process by which the researcher gathered data was 110
[delos → Delos]
divided 154 into two parts:
Part 1: Social Preparation. The researcher made a letter
addressed to the School Director recommended and signed
by the Research and Development Center (R&DC) and the 111
[the correlational]
Dean of the College of Nursing. Furthermore, the 112
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researcher picked three (3) nursing school in the 113
[used, ]
Philippines, that has third 155 year and fourth year level in
college. The researcher then secured a written consent from
the Deans of each college in the selected nursing schools to
conduct a study from their students.
Part 2: Data Gathering. In the second part of data
gathering, the researcher personally handed out the
questionnaire to the selected nursing school in a Philippine
University. 114
[3 → three]
The researcher started data gathering on October 19,
2017 156 at school 1, November 14, 2017 157 at school 2, and
February 9, 2018 158 at school 3. The researcher explained 115
[meet → meets]
the purpose of the study and the instructions to the 116
[e.g.,]
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respondents. The respondents were asked to sign the Passive voice
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consent to participate in the study 159 prior 160 answering the Passive voice
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researcher then analysed 170 169 the data and tallied to be Repetitive word: chosen
given to the statistician for statistical 171 treatment of data.
Data Analysis
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The researcher used the following statistical treatments to Possibly confused word
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test the hypothesis of the study. [for the purpose of → for]
Formula 143
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Where: x1=Mean of first 182 set of values
x2= Mean of second 183 set of values 144
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S1 = Standard deviation of first 184 set of values 145
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S2 = Standard deviation of second 185 set of values 146
[measures → measure]
n1 = Total number of values 186 in first 187 set 147
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n2 = Total number of values 188 in second 189 set. 148
[, and]
149
T – test 190 was used to determine the level of teaching Passive voice
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competency of nurse educators and caring attitude of [was → were]
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student nurses of Philippine University when group
according to gender and year level.
F-test ANOVA (analysis of variance) can test the
differences between two means which can be used to
examine data from two or more groups, (Gravetter & 152
[, and]
Wallnau, 2016). F-test is simply a ratio of two variances. 153
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ANOVA uses the F-test to statistically test the equality of
means 191.
Formula: 154
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F – test ANOVA was used to determine the significant
difference in the level of teaching competency of nurse
educators and caring attitude of student nurses of
Philippine University when group according to age.
Pearson Correlation. It measures quantitatively the extent
to which two variables are correlated (Sharma, 2014). It is
a number (r=correlation coefficient) that describes the 155
[a third]
strength of the relationship between two variables
(Gravetter, Wallnau & Forzano, 2016).
Formula
Where: N= number of pair of scores
Σxy= sum of the products of paired scores
Σx= 192 sum of x scores
Σy= 193 sum of y scores
Σx2= 194 sum 195 of x squared scores
Σy2= 196 sum of squared y scores
Pearson correlation was used to measure the strength and 156
[2017,]
direction of association that exists between the teaching 157
[2017,]
competency of nurse educators and the level of caring 158
[2018,]
attitude of student nurses in a Philippine University.
159
Repetitive word: study
160
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37 [prior to]
Chapter 3 161
[in order to → to]
RESULTS AND DISCUSSIONS 162
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164
[will → would]
This chapter deals with the results of the gathered data and
its corresponding discussion in relation to 197 the teaching 165
[were → was]
competency of nursing educators and the caring attitude of 166
[analyse → analyze]
nursing students of Philippine University.
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Problem 1. What is the profile of student nurses of 168
Repetitive word: questionnaires
Philippine University when they were grouped 198 169
Repetitive word: analysed
170
according to age, gender, and year level? [analysed → analyzed]
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of Age
Frequency and percentage distribution were used to
determine the profile of the respondents according to age.
This 199 is categorized 200 as 16 – 20 years old, 21 – 25 years
old, 26 – 30 years old, 31 – 35 years old and 36 – 40 years
old.
Figure 2. Profile of Student Nurses of Philippine
University in terms of Age. Figure 202 201 shows 203 the
percentage distribution of the profile 204 of student nurses of
Philippine University when they were group 205 in
according 206 of 207 age. It shows that out of 50 students, the
majority of the students were under the age group 16 – 20-
year-old having a total of 74% share in the population
distribution. Further, it shows that student nurses under the
age group 21 – 25-year-old and 26 – 30-year-old have an 172
[Percentage of]
173
equal share of 8% each group. Lastly, it shows that students Unclear antecedent
of the bachelor's degrees are for four years. Students are Repetitive word: scores
University in terms of Sex. Figure 221 220 shows 222 the Unclear antecedent
181
them were female students with 82% share in the [the first]
183
distribution. On the contrary 226 there were few or 18% of [the second]
184
This 227 implies that majority of the respondents are female. [the second]
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This result was true 228 since back on culture nurses should Repetitive word: values
187
[the first]
be the female. This 229 is aligned 230 with the observation 188
Repetitive word: values
made by Pham (2015), men do not choose nursing 231 189
[the second]
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course because of the reason that they think that this career [T test → T-test]
suit only for female unless it was a decision made by
parents or support from group 232 of friends.
Profile of Student Nurses of Philippine University in terms
of Year Level
Frequency and percentage distribution were used to
determine the profile of the respondents according to year
level. This 233 is categorized 234 as 3rd 235 year and 4th year.
191
innovation. The university educators are made 255 of highly [of → to]
interpretation was used: 4.20 – 5.00 = Highly Caring; 3.40 [the Department]
212
[Philippines,]
– 4.19 = Caring; 2.60 – 3.39 = Moderately Caring; 1.80 – 213
[are → is]
2.59 = Somewhat Caring; and 1.00 – 1.79 = Not Caring. 214
Repetitive word: systems
Table 2.
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Level of Caring Attitude of Student Nurses of Philippine Repetitive word: system
University
216
Item number 5 is the lowest which states that student [4 → four]
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nurses least to use therapeutic touch to patient 256 to convey [4 → four]
221
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Problem 4. Is there a significant difference on 268 the 222 [The figure]word: Figure
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teaching competency of nurse educators of Philippine Repetitive word: profile
224
year and 4th 277 year 278 they can more or less experience the Passive voice
same hardship and joy while taking all those major subjects
and may have the same perception. This result was
negated 279 by the study of Chidiebere et at. 2016, that over
the years, discrepancies in the performance of nursing 241
Unclear antecedent
students have observed, although students may be of
comparable abilities, learn in the same environment and 242
[study,]
follow the same syllabus, their academic performance still 243
[2nd year → 2nd-year]
vary.
Teaching Competency of Nurse Educators of Philippine
University as perceived by the Student Nurses in terms of 244
Overused word: basic
Sex 245
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T-test was used to determine the significant difference 246
[2 → two]
according to gender. Gender was further categorized 280 as
male and female.
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Table 4.
Teaching Competency of Nurse Educators of Philippine
University as perceived by the Student Nurses in terms of
Sex
An independent sample t – test 281 was conducted to
determine the teaching competency when grouped
according to gender. There are no significant differences in
the mean for male (M = 4.54, SD = 0.405) and female (M =
4.25, SD = 0.55; t (48) = 1.506, p = 0.139). These suggest
that gender do 282 not affect the student's perception
about 283 their teachers' competency.
This result is similar to the suggestion of James et al.,
2011; Chan et al., 2014, who stated that the regardless of
the teaching format and academic performance, males and
females were found to have similar 284 perception of peer
assessment, problem-based learning and 285 traditional 247
[The table]
lecture.
Teaching Competency of Nurse Educators of Philippine
University as perceived by the Student Nurses in terms of
Year Level
T-test was used to determine the significant difference
according to year level. Gender was further categorized 286
as 3rd 287 year and 4th year.
Table 5. 248
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Teaching Competency of Nurse Educators of Philippine
University as perceived by the Student Nurses in terms of
Year Level
On this table 288 an independent sample t – test 289 was 249
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conducted to determine the precepting students on the
teaching competency of nurse educator when grouped 250
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according to year level. There were a significant difference 251
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in the education of 3rd year (M = 4.53, sd = 0.571) with
that of 4th year (M = 4.096, SD – 0.429); t (48) = 3.087, p 252
Repetitive word: competent
= 0.0004. 253
Repetitive word: teaching
The result suggests that 3rd 290 year has a higher level of
perception than of 4th year. In other words, 3rd year 291 254
[for]
students put high regards on their teachers.
This result is supported 292 by Niederriter et al. (2017) that
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when they were grouped 294 according to age, gender and Passive voice
year level?
Hypothesis: There is 295 no significant difference on 296 the
level of caring attitude of student nurses of Philippine
University when they were grouped 297 according to age,
gender and year level.
Level of Caring Attitude of Student Nurses of Philippine
University in terms of Age
F-test was used to determine the significant difference
according to age. Age categorizes as 16-20-year-old, 21 –
25 years old, 26 – 30 years old, 31 – 35 years old and 36 –
40 years old.
Table 6.
Level of Caring Attitude of Student Nurses of Philippine
University in terms of Age
The table shows the output of the ANOVA analysis and
whether there is a statistically 298 significance between
mean 299 of age group. It can be seen 300 that [ F = (4, 45) =
0.591] the significance value is 0.671 which is above 0.05
and therefore there is 301 no significant differences in the
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In other words, students can see their caring attitude on the Repetitive word: states
study 302 that students in the 3rd and 4th grades had great 303
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between mean 307 of male and female. It can be seen that Overused word: major
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Table 9. Passive voice
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[a similar]
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Chapter 4 [, and]
year level?
What is the perception of teaching competency of the nurse
educators of Philippine University as perceived by the
students?
What is the level of the caring attitude of student nurses of 290
[the 3rd]
Philippine University?
Is there a significant difference on 325 the teaching 291
[3rd year → 3rd-year]
competency of nurse educators of Philippine University as
perceived by the student nurse when they were grouped 326 292
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according to age, gender, and year level?
Is there a significant difference on 327 the level of caring
attitude of student nurses of Philippine University when
they were grouped 328 according to age, gender, and year 293
[on → in]
level?
Is there a significant relationship between the teaching 294
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competency of nurse educators and the level of caring
attitude of student nurses of Philippine University? 295
[is → was]
The study used quantitative descriptive correlational 296
[on → in]
research design to determine the (a) perception of teaching 297
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competency of the nurse educators of Philippine University
as perceived by the students, (b) level of the caring attitude
of student nurses of Philippine University, (c) relationship
between the teaching competency of nurse educators and
the level of caring attitude of student nurses of Philippine
University. 329 Purposive sampling was used to choose the
50 respondents from the different campuses of Philippine
University. The following are the statistical tool that is
used by the researcher for this study to answer the specific
problems and in testing the hypothesis: Frequency
Distribution, Percentage Distribution, Mean, T – test 330, F
– test ANOVA and Pearson Correlation.
The frequency distribution was used to determine the 298
[statistically → statistical]
profile of the respondents when group according to age, 299
[the mean]
gender, and year level. Percentage distribution was used to 300
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compare the percentage of the data based on the result
being tallied such as age, gender and year level of the 301
[is → are]
student nurses.
Mean was used to determine the perception of teaching
competency of nurse educators and the caring attitude of
student nurses in the Philippine University.
T – test 331 was used to find out the significant difference 302
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between mean 350 of male and female. It was found out that
there is no significant difference in the perception of male
(M = 4.416, sd = 0.496) and female (M = 4.404, sd =
0.351); t (48) = 0.085, p = 0.932. The result shows that
gender does not create any variation on 351 their perception
of their caring attitude.
In determining the significant differences on 352 the level of
caring attitude among nursing students when grouped
according to year level. The result shows that 3rd year (M
= 4.515, SD = 0.435) evaluated that caring attitude higher
than the 4th year (M = 4.305, SD = 0.283); its t – value
(2.039), p = 0.047.
A pearson 353 - r product moment 354 correlation coefficient
was computed to assess the relationship between the
teaching competency of nurse 355 educator and the caring
attitude of nursing students. These 356 was a positive
correlation between the two variables, r = 0.54, n = 50, p =
0.000052.
315
[pearson → Pearson]
316
[product moment → product-moment]
CONCLUSIONS
Based on the findings, the following conclusions were
317
It was concluded 358 that the profile of student nurses of Possibly confused word
caring.
320
There was no significant difference on 361 the teaching Overused word: important
RECOMMENDATIONS
The following recommendations are proposed by the
researcher 372:
Future Researches: The researcher recommends that future
researchers to continue conducting research and get a
bigger 373 scope and add questions regarding contributing 324
[Specially → Especially]
factors that can affect the teaching competency of teaching
educators and the caring attitude of student nurses.
Nurse Educators: The researcher recommends the nurse 374
educators to continue their excellent work and to
continually raise the standard of the college of nursing 375.
It is also recommended to the instructors to attend
seminars, 376 or conference to develop and enhance their
teaching competencies.
Student Nurses: The study found out that there is a
moderate difference in the relationship of the teaching 325
[on → in]
competency nurse educators and caring attitude of student
nurse with year level. The researcher recommends for the
students to be intelligent, caring and posses 377 an 326
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intrinsic 378 desire to help others regards of level 379.
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[on → in]
330
[T test → T-test]
331
[T test → T-test]
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[on → in]
333
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[on → in]
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[were → was]
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Repetitive word: competent
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[a significant]
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[statistically → statistical]
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[the mean]
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[is → are]
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[the mean]
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[on → in]
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[on → in]
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[pearson → Pearson]
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[product moment → product-moment]
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[the nurse]
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[were → was]
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[fourth year → fourth-year]
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Repetitive word: significant
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Repetitive word: grouped
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Overused word: bigger
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[the nurse]
375
Split infinitive
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[seminars, ]
377
Possibly confused word
378
Unusual word pair
379
[the level or a level]
380
[TRANSATIONAL → TRANSITIONAL]
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[the to]
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