The process I went through for writing my argumentative essay was simple.

I broke it down to
three basic parts. One being the thesis statement and the claim that will directly connect to my body
paragraphs. It to a few tries but I got it to be more concise. Then it goes to the body paragraphs that
comprise of the arguments. I got brain stormed and collaborated with my peers to help come up with a
fitting argument that would be well argued. And lastly I worked on the conclusion that wasn’t just
restating the thesis statement but is to show that the evidence given has proved my position on the
argument correct. My thought process came from the similar thought process while I was writing the
exploratory essay. For the translated version of the essay I chose the brochure and all I did was create a
stronger sense of the purpose for the brochure which is to inspire students to empower their own
creativity and originality. I used information from m essay in the brochure and added a few more things
to make it more enjoyable to read. My topic was difficult to write about. It took a lot of thinking and
conversations to come up with the information given in the essay. My method of attack was to come at
the argument with logic. Something simple that most people have. Things that will connect with people
so they can understand more deeply in what I was trying to explain and argue.

My audience is for college students and the same for the brochure. It is to show the students
that they have originality and they shouldn’t let people tell them otherwise, unless they really are
stealing the ideas they are portraying. It is to inspire and empower the students to creative by
embracing their life experiences and having their own perspective that will give them their own
uniqueness.

The revisions I made on the essay was to help the audience understand more deeply. It was also
to be more accurate on why I was writing the essay and to what audience I was writing it to. For my
brochure I felt that it didn’t need many revisions because of the simplicity of it. I added a couple things
more from my actual essay that would help describe the point I was making and to make it more
concise.

I learned that well rounded research is important to maximize your chance of creating a
stronger argument. Learned that there are important steps in the writing process that should be taken
to create a stronger essay. For some reason I have a hard time on following the steps and exact process
that is shown and meant for me to follow. I learned that the next English class will be a little easier for
me because I have more knowledge about certain writing process. Well at least my notebook has the
knowledge.

As a writer I feel that I write in a different way that may be harder to understand. I guess that is
a good reason why peer response is very important. I feel that my writing style is more expressive to me
then my own words sometimes. That is if I put the effort into my writing of course. My essay I feel is
simple and because I used a strong logical argument it should be easy for people to agree with.